1. Voltage 1 (1.38 stars, 143 notes)
2. Voltage 2 (2.06 stars, 257 notes)
3. Voltage 3 (2.81 stars, 309 notes)
4. Voltage 4 (3.84 stars, 454 notes)
5. Voltage 5 (5.23 stars, 606 notes)

Kyubey wrote:

Hi
http://puu.sh/d8VQH/0ed8e3fcc0.png disable all these checkboxes
btw your claps in the intro sound really bad, maybe replace them with soft-whistles? or better to find some friend that will help you with hitsounds
and check all unused green lines in your maps, and delete them
and since your map need really a lot of overall work, i will point at most noticeable things and some common sense, and you will have to overcheck your diffs for it
[1]
since it is an easy, reduce AR to 3 or 2 Fixed
00:00:426 (1,2,1) - make spacing same manually, this is not a thing where you should use DSFixed
00:21:008 (3,4) - kicknotes in easies are inapropriate. and better to avoid 1/2 gaps between sliders too. check the whole diff for it
01:23:065 (1,2,3) - this thing is just unreadable for newbies, make it easier. and avoid using 1/2 kicksliders and repeatsFixed
01:29:579 (3,1) - avoid those unneat touching everywhere, they are looking really bad
01:42:608 (3,1) - really bad and unreadable overlapProbably fixed
[2]
00:18:265 (1) - selfoverlapping sliders are unwanted in easy and normal diffs, try to make someething more readable Probably fixed
00:43:979 (1) - no reason to NC Probably fixed
01:29:579 (5,2) - that is too fast and unreadable, unstack probably fixed
[3]
eehhh..

well, instead of repeating same things, i'll better explain you your main issues. you map really unneat, this is bad. you need to take more attention to it, use blankets, geometry, cute sliders, structured patterns instead of boring object throwing. and you should avoid these unneat pointless overlaps, they are really bad, you have a lot of space to map, why do you place objects under other objects? and about hitsounding, i'm not that good at it, better to ask someone who can explain you things about it
try looking at other maps, try to copy patterns/structure, make everything neat, and you will really improve at it

btw, i overlooked at your world's end map, it has same problems which means you just need to improve yourself, so i don't see reason to mod it too, because it will be just repeating my words

i hope it will somehow help you and you will come again with awesome neat maps
btw, i don't want to offend you somehow, i really want to help you, thats why i explained some theory instead of stupid "remove this overlap, add NC here" that won't really help you in future