1. EZ(Lv.6) - 4Key (1.39 stars, 647 notes)
2. MX(Lv.12) - 4Key (3.01 stars, 1586 notes)
3. NM(Lv.9) - 4Key (1.96 stars, 850 notes)

Spy wrote:

怎麼過這麼久沒有其他人mod ?。。

Spy wrote:

= =這是等墳的意思嗎。。
ExPew拿了你的圖，他大概一陣子就會摸了，只是你的圖好像沒啥mod，他說到時候只會mod，不會做bubble相關的check哦。。

ExPew wrote:

hi

saw your maps

this is an issue i want you to make it :

this map needs 4K EZ ( seems NM diff little hard )
please hitsound it your map to make it rankable.
breaktime are not suggested when that part have music instrument

get more modder...

no kudosu, this is light mod. and i will look after when it's ready

ExUsagi wrote:

=w=)/ reserved for mods..
finally 3 minutes map for mod

[Metadata]
idk about metadata..
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hatsune_M ... DIVA_F_2nd

shouldn't it be like..

Title : 番凩
Romanized Title : Tsugai Kogarashi
Artist : hinayukki@仕事してP
Romanized Artist : hinayukki@sigotositeP
Source : 初音ミク Project DIVA F 2nd

and then, add on tag : Pair of Wintry Winds Hatsune Miku: Project DIVA F 2nd



hmm... since you haven't got any mods, i supposed to do some simple review only, but then, i believe your chart is neat enough.. so let's proceed the general modding

[4K EZ(Lv.6)]
==a you can simply use EZ or Lv.6 as diff name, apply this to all diffs..

02:31:545 (151545|0,151545|3) - don't leave a break time, because there's a lot of sound to layer

oshit, gotta do something first.. don't kudos this post until i finish the mod..

Pharos21 wrote:

Hi~

Mod from Mania New Modding Team Here...

OK

General

Remove Breaktime from any Diff
uncheck Widescreen Support if you don't use a SB
since it's a 4 K mapset.. delete 4K from any diff name (EZ, NM MX)
change MX to HD

The Mod
Colom

1-2-3-4

EZ

00:57:947 (57947|1) - Move to here => 00:58:094
01:00:300 (60300|1) - ^ => 01:00:447
01:02:653 (62653|2) - ^ => 01:02:800
01:05:006 (65006|2) - ^ => 01:05:153
01:07:359 (67359|2) - ^ => 01:07:506
01:09:712 (69712|1) - ^ => 01:09:859
01:12:065 (72065|1) - ^ => 01:12:212

01:22:873 (82873|1) - Move to 3

01:53:693 (113693|3) - Move to here => 01:53:810
02:01:193 (121193|3) - ^ = > 02:01:310
02:01:896 (121896|2) - ^ = > 02:02:013
02:13:146 (133146|1) - ^ = > 02:13:263

Remove the breaktime please

NM

00:03:094 (3094|2,3241|3) - Move to 1
and then
00:03:388 (3388|1,3388|0) - Move to 3&4 (Pitch)


from here => 00:19:859 (19859|0) - to here => 00:38:094 (38094|0) - fill the drum beat with note

00:56:918 Add note

the rest sems fine

MX

i suggest you change the diff name to HD
No problem Found

Note to you : speed from 00:00:000 till 01:15:260 are too slow (all diff.), i suggest you increase it to 1.5 or 1.75

GL ^.^

ExUsagi wrote:

=w=)/ reserved for mods..
finally 3 minutes map for mod

Obsolete mod

[Metadata]
idk about metadata..
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hatsune_M ... DIVA_F_2nd

shouldn't it be like..

Title : 番凩
Romanized Title : Tsugai Kogarashi
Artist : hinayukki@仕事してP
Romanized Artist : hinayukki@sigotositeP
Source : 初音ミク Project DIVA F 2nd

and then, add on tag : Pair of Wintry Winds Hatsune Miku: Project DIVA F 2nd

hmm... since you haven't got any mods, i supposed to do some simple review only, but then, i believe your chart is neat enough.. so let's proceed the general modding

[General]
==a you can simply use EZ or Lv.6 as diff name, apply this to all diffs..

02:31:545 (151545|0,151545|3) - don't leave a break time, because there's a lot of sound to layer

------------------------------------------------------------------------------
mod continued, remember, everything below is just a suggestion, feel free to reject.. :3
------------------------------------------------------------------------------

[MX]
00:12:506 (12506|3,12506|0,12580|1,12653|2) - and 00:14:271 (14271|3,14271|0,14344|1,14418|2) - have different sound, but same pattern, considering to change? ←yes

00:18:094 (18094|3,18241|3) - this 1/4 jack actually feels heavier than the music itself, you can remove 00:18:094 (18094|1) - and move 00:18:241 (18241|3) - to 2 ←yes...but some another change.

00:19:124 - i hear something, add some note? also 00:19:271 (19271|1,19418|2,19565|1) - this three have same sound afterall, make them double notes instead? so overall it's gonna be looks like http://puu.sh/dLrjK.png ←i've heard it in 25%....but i can't recognize it in 100%...so i ignore it~

00:43:094 (43094|0) - i don't hear cue sound here.. remove.. then ←yes
00:42:800 (42800|1) - you can move this to 1st lane ←yes...but some another changes.

01:01:624 (61624|3,61624|1,61771|2) - there's 1/8 guitar sound, add them as you did on 01:10:741 (70741|0,70815|1,70888|2) - can't be recognized it in 100%,too......

01:23:693 (83693|1,83810|0,83927|1,84045|0) - http://puu.sh/dLrwJ.jpg following 01:21:701 (81701|1,81818|1,81935|0,82052|1,82170|0) - ←not change

01:27:091 (87091|0,87091|2,87150|1,87209|0) - http://puu.sh/dLrz3.png that part makes me surprised lol ←yes

02:04:826 (124826|2,124943|1,124943|3,125060|2) - you can add 1/6 guitar roll here, i believe it's gonna be neat ←not change....

02:31:545 (151545|3,151545|0) - unnecessary break time, in mania it's not allowed to put break time.. =w= i told you earlier right?.. erm am i? ←yes,i'm trying to make it now.....

02:39:045 (159045|0) - add 1 more note to emphasize the cymbal ←yes
02:42:795 (162795|0) - ^ add on 2, but don't forget to move 02:42:677 (162677|1) - to 3 ←yes,but some another changes

02:44:552 (164552|3) - lol no cue sound, remove ←here it is....try 25% and you can listen to it much more clearly.

02:49:943 (169943|2,169943|0) - add 1/8 stream? this has 1/8 or 1/6 guitar (idk what to be exact, it's close with 1/6)..

02:53:107 (173107|3,173576|0) - you can simply add 1/2 LN between them.. add LN so the pattern doesn't too monotonous with 1/4 jack stream.. :u ←i make this part on purpose....

02:54:045 (174045|3) - add on 3, it's easy to execute imo, and it's represent a really strong cymbal ←not change...

this is one of the most clean pattern & neat rhythm i can mod so far.. wow.. good job biemote

[HD]
same case as MX, 00:12:506 (12506|3,12580|2,12653|1) - has different sound with 00:14:271 (14271|3,14344|2,14418|1) - , so consider to make different pattern ←yes

00:47:506 - add note here, the current 00:47:653 (47653|3,47800|2,47947|1) - has bad flow without 00:47:506 - imo ←yes
00:56:918 - ^ same case below ←not change...
02:01:076 - ^ ←not change...
those three, i believe you are trying to make make 'your-own' rhythm, well it's neat, but the flow is rather bad imo.. ←not change...

02:03:771 - add something here ←yes
02:05:646 ^ ←yes
02:07:521 ^ ←yes
as you did at 02:01:896 (121896|2) - ←yes

da breaktime.. :3

kkk clean

[EZ]
overall this diff is really clean.. @.@
02:52:755 (172755|3) - move to 02:52:873 - this actually have a bit strange flow.. ==a ←yes

[Overall]
omg this mapset
perfectness
those note destiny
what is this
i never seen any perfect map like this, i mean, it's perfect from the scratch..

but you gotta remove the breaktime (i think i already tell you this.. orz)
lastly about the speed change on the beginning itself rather 'harder' for beginner, gotta be harder for newbie to adapt the scroll speed change because of bpm change..
i suggest you to add some SV to make the scroll speed become stable.. but i don't know.. better consult to other modders & BAT about the bpm change..

kkkk good luck!

Marirose wrote:

Hey
sry for late
from my queue
you choose EZ NM and MX (卧槽HD呢 ←gone with windHD的话,三押太多,就干脆叫做MX好了....
here's the mod
col=1,2,3,4
出于某种不可抗拒力，只好用eng了

EZ

00:09:859 (9859|0) - different sound as 00:09:271 - ,make it at col 2 ←Yes
00:38:094 (38094|0) - http://puu.sh/ej9rJ/57effdc3ff.jpg try this,also this 00:38:388 - one is emphasize lol ←Yes
01:22:755 (82755|3,82873|1) - http://puu.sh/ej9JL/c448efead7.jpg ←no....
02:09:045 - heavy sound and finish hit,try 2 notes as 02:16:545 - ←Yes
02:21:466 (141466|1,141701|2) - ctrl+g,stream here is okay ←Yes
03:00:138 - heavy sound ,add? ←no...i haven't heard the heavy sound here....

图这么神还留活路吗

NM

00:12:506 (12506|0,12580|3,12653|1) - unfriendly pattern,stair plz ,just like 00:14:271 (14271|3,14344|2,14418|1) - ←Yes
00:42:506 (42506|3) - this short LN,try use note instead,it is not the main shamisen sound ←改了另外的.
and you didnt follow that 00:47:506 (47506|1) - here right? ←25%包听清
01:01:918 (61918|0) - make it at col2 ←no...as i want to make it easier to play
01:17:248 (77248|3) - note plz ←no...
01:22:755 (82755|3,82873|1) - umm http://puu.sh/ejb4D/173bfcc2d7.jpg ←no....
01:50:998 (110998|3) - this short LN,different sound as 01:49:123 (109123|3) - ,so i suggest dont make them at the same col ←no...as i want to make it easier to play too..
02:24:045 - finish sound,2 note ←Yes
end
图这么神还留活路吗

MX
00:02:800 (2800|0) - different sound,different pattern,make it at col 3 ←12轨鼓点,34轨三味线
good enough i think
图这么神还留活路吗 ←shenmegui

nice map w/
take my star 又做神图射你一脸啦 ←is it also gone with wind?
Good Luck XD

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

hi ~

mod request from my queue

|1|2|3|4|

mod

[General]
4K only mapset ?
If so… diff name delete ' 4K '? ←yes~

diff name change MX → HD ? ←because i thinK this Diff is like MX much more


[MXLv.12]
00:46:330 (46330|2) - move to 00:46:182 - ? ←no sound here...

00:47:506 - delete one note ? ←i changed this part to another arrangment....

02:19:591 - to 02:19:826 - snap 1/6 ←yes~
02:27:091 - to 02:27:326 - ^ ←yes~

02:32:951 - add
02:33:420 - ^
02:33:888 - ^
02:35:763 - ^
02:37:873 - ^ ←i changed this part to another arrangment....

03:12:033 (192033|3) - delete
03:12:091 (192091|2) - move to 4
03:12:150 (192150|0) - ^3
03:12:209 - add 1 ←yes~

03:18:888 - to 03:19:123 - snap 1/6 ←not change ....

[NM]
00:38:682 - add 3 ←no
01:57:326 - ^2 or 4 ←no sound here....
02:16:076 - ^3 ?
02:16:193 - ^2 ?
02:16:310 - ^3 ? ←yes~
02:31:076 - ^2 ?
02:31:193 - ^3 ?
02:31:310 - ^2 ? ←yes~

02:31:545 - to 02:39:045 - Like MX ←i want make it easier...sorry

good luck >w</

Rush_FTK wrote:

Marked, will post complete mod in no more than 7 days.
由于开始军训所以工期可能会长。
食言送你 10 次摸。

biemote wrote:

Rush_FTK wrote:

Marked, will post complete mod in no more than 7 days.
由于开始军训所以工期可能会长。
食言送你 10 次摸。

...我应该说恭喜么

Rush_FTK wrote:

Marked, will post complete mod in no more than 7 days. Done。
由于开始军训所以工期可能会长。
食言送你 10 次摸。

No help.No kd(s).
抓音很准确，地图又没啥挑的……这种图还要mod么。XD

Mod

[General]

Timing:

Suggestion:
- 02:31:543 ~ 02:39:045 SV=x0.75。这里节奏明显变慢了。

|1|2|3|4|

[EZ Lv.6]
- 00:03:094 (3094|1,3388|0) 将前者移动到1，后者删除。我认为在这个难度下，同时按两个按键仅为强调重音服务比较好。因此放弃跟三个1/4音后面的部分。
- 01:29:435 (89435|0) 删除这个note。这个音并不明显，也没有在前后哪里看出在跟。
- 02:17:482 (137482|3,137834|2,138185|1) 重新排列为223。符合背景音调。
- 02:39:045 ~ 02:47:795 这里感觉玩的很游离（并不知道要跟什么音），建议这里明确的只跟人声。

[NM Lv.9]
- 00:01:477 下note。你在相同节奏的00:06:182 (6182|3)处跟了这个打击音，保持一致。
- 00:07:653 (7653|2,7800|1,7947|2) Ctrl+H。⑴强调竹板声与琴弦声不是一组。⑵强调本组琴弦音比00:06:624 (6624|1,6918|2,7212|1)要高。
- 00:18:094 ~ 00:18:682 图。前面你一直在跟琴弦声，这里哪怕牺牲一些次要声音也要跟住来保持节奏感。
- Comment:其实一直好奇这滑条跟的是啥，又不像人声又没背景音。;w;
- 00:42:800 ~ 00:43:388 图 类似声音在00:47:506 (47506|1,47653|3,47800|0,47947|2,48094|0)跟了。而且这里用一个滑条去表现这个合唱，而不全跟打击点有点怪。
- 00:49:565 (49565|3,49859|0) 再加一个note来强调重音？
- 00:51:918 (51918|3) 在1加一个note。⑴表示该音符旧节结束，新节开始的特殊地位。⑵暗示后面的符是只跟人声的。⑶强调重音。
- 00:56:918 ~ 00:57：506 图 重新排布了一下这里以符合鼓点反复打击的感觉。
- 01:11:035 (71035|3) 移动到3，符合音调。
- 01:19:826 (79826|1) 拆成两个(图)跟变化音。
- 01:47:248 (107248|2,109123|3) 建议在这两个滑条的结尾处加一个新note来表示人声长音的开始，突然停止感觉有点怪怪的。
- 02:17:365 , 02:18:302 分别在与02:17:248 (137248|0,138185|1)相同的位置加note来跟相同的音色，感觉这样对NM也不是很难而且增强节奏感。
- 02:24:748 (144748|3,145685|1) 删掉这两个note或者在02:24:865的2，02:25:802的4增加note。以突出02:24:045 (144045|0,144279|1,144513|2)，02:24:982 (144982|0,145216|2,145451|3)这个主要音色。
- 02:57:443 (177443|1,177677|1) 删掉这两个或者02:57:677 (177677|1)。这两个都不是这部分要主要跟的音色，后者也不明显，个人感觉跟了反而破坏节奏。
- 03:00:221 在2加note？这样来增强节奏感。
- 03:15:607 在2加一个单打增强节奏。

[HD Lv.12]
fp replay
- 00:03:388 (3388|2) 移动到2如何？表示00:02:800 (2800|3,3094|2,3388|2)三者音调越来越高。
- 00:03:977 (3977|1) 移动到4保持与00:03:682 (3682|3)一致。
- 00:09:859 ~ 00:10:447 至少我认为他们不是强度一致的，建议修改。一个点子(不过还是有些卡手)。
- 00:22:212 (22212|2) 建议将滑条停止在00:23:388（最后一个长音开始的地方而不是结束的地方）。(只是感觉上的建议)
- 01:01:624 ~ 01:02:212 一个想法(图)。
- 01:08:682 ~ 01:09:271 图。
- 01:19:826 ~ 01:19:943 以单打来跟这个笛声的快速变化：图。
- 02:02:658 既然在02:03:302 (123302|2)跟了相同音色就应该在这里也加note来保持一致。
这里有一个点子(图)。
- 02:04:240 这里也是为了保持一致。
- 02:45:021 在2加一个note如何？感觉这个音也是对体现节奏有帮助的。
- 03:18:947 建议跟这里的音因为他仍然是主旋律的音色。

结膜炎好烦，眼睛感觉总是有异物而且看不清;w;
闲适的歌曲，很是放松享受
感谢你为osuer带来这么美妙的歌曲XD，祝你早日rank~

MeowPaz wrote:

Yahalo.bie
Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
以下只是建议啦~

Open

[EZ]
00:04:859 (4859|2) - 00:14:271 (14271|3) - 这两个不是主音，可以选择不抓，不抓打起来也是没问题的。
00:18:094 (18094|0,18094|3,18682|3,18682|0) - 不同音高，建议不要摆一样的。（看起来好像所有diff都这么摆，可以无视）
03:09:045 (189045|3) - 移到2吧。前面14，这里23会比较好打。

[NM]
00:50:447 (50447|3) - 移到3，跟后面的音同一轨怪怪的。
01:45:373 (105373|3,105490|1) - 移到13，把变化体现出来。

[MX]
02:01:310 (121310|1) - 如果想要表现出变化可以试试移到4。
02:20:295 - 到02:21:232 - 有一种很适合这种音的pattern，也就是4132，4132，你可以试试。(如果要改，会微微影响到后面排列)
02:27:795 - 到02:28:732 - ^1423 1423

最近都没作图了，感觉有点差，想认真摸最后还是变成了水摸;w;
这图很赞，不开慢速都知道是在抓什么音。MX的jack太爽，果然只有低BPM的jack才爽。

Marirose wrote:

排列摸不出来什么东西了，BG不是正常分辨率不过aimod没叫就ok，hs no delay

赶紧上路

Bruce wrote:

今天短暂懒癌解除 快速击破吧
这首歌其实挺难做的 倒是没有太大的问题 随便过一下

别的没什么 就是感觉有点单调
[MX]
01:27:091 (87091|1,87150|0,87209|3) - 我已经报警了 ...其实原来更...内啥

03:07:638 - 这里有点怪 别在意~

03:11:388 - 也有点怪 别在意~

03:21:584 (201584|2) - 跟这个音一直跟下去 突然跟 03:21:818 (201818|1,201935|0) - 突兀了 后面加了一个~

[NM]
03:01:545 - 开始有偷懒嫌疑 没错,就是偷懒(逃

[EZ]
这个Diff有存在的意义吗
做的其实很好的啦

03:29:417 (209417|2,209717|1) - 推荐用Hold 别吧.吓坏小朋友怎么办



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