1. Easy (1.3 stars, 92 notes)
2. Hard (4.73 stars, 247 notes)
3. Insane (4.95 stars, 360 notes)
4. Lunatic (5 stars, 551 notes)
5. Normal (3.18 stars, 163 notes)

Nexy wrote:

I think all difficulties could use some hitsounds on the normal parts. not good with normal sample ;-;

Insane:
00:53:555 (1,2,3,4,5) - This just ends really abrubtly. I know its following the music but I don't think it flows well. Fine, replaced with a slider then
01:59:555 (x) - Add note here? I tried that before, didn't like those two notes here
01:59:888 (x) - ^ if u do the above. ^

Lunatic:
00:37:389 (2,3,4) - NUUU T_T! Please make these closer ! yup ^^
00:45:889 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - <3!! O.o
00:53:556 (4,5,6,7,8) - This just ends really abrubtly. I know its following the music but I don't think it flows well. uhh, I'll keep this for now
01:47:389 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Badly placed notes. You can make this look better. -Double checks this later-
01:58:056 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ ^

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Lunatic:
00:37:389 (2,3,4) - This is the only triple that is spaced so ridiculous, why? D: fixed~
01:47:889 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Keep this stream going instead of stacking? 180 BPM 1/4 stream line then sudden stop on a stack then into fast slider with a stack on the slide.r.. ack.. its very.. bleh :X ;-; I only place it like this cuz I can't click and move fast enough, fine, will change (as Nexy pointed out as well
01:56:555 (1,2) - Hard to tell wether 2 is behind where 1 starts and is a long slider or not, and 2 might get rushed. Space these? nah
01:58:556 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Keep the same stream spacing? will do~

Insane:
No silence on the intro? I think a soft sounds better
Only complaint on this, nice.

Hard:
Again, no silence on the intro?
01:50:555 (3,4,5) - 4 is hidden.. move it somewhere else D: no way to tell its a slider going to 5 end or a a single note or wut..Ctrl+R on 4 (reversed it)

Normal:
Intro is much better, 50% is good if you really do want to keep it quiet... I suggest 65-70 soft :X
Fine

Easy:
Volume again
Fine

Just check my suggestion on the hitsound.. but its your call, it personally think it'd be better with 65-70% soft. Changed all starting to 70
Hope my mod was helpful, gl!

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Easy:
Combo mod:
01:37:222 (4) - new combo to make 2 combos that are 8 whole notes long like the previous combos? k

Timing section mod:
00:43:888 - y does the kiai timing end at a different time in comparison the harder 3 diffs? cuz I want the next notes to stop flashing a bit earlier~

Normal:
Combo mod:
01:23:888 (3) - new combo to make 2 combos that are 8 whole notes long like most of the surrounding combos? kk

Timing section mod:
00:43:888 - y does the kiai timing end at a different time in comparison the harder 3 diffs? same as Easy

Hard:
Normal mod:
01:27:888 (3) - spacing (I don't think I hear anything to suggest a shortening of spacing) oooops

Combo mod:
02:04:888 (6) - new combo to be consistent with 01:54:222 (1) k

Timing section mod:
00:33:889 - a quarter note before this kiai timing section, add an inherited timing section with the same settings except no kiai -.-

Insane:
strange nazi mod: there is an extra space between "the" and "Imperishible" in the tags, please remove it lmao

Normal mod:
01:29:888 (1,2,3,4) - this was very hard for me to do (I assumed I could fc this diff since it was not that hard in the other parts) they weren't that hard.. oh well, changed to 1/2 sliders/beats
01:47:388 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:58:055 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^

Combo mod:
01:41:055 (1), 01:43:388 (1), 01:45:888 (1), 01:50:555 (1), 01:50:555 (1), 02:04:888 (6), 02:07:722 (7) - make these notes and similar positions consistent (I think I named most of them) you missed one and repeated one~ but yea, "fixed"

Timing section mod:
2 uninherited timing sections, why? Please remove the second one to make this diff similar to your other diffs oh, ah, fixed
00:33:889 - a quarter note before this kiai timing section, add an inherited timing section with the same settings except no kiai -.-

Lunatic: (Wow this is difficult) :]
I really don't know what to say about most of this diff, so I might have skipped some things in my mod. >.<

Timing section mod:
00:33:889 - a quarter note before this kiai timing section, add an inherited timing section with the same settings except no kiai -.-

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Nice map. Awarding your map a star and an e-pizza. I guess I can p-bubble this after a few more mods, since I am not completely confident about my modding and want some more ppl to check the map.

Derekku Chan wrote:

[General]
*Offset looks perfect! O.o

[Easy]
Looks good. ^^

[Normal]
Looks good.. ^^ (extra dot? D:)

[Hard]
00:45:888 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure if these are justified only being on a middle-difficulty. Although I love them, they're a bit hard to read.. Keeping them (for now??)
00:48:222 (3,1) - spacing oooops
00:48:555 (1,2,3,4) - same comment as above keeping as well

[Insane]
Fun~ yay

[Lunatic]
*Having an extra timing section (120bpm) is technically unrankable, as it breaks the osu! metronome and makes peppy angry. :X Wouldn't just having 0.5xbpm at the beginning work? (I kinda like it as 0.5x myself...) but its not legal to use the scripting for bpm changes, and I -did- start off this map with .5x bpm, didn't like how slow it was, and didn't wanna change the overall slider speed for the beginning's sake, I want to keep the 120BPM (.667x actual bpm, snapped to 1/6)... I know it messes up metronome, but I don't wanna change it. If it's truely unrankable, then I'll just change the bpm back and -remove all sliders- so I don't mess up the slower paced spacing... note, I've seen this done in other maps (I did it in Lucent Wish, too (.75x bpm) fixed after seeing a conversation from peppy saying its unrankable in general D:
01:28:222 (5) - Practically invisible... Could you move this or new combo it? kk, I tried making it new combo, which made me wanna make the next not a jump... ehh, stream then jump, nah, so I just changed the formation a bit and left the next note where it was (intentional spacing)
*Some other partially-hidden notes in here, but they're really no more invisible than the jumps and other tricky patterns. <33 my mapping style... it seems?
*Such perfect patterns, shapes, and streams. *O* ;~; nothing's perfect! rawrrr
No complaints on how hard it is, you freaking pros ;_;

*jealous of your map-making skills* ;-;