As requested by forum pm
First of all, sorry for not explaining why i suggest something after saying it. Most of the time it is either because i feel it would either make the map more challenging/original/better flow or otherwise it will be because i feel the map is missing something out.
3-burst = burst stream of 3 notes
5-burst = burst of 5 notes
General
Make sure widescreen support is disabled for all diffs (kantan and mm's oni still have it enabled)
Kantan
00:00:00 - (1 - 12) would it not be better to make this d k d k d k d d d k k k ?
00:17:940 - change to k for some variation
01:02:495 - add a d here?
very solid difficulty!
Futsuu
00:05:316 - would it not be better if this pattern was K K D
00:10:514 - add a slider here instead of K?
00:15:712 - i feel changing this to d fits better
00:59:524 -> 01:07:247 - change this part from k d k d k d k d k d k d to perhaps k d k d k k d d k k d k d d
01:16:455 - change this to k?
also a very good difficulty
Naryuga’s Muzukashii
00:59:821 - in this part you’re overusing kat / underusing don, maybe change to a d here
01:00:712 - change to d
01:02:197 - ^
01:02:940 - ^
01:04:574 - ^
01:05:688 - ^
01:05:910 - ^
01:17:197 - change to k?
01:17:346 - maybe add a ddd burst here
A good difficulty, but in my opinion the things mentioned above really need to be added
MM’s oni
00:05:539 - add a d here?
00:07:915 - ^
00:10:292 - ^
00:11:702 - i think it would be better if you remove the k and extend the spinner until here
00:14:227 - change this to k and add d at 00:14:524
00:16:009 - do you not want to add a slider or a stream here?
00:19:128 - here too a slider or stream?
00:20:910 - i agree with the 1/3 but they’re awkward to play though, just my opinion
00:30:415 - why the doubles here? i’d add a k at 00:30:564
00:32:569 - i would add a k here
00:39:475 - i would add a stream, or several 5- burst streams here
00:57:519 - maybe add a k here for a 5-burst?
01:01:826 - would this not be better if it was a triplet?
01:04:202 - ^
01:06:579 - ^
01:08:881 - why not make this a 3-burst
01:09:475 - add a k here?
01:11:851 - ^
01:14:227 - add a d here?
01:16:306 - i would make notes 32 to 1 here a k k d d k k d k pattern
01:17:246 - add 1/6 dddk here? it definitely fits the music and would add some more depth to the difficulty
01:18:757 - add d here to make it more consistent with the next 4 bars
I wouldn’t say remove the the 1/3, but i think that making it shorter bursts of 1/3 notes would work as well, something like ddkkd kkd dkdkk
remove the k k K d d K d d K in the end and make it kkk K d d K ddd K after the spinner at 01:55:366
You might notice i didn’t mod Inner Oni and Firce777’s Hell Oni and that’s because i just can’t play that myself, so my mod wouldn’t be worth that much. I really hope this mapset gets ranked sometime soon though because it is really well mapped.