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NewEastSound - Gensoukyou Matsuribayashi (Aki)

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Nakagawa-Kanon
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 7월 22일 목요일 at 오후 3:02:43

Artist: EastNewSound
Title: Gensoukyou Matsuribayashi (Aki)
Source: Touhou
Tags: kawashiro nitori bmin11 orioncomet Lyrical Crimson Rokodo
BPM: 143
Filesize: 12153kb
Play Time: 03:03
Difficulties Available:
  1. Bmax (4.83 stars, 418 notes)
  2. Easy orion (0.78 stars, 143 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 482 notes)
  4. Roko-Don's Taiko (5 stars, 702 notes)
  5. Short Normal (4.11 stars, 152 notes)
Download: EastNewSound - Gensoukyou Matsuribayashi (Aki)
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normal is short.
Last edited by Nakagawa-Kanon , edited 27 times in total.
MinamiHaruka
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MinamiHaruka
this map hum... :o

nice map^^

modded in IRC
Ra-s
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Ra-s
진짜 주네 위에 머냐 우ㅠㅠㅜㅜ
happy30
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happy30
Offset 170 (+20)

Change artist to 'EastNewSound'
add 'Touhou' to source

lower the hitsound volume a bit?

maybe use high quality MP3? :) http://www.mediafire.com/?2nztq0kvici

the map is looking good so far :D
bmin11
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bmin11
저만 그런건지 모르겠지만 다운이 안되네요.

그리고 혹시 저도 난이도 만들수 있을까요? 아니면 반반씩 만든다던가요... 맵핑은 하고 싶은데 섭밋을 못하니까 할맛이 안남 ㅡㅜ......

하무튼 기대하고 있겠습니다 ㅎ

Download: EastNewSound - Gensoukyou Matsuribayashi (Aki) (dksslqj) [bmin].osu
bmin11
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bmin11
만드는데 두달이라니...... 죄송합니다 ㅡㅜ

Download: EastNewSound - Gensoukyou Matsuribayashi (Aki) (dksslqj) [Bmax].osu
minyeob
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minyeob
리바이브드.
TheVileOne
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Normal

00:12:387 (6) - This has no sound behind it. I'm not sure if it is intended or not.

00:50:359 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Slide the green notes over to the left 1 unit. Then just resnap the blue curve to the new difference. It shouldn't affect the spacing past this. Although you may have to resnap the center note after.

Bmax- Is it really supposed to be Bmax?

00:07:562 (5) - This could be made into a repeat slider that extends to 00:07:772 - and repeats until 00:07:982 -

If you do this then 00:08:086 (6) - needs to be moved closer to it.

00:32:947 (7) - This note does not follow the patterns. The 6 notes before it follow the vocals but this follows the delayed beat and the notes after it follow the vocals. This isn't necessarily wrong, but you might want to consider conformity in this case.

00:47:842 (2) - Snap this. It's too close to 1. Basically move it two units to the left.

Insane

00:05:359 (5) - This not has no sound behind it.

02:03:786 (5,6,7) - Not sure what these are following.





Good enough for a star.
bmin11
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bmin11
Bmax- Is it really supposed to be Bmax? What else could it be?

00:07:562 (5) - This could be made into a repeat slider that extends to 00:07:772 - and repeats until 00:07:982 -
I like the impact of the bass so
If you do this then 00:08:086 (6) - needs to be moved closer to it. no

00:32:947 (7) - This note does not follow the patterns. The 6 notes before it follow the vocals but this follows the delayed beat and the notes after it follow the vocals. This isn't necessarily wrong, but you might want to consider conformity in this case.
Rejected. I like how it is right now. If I remove it, there is only an akward blank
00:47:842 (2) - Snap this. It's too close to 1. Basically move it two units to the left. This section's distance snap is x1.0, not x1.2
JessycaR_old
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really nice map! :D
orioncomet
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orioncomet
Just some suggestions.

[General]
- add preview point
- TAG: kawashiro nitori bmin11
- You need an Easy diff

[Normal]
- Reduce overall difficulty? >.<
- Delete useless timing selection after 02:44:065

[Bmax]
02:47:003 (7) - remove sound clap at last silder?

[Insane]
02:31:163 (1) - this spinner a bit too long T_T

Also, Yeah, Like I said before "You need an Easy diff", So here's my Easy diff add it If you like, Also add my name in TAG.
It haven't hitsound yet, If you add it, I will add hitsound tomorrow today, Now I need to go to bed.. ;w;
fished x_x

Download: EastNewSound - Gensoukyou Matsuribayashi (Aki) (dksslqj) [Easy orion].osu
Last edited by orioncomet , edited 2 times in total.
bmin11
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bmin11
Fixed. It did sound akward >_>
Oh and remember that [Normal] still WIP quality I believe

Download: EastNewSound - Gensoukyou Matsuribayashi (Aki) (dksslqj) [Bmax].osu
Nakagawa-Kanon
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thanks orion! and your diff too!
Nakagawa-Kanon
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minyeob wrote:

리바이브드.
리바이브드 = revived
그냥 해봄 ㅋ
Hurude Rika
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잘만들어봐요
Sonnyc
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Sonnyc
ㅎㅇ..

General
Song is somewhat long..
03:58:331 쯤에서 대충 Fadeout 으로 끝내세요

솔직히 피니시 없으니까 답답함

Orion Easy
No problem~

Normal
- 노말이 이지 보다 짧은게 좀 웃기네요(?)

Bmax
01:15:534 (1) - Finish
02:36:513 (2) - Clap
02:47:003 (7) - 시작에 Whistle

Insane
01:15:429 (5) - No Clap
01:23:086 (6,7,8) - 맘에 안드는 엇박(?)
01:53:506 (x) - Add note
02:53:926 (6) - 02:54:030 로 옮기세요

길다 ㅜㅜ

스타
bmin11
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bmin11
박수추가 했습니다

Download: EastNewSound - Gensoukyou Matsuribayashi (Aki) (dksslqj) [Bmax].osu
Sakura
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[General]
2 .osbs? do you even need 1 osb?

[Easy orion]
01:20:569 (1) - Make more straight?

[Normal]
Half mapped no... wait what?

Other 2 diffs are fine

Here have my star
Krisom
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Hihi!

[General]

Remove the countdown. The first circle for every difficulty starts on a 1/2 beat, wich can be (is) confisung with the countdown counting every main beat.

[Easy orion]
00:09:240 (1) Add a finish at the start?
00:11:338 (1) I'd make this one last up to 00:12:597 and finish it at the end.
00:17:212 (1,2) this may be personal taste, but I cant get used to those sliders D:
00:41:128 (3) ^. Maybe replace with just one long slider wihout repeats?
02:22:247 (2) Add claps?
02:49:101 (2) ^?
Thats all, this is really nice ^^! I could do a lot of nazi-mods here, but I suppose it's pointless, just be on the lookout for things like 03:21:409 (1), when the circles touch each other it's not nice. But fixing those things is up to you ^^"

[Normal]
By the looks of it, you won't plan to map this entierly, wich is a shame, as it is a really pretty diff.

[BMax]
01:17:632 A kind of unexpected break...
02:42:807 (7) New combo?
Wow, niiice =D

[Insane]
02:54:975 (4) Remove the whistle from the body?
>w<great!

Star!
Colin Hou
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[General]:
  1. tags: Lyrical Crimson
[Easy orion]:
  1. looks fine. but HP Drain and OA are both 0?
[Normal]:
  • 00:57:072 (T) - this section should be earlier, like 00:56:863.
[Bmax]:
  1. Kiai + light combo color just make notes not very easy to read.
  2. 00:11:758 (5) - put this slider's beginning at (4)'s beginning or make it a little jump.
  3. 02:26:023 (5,1) - spacing
[Insane]:
  1. good work
star~

EDIT: I miss a word 'or' :S sorry for that
Last edited by Colin Hou , edited 2 times in total.
DJPop
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DJPop
~Easy orion~
Fine, but many notes didn't match anything >_>

~Normal~
Fine.

~Bmax~
00:39:450 (8) - add clap at middle
01:15:534 (1) - add hitfinish

~Insane~
00:51:723 (4) - move 1/4 right
00:51:933 (5) - delete
00:55:079 (5) - move 1/4 right
01:13:331 (8) - move 1/4 left
01:58:016 (2) - move 1/4 right
01:58:226 (3) - delete
02:02:212 (4) - move 1/4 right


+Star
Nakagawa-Kanon
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bmin11 wrote:

박수추가 했습니다
이번꺼까지 업뎃해주시면 올리겠습니다
bmin11
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다 고쳤습니다. 그리고 한국시간으로 월요일까지 잠시 자리 비웁니다 >_>

Download: EastNewSound - Gensoukyou Matsuribayashi (Aki) (dksslqj) [Bmax].osu
Nyorong
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니토리쨩
MOM
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화이팅! 노래좋네요
M A I D
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멋진 맵이지아니한가
[Dango]
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/me ( )[dksslqj] : 별이요.
Leorda
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Annyeonghaseyo

[File]
1) Your bg (bg~.png) need to resize to 800x600 (current 743x577)

[Short Normal]
00:48:261 (2) - I think this object makes all confuse, player thought this is slider, but not. Can you find the placement??
01:51:618 (2) - Make parallel
02:00:639 (1) - Move forward to white tick and cut short??

[Bmax]
This diff has no tags, make sure the tags is same

00:09:450 (7) - New combo??
00:32:737 (x) - Add note??
01:32:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The pattern looks weird, IMO
02:22:247 (1) - Perhaps move forward to white tick and cut short??
02:36:723 (1) - Maybe, move forward to white tick and cut short??

[Insane]
00:55:394 (7) - New combo??

Unfortunately, I have to ignore orion's diff
Good song
STAR
orioncomet
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orioncomet

Leorda wrote:

Unfortunately, I have to ignore orion's diff
=) My Easy diff don't need your mod so, I think.
KRZY
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KRZY
Bmax에게 스타

물론 안니버에게도 스타
Shulin
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Shulin
General:

-- Reduce the .mp3 size there is no need for it to be 11MB.
-- I downloaded video version, didn't get a video. Full submit.

Easy orion:

-- Needs a bigger break / more breaks.

01:50:359 (4) - Clap.
02:29:380 (2) - End at 02:29:380 imo

Short Normal:

-- Map this to the same length as the others.

00:06:723 (3) - New combo.
00:11:758 (5) - ^
01:17:212 (3) - ^
01:30:639 (1,2,3) - Looks weird.
01:33:996 (5) - New combo.
01:52:037 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing a little clustered.

Bmax:

-- Preview point.
-- Tags.

Insane:

-- Too much whistle in the first section of the song imo.

00:42:702 (6,7) - Sounds weird. Move 00:42:702 (6) - to red tick at 00:42:597?
02:37:562 (10,11) - Jump doesn't fit imo.

Star.
bmin11
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bmin11

Leorda wrote:

[Bmax]
This diff has no tags, make sure the tags is same

00:09:450 (7) - New combo?? Agree
00:32:737 (x) - Add note?? I like it as it is
01:32:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The pattern looks weird, IMO Gave a new combo so it makes sure nobody thinks they are the same pattern >_>
02:22:247 (1) - Perhaps move forward to white tick and cut short?? Don't like the empty space created by this mod. It feels akward even I add a note
02:36:723 (1) - Maybe, move forward to white tick and cut short?? Spinner is fairly short already
And ya, I fixed tags and the preview point

Download: EastNewSound - Gensoukyou Matsuribayashi (Aki) (dksslqj) [Bmax].osu
LKs
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LKs
Easy orion

Colin Hou wrote:

  1. looks fine. but HP Drain and OA are both 0?
[00:08:401] why not use a soft-slidertick(soft finish) here? (it will very fit the song,but just suggestion)
[00:10:079] ^
[00:15:114] ^
[00:18:471] ^
[00:20:149] ^
[00:20:989] ^
[00:25:184] finish
[00:39:030] (4,1) spacing is too far ,change the shape?
[01:17:212] move 1 grid down and left
[01:30:639] finish
[01:44:065] move 1 grid up
[01:47:003] (3,1) move 1 grid down
[01:48:681] (2,3) change the slider shape(angle) to advance the spacing (too close now)
[01:53:716] (4,1,2) ^
[02:04:205] move 1 grid left
[02:19:730] 1 grid right
[02:44:485] 1 grid down
[02:47:003] (2,3) spacing too close
[02:49:100] move 3 ggids right
[02:52:037] (1,2) change the slider shape(angle) to advance the spacing (too close now)
[02:54:555] move 1 grid up
[03:05:884] ^
[03:20:989] 1 grid right?

Short Normal

fine

Bmax

[00:26:863] how about do a volume changing? (Step-by-step volume change
[02:47:003] whistle?

Insane

Chaos finish until break 1
you should add finish at : [00:09:660] , [00:09:450] , [00:11:128] , [00:11:338] , [00:11:758] , [00:12:597]

star
orioncomet
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orioncomet

LKs wrote:

Easy orion

Colin Hou wrote:

  1. looks fine. but HP Drain and OA are both 0?
Yes
bmin11
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bmin11
All fixed~

Download: EastNewSound - Gensoukyou Matsuribayashi (Aki) (dksslqj) [Bmax].osu
Kawashiro Nitori
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Kawashiro Nitori
star~
MoonFragrance
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:)
Juchasin
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Juchasin
잘 만드셨네요
Rokodo
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Rokodo
Taiko Difficulty. Remember to Full Submit for the background image upload!

Download: EastNewSound-GensoukyouMatsuribayashi(Aki)Taiko.rar
Sanjenin Nagi
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Sanjenin Nagi
star or 별
Cyril Scarlet
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Cyril Scarlet
ヾ(≧∇≦*)
bmin11
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bmin11
한부분 수정한다고 안니버님 귀찮게 하니 =ㅂ=;;

Download: EastNewSound - Gensoukyou Matsuribayashi (Aki) (dksslqj) [Bmax].osu
Dusty
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Dusty
mod req for bmin go-

Delete the .osb (again? :p) and full resubmit.

Source: capitalize "Touhou"

Tags: add Rokodo to all diffs

[Easy orion]
boring ;_;
slider velocity/distance snap is low and there aren't really patterns so it's too easy to be interesting lol ._.

there's nothing you can really do about it, though ._.

[Short Normal]
Why is [Easy orion] longer than this? :p

00:02:737 (1,2,1) - maybe move these to opposite sides of the screen?
00:46:583 (5) - looked like a jump to me = combobreak :x
00:49:730 (5,2) - I feel like there should be hitsounds on the beginnings of these sliders but no hitsound really sounds good here :/
01:32:107 (2) - maybe move down a couple of grids so it's not overlapped as much by the previous slider?

[Bmax]
the beginning needs more hitsound IMO, so...
00:03:366 (4) - finish?
00:05:044 (5) - ^
00:06:513 (2,3) - whistle, finish?
00:13:436 (1) - finish?
00:14:905 (4,5) - finish, finish or whistle, finish?

[Insane]
02:38:191 (1,2,3,4) - ick 1/2 followed by 1/4 triples, all stacked :<, I don't like that much, unstack (1) from (2,3,4) maybe?
bmin11
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bmin11
I gave some Normal Finishes and hopefully it sounds better now :D

Download: EastNewSound - Gensoukyou Matsuribayashi (Aki) (dksslqj) [Bmax].osu
orioncomet
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orioncomet

Dusty wrote:

[Easy orion]
boring ;_;
slider velocity/distance snap is low and there aren't really patterns so it's too easy to be interesting lol ._.

there's nothing you can really do about it, though ._.
boring diff is boring ^_^
Lemon Water_old
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:3
Xgor
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Xgor
[General]
It says this have a video but I don't show up any video for me... why?

Large chunk of the mp3 is not mapped and it's very large right now, cut/fade it!

I really really wish you had consistent break times and consistent length of the difficulites.
I suggest you end all the difficulites at 03:31:478.

Also there is no breaks in the later parts of the song and that is kinda of a problem for an 3 minutes song....

[Easy]
Faster slider velocity please. It just feels half assed and boring right now imo. Not much effort :/

[Normal]
02:00:639 (1) - Add a finish here?

Aside from that, nothing (except for this is much shorter than the other difficulty <.< )

[Bmax]
Me likes :)

[Insane]
Nothing I can find here eighter

[Taiko]
Hey, there are some unsnapped notes here

Some stuff that need to be fixed and I suggest be changed but not that much.
*star*
orioncomet
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orioncomet

Xgor wrote:

[Easy]
Faster slider velocity please. It just feels half assed and boring right now imo. Not much effort :/
isn't it supposed to be boring diff?

and No :roll: I'm lazy, If It's so boring for EASY diff then just delete my diff.

no worries, cuz I'm not have time for make a new diff that much =/ so just delete my diff, end.
Nanashiro_Nanami
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Nanashiro_Nanami
nice~ :)
blissfulyoshi
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Sorry for the very late mod.
What is the 11.flv in the .osu file? Since it is gone, I guess it does not matter much.

Easy orion:
Combo mod:
00:19:730 (2) - new combo to be consistent with 00:05:884 (1)

Short Normal
add Rokodo to the tags (only diff without the tag)

Normal mod:
01:41:548 (2) - it would look better if you not have this slier overlap with 1

Bmax:
Normal mod:
00:13:856 (2,3) - flip this horizontally because you can still see some overlap from 8 onto 2

Combo mod:
00:07:352 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 00:03:996 (1)
00:11:758 (5) - add a new combo to make this combo shorter?
00:36:303 (1) - since you rarely added new combos for instrumentals in the beginning, this new combo was random to me, so I suggest removing it
01:34:835 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 01:33:156 (1)
01:59:170 (8) - new combo to be consistent with 01:55:814 (1)

Insane: (For some reason, this felt slightly easier than Bmax for me)
Normal mod: (this map would nicer if it less overlap, but I don't think you can change too many patterns now)
Overlap examples:
SPOILER
00:38:191 (4) -
00:45:744 (6) -
01:34:415 (2) -
02:38:086 (1) - this jump is quite random for me, so try to improve the flow of the map here
02:44:485 (6) - this slow slider is very random, please make it normal speed

Combo mod:
00:11:233 (7,1,3) - to follow the music better, remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 7 and 3
02:38:086 (1) to 02:49:100 (7) - - y does the first half of the chorus have a different and strange pattern of combos in comparison to the second half of this chorus? I would advise making the combos consistent with the combos in the second half

I really like this diffs flow, so I was a little harsh on it, sry.

Roko-Don's Taiko:
add a few more combos just in case co-op taiko comes back?

Nice mapset. Star.
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