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xierbaliti

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xierbaliti 2010-03-05T09:12:50+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年3月31日星期四 at 11:28:57

Artist: Annabel
Title: Tenohira no Rakuen
Source: Kono Aozora ni Yakusoku wo
Tags: LittleWing MANYO psp kiddly AngelHoney AHO KanbeKotori guabiniao
BPM: 153
Filesize: 10281kb
Play Time: 03:42
Difficulties Available:

AngelHoney (1.07 stars, 144 notes)
Kotori's Hard (4.51 stars, 564 notes)
Rakuen (4.56 stars, 669 notes)
Relaxing (3.65 stars, 372 notes)

Download: Annabel - Tenohira no Rakuen
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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10th beatmap =A=

song from ｢この青空に約束を─ てのひらのらくえん｣

♪ 手のひらの楽園
作詞：Annabel
作曲·編曲：MANYO（Little Wing）
歌：Annabel
プロデュース：Little Wing

Easy(AngelHoney):AngelHoney
Normal(Relaxing):xier
Hard(Kotori's Hard):KanbeKotori
Collab(Rakuen):xier & kiddly

Last edited by xierbaliti 2011-03-31T03:35:11+00:00, edited 34 times in total.

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♪(●´Д｀人´Д｀●)♪

kiddly

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kiddly 2010-07-16T05:36:54+00:00

Download: soft-hitclap.rar

蛋疼啊不让传wav 一个文件也要打包._.

NatsumeRin

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._.

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AngelHoney

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AngelHoney 2010-10-22T08:00:33+00:00

有稍微改了下差不多就這樣吧www (別忘了tags :3

Download: Annabel - Tenohira no Rakuen (xierbaliti) [AngelHoney].osu

KanbeKotori

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KanbeKotori 2010-10-23T12:42:07+00:00

完工 ._.

Download: Annabel - Tenohira no Rakuen (xierbaliti) [Kotori's Hard].osu

LirsRosso

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star

DeadAlready

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DeadAlready 2010-10-28T14:03:00+00:00

:O

Meiri

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Meiri 2010-10-29T11:25:01+00:00

Hi xierbaliti

Sorry For The Late Mod ~.~

Anyway, Here Is My Mod

AngelHoney
Too Long ! But If You Want, Tomorrow I'll Give Full Mod
Because, There Is Still Many HitSound Use

Okay ? Star First ^^

Dotsu

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~STAR~

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Alace 2011-01-12T14:45:56+00:00

omg AHO diff!!!!

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swish 2011-02-01T13:17:20+00:00

こんにゃく ._.

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Aakiha 2011-02-05T16:24:00+00:00

喜儿 GJ!

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快rank

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KanbeKotori

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KanbeKotori 2011-03-12T13:26:18+00:00

ok remap 完毕

Download: Annabel - Tenohira no Rakuen (xierbaliti) [Kotori's Hard].osu

xierbaliti

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xierbaliti 2011-03-12T16:21:20+00:00

ok uploaded. and back to Pending

Magicphoenix

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Magicphoenix 2011-03-15T14:13:55+00:00

! >w<
Cool song hoho~

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:3

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この青空に約束大爱

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2011-03-21T19:20:43+00:00

[General]:

tags: AHO
lean-in: 2s 应该就足够了

[Rakuen]:

stack leniency+2 否则一小节长slider后的notes会各种奇怪的形式叠在一起
03:16:408 (5) - 加个reverse? 03:16:408 (5,1) 这里感觉里这么近有点怪怪的...

[Kotori's Hard]:

01:31:114 (1) - 加note 然后spinner后移打起来会好一点
AR好蛋疼 +1吧 ...
02:25:628 (1,2,3) - 不要叠一起会好一点
03:39:740 (1) - 加鼓声. 末尾音量自然要改动
04:39:349 (1) - 加note+finish spinner后移

[Relaxing]:

stack leniency +1 能省点麻烦就省点好了...
AR OD -1 平均一下分配而且会好读很多
00:40:918 (T) - 这条红线换inherited 00:00:134的BPM直接153然后接x0.5 secion.红线绿线叠一起我还是建议红线前移4小节...
slidertickrate = 0.5 (Pokie有提到过静音slidertick/sliderslide不能一起用我也不清楚 [stress])
02:07:486 (T) - 音量变化很惊人... 到75吧
02:52:682 ~ 03:02:094 这一段还是保持第三白线clap 其余whistle点缀会比较好 02:53:467这一点可以用SB Clap修饰一下
```
Sample,,0,"soft-hitclap.wav",80
```
上面那一堆扔到.osu文件中[Events]的//Storyboard Sound Samples下 (其实只要扔Events里就行)

[AngelHoney]:

stack leniency +1 能省点麻烦就省点好了...
整体音量比其他难度偏低不少
03:42:879 (5) - new combo?
slidertick其实很适合这个难度的

很舒心的曲子~ 改好了说下 ^^/

xierbaliti

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xierbaliti 2011-03-21T21:30:45+00:00

暂时改了我自己的2个难度

明天需要一次完整上传基本是无声tick的删除和comboburst的增加

还有那code不太对吧._.

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2011-03-22T10:54:17+00:00

Sample,173467,0,"soft-hitclap.wav",80

忘记时间点了 +_+

KanbeKotori

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KanbeKotori 2011-03-22T16:48:58+00:00

[Kotori's Hard]:
01:31:114 (1) - 加note 然后spinner后移打起来会好一点
AR好蛋疼 +1吧 ...
02:25:628 (1,2,3) - 不要叠一起会好一点
03:39:740 (1) - 加鼓声. 末尾音量自然要改动
04:39:349 (1) - 加note+finish spinner后移

都改了 :O

Download: Annabel - Tenohira no Rakuen (xierbaliti) [Kotori's Hard].osu

AngelHoney

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AngelHoney 2011-03-22T20:40:55+00:00

tick沒弄其他都改了

Download: Annabel - Tenohira no Rakuen (xierbaliti) [AngelHoney].osu

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star

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青空大爱~

xierbaliti

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xierbaliti 2011-03-23T11:24:13+00:00

all fixed.

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JauiPlaY 2011-03-23T11:53:22+00:00

不來一發嗎.

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2011-03-23T15:33:18+00:00

10 months old map wow

xierbaliti

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xierbaliti 2011-03-24T04:56:54+00:00

眼泪为什么不由自主地流下来 …

谢谢各位的星. mod. 还有科林的bubble
谢谢<(_ _)>

xierbaliti

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xierbaliti 2011-03-25T03:47:14+00:00

thanks for ruru's comboburst~

uploaded.

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2011-03-25T03:50:41+00:00

Fixed

HakuNoKaemi

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HakuNoKaemi 2011-03-26T19:41:20+00:00

You HAVE to do this
You should do this
You Could do this
Dependence from the suggestion before
[*]change other similiar things

[AngelHoney]
rename to AngelHoney's Easy ?
[*]00:54:251 (2,3) - this pattern felt stange... You can :
- Simply Add Hit Circle in 00:55:035 (x)
- Use one repeating 2/1 Slider(Arch/S) ( 00:54:251 (Start) - 00:55:035 (1st repeat) - 00:55:820 (End) )
- Use one Circular 4/1 Slider starting from 00:54:251 to 00:55:820
(remember to change the other similiar parts)

[Relaxing]
God quality mapping

[Kotori's Hard]
it's really intuitive and followable

[Gakuen]
03:08:761 (1,2) - Feel unreadable q.q, please move (2) Slider at the right/left of the (1)
03:13:663 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - i don't like this type of hit circle positioning, it's hard to read+confusive

Starred

kiddly

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kiddly 2011-03-27T07:05:47+00:00

HakuNoKaemi wrote:
You HAVE to do this
You should do this
You Could do this
Dependence from the suggestion before
[*]change other similiar things
[AngelHoney]
rename to AngelHoney's Easy ?
[*]00:54:251 (2,3) - this pattern felt stange... You can :
- Simply Add Hit Circle in 00:55:035 (x)
- Use one repeating 2/1 Slider(Arch/S) ( 00:54:251 (Start) - 00:55:035 (1st repeat) - 00:55:820 (End) )
- Use one Circular 4/1 Slider starting from 00:54:251 to 00:55:820
(remember to change the other similiar parts)

[Relaxing]
God quality mapping

[Kotori's Hard]
it's really intuitive and followable

[Gakuen]
03:08:761 (1,2) - Feel unreadable q.q, please move (2) Slider at the right/left of the (1)
sorry but no.example:http://osu.ppy.sh/s/3302
03:13:663 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - i don't like this type of hit circle positioning, it's hard to read+confusive
I think it's widely used in many maps so players won't feel confused.

Starred

xierbaliti

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xierbaliti 2011-03-27T07:15:22+00:00

so no change. thanks for modding anyway.

HakuNoKaemi

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HakuNoKaemi 2011-03-27T09:47:14+00:00

--03:08:761 (1,2) - Feel unreadable q.q, please move (2) Slider at the right/left of the (1)
-sorry but no.example:http://osu.ppy.sh/s/3302
That map was ranked some years ago (2008) plus it's APPROVED.... more recent and ranked example?
at least make them correctly stacked ... ( (1) start it's not correctly stacked on (2) in prewiev ) Screenshot
--03:13:663 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - i don't like this type of hit circle positioning, it's hard to read+confusive
-I think it's widely used in many maps so players won't feel confused.
that was only personal... but some recent and ranked example?

xierbaliti

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xierbaliti 2011-03-27T10:21:12+00:00

ok let‘s see this one http://osu.ppy.sh/s/22715

03:07:425 (1,1,1)

HakuNoKaemi

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HakuNoKaemi 2011-03-27T13:02:45+00:00

ok, with that it is just a suggestion,
please move it at right of (1) or correctly stack it (it is stacked uncorrectly as you see here) to obtain a better graphic effect ( or just lower the stack leniency by 1 )

xierbaliti

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xierbaliti 2011-03-27T13:54:44+00:00

thanks for point this, but i think it's fine. >.<

Andrea

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Andrea 2011-03-30T18:00:49+00:00

[Overall]

Can you explain me what's for the file "comboburst.png" ? I think it's useless.

[Difficulties]

[Rakuen]

Score is a bit too high, can you do something for reduce it please?

Wonderful. Please take care of these 2 fixes and I'll gladly rank this.

xierbaliti

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xierbaliti 2011-03-31T03:34:14+00:00

thank you Andrea :3

all fixed~

Hakosaki Chisa

Hakosaki Chisa 2011-03-31T05:38:36+00:00

OK.

Andrea

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