hey i saw this on twitter and decided i wanted a kudosu
[extra or something]
00:01:441 (6,1,2,3,4) - the angle going from 6 to 1 doesn't feel right, maybe make these 5 a pentagon
00:02:270 (1,2,3) - you could make these more interesting
00:03:430 (5) - clicking this doesn't work well when there's a held note in the music starts
00:10:227 (5,1) - this antijump sucks
00:12:714 (3) - this shouldn't be this long, there's this ascending guitar in the bg that should be mapped, i think it'd fit well if you made a jump pattern that ended on 00:13:212 (1) - here, 00:13:377 (2) - is overmap as well
00:13:875 (5) - the sliderend here should be a circle, see even 00:14:372 (1,2) - is too short compared to the other triangles and it's sad
00:15:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - make this some geometrical pattern like the first half of the jumps, doesn't need to be where the others are though
00:16:030 (3,1) - also don't stack these
00:16:196 (1,2) - unsnapped ends, also same as 00:12:714 (3)
00:22:661 (1) - don't NC this
00:23:324 - should be mapped
00:25:148 (1,2,3) - this is pretty boring, you should map the foreground melody since you start mapping it at (4)
00:29:790 (1) - the slider speedup here feels arbitrary and you only use three sliders here anyway
00:32:111 (1) - all the jumps up to the back and forths are pretty randomly placed... their flow works but they are pretty ugly
00:40:068 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you should make these look more like a pattern, the two last ones feel out of place coming after the square
[insane]
00:00:281 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - would be better with these symmetric
00:02:270 (1,2,3) - spacing here is random
00:05:088 (5) - the end here should be clickable, it even has a clap sound
00:11:719 (6,1) - antijump here doesn't work well i think, readable but doesn't carry the weight of the melody
00:13:212 (5,1,2) - i'd consider these three the same pattern and should have equal spacing
00:16:527 (1,2,3,4,5) - this zigzag is irregular
00:17:522 (1,2,3) - triangle is irregular
00:18:185 (1,2,3) - copypaste one of these sliders and replace them with the rest, rotate 60 degree or so and it'll be less off(protip copypaste two sliders, match the first one you're pasting with the second one placed, remove the first pasted one and you'll have a perfectly regular three slider pattern)
00:19:180 (1,2,1) - if you want it like this you should make it symmetrical, but i think 00:20:174 (1) - should be 1/2 long and have two extra clickable circles for the rhythm here
00:22:330 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - more circles here than the Extra...
00:26:143 (1,1) - these are NCed unlike Extra, make consistent
00:34:100 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - these are linear, at this spacing this is probably by far the hardest pattern in the map(except the final star). also you should probably divide these into triples instead, it's the only pattern divided by two beats instead of three in this difficulty
00:38:742 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is a pretty huge difficulty spike
i think you're better off remapping most of these two diffs, you might wanna look at it in a macro scale and just go through the song finding the beats that would be good to click on to have a solid foundation, then maybe remove some of them for the Insane(or maybe not).
also to be fair, this is mapped a lot already and my personal opinion is you shouldn't try to rank a set of it unless you have a good gimmick or something for it. good way to practice mapping though i suppose