BEXTER - Syriana · forum

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-03-04T09:03:15+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 3월 26일 금요일 at 오후 3:21:59

Artist: BEXTER
Title: Syriana
Source: DJMAX
Tags: DJ MAX Portable 2 Trilogy Clazziquai Edtion Ache S4 League
BPM: 135
Filesize: 8298kb
Play Time: 02:00
Difficulties Available:

Easy (2.27 stars, 114 notes)
Hard (4.86 stars, 275 notes)
Normal (3.83 stars, 172 notes)

Download: BEXTER - Syriana
Download: BEXTER - Syriana (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 21th beatmap :3
Funk song in DJMAX Series, and one of the BGM of S4 League.
Included in DJMAX Protable 2, Clazziquai Edtion and Trilogy.

Composed by BEXTER
Visualized by Ache
Rap feat. JC

3/22 - Add Easy diff

Last edited by MoonFragrance 2010-03-26T06:23:51+00:00, edited 18 times in total.

Ra-s

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Ra-s 2010-03-07T11:48:23+00:00

+Star

관리는 힘들게 하시겠지만 랭크되길 바레요.

Nightscream_old

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Joined November 2009

Nightscream_old 2010-03-10T06:29:34+00:00

Syriana

Star

Astom

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Astom 2010-03-19T23:47:01+00:00

Hi Moon :3

In blue suggestions, In red maybe important

[general]

-BEXTER - Syriana (MoonFragrance).osb, if u don't use this, kill it :3

Mmmm nothing more i think, very good :3

MoonFragrance

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Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2010-03-20T03:22:33+00:00

fixed :3

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2010-03-20T03:33:19+00:00

Yay a MoonFragrance map I'm excited

.

Hard:
01:28:936 (1) - Take a repeat off of this, and move the spinner to where that repeat began, and end it at the same place as usual. Remember to re-add the claps

That's all <3~. Great job once again

.

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2010-03-20T03:43:50+00:00

Annyeong haseyo

[Normal]
-2 OD, plz
00:26:491 (3) - spacing

nice map like always, starr ~

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-03-20T04:07:36+00:00

CDFA wrote:
Hard:
01:28:936 (1) - Take a repeat off of this, and move the spinner to where that repeat began, and end it at the same place as usual. Remember to re-add the claps
.

I think that note is okay now :3
others all fixed XD

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2010-03-20T07:07:36+00:00

General:

MoonFragrance wrote:
My 21th beatmap :3

Correct English grammar is "My 21st beatmap"

Easy:
Wait what? No Easy diff? Booo~
Make one. Normal is too hard to be easiest diff D:

Normal:
Reduce OD by 2
Reduce HP Drain Rate by 2

Normal Mod~
01:39:602 (1,2,3,4) - Move (3,4) up 2 Grids to form equilateral triangle with (1,2)

Hard:

Hitsound Mod~
01:24:936 (6) - Add clap at beginning of slider
01:39:158 (4) - ^
01:46:269 (4) - ^

Normal Mod~
00:23:825 (7) - Make more symmetrical

RandomJibberish

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RandomJibberish 2010-03-20T07:35:52+00:00

Easy:
00:26:047 (2,3) - Spacing

I didn't find any other problems. Star~

aRiskOfRain

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aRiskOfRain 2010-03-20T10:47:01+00:00

Good!

Hikato

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Hikato 2010-03-20T15:03:23+00:00

[General]
Delete the .osb if it isn't used.

[Normal]
00:26:491 (3) - Spacing

[Hard]
01:04:713 (x) - Add a beat here.
01:04:936 (4) - Move back 1/4
01:05:158 (6) - Move back 1/4
01:05:269 (x) - Add a beat here.
01:05:602 (x) - Add a beat here.
01:11:825 (x) - Add a beat here.
01:12:047 (3) - Move back 1/4
01:12:269 (5) - Move back 1/4
01:12:380 (x) - Add a beat here.
01:12:713 (x) - Add a beat here.
01:36:825 (x) - Add a beat here.
01:37:047 (4) - Remove.

I didn't suggest changes with the slider patterns around the same parts, but it would sound good if you used a similar sound to how the mod creates throughout the map. :3

Nice map. <3 song

K-S-O

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K-S-O 2010-03-21T04:45:31+00:00

The map is pretty great. I would like to see this ranked.

Dusty

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Dusty 2010-03-21T05:12:33+00:00

star <3

Leorda

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Joined June 2009

Leorda 2010-03-21T12:13:49+00:00

Annyeonghaseyo!

[General]
Your beatmap need a easier diff

[File]
Delete the .osb and full submit

[Normal]
00:26:047 (2,3) - Spacing error
00:26:269 (x) - Add note?

[Hard]
00:25:825 (3,4) - Stack with 00:24:491 (8)?
01:03:491 (7,8) - Stack with 6?
01:33:713 (4,5) - Stack with 3?

Good song
STAR

Chacha17

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Chacha17 2010-03-22T10:43:04+00:00

Easy
00:17:380 (5) - move one grid to the right then resnap the other beats
00:28:936 (1) - move one grid downwards

Normal
Fine

Hard

Nah nazi again

01:13:602 (3,4,5,6) - make this a straight line
01:13:602 (3,4,5,6) - move one grid to the right

Here you go.

LKs

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Joined August 2009

LKs 2010-03-22T10:51:13+00:00

hi MoonFragrance

general
remove ".osb"
make music lead in = 0

Easy

[00:35:60] stop at [00:38:71] will be better imo
[00:47:60] (2,3) this object is too far from the perviews object (AImod)
[00:56:93] (1,2) make Parallel?

Normal

[00:16:49] (6,7,8) move them 1 grid left
[01:56:04] move the endding-point 1 grid up

SPOILER

Hard

0.0 good

have a interesting reythm , btw i am expecting for sometime you make a awesome diff

( [lunatic] / [insane] / [extra] etc.)

star

kino77

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kino77 2010-03-22T11:05:00+00:00

Nothing found~
Nice map~
Have a star~

Diasios

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Diasios 2010-03-22T13:49:53+00:00

[General]

• Offset 10715 (resnap all notes)
• Delete the .osb file, then "Full submission"

FishHook

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Joined September 2009

FishHook 2010-03-22T23:35:52+00:00

[Easy]
0:48:047 (3) decrease spacing to match spacing in pattern.

[Normal]
0:52:936 (4) Look at the end anchor for the slider. Requarding the square of the grid it is in, move the anchor to the bottom right point to help straighten out the flow of the mouse cursor.

[Hard]
0:38:713 (7) Move one unit to the right? You have a lot of beats and overlay each other but this is the only one that is off. Its fine either way, but if you change it, you might/will have to offset the rest of the beats one unit over to compensate spacing.

Very solid map otherwise.

Babble

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Babble 2010-03-23T00:09:29+00:00

Heya!

Easy
00:39:158 - Extend the preceding slider to here. Sounds better.

Normal
looks good

Hard
Also no problems

Nice map & song. Star!

Gothic_old

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Gothic_old 2010-03-23T12:34:18+00:00

별

La Valse

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La Valse 2010-03-24T13:04:14+00:00

먹어 이마!

Shulin

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Shulin 2010-03-25T10:32:34+00:00

General:

-- Delete .osb and full submit.

Hard:

01:49:603 (3) - Return is hard to see, maybe make it a stack?
02:00:270 (7,8,9) - Stack like 01:03:381 (6,7,8) - ?

Very nice maps, those are really minor points so here's a:

Proto Bubble

DJPop

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DJPop 2010-03-25T14:55:11+00:00

Why you map so BORING this time? D: D: D:

~Easy~
00:48:937 (5) - remove hitfinish
01:03:603 (4) - remove hitfinish at first note
01:25:381 (1) - add hitfinish at first note
01:31:159 (1) - add hitfnish
01:59:159 (2) - remove hitfinish

~Normal~
01:31:159 (1) - add hitfinish
01:39:159 (4) - remove hitfinish
01:46:270 (7) - ^
01:53:381 (6,1) - ^
02:00:492 (6) - ^

~Hard~
01:17:826 (7) - add clap

+Star

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-03-26T06:22:26+00:00

DJPop wrote:
Why you map so BORING this time? D: D: D:
- I have no time to mapping ;_;

fixed :3

tieff

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tieff 2010-03-26T12:57:23+00:00

Bubbled.

gdeath

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gdeath 2010-03-26T14:02:13+00:00

Ah.I'm late. oops
anyway,take a star.

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2010-03-27T00:08:18+00:00

gdeath wrote:
Ah.I'm late. oops
anyway,take a star.

there's no such thing as too late. If you believe there is something in the map that needs to be changed, you should post it

gdeath

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gdeath 2010-03-27T04:34:30+00:00

Actually,i dont wanna touch/mod a map which has already been bubbled
well,i played this map just now and nothing found.
Its time to make it ranked : )

MoonFragrance

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Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2010-03-27T14:30:32+00:00

P.s : This song has a lead-in time for MV :3

Andrea

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Andrea 2010-03-27T16:00:40+00:00