Guest
home
beatmaps
rankings
community
store
help
forum
  1. Forums
  2. Beatmaps
  3. Ranked Beatmaps (Archived)

Kotoge Mai - Mangekyou

posted
Total Posts
50
show more
Oracle
571 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Oracle
OK
xxdeathx
2,661 posts
Joined July 2013
xxdeathx
Hi, M4M from Oracle's queue.

[General]
  1. Combo colors 5 and 6 are basically the same color—at first glance I can't even tell they're any different. It's best to remove one of them or use a different color.
  2. No kiai?
  3. The song seems to have a solidly defined ending, so why don't you map all the way to the end?
[Normal]
  1. 00:14:441 (2,1) - This would flow better if you move (1) lower
  2. 01:00:231 (6,7) - The transition between 01:00:704 (7,1) - would be much better if you ctrl-G both of these separately.
  3. 01:58:336 (1) - Two 1/1 sliders follows music better:
  4. 02:19:494 (1,1) - Plays better if you ctrl-G 02:20:441 (1) - so it goes in the downward direction. Its current flow is kind of awkward.
  5. 02:22:968 (2,3) - Maybe this should be unstacked because most other stacks in the map are 1/4 so it's possible to mistake this for it as well.
For a normal, the rhythms you use are quite creative. The spacing is just hard to reconcile, because I'm used to seeing that as 1/1 in most Easy difficulties so I can confuse 00:37:178 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - as being all the same timing in between each object.

[Hard]
  1. 00:10:652 (1,2) - (and for all future instances of this) Why not follow the main melody and map the 1/4 parts here? It sounds really awkward to ignore 00:11:283 since it's an important note in the music.
  2. 00:28:336 (3,5) - These should be 1/4 sliders because they're ignoring the sounds on the 1/4 ticks 00:28:494 and 00:28:968 while there's no sound on the 3/8 ticks.
  3. 01:02:125 (1) - 01:03:389 (1) - 01:13:494 (1) - NC is unnecessary for a single object.
  4. 01:06:231 (1,2) - Doesn't flow well from 01:05:599 (7) - How about rotate like this and change 01:06:862 (3) -
    SPOILER
  5. 01:16:968 (3) - Kind of nazi, but move 1 grid left so it's centered between 01:16:336 (1,2,3) -
  6. 01:49:810 (8,1) - I'd best move the slider somewhere further so this doesn't get confused for 1/4 since it's almost the same spacing as the 1/4 notes before it.
  7. 02:20:441 (1) -
  8. 02:21:704 (4,3) - Try to get the red slider point to stack exactly with the other object to be neat.
  9. 02:40:020 (5) - It'd flow a little better if you pointed this in the other horizontal direction.
    SPOILER
[Insane]
  1. 00:28:336 (3,5) - These should be 1/4 sliders because they're ignoring the sounds on the 1/4 ticks 00:28:494 and 00:28:968 while there's no sound on the 3/8 ticks.
  2. 00:59:836 (2) - Use equal spacing between both objects?
  3. 01:38:915 - Add object here, no reason to ignore it.
  4. 01:45:389 (3,4) - Check blanket here.
  5. 01:51:862 (2,3) - Move circle lower or change the curve of the slider so the circle is in the slider's curvature, which flows better.
    SPOILER
  6. 01:55:020 (4,5) - Move this up a little maybe plays better.
  7. 02:01:020 (4) - Remove repeat and add 1/4 slider at 02:01:494 so you don't ignore the sound there.
    SPOILER
  8. 02:40:652 (4) - Current shape doesn't fit flow well, how about this?
    SPOILER
Good luck everyone!
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Gamu
hello~

[ General]
  1. Correct BG size is 1024 * 768, so I'd like to recommend that you fix. please use this bg (This is already fixed). If you prefer "1366*768"...here
  2. Found unused .wav files:
    - soft-hitclap4.wav
    - drum-hitwhistle.wav
    - normal-hitclap3.wav
    Must be removed!
  3. AudioLeadIn: 1522 is half-hearted. Change to 1500? Also Normal diff would not need it
  4. Romanised Artist: Kotoge Mai
    The official site has not been able to find a notation of "Mai Kotoge".
    official site:http://www.c-clays.com/03_pro/tenbu/tenbu.html?eid=640087
    So, it must be only in "Kotoge Mai". Also in order to protect the rules.

    RC wrote:

    Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format
  5. Combo6 is unnecessary. It is quite similar to the combo5.
  6. Normal and Hard diffs: Many unnecessary sound has occurred in slider because some sliderslides are not a silence. So I'd like to recommend that you remove some green lines in order to solve it.

[ Frostmourne's Normal]
  1. 00:20:757 (4,1) - Swap these new combos.
  2. 01:25:652 (2) - Remove a circle in order to avoid the mistakes of rhythm.
  3. 02:42:704 (2) - ^
  4. 02:18:231 (1) - Add a clap(S:1) at the end point.
  5. 02:38:441 (3) - ^
  6. 02:51:273 - Add a break time here?

[ Hard]
  1. 00:28:336 (1,2) - I think it should change the one 1/2 slider because it does not match the song. Also it has the effect of lowering the difficulty.
    image
  2. 00:28:810 (3,4) - ^
  3. 01:45:389 (1,2) - ^
  4. 01:45:862 (3,4) - ^
  5. 00:46:020 (5) - Add a normal-hitnormal(Sampleset:Normal).
  6. goooood

[ Insane]
  1. 00:28:336 (3,4) - The same as Hard diff.
  2. 00:28:810 (5,6) - ^
  3. 01:03:704 (1,2,3,4) - I prefer this flow, What do you think?
    image

sorry short and bad mod :(
good luck~:3
Gaia
2,808 posts
Joined May 2013
Gaia
must be tough with your gders being inactive :>

no kiai cRyo hype! (ﾉ´ヮ´)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen
As requested!

Legend
Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

[General]
Just to mention again I prefer the use of KIAI and preview point there~

[Offset and Timing]
There should be likely an uninherited point at 00:54:862 - or 00:57:389 - cuz starting of a new beat (like KIAI)

Same as the 2nd part which is 02:11:915 - or 02:14:441 -

Might have to adjust some of the green points ugh...

[Difficulty Spread]
A little big between Normal and Hard but wouldn't cause a big problem...
Rounded off, "Normal - 2.0" > "Hard - 3.6"

[Frostmourne's Normal]
  1. I'll mod based the easiest diff of the map
  2. There a few unused timing points, I'll leave some in a box at the btm
  3. Unsnapped timing points (on ticks)
  4. If possible decrease the use of double taps
  5. 00:17:125 (3) - Replace with a slider to 00:17:441 - might help better in reading
  6. 00:40:968 (3) - NC here instead of 00:41:283 (1) - (beat)
  7. 00:46:810 (2) - Prefer to remove this, not to conflict the reading for 00:46:020 (6) -
  8. 00:48:862 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Feel could be better if replaced with sliders
  9. 00:54:862 (1,1) - Suggest to use a different combo color
  10. 02:11:915 (1,1) - ^
  11. 01:25:810 (3) - Prefer a slider to 01:26:125 - so players can focus on 01:26:441 (1,2,3,4,5) -
  12. 02:42:862 (3) - ^
Unused Timing Points
00:10:731 -
00:10:889 -
00:13:257 -
00:13:415 -
00:15:783 -
00:15:941 -
00:18:547 -
00:18:652 -
_
And points in break 01:34:020 - 01:34:652 - could be removed

[Hard]
  1. 00:15:073 (3) - Feel like jump isn't needed here, not like 00:12:547 (3) - which has a stop
  2. 00:40:336 (5) - NC like recently did?
  3. 00:45:389 (1) - Personally don't prefer slider anti jump in Hard diff
[cRyo's Insane]
  1. 00:01:178 (1) - Not needed for NC imo (except for HP drain)
  2. 00:03:704 (1) - ^
  3. 01:34:020 - Unused timing point
  4. 01:34:652 - ^
  5. 01:37:336 (1,1,1) - Suggest to remove NC (after break)
Call me back!
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
it's there
it's here
oh
Oracle
571 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Oracle
death:
didn't touch much rhythm-wise, everything else was fixed (unless i found something extremely hard to fix.)

Gamu:
super useful mod especially on general stuff.
apart from the things i fixed, i would like to explain:
Combo6 is changed.
on Normal,
01:25:652 (2) -02:42:704 (2) -didn't fix these because they're quite creative and special.
02:51:273 - seems too short..orz
on Insane,
didn't fix that 3/4 thingy because i don't want to mess up cRyo's patterns...

Rakuen:
红线加了，kiai还是没加，cRyo的图好像都没有kiai，想保持这个特点。
spread稍微调整了一下，应该好些了。
其他都改了，除了insane

Thank you guys very much!! :)
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen
Recheck!

Legend
Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

[Frostmourne's Normal]
  1. Objects not snapped in AiMod
  2. Title is different.In this diff it's "Mangekyo" , change to "Mangekyou" (constant with 2 other diffs)
  3. 00:21:547 (2) - Right hitsounds? Sounds like Finish / Whistle as other used (refer 00:34:178 (2,3) - or 00:38:757 (3,4) - )
  4. 00:26:599 (2) - ^
  5. 00:51:704 - Clap
  6. 00:52:178 - ^
  7. 00:58:019 - Check if claps needed here (instead of finish)
  8. 00:59:283 - ^
  9. 01:00:704 - ^
  10. 01:02:125 - Missing clap
  11. 01:04:335 - Check if claps needed
  12. 01:22:019 - ^
  13. Hitsounds a bit messy in some part, for Finish / Clap, check them and the diff should be fine
[Hard]
  1. Objects not snapped in AiMod
  2. 02:01:493 - Clap?
[cRyo's Insane]
  1. 02:11:915 - Different Uninherited timing with other 2 diffs, should be -1 offset (131914)
  2. Object not snapped in AiMod
Call me back!
Oracle
571 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Oracle
OK
means all fixed
also hi zero
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen
All good!

Virginity bubble!
Oracle
571 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Oracle
FIRST BLOOD!
ty <3
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Gamu
We fixed snap error via irc.
Then I give oracle my 1st heart >.<

Qualified!
Oracle
571 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Oracle

Gamu wrote:

We fixed snap error via irc.
Then I give oracle my 1st heart >.<

Qualified!
FIRST BLOOD! #2!
>~<

Enjoy cRyo's Insane then!!!
Mythol
1,420 posts
Joined March 2011
Mythol
this map has only BAT modders lol
congratz ~!
Cherry Blossom
3,185 posts
Joined October 2011
Cherry Blossom
Congratz o/
WHAT DID I TELL YOU ??? KAGIYAMA HINA AS BG PLEASE ;w;
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
good good good!!!111
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,607 posts
Joined February 2011
captin1
yesssssss
NaxelCL
NaxelCL
you used my BG :x?
Oracle
571 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Oracle

NaxelCL wrote:

you used my BG :x?
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/80994
*2 years ago* :P
AllStar12
488 posts
Joined January 2013
AllStar12
Congrats Oracle!! :D
h3k1ru
osu! Alumni
1,910 posts
Joined March 2010
h3k1ru
thanks Oracle

gratz everyone
Veemon
91 posts
Joined June 2013
Veemon
congratz !! :D
Zweib
579 posts
Joined November 2011
Zweib
wa
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
好
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Mei
瞎了
Sellenite
1,092 posts
Joined September 2013
Sellenite

Mei wrote:

瞎了
tutuhaha
3,000 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha

Mei wrote:

瞎了
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,480 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho

Mythol wrote:

this map has only BAT modders lol
congratz ~!
Kyouren
5,584 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Gratzz~
Gaia
2,808 posts
Joined May 2013
Gaia
orz late



cRyo's insane!! im crying in happiness (':
congrats!
Asahina Momoko
1,008 posts
Joined November 2013
Asahina Momoko
wow it had ranked before my job has done lol

grats :)
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

everyone who mod this map will become MAT/BAT !!!! (゜o゜)
跨贴复读
tutuhaha
3,000 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

everyone who mod this map will become MAT/BAT !!!! (゜o゜)
神预言！
Oracle
571 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Oracle

Mythol wrote:

this map has only BAT modders lol
congratz ~!
lol plz there's still normal modders!!
and ty <3

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Congratz o/
WHAT DID I TELL YOU ??? KAGIYAMA HINA AS BG PLEASE ;w;
the cRyofanboy part of mine refused to change anything picked by cRyo. ;_;

Zero__wind wrote:

good good good!!!111
大法好 8-)

captin1 wrote:

yesssssss
YESSSSSSS
and thanks for the bpm clarification!!~

AllStar12 wrote:

Congrats Oracle!! :D
thank you!!! :)

h3k1ru wrote:

thanks Oracle

gratz everyone
my pleasure!!

Hanazawa wrote:

congratz !! :D
ty~

Zweib wrote:

wa
wa

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

好
好

Mei wrote:

瞎了
打爆

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Gratzz~
thanks~

Gaia wrote:

orz late



cRyo's insane!! im crying in happiness (':
congrats!
cRyo hypeeeee

M o k o r i wrote:

wow it had ranked before my job has done lol

grats :)
lol it's okay~

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

everyone who mod this map will become MAT/BAT !!!! (゜o゜)
magic wwwwwwwwwwwwww

Thank you everyone!!!
And enjoy the map~
- Yuuto -
970 posts
Joined September 2013
- Yuuto -
Congratulations
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,845 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru
late gz
byfar
1,186 posts
Joined July 2014
byfar
late gz!
Please sign in to reply.

New reply

0
14 / 50