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CommanderGwonam - Super Sky High Man

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Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, March 28, 2010 at 3:28:05 PM

Artist: CommanderGwonam
Title: Super Sky High Man
Tags: Punch Out Wii SNES Macho Little Mac Soccer Tyronadussassin Jun Ishikawa Victory Dance poop ytp ytpmv
BPM: 176.2
Filesize: 2108kb
Play Time: 00:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. Bogus (2.07 stars, 45 notes)
  2. Macho (5 stars, 179 notes)
  3. Super (4.26 stars, 55 notes)
Download: CommanderGwonam - Super Sky High Man
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hey guys, 5th beatmap (2nd "supa srs" map ~)

I'll add the video when I add the video ~

Thanks RandomJibberish for the BG ~

I love you ~.
Last edited by Shohei Ohtani , edited 38 times in total.
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
[General]
- try offset: 3784 - resnap all note
- Add some TAG and Source ?
[ I saw this map have http://osu.ppy.sh/s/12835, then I think this map should have too >_< ]
- BG Colour: Black

[Bogus]
00:07:879 (4) - try sound finish at last silder

[Macho]
oh.. it was really Macho..
00:31:508 (1) - remove new combo
00:08:559 (9) - try sound finish at last silder
00:18:589 (13) - I want this note to be new combo look better for me but... spacing problem =3=
00:18:758 (1) - ^ but remove new combo
00:29:468 (12) - new combo
00:29:638 (1) - remove new combo

starrr ~ ☆
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
Why isn't the video in here? Wel thatl no big deal anyway :P

[Tags and source]
Well this song originally came from Kirby Super Star but the remix is on Youtube. Put one of these in the source.
Also add 
Punch-Out Wii Punch Out PunchOut SNES Macho Little Mac Soccer Tyronadussass Jun Ishikawa Victory Dance poop ytp ytpmv commander gwonam
in tags. (I'm good at finding tags :D )

[All difficulites]
Raise the hitsounds volume, it's hard to hear the hitsounds!

Pleeease map the Victory Dance Part!!!!

[Bogus]
00:07:879 (4) - (Suggestion) Move one grid to the left (Level 3)
00:17:399 (1) - (Suggestion) Move one grid up (Level 3)

[Macho]
....INSANE!! You NEEED a difficulity between this and Bogus
00:23:688 - Add circle

CommanderGwonam :D

*star*
Sonnyc
7,761 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Looks like an another dangerous song lol
Star
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
But but but I don't want to map the victory dance part 3: (Only because that means I have to time it >:(.)

Thanks everybody for modding. I'll put them in once I can play osu again.
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor

CDFA wrote:

But but but I don't want to map the victory dance part 3: (Only because that means I have to time it >:(.)
Here is the extra timing point you need
BPM 170,000
Offset: 45 261
(I think this is the right one, the song is so loud so you can barely hear the metronome)
Mismagius
9,267 posts
Joined July 2008
Mismagius
Bogus
00:12:623 (2) - press Shift and then align with (1)
00:33:702 (1,2) - no please
00:49:496 (1,2,3,1) - messy spacing?

Super
THE OVERALL DIFF ADFGHJDK
....too low OD...

Macho
WHAT THE FUCKING HELL IS THIS

Star, but Macho is SO ORZ
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
But but but Macho mode 3:
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
[General]
-Add source xD?

[Bogus]
-Acc 100% i don't see problems

[Super]
-Acc 100%
-00:48:084 maybe take off this spinner and add circles in 00:49:496,00:49:849,00:50:202,00:50:555 makes a jump

[Macho]
-I can barely pass it one time, too ugly, i realy don't like it
-Run AIMod
-maybe make the circles slightly larger?

Mmm... I like Bogus and super. Star .But think about Macho u_u
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
But but but I like macho .-.

Fine I made the circles bigger and remapped a part of it.
SamiPale
766 posts
Joined October 2009
SamiPale
As your request

[Bogus]
00:08:543(4) - this end add whistle?
00:38:462(1,2) - hard for me to read the first time

[Super]
00:32:342(3) - spacing
hitsound so fantastic but nothing to find,sounds good

[Macho]
:cry: :cry: :cry:
this diff i insisted 2s and failed so i can't give a real mod,sorry about that :/
It's too many circles so that this map will be boring,i suppost that you put more sliders instead,it can decrease play diffculty and look prettier.


star for your mad song again~
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
hi CDFA

Looks like an another dangerous song lol
lol

just a small-simple mod..

bogous

[00:18:74] move 1 grid up

Super

[00:22:82] slider better stop at [00:23:50]

Macho

CDFA you soooo crazy

[00:27:41] unrankble. fix it

star star :3
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
ok ok ok everything's fixed ~.
eee
692 posts
Joined January 2008
eee
eeemod GO!!!

There's a useless PNG in the folder. There's also a useless .osb file there.

[Bogus]
alright

[Super]
a'ight

[Macho]
00:31:492 (3) - one more reverse arrow (?), or one less, it's up to you, it doesn't really make sense where it's at now
00:45:261 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - try mapping this part to 1/3, I think it sounds better... can't be sure though.

eh, it's a decent map... I suppose. Not sure if [Macho] is too hard though (is it unrankable if a map is too hard? idk)
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Yay the ending part sounds so much better now~ Thank you ~
thekillerhjkhjk
259 posts
Joined October 2008
thekillerhjkhjk
Nice job

now for the nitpicking XD

in Macho:
00:06:503-00:07:863 - maybe mix in a few sliders for the lolz and confusion?
00:10:073 (8,9,10) - make these whistles?
00:11:263 (7,8,9) - ^
00:12:793 (8,9,10) - ^
00:23:672 - add note here and directly after on the 1/4... i dunno, it feels a lil bit out of difficulty if you know what i mean
00:26:562 (8) - keep the duration the same, but make it go at the 1/8's?
00:45:261 - kiai here?

Super: nothing to complain about~

Bogus: nothing again

im surprised i can beat Macho.

star!
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Thanks for modding ~.
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
delete osb file in folder
you don't need commander gwonam in tags and you don't need punch out so many times
kiai time needs to be the same on all difficulties so either remove it on hard or add it on the other 2

Bogus:
looks fine

Super:
00:33:702 (5) -new combo
00:34:382 (1) - remove new combo

Macho:
not sure if the start of this is rankable
00:17:553 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - whistle spam doesn't sound good
00:28:262 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
00:47:613 (1) - remove new combo

*star*
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
So hot ~.

But but am I the only one who likes the beginning of Macho mode? ;-;.
Real1
968 posts
Joined September 2008
Real1
Crazy map :P

[Bogus]
00:36:422 (1) - This spinner is a bit short for a spinner in an Easy map.

[Macho]
Idk man, this map felt difficult for the sake of difficulty instead of fun. It may just be me, though. You should probably gather some more opinions. Either way, this diff is way harder than [Super]. Maybe you should add another diff, slightly more difficult than Super?

A star
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
;-;

Thanks for the modding ~.
RandomJibberish
osu! Alumni
1,833 posts
Joined August 2009
RandomJibberish
O_o

General:
BG's pretty ugly, I made a slightly better one:
SPOILER

Bogus:
00:10:583 (1) - Doesn't really fit with the music.
00:46:672 (1) - Move slighlty to the right so it doesn't touch the previous slider.

Super:
00:06:503 (1,2) - Doesn't fit the music
00:24:182 (1) - Even out the curve slightly

Macho:
O_O
00:17:553 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Make into a circle.

Nice map, star~
iDwarf
1,202 posts
Joined February 2010
iDwarf
~Overall~
  1. Main Section: BPM: 176 | Offset: 3770
  2. There is no storyboard pic. And storyboard it self is very odd here. Remove it. (.osb file)

Sorry, but it's very hard to mod with wrong timing. Resnap all notes and then request a mod again

Star~

Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Ok modding taken. ~

Also, RandomJibberish, you said star, but I see no star ;-;. Ty for the background by the way.

I didn't take Midget's BPM/Offset suggestion, but I did change the BPM a bit.
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Gens
[General]
  1. Tags must be the same on all difficulties... even if it looks like it, "Tyronadussassis" is not in the same way on all difficulties.
  2. You haven't uploaded the jpg background (if you're going to upload it anyway), and the .osb file is still there. Did you full submit?
[Macho]
  1. Streams... everywhere... this doesn't look very fun, to be honest. What I'd recommend here is:
    1. Don't use so many streams.
    2. Use more sliders.
    3. Create more intuitive or good-looking patterns, instead of just placing beats following a "road".
    That's all. I don't want to proto-bubble it in its current state, sorry.
~ ~ ~

That's all I have... useless mod is useless. Feel free to not give me kudosu (though I won't stop you if you feel generous).
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
ok ok ok I full submitted <3~

Also I crappily re-made machoi mode with more patterns and stuff ~. Also fixed the BPM just a tiny bit.

I'm not going to have the .jpg background, only the png~.
iDwarf
1,202 posts
Joined February 2010
iDwarf
You basicly can't have .png background. It'll be reformated by osu! to .jpg

(So just put .jpg)
RandomJibberish
osu! Alumni
1,833 posts
Joined August 2009
RandomJibberish

CDFA wrote:

RandomJibberish, you said star, but I see no star ;-;.
Crap, sorry, musta forgotten to tick the box. Done now~
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
So yeah I just figured out I can't add video because the site I use to obtain downloads of videos decided to screw me over by forcing me to "log in", when there's no way to do that.
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Mashley
Streams on [Macho] are a joke. Someone else can pubble this. :P
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani

Agent Spin Here wrote:

Streams on [Macho] are a joke. Someone else can pubble this. :P
~.

But but but ASH I fixed it from before ;-;.
DeathxShinigami
1,176 posts
Joined November 2008
DeathxShinigami
CDFA, remap [Macho] O.o So at least it would stay consistent, due to the song length there really isn't anything for me to pick on anything. Hope you can deal with it.
YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
2,729 posts
Joined February 2009
YGOkid8
General:
Delete .osb file from Song Folder and Full Submit.
Tags in [Macho] are different from the rest. Make them all the same throughout all difficulties.

Bogus:

Combo Mod~
00:06:502 (3) - New Combo.

00:10:587 (1) - No New Combo.
00:13:310 (1) - ^
00:16:033 (1) - ^
00:21:479 (1) - ^
00:46:672 (1) - ^
00:49:496 (1) - ^
00:50:555 (1) - ^

Super:

Combo Mod~
00:10:587 (1) - No New Combo.
00:16:033 (1) - ^
00:21:479 (1) - ^
00:24:202 (1) - ^
00:46:672 (1) - ^

Nazi Mod~
00:25:904 (2,3,4) - Move (3) 1 Grid down + 2 Grids left to align with (2,4)

Macho:
Increase Circle Size by 1.

Your streams... they're hard to see coming, not to mention they're super linear (esp. at the beginning).
Try to make them more "~" or "o" and etc. you know? Makes it look prettier
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Hikato
[General]
Delete the .osb if it isn't used.

[Bogus]
00:45:261 (1) - Curve this slider more so it looks neater.

[Super]
00:31:095 (1) - I think it sounds better on the white tick.
00:33:052 (4) - Picky mod: move it 1 grid up and left.

[Macho]
Firstly, I hate small circles. I don't think it fits for any map so I suggest changing it to 3 instead. Of course it's up to you so do as you wish.
00:03:779 (1) - I don't like this stream at all. It feels off when playing it and the positioning of it like 00:07:779 (12,1) feels awkward to play.
This difficulty is very confusing and very hard to fc or even pass on first try.
00:19:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Confusing to play.
00:31:520 (3,4) - I don't know why but this feels weird when playing. Probably just me.
00:15:012 (3) - Spacing
(00:15:182 (4) - Spacing)
00:19:607 (8) - Spacing; 2x speed made the spacing inconsistent.

Alot of it feels confusing. The circle size could by why in some places, but other parts are confusing either way.

Bogus and Super are good but I don't like Macho.
Kecco
908 posts
Joined September 2009
Kecco
Sorry but this map it's very crazy... Anyway, it's ok.
I don't like the map, sorry.
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
OK I REMADE MACHO MODE AGAIN ;-;.
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Ok ok ok re-made again even though the star diff says it's harded I even lowered the HP drain to god knows how low and I lowered the OD to 7 (because 6 felt slow ~).

THE STREAM IS NOW GONE FREAKING IT"S SLIDERS NOW. ;-;
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Bogey
Sounds fine.

Super
00:18:756 (3) - move this a square up
00:22:160 (4) - ^

Macho
00:07:523 (4,5,6) - move these beats 5 squares up and 1-2 squares left (move the 6th 3 squares up, instead.)
00:23:521 (3) - move it a square up

Maybe try to find a less louder mp3 of the song: it covers TOO much the beats's hitsounds...
Except this, this curious way to map merits a star, indeed.
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Yay finally someone didn't complain about Macho mode ~.

Thanks for the modding ~.
FishHook
192 posts
Joined September 2009
FishHook
[Bogus]
0:09:225 (1)(2) Move 1 unit up for better spacing.
0:31:691 (2) Move the end anchor up 2 units

[Super]
Solid

[Macho]
0:18:586 (1)-(8) Looks kinda ugly. Maybe re-work the pattern and placement?
0:21:437 (1)-(9) I got world of warcraft playing in the background, so it might be minute lag, but this sounds slightly off. Try moving it back 1/8 a beat, starting at a yellow ticker and see if it sounds better.

Interesting map nonetheless haha. If you were a pro at Photoshop or something, I'd ask that you change the wording on this speedo to say 'Bogus' and 'Macho' according to the difficulty. ;)
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Thanks for the modding :3~. I also made a little adjustments since I had 1/8 open at the time and it sounds better.

Also toying with hitsound volume ~.
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
you don't need commander gwonam in tags as its the artist
I would say you only need PunchOut once in tags, you don't need all the different ways of putting it
delete osb file in folder
turn audio up on notes, they are too quiet compared to the song

Bogus:
00:34:414 (2) - might want to redo this so it doesn't go off grid

Super:
increase hp drain by 2 or 3 ticks as this is a normal and its very low atm
00:22:160 (4) - stack this on start of 2
(for alignment reasons)
00:29:648 (3) - 1 tiny grid down
00:30:329 (4) - 1 tiny grid right
00:31:095 (1) - 1 tiny grid left
00:33:052 (4) - 1 tiny grid up

Macho:
00:13:310 (11) - straighten this out?
00:19:607 (8) - you might need a 2x bpm warning for this..not sure
00:23:308 (2,3) - align

call me back after fixes and I will pubble
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Ok ~

Eww Macho mode is 5 stars >:(.
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
will leave it up to BAT's if that slider needs a 2x bpm warning or not but everything else seems fine

Pubbled!! :)
rust45
1,088 posts
Joined May 2009
rust45
[Macho]
00:11:948 (1,2,3) - I'm sorry, but do you really think people will be able to read that?
00:20:288 (3) - This is pratcily completely hidden by the 300s or (in my case) misses of the last combo.

I won't pop it, but I will give a star.
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Ok all done ~.
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Gens
[Macho] is much better now.

Timing looks fishy... 176.272 for the first timing point. Are you sure that's OK? I can't check if it's good since I have no earphones now and I can't time that way.

Anyway... kudosu star.
Sonnyc
7,761 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Hello~~

General
  • Decrease music sound?
Bogus
  • 00:21:146 (4) Whistle (instead clap)
Super
  • 00:20:805 (2) Whistle in slider
    00:31:106 (1) Move to 00:31:021, and De-Finish
Macho
  • @.@
Star
maal
maal
Okay wtf at this song xD


~[Bogus]~

Fine.


~[Super]~

00:07:866(1): End this at: 00:08:547?
00:19:784(x): Add a note?

Nice.

~[Macho]~

Wow, 1/8 Beat Snap Divisor o.o.

Fine.


Yeah, nice map.
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop

CDFA wrote:

I'll add the video when I add the video ~
WHAT :shock:


~Bogus~
Fine.

~Super~
00:31:106 (1) - misplaced

~Macho~
00:13:314 (11) - new combo
00:17:570 (2,3,4) - make them more linear
00:19:443 (7,8) - jump!? , should add new combo
00:28:467 (2,3) - wrong spacing
00:38:342 (2) - new combo


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