Albatrosicks - Veritas (Short Ver.) · forum

iDwarf

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iDwarf 2010-03-01T12:25:58+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 10 марта 2010 г. at 10:44:12

Artist: Albatrosicks
Title: Veritas (Short Ver.)
Tags: natteke desu arubatoroshikusu
BPM: 190
Filesize: 2280kb
Play Time: 01:04
Difficulties Available:

Hard (5 stars, 188 notes)
Natteke's Insane (5 stars, 250 notes)
Normal (3,89 stars, 99 notes)

Download: Albatrosicks - Veritas (Short Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Albatrosicks - Veritas | Third beatmap

Credit also goes to Natteke Desu.

Last edited by iDwarf 2010-03-10T06:47:28+00:00, edited 19 times in total.

Natteke

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Natteke 2010-03-01T15:04:06+00:00

;;;

Garven

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Garven 2010-03-02T08:03:04+00:00

First of all, this is Albatrosicks. They aren't Touhou. They're a branch off IOSYS making original songs. Maybe an IOSYS tag, but definitely not Touhou.

[Easy]
00:05:323 That's one hell of a jump for an easy map.
00:12:902 Huge jump again.
00:32:323 Spacing.
00:35:955 I dunno about doing jumps like this on an easy map. Maybe have them pointing to where the next set is going to be to keep a square pattern...

[Hard]
Add more hitsounds.

[Nattekke's Insane]
Looks fine to me. I sure couldn't beat it though, haha.

Maybe have an easier hard or a normal in here. Having such a huge jump in difficulty can be annoying for those that are in the middle of the skill set.

iDwarf

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iDwarf 2010-03-02T08:56:14+00:00

Garven wrote:
First of all, this is Albatrosicks. They aren't Touhou. They're a branch off IOSYS making original songs. Maybe an IOSYS tag, but definitely not Touhou. Dunno, but it is in Touhou music collection. So i'll leave it as it is for now.

[Easy]
00:05:323 That's one hell of a jump for an easy map.
00:12:902 Huge jump again.
00:32:323 Spacing.
00:35:955 I dunno about doing jumps like this on an easy map. Maybe have them pointing to where the next set is going to be to keep a square pattern...

[Hard]
Add more hitsounds.

[Nattekke's Insane]
Looks fine to me. I sure couldn't beat it though, haha.

Maybe have an easier hard or a normal in here. Having such a huge jump in difficulty can be annoying for those that are in the middle of the skill set.

As you can see, mapset is in WIP. So i will not accept anything until it'll go pending.

Anyway, thank you for taking look to a map.

Teara

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Teara 2010-03-03T18:20:05+00:00

IRC mods~

~ repeating here for clarity.

Delete .osb ( two of them )

[Hard] offset isn't the same as [Easy]/[Insane]

Rename [Easy?] to [Easy+]

[Easy?]

00:03:113 (1,2) - spacing
00:04:692 (4,1) - spacing
00:37:376 (5,6,7) - spacing

All three of the above are technically jumps, and I don't like to see them in a [Easy]
I highly recommend you keep one spacing distance. (In other words, get a distance snap (0.8 or 1.2), and use it though out the difficulty.

00:37:850 (1) - New Combo

iDwarf

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iDwarf 2010-03-04T04:13:17+00:00

Teara wrote:
IRC mods~

~ repeating here for clarity.

Delete .osb ( two of them ) Done.

[Hard] offset isn't the same as [Easy]/[Insane] Done.

Rename [Easy?] to [Easy+] Is this really needed? ._.

[Easy?]

00:03:113 (1,2) - spacing
00:04:692 (4,1) - spacing
00:37:376 (5,6,7) - spacing
Done.
All three of the above are technically jumps, and I don't like to see them in a [Easy]
I highly recommend you keep one spacing distance. (In other words, get a distance snap (0.8 or 1.2), and use it though out the difficulty. I don't use DS on Easy, it is stupid.

00:37:850 (1) - New Combo Ookay.

Fapfrit

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Fapfrit 2010-03-06T12:50:51+00:00

Play this map. Well I can tell, the map is good, but needs refinement, modding. Map well framed. The picture is not to find fault. Play and to advise you. Good luck

Chacha17

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Chacha17 2010-03-06T13:46:27+00:00

Yeah, song is short but it's been mapped well.

Nice job on all difficulties

How about adding Touhou to tags?

Just played all of the diffs and:

Easy - feels like a Normal
Hard and Insane - lower the OD by 1 tick? D:

Here's a gray star

iDwarf

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iDwarf 2010-03-06T13:48:16+00:00

Chacha17 wrote:
Yeah, song is short but it's been mapped well.
Easy - feels like a Normal That's why it called "Easy?"
Hard and Insane - lower the OD by 1 tick? D: Maybe.

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2010-03-06T14:51:47+00:00

Overall
Add an SB warning or put a warning in the song description for the white strobes in the beatmap
Make sure you add natteke desu and not just natteke to the tags

Easy?
I say rename this to Normal
00:31:850 (3,4) - Check spacing
00:35:007 (3,4) - ^

Jinxy

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Jinxy 2010-03-06T14:59:57+00:00

[Hard]
00:33:113 (4) - Move it further.

Starred, but the Touhou BG seems weird. Can't find any proof though.

Chacha17

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Chacha17 2010-03-06T15:04:46+00:00

NoHItter wrote:
Overall
Add an SB warning or put a warning in the song description for the white strobes in the beatmap
Make sure you add natteke desu and not just natteke to the tags

Easy?
I say rename this to Normal
00:31:850 (3,4) - Check spacing
00:35:007 (3,4) - ^

Told ya. it feels like a normal lolol

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2010-03-06T15:32:46+00:00

Pubbled.

But it is highly encouraged to fade out the .mp3

Natteke

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Natteke 2010-03-06T16:06:44+00:00

NoHItter wrote:
Overall
Make sure you add natteke desu and not just natteke to the tags

Naah, natteke is fine D:

Btw, this bg might be good (if you use it, then change cobmo colours on the map plz :3)

+

MP3 Faded down.

Download: Albatrosicks - Veritas.mp3

Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2010-03-09T21:32:16+00:00

Background is 1228x768. Resize to 1024x768
Album title doesn't go in Source so put it in the tags instead.

[Normal]
00:48:982 (2) - New combo since you put a new combo at 00:46:456 (1)?
00:59:087 (3) - New combo?

iDwarf

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iDwarf 2010-03-10T06:47:48+00:00

Kay. Fixed.

Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2010-03-10T21:03:39+00:00

Yay bubbled!
I love Albatrosicks <3