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Nekomata Master - Scar in the earth

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skranger
31 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
skranger
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年5月15日 at 19:10:02

Artist: Nekomata Master
Title: Scar in the Earth
Source: Beatmania IIDX 15 DJ Troopers
Tags: ignorethis
BPM: 141
Filesize: 19034kb
Play Time: 01:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hyper (4.69 stars, 295 notes)
  2. ignore's Another (4.84 stars, 504 notes)
  3. Normal (3.21 stars, 154 notes)
Download: Nekomata Master - Scar in the Earth
Download: Nekomata Master - Scar in the Earth (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This is my second beatmap
It took me 2 months and 160 times of updates to make it.
Thank you all.
Last edited by skranger , edited 162 times in total.
mao130
93 posts
Joined December 2008
mao130
great map, like the melody

star :)
iDarkTraceX
51 posts
Joined September 2009
iDarkTraceX
Just searching for some beatmaps to listen to and this one caught my heart =)
I'm not gonna give a star yet, I just listened to the preview :P
This sounds promising. :D

*Edit

*Dancing* This song is very nice and nice beatmapping. *star* *takes mp3 and adds it to music collection*
^_^ Heheh! :D
ignorethis
osu! Alumni
1,885 posts
Joined August 2008
ignorethis
irc modded.

guest dif finished.

Download: Nekosa Master - Scar in the Earth (skranger) [!ignore this].osu
AngelHoney
2,155 posts
Joined May 2009
AngelHoney
(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ☆
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
[General]

  • • Delete the .osb file, then "Full submission"
    • Add some tags
[Normal]

  • • Add kiai
[Ignorethis]

  • • Add kiai
[Another]

  • • 00:20:724 (13) - New combo
    • 00:27:532 (17) - ^
    • 00:34:554 (10) - ^
    • 00:44:554 (x) - Add a circle
    • 00:55:192 (1) - Off-screen :S
    • 01:09:022 (9) - This slider is partially hidden; make it more visible
    • 01:09:660 (x) - Add a circle
skranger
31 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
skranger

xxheroxx wrote:

[General]

  • • Delete the .osb file, then "Full submission"
    • Add some tags
[Normal]

  • • Add kiai
[Ignorethis]

  • • Add kiai
[Another]

  • • 00:20:724 (13) - New combo
    • 00:27:532 (17) - ^
    • 00:34:554 (10) - ^
    • 00:44:554 (x) - Add a circle
    • 00:55:192 (1) - Off-screen :S
    • 01:09:022 (9) - This slider is partially hidden; make it more visible
    • 01:09:660 (x) - Add a circle
fixed...
thanks
Mogsy
osu! Alumni
3,450 posts
Here since the beginning
Mogsy
Artist is Nekomata Master. Haven't looked at the actual map itself, but change it.
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
Just some point out and some suggestion, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me. :)

[General]
- Add Tag ignorethis to all of your diff
- Artist is Nekomata Master 猫叉 is Nekomata
Full Submission with Title/Artist Change
- I prefer that the offset all diff should be the same, Then set 2000offset to other diff too

[Hyper]
01:37:744 (11) - spacing? or new combo
01:52:000 - this timing selection seem useless?

[Another]
01:37:958 (10) - new combo?

Starrr ~
skranger
31 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
skranger

orioncomet wrote:

Just some point out and some suggestion, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me. :)

[General]
- Add Tag ignorethis to all of your diff
- Artist is Nekomata Master 猫叉 is Nekomata
Full Submission with Title/Artist Change
- I prefer that the offset all diff should be the same, Then set 2000offset to other diff too

[Hyper]
01:37:744 (11) - spacing? or new combo
01:52:000 - this timing selection seem useless?

[Another]
01:37:958 (10) - new combo?

Starrr ~
All fixed.
Thank you very much
ignorethis
osu! Alumni
1,885 posts
Joined August 2008
ignorethis

xxheroxx wrote:

[Ignorethis]

  • • Add kiai
No, I hate kiai time. Thanks.
uranuss8600
99 posts
Joined July 2009
uranuss8600
star :)
mod in qq
wish u will finish it soon
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
[Normal]
00:32:638 (7) - New Combo
Actually, quite a number of the beat patterns here really sound weird.
01:31:361 (1,3) - swap NCs
01:34:339 (1,2) - ^
01:45:403 (1,3) - swap NCs?
01:50:084 (6) - NC

[Hyper]
00:19:660 (1,4) - swap NCs
00:26:681 (1,3) - ^

...actually in general the only problems I have with the maps at the moment are the New Combos, except in ignore's diff.
skranger
31 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
skranger

Zekira wrote:

[Normal]
00:32:638 (7) - New Combo
Actually, quite a number of the beat patterns here really sound weird.
01:31:361 (1,3) - swap NCs
01:34:339 (1,2) - ^
01:45:403 (1,3) - swap NCs?
01:50:084 (6) - NC

[Hyper]
00:19:660 (1,4) - swap NCs
00:26:681 (1,3) - ^

...actually in general the only problems I have with the maps at the moment are the New Combos, except in ignore's diff.
All fixed. Thank you very much.
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
General:

-- Remove "Beatmania IIDX" from tags.
-- You have two .osb files, delete both and full submit.
-- Start kiai at 01:42:425 looks much better.

Normal:

Kiai is different to the other difficulties, starts 01:41:148.

Hard:

00:11:362 (2,3) - Well these are a bit too far down screen imo, they look bad in game move them up a couple of squares (3 or 4 maybe?)
01:37:319 (10,1) - Anti jump D:
01:40:936 -- Start kiai on a beat.

!ignorethis:

01:40:936 Kiai looks weird starting here.

Hyper:

00:32:745 (2,3) - Jump here is a little confusing.
01:22:639 (4,5,6) - Raise 5 a bit imo so it's like the rest of your triples.
01:40:936 -- Kiai looks weird starting here, start on a beat, or change kiai like I suggested?
01:54:340 (5) - Maybe move this so it's more visible?

Nice maps overall :D
~ Star.
skranger
31 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
skranger

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Remove "Beatmania IIDX" from tags.
-- You have two .osb files, delete both and full submit.
-- Start kiai at 01:42:425 looks much better.

Normal:

Kiai is different to the other difficulties, starts 01:41:148.

Hard:

00:11:362 (2,3) - Well these are a bit too far down screen imo, they look bad in game move them up a couple of squares (3 or 4 maybe?)
01:37:319 (10,1) - Anti jump D:
01:40:936 -- Start kiai on a beat.

!ignorethis:

01:40:936 Kiai looks weird starting here.

Hyper:

00:32:745 (2,3) - Jump here is a little confusing.
01:22:639 (4,5,6) - Raise 5 a bit imo so it's like the rest of your triples.
01:40:936 -- Kiai looks weird starting here, start on a beat, or change kiai like I suggested?
01:54:340 (5) - Maybe move this so it's more visible?

Nice maps overall :D
~ Star.
Fixed
thank you for modding
ccbp
411 posts
Joined August 2009
ccbp
star
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
~Normal~
01:57:743 (1) - silence it

~Hyper~
01:56:255 (1) - silence it
01:57:957 (1) - ^

~!ignore this~
01:59:554 (1) - silence the hitsound

~Another~
00:25:724 (9) - move left & up 1 grid (Lv3)


+Star
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. Consider compressing the video file size?
2. There's a .osb file in the map's folder. Remove it since you don't use it.

[Normal]
-- Decrease the overall difficulty to 4th level or lower.
-- Add some more hitsounds like finishes and claps.
-- The half speed sections don't make any sense to me.
00:14:340 (1) - Move it a little farther from (6). They look like 1/2 stream with the current distance.
00:39:446 (1,2,3,4) - Move them one tiny grid right.
01:02:425 - Add break here. Following 01:39:446.
01:12:212 (3,4) - Move them one tiny grid up. Check the rest notes, make them symmetry.
01:21:999 (1) - Move one or two 1/4 tick(s). Choose one. Noth are okay.
01:44:552 (8) - Add new combo. [?]

[Hyper]
-- I recomend you to decrease the overall difficulty one level. The current overall difficulty is not fit to the song IMO.
-- Add some more hitsounds like finishes and claps.
-- The half speed sections don't make any sense to me.
00:40:298 (10) - Move one tiny grid left.
00:58:170 (1) - Move it to right under the end of the slider.
01:00:298 (10) - Move it farther from (9), please.
01:39:021 (2) - Move it to right under the end of the slider.
01:44:553 (8) - Move it to the (5) position.

[!ignore this]
-- I don't like the "!" mark on the diff's name.
-- Some parts are overmapped but I think they are okay.
00:38:384 (3) - It's not snapped. [!]
00:38:597 (5) - ^ [!]
01:15:831 (6) - ^ [!]
01:52:214 (9) - ^ [!]

[Another]
-- Add some more hitsounds like finishes and claps.
00:17:320 (2) - Move it farther from (1).
01:09:022 (9) - Reduce one 1/2 tick.
01:22:745 (5) - Move one tiny grid up.
01:50:937 (10) - Add new combo. [?]
Star.
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
STAR ~
yaya
osu! Alumni
1,164 posts
Joined November 2008
yaya
Hyper:
刚开始的声音太小了。加一点
00:17:319 (2) - 建议声音从这里开始变大。
01:00:298 (10) - 箭头怎么回事。。
01:01:149 (12) - ^
01:22:637 (11) - 改成note
01:22:850 (12) - 加一个2拍的slider
01:28:808 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8275 这样改
01:41:149 (1) - 从这开始声音又小了。。

Normal有点难了。3星左右。
skranger
31 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
skranger

yaya wrote:

Hyper:
刚开始的声音太小了。加一点
00:17:319 (2) - 建议声音从这里开始变大。
01:00:298 (10) - 箭头怎么回事。。
01:01:149 (12) - ^
01:22:637 (11) - 改成note
01:22:850 (12) - 加一个2拍的slider
01:28:808 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8275 这样改
01:41:149 (1) - 从这开始声音又小了。。

Normal有点难了。3星左右。
all fixed. thanks
dvorak_old
294 posts
Joined February 2010
dvorak_old
nice, star
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
It`s pretty good now
Takuma
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined October 2008
Takuma
cool beans
qinche
257 posts
Joined December 2009
qinche
good luck
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