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orioncomet
[General]
- offset: 1,173 - resnap all note.. err... about bpm BPM Analyzer told me 90.. but.. orz too slow, No fit for me
- Delete "wall-e" from TAG Because It's already on Source
- Delete "Movie" from Source

[Normal]
00:49:574 (1) - try replace sound finish with clap, can you make this spinner longer then this? This spinner is too short for Normal, IMO, Maybe make it longer like Hard

[Hard]
01:06:465 (1) - end at 01:13:272 (on white tick)

starrrrrr
Matma Rex
[Normal]
Jakiś taki ucięty ten diff jest D:
00:23:860 (3) - poprzednie notki trochę to zaslaniają, może być mylące (zwłaszcza w najłatwiejszym diffie).
00:31:423 (4) - nowe kombo?
00:38:230 (3) - kurde, brzydko wygląda to złączenie początku z końcem. Albo powinno się nakładać (i musisz dorobić jakieś strzałki w storyboardzie), albo (prawie) w ogóle nie stykac. Zresztą, strzałki to bym i teraz dorobił.

[Hard]
Jesli chce ci się, to mozesz pozmieniać te "ostre" slidery na ladne, okrągłe D: (np. 00:30:163 (4))
00:38:230 (1) - patrz Normal.
00:50:331 (3,4,5,6) - o fu, to jest mylące D: Ale generalnie rzecz biorąc OK.
01:00:919 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - dodaj jeszcze jedną notkę, żeby konczylo sie na bialym ticku.
01:06:465 (1) - sekcję wyciszającą lepiej dać albo na samym końcu slidera (dosłownie 1/8 przed), albo na samym początku. Teraz, jeśli ktoś będzie miał bonus na sliderze, to najpierw będą "bing"-i, a potem nagle nie.
Topic Starter
Mr Gaddy

Matma Rex wrote:

[Normal]
Jakiś taki ucięty ten diff jest D: Pod wieczór dorobię resztę :p
00:23:860 (3) - poprzednie notki trochę to zaslaniają, może być mylące (zwłaszcza w najłatwiejszym diffie). Done.
00:31:423 (4) - nowe kombo? Nowe kombo zrobione.
00:38:230 (3) - kurde, brzydko wygląda to złączenie początku z końcem. Albo powinno się nakładać (i musisz dorobić jakieś strzałki w storyboardzie), albo (prawie) w ogóle nie stykac. Zresztą, strzałki to bym i teraz dorobił. Zmienione <i w hardzie i normalu>

[Hard]
Jesli chce ci się, to mozesz pozmieniać te "ostre" slidery na ladne, okrągłe D: (np. 00:30:163 (4)) Zmieniłem 2 slajdery na bardziej zaokrąglone.
00:38:230 (1) - patrz Normal. Zmienione <i w hardzie i normalu>
00:50:331 (3,4,5,6) - o fu, to jest mylące D: Ale generalnie rzecz biorąc OK. D: Jeden z niewielu momentów, w których można tego diffa nazwać "hardem" :/
01:00:919 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - dodaj jeszcze jedną notkę, żeby konczylo sie na bialym ticku. Done + zmieniłem timing o jednego ticka 1/4 do przodu.
01:06:465 (1) - sekcję wyciszającą lepiej dać albo na samym końcu slidera (dosłownie 1/8 przed), albo na samym początku. Teraz, jeśli ktoś będzie miał bonus na sliderze, to najpierw będą "bing"-i, a potem nagle nie. Rozumim, dałem na samym początku + wieczorem zmienię odgłos bonusu za spinnery na pusty.
Wielkie dzięki za +star i moda :D




orioncomet wrote:

[General]
- offset: 1,173 - resnap all note.. err... about bpm BPM Analyzer told me 90.. but.. orz too slow, No fit for me Well, Analyzer about BPM said that correct timing should be 119,13 - it doesnt fit into this song. D: + sorry, i didnt changed offset - its same as this currently one < at least it seems like it's not D: >.
- Delete "wall-e" from TAG Because It's already on Source Done.
- Delete "Movie" from Source Moved to "tags".

[Normal]
00:49:574 (1) - try replace sound finish with clap, can you make this spinner longer then this? This spinner is too short for Normal, IMO, Maybe make it longer like Hard It's now with "finish" hitsound. I'll make more of Normal today later.

[Hard]
01:06:465 (1) - end at 01:13:272 (on white tick) Done.

starrrrrr Thankya =D


James2250 wrote:

you don't need walle wall-e in tags as its in source Done.

Normal:
00:38:230 (3) - separate start and end points more Done <in normal and hard>.
why not map all of this like hard? I'll map it today, but later.

Hard:
00:35:457 (1) - remove new combo? Done.
00:36:969 (1) - ^ Done.
00:38:230 (1) - ^ (and I would seperate start and end points more) Done.
00:55:625 (1) - ^ Done.
01:01:297 (1) - remove new combo? Done.
01:06:465 (1) - end at 01:13:272 (on white tick) Done.

nicely done
*star* Thanks, and thanks c:

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. Move "Movie" from source to tags. Remove "wall-e" from tags. Moved to tags, removed.
2. Add kiai time. Perhaps, from 00:50:583 to 01:13:272? Sure, added :D I'll add it also to Normal, but after i'll mod it.

[Normal]
-- Map the rest of the song. It's a 1 minute song. I will map it today.
00:38:230 (3) - Overlapping slider. I couldn't decided which way the sliderball goes at the first time I saw it. Don't make the beginning and the end meet at the same point. [!] Done.
00:46:549 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - Normal hitsound is not fit to this part. Sounds weird. Changed hitsounds.

[Hard]
00:16:171 - This point, the hitsound is too loud. Well, to be honest i really like this part <+ hitsounds are fitting into song> - and thats why i made it louder than other parts of songs D: I'll make it more silenced after ill ask more people to look at it.
00:38:230 (1) - Overlapping slider. I couldn't decided which way the sliderball goes at the first time I saw it. Don't make the beginning and the end meet at the same point. [!] Done.
00:42:389 - This point, the hitsound is too loud. ^up
00:49:574 (1) - It's hidden slider. It's unrankable. Move it somewhere. [!] Moved.
01:06:465 (1) - Reduce one 1/4 tick. Done.

Star. This is nice.Thankya ;)

Thanks guys.
fartownik
Offset: 170 (+7)

[Normal]

Please map it to the end. The whole map has only 2 difficulties so they should be fully mapped.

00:43:020 (4,1) - Swap new combo.
00:44:028 (3,1) - ^
00:47:053 (5,1) - ^


[Hard]

00:26:139 (3) - Curve it prettier? :P
00:36:475 (1,2,3,4) - A bit too loud and the samples sound strange. Could you hitsounds it another way?
00:38:240 (3) - Maybe a horizontal flip? The pattern goes left and suddenly changes right by this slider. It should fit better.
01:00:929 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It isn't unrankable, but the stream like this in the difficulty like this? :P You can keep it, but I suggest to change this pattern.

Cool relaxing map ;) Not much issues.
+star
Topic Starter
Mr Gaddy

fartownik wrote:

Offset: 170 (+7) Done in both difficulty's.

[Normal]

Please map it to the end. The whole map has only 2 difficulties so they should be fully mapped. Done.

00:43:020 (4,1) - Swap new combo. Done.
00:44:028 (3,1) - ^ Done.
00:47:053 (5,1) - ^ Done.


[Hard]

00:26:139 (3) - Curve it prettier? :P Done... i think.
00:36:475 (1,2,3,4) - A bit too loud and the samples sound strange. Could you hitsounds it another way? Well, tbh i don't have much ideas to make hitsounds in there D: I'll think about it and ask other people.
00:38:240 (3) - Maybe a horizontal flip? The pattern goes left and suddenly changes right by this slider. It should fit better. Flipped.
01:00:929 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It isn't unrankable, but the stream like this in the difficulty like this? :P You can keep it, but I suggest to change this pattern. Changed placing.

Cool relaxing map ;) Not much issues.
+star Thank you for mod & star =)
Weird... Whatever, i removed <again> few tags and changed source.
LKs
WALL-E~>w<

general

source & Tags : Ost Movie Pixar Soundtrack
make music lead in = 2s
imo,this map no need a kiai..cause this is a relax song

Normal

[00:38:23] change shape?
[00:38:23] no finish, use whistle

Hard

[00:04:07] green tick : turn down the volume to 40%
[00:08:23] remove the slider .and set a circle here (and whistle
[00:12:14] green tick : turn down the volume to 40%
[00:33:66] remove finish .maybe add finish at [00:33:95] ?
[00:38:23] i dont think this very beautiful.. so change shape for better effect
[00:40:25] remove clap. Normal-finish(C1) or Soft-whistle are fit here
[00:49:32] no hitsound here
[00:52:48] green tick : turn down the volume to 40%

good map. star!

:!: samipale may mod this map too
Topic Starter
Mr Gaddy

LKs wrote:

general

source & Tags : Ost Movie Pixar Soundtrack Replaced.
make music lead in = 2s It's like this all the time... o.o
imo,this map no need a kiai..cause this is a relax song I'll leave it, but i'll think about deleting/replacing it.

Normal

[00:38:23] change shape? Why D: Imo it doesn't look so bad.
[00:38:23] no finish, use whistle Whistled.

Hard

[00:04:07] green tick : turn down the volume to 40% Done.
[00:08:23] remove the slider .and set a circle here (and whistle) Removed.
[00:12:14] green tick : turn down the volume to 40% Done.
[00:33:66] remove finish .maybe add finish at [00:33:95] ? Removed finish sound. I think it sounds weird with finish at [00:33:95].
[00:38:23] i dont think this very beautiful.. so change shape for better effect I'll leave it. If some more people will ask about it, i'll change this.
[00:40:25] remove clap. Normal-finish(C1) or Soft-whistle are fit here Done - Soft-Whistle.
[00:49:32] no hitsound here Done.
[00:52:48] green tick : turn down the volume to 40% Done.

good map. star! Thank you (:
RobalPboo
Nice beatmap :)
You are nice mapper , Mr. Gaddy
Star'd*
James2250
Normal:
looks good

Hard:
00:07:733 (1) - remove new combo (so its the same as normal)
then make 00:08:993 (6) a new combo
00:40:38 timing section isnt needed?

I would also recommend removing the kiai as it doesn't really fit with such a relaxing song
call me back after fixes and I will pubble
SamiPale
[Normal]
Seems no problem around,but the volume of soft-whistle is too loud.

[Hard]
00:04:077,00:16:178,00:28:279,00:42:396 - volume problem too

00:08:993(3) - add whistle
00:22:733(5) - suggestion,this circle move to 00:22:228?
00:23:111(7) - suggestion,hitsound of the end try to use Normal-Finish(no custom sound)?(Low the volume)
00:45:043(5) - i heard just one clap around,try to add more
00:56:640(1) - hitsound try to use Normal-Normal at beginning and use Normal-Clap at end
00:57:396(2) - hitsound Normal-Normal

SPOILER
notes and hitsound setting are good
but i think long slider is hard to be made pretty :)
star
Topic Starter
Mr Gaddy

James2250 wrote:

Normal:
looks good Yay :D

Hard:
00:07:733 (1) - remove new combo (so its the same as normal)
then make 00:08:993 (6) a new combo Moved
00:40:38 timing section isnt needed? Removed

I would also recommend removing the kiai as it doesn't really fit with such a relaxing song Removed on both difficultys

samipale wrote:

[Normal]
Seems no problem around,but the volume of soft-whistle is too loud. Changed a bit volume <lowered>, so now it's like in Hard.

[Hard]
00:04:077,00:16:178,00:28:279,00:42:396 - volume problem too 00:04:077; 0:28:279 - well, imo these parts with a bit higher volume fits there, 00:28:279; 00:42:396 - i made this part with a bit higher volume, because these hitsounds there are really fitting into song

00:08:993(3) - add whistle Added
00:22:733(5) - suggestion,this circle move to 00:22:228? Moved
00:23:111(7) - suggestion,hitsound of the end try to use Normal-Finish(no custom sound)?(Low the volume) Imo Normal-Finish doesn't fit in there D:
00:45:043(5) - i heard just one clap around,try to add more Added one clap at [00:18:825]
00:56:640(1) - hitsound try to use Normal-Normal at beginning and use Normal-Clap at end Done
00:57:396(2) - hitsound Normal-Normal Done

SPOILER
notes and hitsound setting are good
but i think long slider is hard to be made pretty :)
Thanks :d Well, it's not easy to change such long sliders to make them "prettier" :/
star Thankya ;)
Really thanks c:
aRiskOfRain
Wow, what a pleasant map to play.
James2250
sorry I missed one thing :oops:

Normal:
00:37:733 (1) - goes up into the health bar..move it down on the grid (then space the rest of the combo out)

(you also might want to move the endpoint down on 00:30:169 (4) (hard) so it doesn't go so high on the gird)

I can pubble after that

Edit:
Pubbled!! :)
Topic Starter
Mr Gaddy

James2250 wrote:

Normal:
00:37:733 (1) - goes up into the health bar..move it down on the grid (then space the rest of the combo out) Moved

(you also might want to move the endpoint down on 00:30:169 (4) (hard) so it doesn't go so high on the gird) Moved

I can pubble after that

Edit:
Pubbled!! :) Very thanks :D
Neo Adonis
So cute the song :3

[General]
I disagree the idea of don't using the grid. But it've worked you, so don't worry about it.
To get better precision, put the end point of the slider where you want it instead of just adjust the other control points.

[Normal]
00:38:237 (3) - The bottom peak of the heart isn't centered

[Hard]
00:18:825 (5) - Why don't you use soft sound timing section without any hit sound?
00:47:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Too messy and confusing. I can't know where to hit. As a solution, why don't you add at least new combos on the center circles? On this form the player will know the other circles should be hit after because these will be numbered with a "2".

Good job!!
Topic Starter
Mr Gaddy

Neo Adonis wrote:

[General]
I disagree the idea of don't using the grid. But it've worked you, so don't worry about it. Well, when i started mapping i wanted to try making a beatmap without using grid, and when i've seen how it's going, i liked it. :D
To get better precision, put the end point of the slider where you want it instead of just adjust the other control points. Mhm

[Normal]
00:38:237 (3) - The bottom peak of the heart isn't centered Done.

[Hard]
00:18:825 (5) - Why don't you use soft sound timing section without any hit sound? I'll leave it as it's now, it doesn't sound so bad at all :p
00:47:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Too messy and confusing. I can't know where to hit. As a solution, why don't you add at least new combos on the center circles? On this form the player will know the other circles should be hit after because these will be numbered with a "2". Made new combos.

Good job!! Thank you :)
Teara
Sorry, going to pop this Pubbled, offset is wrong, it should be 162.

Apart from that a great map :)
Topic Starter
Mr Gaddy

Teara wrote:

Sorry, going to pop this Pubbled, offset is wrong, it should be 162. Changed.

Apart from that a great map :) Thanks =]
Teara
Pubbled again!

:)
abalee
lol
Niko
from me >:3.

Hitsounds in Hard are very nice :).
Luvdic
Maps are fine to me, so i will just give some opinions i had during my fail modding try

Normal:

- 00:49:573 (1) - Kinda too hard for a normal, although i know that it is rankable just because it can do 4k bonus in auto.
- 00:19:573 - 00:19:825 - 00:20:077 - I just felt that a circle or slider should be placed on those spots.

Hard:

- I prefer the hitsounds from normal difficulty than this one. Also i dont know why these two difficulties have sooo different hitsounds, its not like they were mapped by different person.
- 00:36:464 (1,2,3,4) - I dont like these
- 00:38:229 (3) - Too confusive to were it goes, the heart shape in normal is good enough to not be confusive to me.
- I dont really understand the lack of... what they are called? triple circles in 1/4? after 00:40:498, seeng as they were used in the first part of the map

As i said, they are alll just opinion, youre map itself is rankable to me (please note that im a noob modder) so all these suggestions are ignorable. And please, dont say "sorry, no kudos for you", id rather have you saying "i wont take any of your suggestions"
Topic Starter
Mr Gaddy

ErufenRito wrote:

Maps are fine to me, so i will just give some opinions i had during my fail modding try Don't think like that D:

Normal:

- 00:49:573 (1) - Kinda too hard for a normal, although i know that it is rankable just because it can do 4k bonus in auto. Yep, im leaving it.
- 00:19:573 - 00:19:825 - 00:20:077 - I just felt that a circle or slider should be placed on those spots. Added slider and circle.

Hard:

- I prefer the hitsounds from normal difficulty than this one. Also i dont know why these two difficulties have sooo different hitsounds, its not like they were mapped by different person. I wanted to make those difficultys more different-looking, so there's some differences between them in hitsounds.
- 00:36:464 (1,2,3,4) - I dont like these Changed.
- 00:38:229 (3) - Too confusive to were it goes, the heart shape in normal is good enough to not be confusive to me. I'll keep it like that for now D:
- I dont really understand the lack of... what they are called? triple circles in 1/4? after 00:40:498, seeng as they were used in the first part of the map I was trying to not make this map repetitive so much.

As i said, they are alll just opinion, youre map itself is rankable to me (please note that im a noob modder No,yourenot.) so all these suggestions are ignorable. And please, dont say "sorry, no kudos for you", id rather have you saying "i wont take any of your suggestions"

Thanks for stars + thanks for mod :)
Update :o
Beuchi
Hi hi! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to chenge them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Well, since the audio has a video which perfectly matches, this could be a bit "silly" of me, but.. I play always without videos because they lag me, and the background sounds in the audio seem to be a bit weird without the video. Maybe you should make an advice to turn videos on for people who doesn't? I don't really know xD
- Disable Countdown? :3 It doesn't fit imo xD

~Normal~
No Problems!! Good Job!!

~Hard~
00:50:330 (3,4,5,6) - Those overlappings look a bit ugly, maybe do something lke this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4881

Ahh I love it x3 Relaxing and well mapped :D Go go and rank it!! *star*
Topic Starter
Mr Gaddy

Beuchi-chan wrote:

~All Diffs~
- Well, since the audio has a video which perfectly matches, this could be a bit "silly" of me, but.. I play always without videos because they lag me, and the background sounds in the audio seem to be a bit weird without the video. Maybe you should make an advice to turn videos on for people who doesn't? I don't really know xD Well... Video without those sound effects would be epic fail too D: Gah i don't know, i think ive got to leave it as it is right now D:
- Disable Countdown? :3 It doesn't fit imo xD Disabled

~Normal~
No Problems!! Good Job!! Yay :D Thanks c:

~Hard~
00:50:330 (3,4,5,6) - Those overlappings look a bit ugly, maybe do something lke this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4881 Done

Ahh I love it x3 Relaxing and well mapped :D Go go and rank it!! *star* Thanks :D I'll try lolz
matusiek3
I think, you can't change anything, because that is a perfect map :3
star
Astom
In blue suggestions

[Normal]
-Acc 100%

[Hard]
-Acc 95%
- 01:00:918 <-> 01:01:674 why this? it's ugly and don't realy fit the music

Star, nice song i like it :3
Topic Starter
Mr Gaddy

Astom wrote:

[Normal]
-Acc 100% :o

[Hard]
-Acc 95% D:
- 01:00:918 <-> 01:01:674 why this? it's ugly and don't realy fit the music Deleted 2 circles, now it sounds <i think> better.

Star, nice song i like it :3 Thanks :D
alvisto
Star~
abalee
Don't make any changes if I gave you a bubble.
Topic Starter
Mr Gaddy
^up - iFail, okay D:

alvisto wrote:

Star~
Thanks :p
Mafiamaster
Ranked!

Funny video :P
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