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Ui Miyazaki - Kizuna no Uta

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Fuuko
486 posts
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Topic Starter
Fuuko
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on segunda-feira, 5 de abril de 2010 at 14:35:44

Artist: Miyazaki Ui
Title: Kizuna no Uta (TV Size)
Source: Tayutama: Kiss on my Deity
Tags: Lump of Sugar Mashiro Anime Dusty
BPM: 130
Filesize: 8540kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dusty's Hard (4,5 stars, 185 notes)
  2. Hana ni Kawaru (1,73 stars, 65 notes)
  3. Makenai (2,62 stars, 91 notes)
  4. Toki Doki (4,29 stars, 148 notes)
Download: Miyazaki Ui - Kizuna no Uta (TV Size)
Download: Miyazaki Ui - Kizuna no Uta (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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5th beatmap

Tayutama: Kiss on My Deity ED, so cute~ *u*' ~

Hope you enjoy it. <3

Special Thanks:

Dusty: Guest diff, hitsounds and spinner-circle;
Beuchi: Spinner-metre;
Astom: Hitcircle.
Last edited by Fuuko , edited 23 times in total.
Rokodo
1,104 posts
Joined August 2008
Rokodo
Rokodo's encoding service go!

http://www.mediafire.com/?azzmzwm4tyz
yeahyeahyeahhh
osu! Alumni
2,850 posts
Joined December 2008
yeahyeahyeahhh
BPM: 130
Offset: Fine, the mp3 is kinda low quality though and randomly starts...
DJPop
osu! Alumni
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Here since the beginning
DJPop
BPM 130
Offset 1,516
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
*

edit: no more clap+finish

edit2: delete .osu off the hitclap's extension, osu! doesn't want me to upload .wavs :/
edit3: zip'd it

edit5: maybe this circle?

Download: Ui Miyazaki - Kizuna no Uta (FuukoLover) [Dusty's Hard].osu

Download: soft-hitclap.zip

Beuchi
osu! Alumni
2,288 posts
Joined February 2009
Beuchi
Hi hi!! :)

Here are some suggestios for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- I'd delete "of" of Tags, it's a really common word if you search for it =x
- There are 2 .osb files on your map folder, could you delete them?

~Makenai~
00:39:823 (1,1) - I'm not so fan of objects right after a spinner for Easy diffs... oxo

~Toki Doki~
Lovely.

~Dusty's Hard~
- Resnap all notes, AIMod got half of the map unsnapped o_o'

00:42:594 (Break) - Well, having Easy and Normal with no breaks makes this one a bit weird, also I don't think this song needs a break that long. I'm sure you can map something cool there :P

EDIT: spinnermetre :3


No more things, lovely map <3 *star*
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Fuuko
486 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Fuuko

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!! :)

Here are some suggestios for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- I'd delete "of" of Tags, it's a really common word if you search for it =x Orz, deleted.
- There are 2 .osb files on your map folder, could you delete them? ^

~Makenai~
00:39:823 (1,1) - I'm not so fan of objects right after a spinner for Easy diffs... oxo But auto can even 10k it...;_;

~Toki Doki~
Lovely. Thank you. <3

~Dusty's Hard~
- Resnap all notes, AIMod got half of the map unsnapped o_o' Eh? o_o Why it doesn't show it unsnapped to me?

00:42:594 (Break) - Well, having Easy and Normal with no breaks makes this one a bit weird, also I don't think this song needs a break that long. I'm sure you can map something cool there :P Oh well..., up to Dusty.

No more things, lovely map <3 *star*
Thanks Beu. <3
Armin
osu! Alumni
2,454 posts
Joined May 2009
Armin
Hi, mod4mod by request.

[Makenai]

Overall: The diff seems clean and I can't see many problems, I just don't like some patterns. Anyway, good job :D

00:31:053 (3) - Here the clap-rythm is broken, try to add a Storyboard Sound Sample. (or increase the slider tick rate, adding also a custom hitsoun)
00:42:130 (1) - This is very hard to hit, considering the previous spinner. Try to make this one 2/4 shorter.
00:45:823 (1) - As above.
00:49:515 (1) - As above.
01:02:438 (3) - In the middle, the clap-rythm is broken.
01:09:130 (1,2,1) Move them in the middle of the editor, just for the sake of the symmetry
01:25:515 (1) - Whistle/Finish or both

Overall Rating: 8,5/10

[Toki Doki]

Overall: Nice job this time, I liked it. Pattern seems good, but some sliders are asymmetric (so, they're little ugly to see).

00:25:515 (4) - The shape of this slider is out of place, remake it using smooth curves
01:22:284 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is a bit weird to see xD
this should be better:



Take care of (5)'s repeat, it's a bit offscreen
01:26:207 (1) - Whistle/Finish or both

Overall Rating: 8,5/10

[Dusty's Hard]

Overall: That's good! As above, it seems perfect.

00:17:669 (2,3,4) - Weird position, try something else
01:20:207 (5) - Spacing please

Overall Rating: 9/10

Starred.
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
Here again :3

If u don't like it, well... D:



Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
updates armin's mod, not quite sure what you meant by spacing on (5) though, and shortened the break

Download: Miyazaki Ui - Kizuna no Uta (TV Size) (Fuuko) [Dusty's Hard].osu
bagnz0r
bagnz0r
[Overall]
Offset = 1528
Resnap, and fix timing points.
Hitsounds are too quiet

[Hana ni Kawaru]
* Overall difficulty - increase it by 1 step.
* HP drain - increase it by 3 steps.

[Makaenai]
* Overall difficulty - increase it by 2 steps.
* Circle size - increase it by 1 step.

[Toki Doki]
I don't like this spacing. Really.
* HP drain - increase it by 1 step.
* Circle size - increase it by 1 step.
00:04:066: Missing note.
00:37:066: This slider SHOULD end @ 00:38:912.
00:49:528: This slider SHOULD end @ 00:50:912.
00:51:143: Missing note.
00:54:604: Missing note.

[Dusty's Hard]
* HP drain - increase it by 3 steps.
* Circle size - increase it by 1 step.
* Overall difficulty - increase it by 1 steps.
I don't like this spacing. Really.
00:19:066: Get rid of that *clap* hitsound.
00:55:528: Add *clap* hitsound.
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
Offset: 1518 (DJPop's suggestion)

Easy:
00:14:912 (2) - Move 1 grid down to line up
00:14:451 - Add note here with clap
00:16:297 (3) - Add clap
00:18:143 (5) - ^ (all of it)
00:21:374 (3) - Add clap on end of slider
00:23:681 (2) - Add clap
01:16:287 (2) - Line this up ;~;

Normal:
00:01:528 (1) - Add clap on end
00:03:604 (4) - ^
00:05:220 (1) - ^
00:06:835 (3) - Add clap
00:07:297 (4) - Add clap on end
00:08:451 (5) - Add clap

PoPiPo:
00:01:989 (3) - Add clap
00:03:835 (5) - ^
00:04:758 (7) - ^
00:05:681 (3) - ^
00:07:527 (5) - ^
00:07:758 (6,7) - Add whistles
00:10:989 (2,4,6) - Add claps
00:37:066 (6) - ;~;
01:26:451 (1,2) - Add claps
01:27:143 (3) - Add finish
01:27:604 (4,6) - Add whistles

DustyWusty:
01:26:451 (1) - End this the same as the other diffs?
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty

BagnoGamer wrote:

[Dusty's Hard]
* HP drain - increase it by 3 steps.
* Circle size - increase it by 1 step.
* Overall difficulty - increase it by 1 steps.
I don't know what you mean by circle size. I'm not going to make that smaller, that'd be stupid, if I made it bigger I'd probably have to increase spacing as well
OD++, drain+2

I don't like this spacing. Really.
I do.

00:19:066: Get rid of that *clap* hitsound.
00:55:528: Add *clap* hitsound.
yes
no

CDFA wrote:

DustyWusty:
...

01:26:451 (1) - End this the same as the other diffs?
sure

Download: Miyazaki Ui - Kizuna no Uta (TV Size) (Fuuko) [Dusty's Hard].osu
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123
Random mod~

All diffs:
Across all diffs there are notes too close to border of screen. Consider adjusting those.
Clapping hitsound is a bit too loud (excluding guest diff). Consider lower the volume.
The video is stuttering, I suggest changing to a better one.

[Hana ni Kawaru]
00:18:133 (5) - the repeating part doesn't sound good, see if you can come up with better rhythm
00:25:518 (4) - ^
00:57:364 (2,3,4) - optimize the spacing (to be specific, (2) down 1 grid, (3) down 2 grids)
01:16:287 (2) - sounds awkward, maybe try other rhythms

[Makenai]
00:42:133 (1) - I am not sure if a note this close after a spinner (and this far from the spinner itself) is too hard for a [Normal] diff. Maybe flip this slider vertically?

[Toki Doki]
00:49:518 (1) - a long repeating slider here doesn't sound too well... consider changing it
00:54:825 (1) - IMO delete (1) and and re-arrange the remaining four in diamond pattern, sounds better

[Dusty's Hard]
00:18:594 (1,2,3,4) - awkward rhythm. Try this maybe?

00:25:518 (4) - spacing
00:26:441 (3) - ^
00:29:211 (5) - place at middle of screen (IMO no need to move next combo's (1))
00:31:056 (2) - place at middle of screen (IMO no need to move (3))
00:32:902 (1 and 3) - spacing

A star will do fine~
yeahyeahyeahhh
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yeahyeahyeahhh
General:

All diffs:
Get rid of these fountains, you don't need them. There isn't a heavy beat or anything in the song to suggest a new fountain.
01:00:133 -
01:15:133 -

And make the 2nd fountain at 01:11:671 - instead of 01:11:441 -

Hana ni Kawaru:
Make the lead-in the same as the other diffs - 1996

Stop harassing me ugh >_>
simplistiC
237 posts
Joined April 2009
simplistiC
[Hana ni Kawaru]
00:39:825 (1) - Shorten this spinner by 1/2?
00:43:748 (1) - ^
00:47:441 (1) - ^

[Makenai]
00:39:825 (1) - Shorten this spinner by 1/2?
00:43:748 (1) - ^
00:47:441 (1) - ^

[Dusty's Hard]
00:13:527 (3) - I think the slider end would sound better with a normal hitsound instead of a soft finish.
00:19:989 (4) - Normal hitsound instead of soft finish
00:20:912 (3) - Same as above.
00:25:297 (3,4) - Normal hitsound?
00:26:220 (2) - ^

Resnap all notes

Star~
arien666
6,290 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
[Hana ni Kawaru]
00:42:133 (1) - [Suggestion] How about move little up to make symmetry with Ctrl+J ? (Just check with Ctrl+J)
00:45:825 (1) - ^
00:57:364 (2,3,4) - Little distance problem ;_;
01:24:133 (5) - How about move 1 grid up?

[Makenai]
00:12:594 (1) - Any special reason why this note is not on center?
00:14:902 (4) - How about move 1 grid up?
00:16:056 (5) - How about move 1 grid right?

[Toki Doki]
Resnap plz ;_; < Fixed on IRC
01:01:056 (3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down? (Or align with (2)'s end?)

[Dusty's Hard]
00:25:056 (2,3,4) - Umm... Explain these notes plz ;_; (Or these notes are spacing issue)
00:25:979 (1,2,3) - ^



/me is going to choose Proto-bubble or Pizza.
Good luck :3

Here's my star :3



edit.
Pizza-ed!
Ahh... I mean...



Proto-bubbled
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty

yongtw123 wrote:

[Dusty's Hard]
00:25:518 (4) - spacing
00:26:441 (3) - ^
no

everything else, yes

arken1015 wrote:

[Dusty's Hard]
00:25:056 (2,3,4) - Umm... Explain these notes plz ;_; (Or these notes are spacing issue)
00:25:979 (1,2,3) - ^
No one has ever complained before when I used these :(
it's just now there's no 4th corner.
And I love that pattern, so I'm not changing it.

Download: Miyazaki Ui - Kizuna no Uta (TV Size) (Fuuko) [Dusty's Hard].osu
Fuuko
486 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Fuuko

yongtw123 wrote:

Random mod~

All diffs:
Across all diffs there are notes too close to border of screen. Consider adjusting those. Eh, keeping.
Clapping hitsound is a bit too loud (excluding guest diff). Consider lower the volume. Propositally made.
The video is stuttering, I suggest changing to a better one. I am no good at finding/encoding one, so yeah, keeping...

[Hana ni Kawaru]
00:18:133 (5) - the repeating part doesn't sound good, see if you can come up with better rhythm Fixed.
00:25:518 (4) - ^ Keeping.
00:57:364 (2,3,4) - optimize the spacing (to be specific, (2) down 1 grid, (3) down 2 grids) Fixed.
01:16:287 (2) - sounds awkward, maybe try other rhythms Fixed.

[Makenai]
00:42:133 (1) - I am not sure if a note this close after a spinner (and this far from the spinner itself) is too hard for a [Normal] diff. Maybe flip this slider vertically? My bad, I've changed the others before but guess I forgot about this one..

[Toki Doki]
00:49:518 (1) - a long repeating slider here doesn't sound too well... consider changing it Not really fixed, but sounds better.
00:54:825 (1) - IMO delete (1) and and re-arrange the remaining four in diamond pattern, sounds better A bit, but keeping.

[Dusty's Hard]
00:18:594 (1,2,3,4) - awkward rhythm. Try this maybe?
[attachment=0:25208]suggestion.JPG[/attachment:25208]
00:25:518 (4) - spacing
00:26:441 (3) - ^
00:29:211 (5) - place at middle of screen (IMO no need to move next combo's (1))
00:31:056 (2) - place at middle of screen (IMO no need to move (3))
00:32:902 (1 and 3) - spacing

A star will do fine~
Thanks for modding. <3'
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
Map is unrankable without a "hitcircleoverlay.png". Add one pl0x.
And lol, digimon at the end of the video. And lol, ears that look like hair. Purple hair girl is pretty hot though.
Add that thing and I'll bubble.
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
Skin:
- Use this skinner background. http://up.ppy.sh/files/spinner-background-11.jpg
- Add a hitcircleoverlay

Dusty:
00:26:441 (3) - Is that note necessary =P
00:34:748 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - wtf this doesn't sync the song at all
00:53:210 (1) - This doesn't quite sync the song either. Make it start on the previous red tick?

Okey Dokey- Eh, Toki Doki:
00:49:518 (1) - Slider sounds boring. Make it 1/2 shorter so the repeat syncs the song?

Makenai:
k

Hana ni- fuck it EASY:
00:18:133 (5) - Add New Combo?
00:25:518 (4) - ^
00:32:441 (4) - ^
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
Updated.

edit: oops, really updated.

edit2: hitcircleoverlay.png by request go

Download: Miyazaki Ui - Kizuna no Uta (TV Size) (Fuuko) [Dusty's Hard].osu



Larto
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Larto
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Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
Very little IRC modding. A slider came up short but now has been fixed.

So ranked.
arien666
6,290 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
And good job, Fuuko XD
Have a nice day :3
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