• Hard

1. 00:40:336 (5,6,7,8) - since here got antijumps, NC
2. 00:52:178 (8,9) - expression of impact can be better if u begin 00:52:178 - with a slider. and put circle at the end of the slider.
3. 00:55:810 (1) - NC is needed imo
4. 00:57:389 (1) - no velocity or impact here so remove nc here 00:58:020 (1) -
5. 01:08:125 (1) - ^
6. 01:08:757 (1,2) - just a bit off from distancesnap
7. 02:09:231 (8,9) - same on before
8. 02:12:862 (1) - same
9. 02:15:073 (1) - same
10. 02:25:178 (1) - same

• cryo

1. 01:37:178 (1,1,1,1,1) - why dont u 0.1x antijump here instead of 0.0xstacking?
2. 01:42:468 (2,3) - like wat u did on before. stack circle 2 on the head of slider3
3. 02:10:178 (1) - putting this on 302:205 looks better
4. 02:40:652 (4) - why don't u curve more? reddot on 146:116

• Frosty

1. 00:52:020 (2) - if this don't bother your difficultysetting, try this rhythmpattern. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2214678
2. 01:17:599 (1,2,3) - 01:18:862 (4,5,6) - i think having symmetry can be also cool.
3. 02:10:178 - i think u can put rhythms not ignoring that drumbeats. try making those with this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2214683

General

1. still consider to give different combo color with 5th and 6th ones.

cRyo's Insane

1. 01:37:178 (1,1,1,1,1) - give similar pattern like 00:40:336 (1,1,1,1,1) - and 01:57:389 (1,1,1,1,1) - ? consistant ones can better than just stack there.
2. 01:40:810 (4) - consider to reverse this? 01:40:336 (2) - and 01:41:283 (6) - direct up, so maybe arrange them into same ones. thou current version still good to me, but it'll be better in playing if u change this imo.
3. good, star.

Hard

1. 01:12:547 (1) - rorate about 15° and stack at the previous place. give an symm one to replace 01:13:020 (1) - in same way, then the composing will be better to me. consider same thing to 02:29:599 (1,1) - .
2. 02:03:389 (1,2) - all diff's normal jumping except this, can't find reason to do in that way, when u even have ds shifting at 02:04:968 (5,1) - . try stack 1 at 02:04:968 (5) - , which can be better a bit more.
3. 02:23:915 (3,1) - this ds shifting's too odd in playing than others, thou the slider 3 give a holding to follow that vocal. maybe try stack 02:24:547 (1) - 's head at 02:23:283 (1) - 's end, that'll be good in reading while playing.
4. maybe u work better in hard diff than ex ones to me, star.

Frostmourne's Normal

1. completely my taste, 3 stars.

General

1. why green lines here (01:34:020 -01:34:652 )but no objects here? o.o I'm curious about this.
2. seems that the preview point(yellow line？) is unsnap

cRyo's Insane

1. 00:18:073 (1,2) - the pattern here isn't comfortable (when i play it );w; maybe rotate by 160° （clockwise & selection centre) will feeling better.and consider its just beginning of the song ,so it's unnecessary to make the pattern hard.For insatance：
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2. 00:24:862 (3) - move to x264 y316 looks good ,but not very necessary lol
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3. 01:00:389 (5,1) - oh god,the pattern is very weird, suggestion that move 01:00:862 (1) - to x 280 y 84 stack with the head of 01:01:178 (1) - picture:
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4. 02:19:494 (1,4) - fixed the stack
5. 02:34:020 (5) - why not stack with 02:33:389 (1) - ?o.o
6. some green lines unsnaped:02:33:810 - 02:34:125 - 02:34:757 - 02:35:073 - 02:35:389 -etc.

Hard

1. 为什么有些绿线没有snap ;w; 比如00:21:178 -的这里我从1/1换到1/16看似乎都是没有snap的;w; 还有 00:21:652 -00:24:968 -etc.
2. 00:32:283 (5,6,7,8,1) - 建议这里照这样的顺序，因为感觉00:32:757 (8) - 在00:33:073 (1) - 上面的话停顿感会比较强<3，而且和这里感觉也差不多00:34:968 (7,1) -
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Frostmourne's Normal

1. 00:48:862 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - wow ,the newbie will be mad, try short slider here?
   ;_; I'm sure it's a good diff ,but some patterns seems really hard for new player ^ i advice that find some new players have a test play.

1. Correct BG size is 1024 * 768, so I'd like to recommend that you fix. please use this bg (This is already fixed). If you prefer "1366*768"...here
2. Found unused .wav files:
   - soft-hitclap4.wav
   - drum-hitwhistle.wav
   - normal-hitclap3.wav
   Must be removed!
3. AudioLeadIn: 1522 is half-hearted. Change to 1500? Also Normal diff would not need it
4. Romanised Artist: Kotoge Mai
   The official site has not been able to find a notation of "Mai Kotoge".
   official site:http://www.c-clays.com/03_pro/tenbu/tenbu.html?eid=640087
   So, it must be only in "Kotoge Mai". Also in order to protect the rules.
   

   RC wrote:

   Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format

5. Combo6 is unnecessary. It is quite similar to the combo5.
6. Normal and Hard diffs: Many unnecessary sound has occurred in slider because some sliderslides are not a silence. So I'd like to recommend that you remove some green lines in order to solve it.

1. 00:20:757 (4,1) - Swap these new combos.
2. 01:25:652 (2) - Remove a circle in order to avoid the mistakes of rhythm.
3. 02:42:704 (2) - ^
4. 02:18:231 (1) - Add a clap(S:1) at the end point.
5. 02:38:441 (3) - ^
6. 02:51:273 - Add a break time here?

1. 00:28:336 (1,2) - I think it should change the one 1/2 slider because it does not match the song. Also it has the effect of lowering the difficulty.
   
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2. 00:28:810 (3,4) - ^
3. 01:45:389 (1,2) - ^
4. 01:45:862 (3,4) - ^
5. 00:46:020 (5) - Add a normal-hitnormal(Sampleset:Normal).
6. goooood

1. 00:28:336 (3,4) - The same as Hard diff.
2. 00:28:810 (5,6) - ^
3. 01:03:704 (1,2,3,4) - I prefer this flow, What do you think?
   
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