1. Easy (2.37 stars, 129 notes)
2. Hard (4.42 stars, 362 notes)
3. Insane (4.88 stars, 541 notes)
4. Normal (3.88 stars, 162 notes)

James2250 wrote:

ok have nothing else to do so will mod this (again)
remove Namine Ritsu VOCAROID from tags as they are already in source/artist
make offset 1647 (don't forget to resnap all notes)

Easy:
00:19:005 (1) - remove whistle
00:34:433 (2) - add clap
00:35:290 (4) - remove clap
00:44:290 (2) - ^
00:46:433 (1) - remove clap from end
00:47:290 (2) - ^
00:48:148 (3) - remove clap from repeat
00:55:005 (4) - remove clap from start and add 1 at end
00:56:719 (1) - remove clap from end
00:57:576 (2) - ^
00:58:433 (3) - remove clap from repeat
01:05:290 (3) - add clap
01:07:005 (1,2,3) - center these on grid
01:19:005 (1) - remove clap from end
01:22:433 (4,5) - ^
01:25:862 (1) - add clap
01:43:005 (1,2) - remove clap from end
01:44:719 (3) - remove clap from repeat
01:51:576 (4) - remove clap from start and add it to the end
01:53:290 (1,2) - remove clap from end
02:02:719 (5) - remove clap
after following these suggestions I would go through again and try and improve some more hitsounds

Normal:
00:22:433 (5) - new combo
00:22:862 (1) - remove new combo
00:45:576 (1) - remove new combo
00:46:433 (2) - new combo
00:59:719 (1) - ^
01:33:576 (1) - remove new combo
02:01:433 (1) - ^
02:01:862 (2) - new combo
02:03:147 (1) - remove new combo(and remove whistle?)

Hard:
I would lower volume on 00:15:46 timing section
02:08:719 (8) - new combo
02:09:576 (1) - remove new combo
02:40:862 - remove break here and map it
03:22:433 (1,2,3,4) - center on grid?

Suck:
why not just call this insane?
01:44:718 (1,2,3,4,5) - not a big fan on this...arrange it in a different way

time for me to go to sleep I think
good luck

ykcarrot wrote:

Hi Suck!


[General]
- Remove tags 'Namine Ritsu'.
- Delete .osb file.

[Easy]
00:18:147 (5) - 1 grid right and 1 grid down. then align next beats.
02:05:289 (1) - change the end of spinner to 02:07:003 ?

[Normal]
HP drain is too high. Decrease it by 1 tick.
01:08:718 (1) - change the end of spinner to 01:10:432 ?
01:40:004 (1) - too far from center. Could you move it a little bit to center?
02:04:004 (1,1) - I suggest you make like this.
[attachment=0:e0c1a]Untitled-1.jpg[/attachment:e0c1a]

[Hard]
01:08:718 (1) - change the end of spinner to 01:10:432 ?

[Insane]
00:07:004 (1) - change the end of spinner to 00:08:289 ?


Nice map. Nothing to say strongly. They are just suggestions. Anyway STAR~

James2250 wrote:

Easy:
00:19:004 (1) - remove whistle?
00:22:432 (5) - ^
00:22:432 (5,1) - switch new combo?
00:41:289 (1,2,3) - don't need all the finish hitsounds
00:44:289 (2) - add finish?
00:48:146 (3) - remove clap from the end of this
00:58:432 (3) - ^
01:44:718 (3) - ^

Normal:
00:49:432 (1,2) - switch new combo (and stack the 1 over the previous 4)
01:00:146 (7) - new combo
01:03:575 (2,3,4,5) - keep spacing equal
01:24:147 (1) - remove new combo?
01:46:004 (1,2) - switch new combo
02:03:147 (1) - delete?
02:03:575 (1) - add whistle
02:03:575 (1,1) - align

Hard:
lower overall diff by 1?
00:03:574 (4) - extend by 1/4
00:26:289 (2) -move onto blue tick
01:56:288 (1,2) - switch new combo
02:03:146 (1) - move to 02:03:575
02:04:003 (2) - move to 02:04:432
02:04:860 (3) - delete
02:43:003 (1) - I would spread this out more so its easier to see where the slider ball is going

Insane:
00:31:861 (1,2,3) - spacing
02:03:146 (1,2) - switch new combo
02:43:860 (2,3) - could be stacked slightly better (turn off grid snap)

I would prefer you get at least one other MAT to look at this before it gets pubbled (I just dont like the look of all these star's and no modding even if it did have a thread before now )
let me know when this is all done and someone else has checked it over (I can't find everythingggg)

I fix most parts you point out, excpet

Normal: 02:43:003 (1) - I would spread this out more so its easier to see where the slider ball is going

I think it should be ok, anyway, if not, I will change it.

Insane:00:31:861 (1,2,3) - spacing

a little jump, Im pretty like it. But if you think I have to respace it, I will.

Also, for the easy diff

00:48:146 (3) - remove clap from the end of this
00:58:432 (3) - ^
01:44:718 (3) - ^

I more like the previously hitsounds, but I still change it, anyway, you help me add most hitsounds in easy.

I will ask another mat or someone pro in mod help me mod it soon.

Lizbeth wrote:

delete .osb file a full submit

Insane
00:04:646 (6,7,8,9,10) - I didn't like this streams, doesn't fits with the music
00:56:074 (12) - make this circle part of the next combo
01:33:896 - add note
01:34:003 - ^
01:34:753 - ^
01:34:861 - ^
02:22:432 - 02:35:718 - in his section of the song you could use normal hitsound in some notes like: 02:22:432 - 02:23:075 - 02:23:289... etc.. so you could emphasize the strong beats of the song. (but this is just a suggestion)
02:28:003 (2) - move 1/4 earlier
02:44:717 (4) - new combo?
03:11:503 - add note
03:11:611 - add note
00:31:861 - place this green line before the note

Hard
why don't you set break time in the same places of insane ..?
02:03:361 (1) - move 1/2 beat later
02:35:932 - add note
02:39:788 (2) - shorten by 1/4 beat, the move it 1/4 later
02:40:646 (4) - same
02:54:146 (2) - this is too close to 1

Normal
01:07:004 (1,1) - unstack... or maybe make it a single combo
01:24:575 - you need a timing section before the note for the sound change. you could use it to for the bpm change

Easy
all good... i find it a lil hard though

star! nice map ^^

James2250 wrote:

why not make all the breaks the same for a nice feeling of conformity?

Easy:
looks fine

Normal:
01:58:432 (1) - remove new combo?

Hard:
00:54:145 (1) - remove new combo?
02:37:861 (3) - put timing section before the slider starts

Insane:
01:08:717 (1) - end at 01:10:432 like the other 3 difficulties?
02:03:574 (1,2,3,4) - spacing

call me back after fixes and I will pubble