1. Remove "op" from tags, it is pointless to keep it since Tags can only be searched for if they have 3 or more letters.

1. Use CS3, making reference to some older Guideline we have: t/151744&start=0.
2. 00:07:745 (7,8,1,2,3,4) - This whole pattern can be a little dashier in order to increase the loud beats at 00:08:411 - , 00:08:911 - , 00:09:911 - . Give thought to some dashes there.
3. 00:10:745 (6,1) - Optional to add some dash here, too. You used a Finish hitsound and it can be enhanced that way.
4. 00:13:411 (2,1) - , 00:16:078 (2,1) - , 00:18:578 (2,1) - These also can have a little dash to give more significance to the piano.
5. 00:16:411 (1) - CTRL + G this and move it back to x:72 for a better flow.
6. 00:21:411 (2,1) - , 00:22:078 (2,1) - , 00:22:078 (2,1) - , and so on... until 00:28:078 - : Why not using any dashes here as well? Listen to these beats, they are outstanding and you almost used stacks though. If you do not like the idea behind 1/1 dashes you can add notes at spots like 00:21:578 - , 00:22:578 - , 00:24:245 - , and so on... until 00:27:911 - , to have only 1/2 dashes.
7. 00:41:578 (3) - Again CTRL + G and move it a bit to the left for some better flow.
8. 00:49:078 (3) - Requires some movement, especially directly on the wall it plays kinda awkward, try this instead:
   
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9. 01:08:411 (1) - Actually vocals start at 01:08:245 - already, but I'd keep that tick empty to have some more distance between note and spinner. This is still a Salad and note/spinner are relatively close to each other. Recommend to erase 01:08:245 (4) - .
10. 01:14:911 (4,5,1) - For a Salad it feels a bit rough, decrease distances between this triplet a little, please. Or do the following:
    
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1. 00:13:078 (2) - CTRL + G and x:72, same reason as in your Salad.
2. 00:21:578 (3,1) - , 00:22:745 (2,3) - I do understand your thinking, you also can keep the Hypers, no problem at all. But decrease the distance a bit anyway, for a Platter these feel a little bit too rough. Same with 00:23:745 (6,1) - and 00:25:411 (2,3) - . The subsequent ones feel fine.
3. 00:31:745 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Looks awkward to play. Try a cleaner pattern as this one, please. Also it will give more movement than your recent pattern:
   
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4. 00:42:745 (2,1) - Decrease that slightly as well. After such a rough Hyper it's also hard to catch the droplets of the following slider because your catcher might start to slip.
5. 00:45:745 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Can also be decreased, especially Hypers directly before a spinner are a pain in a Platter since it's hard to reach the spinner in time afterwards.
6. 00:57:578 (5,1) - A little rough as well. Try x120 for 00:57:745 (1) -
7. Kiai is nice, it can keep rough hypers because it makes sense there. But not in the non-kiai parts, please. Wanna make you think twice about nerfing the previously mentioned parts a little.
8. One last thing: 01:27:578 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't like this pattern at all, it looks weird. It's hard to make a proper suggestion with your actual timeline, this might be cleaner, otherwise please think of something else if you don't like my suggestion:
   
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1. 00:22:661 (5,6) - Increase distance between these to have a better launch effect for the Hyper and to express that strong beat at 00:22:745 - . Try for example x352 for 00:22:661 (5) - and x448 for 00:22:745 (6) - . The stack movement between 00:22:411 (4,5) - makes the next Hyper more surprising and interesting.
2. 00:34:828 (6,7,8) - Are you sure some rhythm follows the 1/4 ticks at 00:34:828 - and 00:34:995 - ? I'd remove these notes and keep a more simple rhythm to follow.
3. 00:37:495 (6,7,8) - Same goes with this, there is nothing that follows the 1/4 ticks that much.
4. 00:38:661 (4) - No real beat here as well, or it's too faint to be even recognized properly.
5. 00:41:745 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above... No idea... Can't find anything special on these 1/4 ticks. Check the rest of the difficulty by yourself. It's pointless to list up all sections where you mapped similar.
6. 01:12:911 (2) - Nah, create a bit of more movement, for example like this it plays a wee bit smoother:
   
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7. More something optional, you can add very small HDashes here, it would make the ending a bit more interesting: 01:28:161 (5,6) - , optionally here, too: 01:28:328 (7,8) - .

1. Use at least HP7 for a better spread starting with HP5 and ending with HP7, also it's better to follow Deif's guideline: t/151744&start=0
2. 00:13:411 (4,1) - I think a HDash could fit to compliment the Piano beats, similar as you did at 00:10:911 (5,1) - . Same with 00:16:245 (5,1) - , 00:18:744 (4,1) - . In Rain, Platter or both diffs Vhy did that as well, so you might wanna keep some better spread.
3. 00:32:245 (8) - CTRL + G and move it back to x128 for a better interlude of the Hyper that goes to the right at 00:32:245 (8,1) -
4. 00:45:745 (1,2) - , 00:46:245 (3,4) - , 00:46:745 (5,1) - Well could have some more variety, playing 3 consecutive times a Hyper to the left is a bit boring... Why not doing one Hyper to the right at least?
5. Nothing more to say, Kiai is really cool. And this difficulty is well structured and tidy, good job.

Sey wrote:

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1. Remove "op" from tags, it is pointless to keep it since Tags can only be searched for if they have 3 or more letters. done

[Crystal's Unlimited Fruit Works]

1. Use at least HP7 for a better spread starting with HP5 and ending with HP7, also it's better to follow Deif's guideline: t/151744&start=0 done
2. 00:13:411 (4,1) - I think a HDash could fit to compliment the Piano beats, similar as you did at 00:10:911 (5,1) - . Same with 00:16:245 (5,1) - , 00:18:744 (4,1) - . In Rain, Platter or both diffs Vhy did that as well, so you might wanna keep some better spread.
3. 00:32:245 (8) - CTRL + G and move it back to x128 for a better interlude of the Hyper that goes to the right at 00:32:245 (8,1) - Remapped those parts, so better re-check it.
4. 00:45:745 (1,2) - , 00:46:245 (3,4) - , 00:46:745 (5,1) - Well could have some more variety, playing 3 consecutive times a Hyper to the left is a bit boring... Why not doing one Hyper to the right at least? I tried to flip 1 set on right side, and its flow became more awful. Not really cool :<
5. Nothing more to say, Kiai is really cool. And this difficulty is well structured and tidy, good job.

Mh... I do not like the mapping structure too much in general. It's not the tidiest mapping style you're accustomed to. The general placing of notes seems more random and careless to me. Of any kind whatsoever I saw Kurokami wanted to take this over, so he shall feel free to do so. As likely I won't participate on any qualification process. Good luck anyway.

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304,256,43411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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272,80,45578,1,8,0:0:0:0:
512,48,45745,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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384,192,46245,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,320,46745,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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384,224,47411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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-[ Asuna ]- wrote:

as PM request~

Salad

meh,saladnya meh.. salad bintang 5,08 D:
jumpnya keliatan maksa buat para pemula,saran di permudah aja
gw yakin pemula pada kesusahan buat FC meski nomods
imo ama patternnya sih udh lumayan

Platter

00:05:578 (6) - x:168 hmm sengaja spacing d bikin low biar flow agak gampangan buat HDash nya
00:07:745 (1,2,5) - geser 2 grid ke kiri dan 00:08:078 (3,4) - 2 grid ke kanan buat memperenggang distancenya @1 grid deh
00:10:078 - personally gw lebih milih note di sini bwt emph asisdari pada di 00:09:745 (4) - ummm.. kurang tau klo yg ini. tp punya ku lebih masuk sih
00:13:745 (1) - x:382 ok
00:14:745 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - gesersampe x:224 kalo fix mod diatas woloh. 248 aja de
00:16:245 (6) - x:184 trus geser 00:16:411 (1) - ke x:392 errr. no klo yg ini. tar ga konsisten ama pattern sebelum nya
00:19:745 (3) - ekornya geser ke x:480 lalu 00:20:245 (4) - geser ke x:232 no
00:21:578 (3) - x:96 dan geser 00:21:911 (1) - ke x:376 eh jgn de, jadi jump lho ini :3
00:22:411 - serasa gk nyaman padahal ada beat disitu,kasih note ? gpp. seenggak nya part dsni lg unik2 nya
00:25:078 - ^
00:27:745 - ^
00:23:745 (7) - x:432 sama hapus reverse, trus add 1/2 slider di 00:24:245 (8) - posisi di x:352 (stack sama (5,6)),ekor di x:416 *pict pattern rusak tar orz
00:24:578 (1) - x:144 no
00:32:328 (5,1) - Dash cocok buat bagian ini padahal :l yep harus nya. cuman dari personal taste sih, kurang suka soal nya dstu part nya kalem
00:51:745 (6,7,1) - disini lebih cocok kalo jumpnya dari (7) ke (1),saran 00:52:078 (7) - x:248 dan 00:52:245 (1) - x:424 hmmm aku atur sndri deh
00:56:411 (3) - add distance dikit geser ke x:456 nope
01:00:911 (2,1) - diperlembut (2) ke x:186 dan (1) ke x:128 orz jgn
01:10:911 (1,2,3) - samain distance, seret ekor 01:10:911 (1) - ke x:128 done
01:28:245 (4,5,6) - ctrl+h geser x:160,biar flownya lebih natural pertahankan punya ku dulu deh

Rain

00:03:078 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - kinda boring, coba 00:04:411 (1) - di ctrl+G dan H,liat pict aja deh.. pdhl aku suka bgt lho ama pattern ini.. keep aja deh. sorry :3

Pict^^

00:04:078 (4,1) - *pict
00:04:745 (2,3,4,5) - *Pic

00:10:078 (4,5) - kenapa gk HDash ? coba 00:09:911 (3) - x:224 ,00:10:078 (4) - x:112 dan 00:10:244 (5) - x:416 hmmmm added. juga nerf pattern dsni dikit
00:15:078 (5) - x:408 dan 00:15:245 (6) - x:328 nope
00:15:745 (2) - ctrl+h lalu geser ke x:208 biar flownya lebih natural hmmm ngga de. tar jadi jump ke next note
00:18:578 - add note ? bagus nya sih di kasih. cuman pengen buat break dikit di bbrp tempat. dsni bagus soal nya ga ada beat ato macem apa gitu hue
00:24:995 (3) - x:418 nope
00:23:078 (2) - geser 2 grid ke kiri dan ekornya pindahin ke x:184 geser doang
00:26:911 (5,6) - kurang lembut flownya ,dibikin agak gampang di catch ,saran ctrl+g trus geser ke x:456 e buset itu malah gmpng banget loh :3. flow mgkn iya makanya aku bikin spacing nya seminimal mgkn dsni
00:31:995 (1,2,3,4,5) - bikin lebih smooth jadi kecilin dikit distance'a geser mungkin ke x:352 hmmm lebih suka punya sndri
00:35:745 (4,5) - agak diperenggang ke x:130 meh 160 aja de
00:36:912 (4) - pindah ke x:208 biar kerasa dash dari (4) ke (5) 240 deh. saran mu kejauhan deh
00:42:411 (1) - di tegakin biar gk terlalu tajem jumpnya ,coba ekornya keatasin ke x:88 udah common mah itu. seenggak nya next slider aku bkin agak tegak buat flow jg
00:54:578 (2,3) - x:256 tahan dlu. ntah knp jump nya malah makin kerasa
01:19:911 (6) - agak susah ke balik kekanan setelah 2x zigzag ,saran kecilin distance ahahaha lagian dsni beat nya intense bgt sih. aku pertahanin sebisa mgkn dsni
01:20:078 (1) - remove NC well
01:22:078 (5) - x:102 flow :3

sorry agak telat sibuk irl.. lagi ada classmeet disekolah
mod overdosenya nyusul.. kalo ada waktu lagi..
kalo ada yang kgk ngerti/ada salah pict.. PM ato In-game aja..
Modding Offline soalnya X3 X3

Ichigaki wrote:

Mod Requested via PM

General

1. Song Setup :
   
   1. Metadata : Remove 'Lunaties' from tags
   2. Other : Clear
2. Music and background :
   
   1. Music : Clear
   2. Background : Clear
3. Kiai and audio preview point :
   
   1. Kiai : Clear
   2. Audio preview point : 00:48:245 - Better imo better tapi mainstream bgt orz

Warning

This mod mostly contain suggestion, so feel free to reject it with the reason

Salad

1. 00:01:745 (4,5) - Lebih baik spacingnya disamain kaya yang sebelumnya eehhh why? kalo pribadi sih spacing sama kalo pattern posisi satu arah. karena ini berubah arah, spacing boleh beda. malahan kalo di bikin sama rasanya nga rapi gitu
2. 00:02:078 (5,1) - Lumayan jauh sih kalo aku rasa, coba lebih di deketin gitu oke
3. 00:04:745 (5) - Gimana kalau jadi 1/2 slider tapi direverse? Biar lebih enak .w., jangan lupa 00:05:245 (6) - di sesuaiin kalau diterima ummm kurang cocok kayak nya
4. 00:05:245 (6,1) - Cukup jauh juga ini fixed dari 00:02:078 (5,1) soal nya ngubah bbrp pattern
5. 00:11:745 (2) - Mending jadi note normal note normal mksd nya? circle gt?
6. 00:13:745 (1) - Entah kenapa kok lebih enak hadap ke kanan lol ok
7. 00:24:745 (2,1) - Spacingnya kejauhan lagi oke2
8. 00:28:078 (1) - Gimana kalau arahnya dibalik? (Ctrl + G), jangan lupa 00:28:411 (2) - kalau diterima errrr... flow jd aneh. ini jg bukan nya malah ngancurin pattern ya :3
9. 01:14:078 (2,3) - Kayanya ini juga kejauhan nope
10. 01:18:411 (4,1) - Lumayan kaget bisa dibilang hmmmm kecilin dkit
11. 01:20:078 (4,1) - Anti jump? Cukup aneh deh kalo ditaruh disini yep :p
12. 01:23:078 (1,2) - Menurutku ini kurang enak dimainin mgkn cuma perasaan mu aja kali hue

Platter

1. 00:05:495 - 00:05:661 - Kalau mau sih ini diisi juga woooh jadi stream dong
2. 00:09:745 (4) - Dihapus deh kalau bisa, kurang mengena di main beatnya yep emang. tapi itu note buat ngedukung flow aja sih. jadi pertahanin
3. 00:10:828 (4,5) - Ini juga dihapus, kurang cocok imo lol ngga ah
4. 00:21:411 - 00:21:828 - Kalau bisa ini ikut beat 1/4nya ah kurang ngerti. tp kayak nya kurang sedep di pandang de
5. 00:22:411 - Ini ada soft drum yang nggak dikasih, tapi kalau pengen ikut 'jeng jet'-nya ya ignore aja ini ngga perlu. kan epic part dsni xD
6. 00:38:245 (2,3) - Ini cukup aneh dan terlalu 'sudden' spacing mksd mu? kurang tau jg sih. pertahanin dlu de
7. 00:41:661 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Ini ikut apa? Mending dijadiin normal aja sih vokal njerit?
8. 00:42:745 (2) - Gimana kalau patternya dijadikan kaya 00:42:411 (1) - tapi hadap kanan semacam http://puu.sh/dy95t/2c54b1b86f.jpg ? agreed.
9. 01:22:578 (2) - Seharusnya sih mulai 01:22:411 - meskipun kamu pengen ikut vocalnya jadi kedengeran aneh malahan. lagian itu note tar jg mau di taruh dmn hue
10. 01:25:411 (1,1) - Kurang enak dimainin menurutku agak susah jg buat ngubah ini. soal nya harus bakal nerf pattern sebelum dan sesudah jg ini. mgkn lain kali aja de

Rain

1. 00:05:661 - Tambah note mungkin? ahaha jgn de
2. 00:38:745 (5,6) - Kok HDash sih? Kalau aku bilang sih kaget aja liatnya oh wait. kok bisa? oke HDash di buang
3. 00:42:411 (1,2) - Kalau punya pattern yang sama sih lebih bagus, 00:42:411 (1) nope. anggep aja slider tegak di 00:42:745 (2) itu buat break dikit soal nya HDash di slider sebelum nya agak2 gmn juga gitu

Overall

Really good mapset. Vhy, i saw that you keep use end of slider to follow the main beat, i think it isn't a good idea, especially on Platter. Anyway, good luck guys~

Sey wrote:

[General]

1. Remove "op" from tags, it is pointless to keep it since Tags can only be searched for if they have 3 or more letters. okay

[Salad]

1. Use CS3, making reference to some older Guideline we have: t/151744&start=0. :c
2. 00:07:745 (7,8,1,2,3,4) - This whole pattern can be a little dashier in order to increase the loud beats at 00:08:411 - , 00:08:911 - , 00:09:911 - . Give thought to some dashes there. added more spacing on these note, except 00:07:745 (7,8,1,2) because the pattern it self. the spacing is quite high already for zigzag pattern
3. 00:10:745 (6,1) - Optional to add some dash here, too. You used a Finish hitsound and it can be enhanced that way. did as following above
4. 00:13:411 (2,1) - , 00:16:078 (2,1) - , 00:18:578 (2,1) - These also can have a little dash to give more significance to the piano. done
5. 00:16:411 (1) - CTRL + G this and move it back to x:72 for a better flow. ctrl+g 00:16:078 (2) instead and did manage a pattern a bit. there's no space for 00:16:411 (1) to flip due the changes from the suggestion above
6. 00:21:411 (2,1) - , 00:22:078 (2,1) - , 00:22:078 (2,1) - , and so on... until 00:28:078 - : Why not using any dashes here as well? Listen to these beats, they are outstanding and you almost used stacks though. If you do not like the idea behind 1/1 dashes you can add notes at spots like 00:21:578 - , 00:22:578 - , 00:24:245 - , and so on... until 00:27:911 - , to have only 1/2 dashes. i've tried this before and they're really makes the pattern untidy in my view of mapping. someone have ever told me the dashes between those beats feels forced or smth like that. i know the beats are intense here, but i decided to make a small antijump between those beats because it's the best i could do for now. sorry but no changes for now
7. 00:41:578 (3) - Again CTRL + G and move it a bit to the left for some better flow. ok
8. 00:49:078 (3) - Requires some movement, especially directly on the wall it plays kinda awkward, try this instead: okay
   
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9. 01:08:411 (1) - Actually vocals start at 01:08:245 - already, but I'd keep that tick empty to have some more distance between note and spinner. This is still a Salad and note/spinner are relatively close to each other. Recommend to erase 01:08:245 (4) - nice. somehow ignoring vocal feels good atm
10. 01:14:911 (4,5,1) - For a Salad it feels a bit rough, decrease distances between this triplet a little, please. Or do the following: hmmm just decrease the spacing. also i make the slider on 01:14:411 (3) headed straight to the left to improve the flow
    
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[Platter]

1. 00:13:078 (2) - CTRL + G and x:72, same reason as in your Salad. done
2. 00:21:578 (3,1) - , 00:22:745 (2,3) - I do understand your thinking, you also can keep the Hypers, no problem at all. But decrease the distance a bit anyway, for a Platter these feel a little bit too rough. Same with 00:23:745 (6,1) - and 00:25:411 (2,3) - . The subsequent ones feel fine. i have no idea how to reply this one. but i'll keep this
3. 00:31:745 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Looks awkward to play. Try a cleaner pattern as this one, please. Also it will give more movement than your recent pattern: fixed but not completely similar
   
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4. 00:42:745 (2,1) - Decrease that slightly as well. After such a rough Hyper it's also hard to catch the droplets of the following slider because your catcher might start to slip. i don't understand what you mean. but i did change the slider on 00:42:745 (2) from the prev mod to improve flow. so the HDash here feels more easy and im unsure about that slip thing.
5. 00:45:745 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Can also be decreased, especially Hypers directly before a spinner are a pain in a Platter since it's hard to reach the spinner in time afterwards. sorry but im against this. the HDash is completely fine here. also i don't think it's hard to get max spinner score since the first banana drop near on the last note before the spinner as you can see it on gameplay. also this is platter. a short timeline between note and spinner like that won't hurt. i'll keep this
6. 00:57:578 (5,1) - A little rough as well. Try x120 for 00:57:745 (1) - flipped as well
7. Kiai is nice, it can keep rough hypers because it makes sense there. But not in the non-kiai parts, please. Wanna make you think twice about nerfing the previously mentioned parts a little.
8. One last thing: 01:27:578 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't like this pattern at all, it looks weird. It's hard to make a proper suggestion with your actual timeline, this might be cleaner, otherwise please think of something else if you don't like my suggestion: actually i like the current but, changed to a simple one
   
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[Rain]

1. 00:22:661 (5,6) - Increase distance between these to have a better launch effect for the Hyper and to express that strong beat at 00:22:745 - . Try for example x352 for 00:22:661 (5) - and x448 for 00:22:745 (6) - . The stack movement between 00:22:411 (4,5) - makes the next Hyper more surprising and interesting. wait.. are you sure about this? somehow it's make the pattern more like a tricky
2. 00:34:828 (6,7,8) - Are you sure some rhythm follows the 1/4 ticks at 00:34:828 - and 00:34:995 - ? I'd remove these notes and keep a more simple rhythm to follow. i'll consider more this in future. for now i'll keep this because somewhat it makes the flow better on the following rhythm
3. 00:37:495 (6,7,8) - Same goes with this, there is nothing that follows the 1/4 ticks that much. ^
4. 00:38:661 (4) - No real beat here as well, or it's too faint to be even recognized properly. removed this one
5. 00:41:745 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above... No idea... Can't find anything special on these 1/4 ticks. Check the rest of the difficulty by yourself. It's pointless to list up all sections where you mapped similar. for me it fits well with the pitch on vocal
6. 01:12:911 (2) - Nah, create a bit of more movement, for example like this it plays a wee bit smoother: that's a HDash again :3
   
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7. More something optional, you can add very small HDashes here, it would make the ending a bit more interesting: 01:28:161 (5,6) - , optionally here, too: 01:28:328 (7,8) - an epic ending doesn't needed here imo

Mh... I do not like the mapping structure too much in general. It's not the tidiest mapping style you're accustomed to. The general placing of notes seems more random and careless to me. Of any kind whatsoever I saw Kurokami wanted to take this over, so he shall feel free to do so. As likely I won't participate on any qualification process. Good luck anyway.

1. A few more tag can be added: "フェイト/ステイナイト, remake, ubw, tohsaka rin".

Katy-xD wrote:

Small mod, pretty much complete diff, I'll just try make it more fun. All of this is optional, and I won't care if you decide to decline everything lol.

Salad
00:00:412 (1) - move pt1 to x:32, y:160, move pt2 to x:192, y:256
00:01:078 (2) - move x:288
00:01:411 (3) - move x:384
00:01:745 (4) - move x:480
00:02:078 (5) - move pt1 x:288 y:192, move pt2 x:128 y:192
^ map spread increase uh well, i don't see any huge difference than mine but just some adjustment on slider tail. i will keep mine

00:04:078 (4) - replace slider with this one: pt1 x:352 y:192, pt2 x:384 y:128, pt3 x:480,y:96
^ I didn't like the out of place drop, so I just made a new slider which moves outwards instead of inwards you're right. just simplified in other way. i think a straighten one is better

00:14:911 (4) - move x:36
00:15:078 (1) - move x:196
^ spread left instead of diagonal jumps alright. but did the placement not completely similar as yours

I think single notes are better for stronger sounds (and you can increase gap) so I'm replacing sliders here: spacing locked at medium
00:21:745 - add note x:192
00:21:911 - add note x:288 (finish)
00:22:745 - add note x:160
00:22:911 - add note x:256 (finish)
00:24:411 - add note x:96
00:24:578 - add note x:192 (finish)
00:25:411 - add note x:320
00:25:578 - add note x:416 (finish)
00:27:078 - add note x:344
00:27:245 - add note x:240 (finish)
00:28:078 - add note x:144
00:28:245 - add note x:240 (finish)

sorry, gonna decline all of them. i see your point here of making separate them into a two circles. but for me a slider is fits more and easier to follow with

00:42:578 (6) - hflip, move x:416 dat spacing tho. i keep mine
00:43:745 (2) - hflip, move x:144 do agree with this
00:44:245 (3) - move x:224 this note is removed due following the mod from kuro
00:44:411 (1) - move x:320 x:312
^ more spread

No kudosu if nothing used. Thanks

Kurokami wrote:

Random check. o/

[General]

1. A few more tag can be added: "フェイト/ステイナイト, remake, ubw, tohsaka rin". ok added. but no "tohsaka rin" :p

[Salad]

00:04:078 (4) - The sliderend is a little bit stronger so a jump would be nice there. keep as it is because the current spacing is already enough for this early part
00:23:078 (2) - Ctrl+g? did changes on my own
00:31:745 (2,3,1) - This part sounds really strange if you listen it closely. It mostly ignores everything from the music. Try this instead: ok http://puu.sh/fhebt/aa95aa5428.jpg
00:33:245 - This beat is quite important since the new vocal starts here. And to make it consistent with your 00:12:078 (3,4), 00:14:745 (3,4) I would like to place a note there. i follow the drum sound on whole pattern at this part. as you see the slider on 00:32:745 (1) followed with ignoring vocal on 00:33:245 should lead to them
00:35:745 (2,3) - Use the same rhythm here as at 00:33:411 (2,3) please. as i said above. you may listen to drum cover more
00:41:078 (2) - 1/2 repeat slider instead. eh why? it broke the rhythm hard :3
00:42:411 (5,6) - To be honest I would like to remove (6) completely. I know you followed the drum but at this part that is very weak compared with the vocal. It would be better to use a 1/2 repeat slider here. yep the drum c:
00:43:078 (1,2,3) - At this part for a little better rhythm I would like to recommend you to delete (3), move (2) 1/2 later and add a repeat to (1). ok
00:45:578 (3) - This beat is not really important to be mapped. and it's not really important to be removed. i feel adding a note here fits well with the upcoming rhythm
00:48:245 (1) - If you want to keep this note, at least add a bigger jump between this and the next note to introduce the kiai start, otherwise just remove it since its not really important. yep you're right. some modders might suggest a jump here due that reason. but personally i like an anti-jump on lower diff in this kind of part. so no changes here
00:48:911 (2,3) - Remove (2) and move (3) back with 1/2. dunno why but looks weird
00:53:078 (3,4) - ^ Same, to follow the drums. ^
00:58:245 - Add a note to make it consistent with 00:56:911 (2). ok
01:00:411 (4,5) - It would be better to just use a slider imo. ok
01:06:745 (2,3) - I would like to recommend you to delete (3) and move (2) 1/1 later to follow the high pitched voice with it. If you apply this, just place a circle at 01:06:745 and 01:08:078 to separate the vocals and make the rhythm better. kkk
01:10:578 (3,1) - This is again sounds a little strange imo. Try this instead: http://puu.sh/fhfy7/fd5cc31452.jpg. You can try to add notes to the white ticks as well to follow the drums too. kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
01:16:745 (1) - Just two circle please. i feel better as a slider
01:22:411 (1,2,1) - Ah yes. Good job. o/
01:27:745 (1,2,3) - This can be a spinner imo as you did it at 01:08:411 (1). oh right. a short one owo

Not bad diff by the way. Just the rhythm makes it sounds a little strange.

[Platter]

00:02:578 (6,7) - This HDash is unnecessary imo. It follows a very weak sound which is unrecognizable during actual play. If somewhere, it should be a bigger dash between (7,1). dunno why but i feel it need a HDash there. can i keep it? :c
00:09:745 (4) - Unnecessary note. It has nothing to do with the music. to increase the intense-ness ofc. leaving all of them in 1-1 beat while the music is loud is just plays weird
00:11:745 (4,5,1) - Try this instead: http://puu.sh/fhvud/e94b6c7481.jpg did my own rhythm as consistency with the other pattern, i just forgot to do this orz
00:16:245 (6,1) - A HDash would be nice here to follow the high pitched sound. a regular jump is enough tho this part is calm-ish
00:25:245 - Add a circle here. well nope. i bet you know why
00:27:911 - ^ ^
00:43:578 (2,1,2) - These makes a little sense imo. Better follow the beats as you did with 00:45:078 (3,4). 1/2 suits this place nicely. ok
00:48:245 (1,1) - Why stacked? A HDash would be nice here. o.o :c
01:01:245 (2) - This note is a little bit unnecessary. I think its better if you remove it. wait... leaving empty here also kinda weird to play. keep this better i guess
01:09:577 (8,1) - 1/4 HDash is not allowed on Platter. Remove it. LOL FUCK DAMN IT didn't notice this. wtfwtdfwtftwtfwtfttqwftwteftwe T_T
01:14:411 (5,6) - Remove this HDash as its not really good to play. The drum itself is just not strong enough. divide 01:14:745 (6) into a 1/2 slider and circle. added HDash on between them since i put the finisher at 01:15:078
01:25:411 (7) - Imo a HDash would be nice at 01:25:745 instead of sliderend. hmmm i like the current :p

It would be nice to add a few more HDash during the kiai. For example: 00:50:911 (3,4), 00:55:911 (2,3), 01:01:411 (3,1), 01:20:078 (5,1). ignoring this due the diff is already have the amount of HDashes i needed

I think the diff itself is fine but it can be much better. o.o

[Rain]

00:17:245 (3,4) - A HDash would be nice here to follow the vocal. ok
00:21:411 (4,5) - A small stream would be nice here with a HDash on the last note. sadly sey didn't agree with this
00:38:745 (4) - Ctrl+g. wheeee better not to x.x
00:42:078 (5,1) - HDash? keeping this follow the prev stream pattern is better imo
01:15:078 (1) - A HDash would be nice at 01:15:411. Try this instead: http://puu.sh/fhyFr/d99ef44eed.jpg hmmm i still prefer the current mine
01:17:078 (4,2) - A HDash would fit at both note. \:D/

Other than these I found nothing here. Good difficulty.

Nice mapset but needs a little bit more work. Around 1-2 good quality mod should be enough to move this mapset forward. Call me when you got them. tell me how? we ran out of modders already :c

Kurokami wrote:

Random check. o/

[General]

1. A few more tag can be added: "フェイト/ステイナイト, remake, ubw, tohsaka rin". Added as Vhy's one.

[Overdose]

Oh god, nooo!

00:33:078 (3,4) - A similar movement as at 00:32:411 (1,2) would be nice. A little left-right movement w/o dash to follow the music at this part as well. fixed with my own.
00:35:745 (4,5,1) - Are you sure you don't want to follow the vocal with HDashes as well? It would be nice imo. The hyperdash flow follows its drum effects, not on vocal.
01:06:911 (9,1) - A HDash would be nice here to follow the high pitched voice. Added.
01:10:411 (3) - Ctrl+g please. A HDash would fit here nicely. Added.

Because of your triplets the difficulty feels terribly overmapped. I know you probably won't remove them but they are really unnecessary imo. o.o Anyway, somehow this difficulty is surprisingly good. o.o
[]

Nice mapset but needs a little bit more work. Around 1-2 good quality mod should be enough to move this mapset forward. Call me when you got them.

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Tags:type-moon opening ufotable lunaties フェイト/ステイナイト remake ubw clsw
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General

1. Difficulty Spread : Actually, the diff gap between Rain and Overdose is a bit too much. Considering how hard rain is, crystal diff is a bit more harder than what it should be.
2. Unsnapped objects : ☑
3. Audio bitrate over 192 kbps : ☑
4. Metadata Issues : There's inconsistency in Tags which is unrankable, make sure all the diffs has same tags
5. Timeline Issues : ☑
6. Combo Colors : ☑
7. Unused hitsounds : ☑
8. Hitsounds Issues :
   
   1. normal-hitclap has more than 5ms delay which is totally unrankable(as if you want a proof, here's the picture). Thus please replace the current file with this one
9. Inaudible hitsounds : ☑

Salad

1. 00:02:078 (5,1) - Uhh.. I don't recommend you to use this kind of jump in salad since it's a bit awkward to play with, could you try this please? (slider starts at 258,84 and finishes at 417,107)
2. 00:08:411 (1,2) - Please consider reducing a space between 1 and 2 slightly. It's little hard for a salad in my opinion.
3. 00:28:911 (3,4,5) - Since you didn't use any 1/4 in the same part of the platter, it may be removed or changed into 1/2. Always, using 1/4s in salad or cup should be avoided
4. 00:36:245 (3) - Does this work better with ctrl+g? I found that it feels a bit more comfortable with ctrl+g
5. 01:14:911 (4,5) - Actually I don't hear any 1/4 from the backgrounds. So I suggest you to remove 1/4s or change the rhythm here
6. 01:26:745 (1,2) - I recommend you to make these sliders more horizontal since it makes the movement ideal, so consider changing it

Platter

1. 00:09:745 (4) - I can't hear the sound here. Thus you could remove this note.
2. 00:16:245 (6) - Since it's relaxing part, I'd make this part smoother slightly by moving (6) to x:200
3. 00:18:911 (6,1) - The jump makes the flow kinda weird imo so I might tried something like this. It's just my personal opinion but couldn't it be better to move (6) to a bit right and change the red (1)'s shape?
4. 00:31:995 (1) - The NC here is pretty unnecessary, so consider removing it
5. 00:32:411 (1,2) - Expecting a little jump between 1 and 2. How about reducing distances between stream notes or, just moving (1)~(3) to the right for a bit?
6. 00:37:078 (5) - I can hear the symbol sound from the backround. Could you add a finish here? I think It would be better off.
7. 00:53:245 (2,3,4) - I'd move them to the left slightly for a better flow
8. 01:00:911 (2,1,2,3) - This part feels like to be a lack of jumps. I'd put a little bit more exciting jumps here
9. 01:20:411 (1,2,3,4) - Jumps here are somehow tricky for platter diff, could you please reduce the distances between them?
10. 01:24:245 (1) - Please Add NC here
11. 01:28:411 (6) - Does this note sound better with soft-whistle? I feel like it sounds better

Rain

1. 00:13:578 (3) - I'd move this to a bit left for an ideal movement
2. 00:17:245 (3,4) - The movement here is kinda forced imo, how about applying ctrl+g for (4)?
3. 00:19:078 (1) - Slider's end could sound better by making it mute. It sounds pretty weird atm..
4. 00:19:745 (3) - ^
5. 00:20:411 (1) - ^
6. 00:42:411 (1,2,3) - I feel like the jump here is kinda rough and not so comfortable to play with. How about moving (2) to a bit left?
7. 01:08:995 (8,1) - I don't recommend to use this kind of 1/4 jumps since they play not really good imo. Could you try move (1) to the left slightly?
8. 01:11:411 (2) - Making this slider a bit more horizontal would make this part more fun. Try something like this
9. 01:11:828 (4) - Just a little suggestion here, the note could be moved to x:328 for a smoother movement
10. 01:15:911 (2) - I would turn slider's end to the right for a better flow (but still keeping a HDash between 2 and 1)
11. 01:28:245 (6,7,8) - Since it's the end of the song, I expect something more 'extreme'. Try this or at least make them have some clean jumps
12. 01:28:411 (7) - Same as platter

Overdose

1. 00:21:911 (2,3) - I'd move (3) to a bit left. Even if the sound is pretty strong, using this kind of jumps in kinda calm part should be avoided
2. 00:25:078 (4) - It feels awkward since the distance here is suddenly decreased. How about moving (4) to about x:224?
3. 00:28:245 (5) - It plays bad imo. Please move 5 to the left slightly
4. 00:42:745 (6) - I'd put normal-sampleset on the head of the slider. It would fit well with the strong drum sounds from the background
5. 00:47:245 (7,8) - It 'sounds' like overmapped, so why not use soft-sampleset here?
6. 00:50:578 (4,5) - The jump here does feel not really good(It's almost an timed jump). I'm pretty sure it works better if you move (5) to a bit right
7. 00:51:578 (3,4,5,6) - I don't really like the movement here since it feels like somewhat 'forced'. By just adding HDash between (5) and (6), it performs way better
8. 00:57:911 (2,3) - I highly recommend you to decrease the distance between 2 and 3 since it feels like the edge-by-edge jump coming right after the hdashes. Considering 00:58:245 (4,5,6,7) - these 1/4 jumps are pretty rough, I'd make the distance shorter
9. 01:04:745 (2,3) - Consider moving (3) to the left slightly. The flow may be better
10. 01:16:411 (1) - Doesn't this work way better with ctrl+g?
11. 01:28:078 (3,4) - Using vertical 1/4 jumps here isn't really a good idea, it plays a lot better with horizontal ones. Thus try this

Spectator wrote:

General

1. Difficulty Spread : Actually, the diff gap between Rain and Overdose is a bit too much. Considering how hard rain is, crystal diff is a bit more harder than what it should be.
2. Unsnapped objects : ☑
3. Audio bitrate over 192 kbps : ☑
4. Metadata Issues : There's inconsistency in Tags which is unrankable, make sure all the diffs has same tags
5. Timeline Issues : ☑
6. Combo Colors : ☑
7. Unused hitsounds : ☑
8. Hitsounds Issues :
   
   1. normal-hitclap has more than 5ms delay which is totally unrankable(as if you want a proof, here's the picture). Thus please replace the current file with this one
9. Inaudible hitsounds : ☑

Salad

1. 00:02:078 (5,1) - Uhh.. I don't recommend you to use this kind of jump in salad since it's a bit awkward to play with, could you try this please? (slider starts at 258,84 and finishes at 417,107)
2. 00:08:411 (1,2) - Please consider reducing a space between 1 and 2 slightly. It's little hard for a salad in my opinion.
3. 00:28:911 (3,4,5) - Since you didn't use any 1/4 in the same part of the platter, it may be removed or changed into 1/2. Always, using 1/4s in salad or cup should be avoided
4. 00:36:245 (3) - Does this work better with ctrl+g? I found that it feels a bit more comfortable with ctrl+g
5. 01:14:911 (4,5) - Actually I don't hear any 1/4 from the backgrounds. So I suggest you to remove 1/4s or change the rhythm here
6. 01:26:745 (1,2) - I recommend you to make these sliders more horizontal since it makes the movement ideal, so consider changing it

Platter

1. 00:09:745 (4) - I can't hear the sound here. Thus you could remove this note. purposely to increase the intensity. leaving them all in 1-1 beat while the music at this part is barely loud is doesn't feel so good
2. 00:16:245 (6) - Since it's relaxing part, I'd make this part smoother slightly by moving (6) to x:200 keep the spacing here for consistency with the other similar part as 00:13:578 (3,1)
3. 00:18:911 (6,1) - The jump makes the flow kinda weird imo so I might tried something like this. It's just my personal opinion but couldn't it be better to move (6) to a bit right and change the red (1)'s shape? keeping this as i don't feel anything wrong with it
4. 00:31:995 (1) - The NC here is pretty unnecessary, so consider removing it
5. 00:32:411 (1,2) - Expecting a little jump between 1 and 2. How about reducing distances between stream notes or, just moving (1)~(3) to the right for a bit? a jump is doesn't needed here, as it the beginning of a calm part
6. 00:37:078 (5) - I can hear the symbol sound from the backround. Could you add a finish here? I think It would be better off. the current hitsound is already fit anyway
7. 00:53:245 (2,3,4) - I'd move them to the left slightly for a better flow i made the spacing of 00:52:912 (1,2) low for a little recovery time. this were purposely made to maintain the flow as it makes the movement smoother so it could be easier Hyper at the upcoming pattern
8. 01:00:911 (2,1,2,3) - This part feels like to be a lack of jumps. I'd put a little bit more exciting jumps here i guess adding more spacing would make this triplet a lot harder to catch. keeping this
9. 01:20:411 (1,2,3,4) - Jumps here are somehow tricky for platter diff, could you please reduce the distances between them? i don't see any tricky here. the music asked for it
10. 01:24:245 (1) - Please Add NC here
11. 01:28:411 (6) - Does this note sound better with soft-whistle? I feel like it sounds better mmmh. somehow it doesnt for me. keeping the clap btw x.x

Rain

1. 00:13:578 (3) - I'd move this to a bit left for an ideal movement keeping the spacing low for an easy Hyper, because i feel it's the best for the calm part
2. 00:17:245 (3,4) - The movement here is kinda forced imo, how about applying ctrl+g for (4)? it is even worst lol. it will create an antiflow Hyper on the next pattern. keeping this as i feel better
3. 00:19:078 (1) - Slider's end could sound better by making it mute. It sounds pretty weird atm.. the hell, sorry. personaly im really DISLIKE on muting any object that they shouldn't be.
4. 00:19:745 (3) - ^ ^
5. 00:20:411 (1) - ^ ^
6. 00:42:411 (1,2,3) - I feel like the jump here is kinda rough and not so comfortable to play with. How about moving (2) to a bit left?
7. 01:08:995 (8,1) - I don't recommend to use this kind of 1/4 jumps since they play not really good imo. Could you try move (1) to the left slightly?
8. 01:11:411 (2) - Making this slider a bit more horizontal would make this part more fun. Try something like this
9. 01:11:828 (4) - Just a little suggestion here, the note could be moved to x:328 for a smoother movement
10. 01:15:911 (2) - I would turn slider's end to the right for a better flow (but still keeping a HDash between 2 and 1) the current flow is fine
11. 01:28:245 (6,7,8) - Since it's the end of the song, I expect something more 'extreme'. Try this or at least make them have some clean jumps
12. 01:28:411 (7) - Same as platter :p

Negri_sk wrote:

[Rain]
00:18:078 (1) - CTRL+G
00:18:078 (1) - x400 it will loose the movement, also as following above
01:07:078 (1) - CTRL+G ^
01:15:078 (1) - ^ < Incase it needs to be nerfed. ^
[Salad]
00:12:078 (3,4,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3150222 yaaah can't see the screenshot :3