Flying Pan wrote:

Hi, from my queue. here's your order~

Futsuu

00:24:396 - add k here?
00:27:640 - add d
00:30:883 - add k
No change on Futsuu

Muzukashii

00:58:248 (116) - change to d Changed

Oni

00:03:518 (14) - change to k for variation? Changed
00:15:883 (75,76,77,78) - should be dk dk Fixed
00:19:126 (91) - change to d Changed
00:52:369 (156) - ^ No change, but I changed 00:52:673 (157) to k
00:53:383 (160,161,162) - if you follow the drum i think it should be kkd Okay
00:57:032 (174,175,176) - and this is ddd Changed, but I deleted 175
01:26:626 (147,148,149,150,151,152) - change to kkd kkd? the drums sounds like that Okay
01:32:707 (177) - change to k if you applied the first one for consistency I'm sure you mean 01:31:086 (170)

That's all. Hope it's helpful. Can't say much, its a good mapset. Good luck~

Surono wrote:

`_J` ......... :V;v:;v:V:;V:V:V::V ew `L_`
no colour: suggest
blue: recommend

[Oni]
00:18:619 (89) - how be k? to variations from before *and this have flute pitch, boring if ddk again lol No change. It doesn't fit imo
00:19:532 (95) - k? bcuz this 00:19:937 (98) - low pitch.. so change to k for feel better =w= No change.
00:27:336 (27) - this not have pitch.. so please move to here 00:27:437 (27) - and change don *feels more fits imo or not move and change don Changed
01:27:640 (155) - voice pitch high.. so kat No change, it will break the consistency on 01:14:667 (77)
nice lel

[Muzukashii]
00:00:782 - aww i feels this empty and boring for muzu .. so add some note.. like don.. in other too *awalannya tu enaknya di add aja.. di tick biru kan boleh di muzu.. #Plak# ini cocoknya di futsuu kalau tanpa tick biru, nah di muzunya itu tinggal tambah 00:00:782 (2) - don disetiap lanjutannya hihi, di akhiran sama kan? di tambah juga Added
okay just it.. already nice ;w; lel

dah segini aja.. diff low pasti udah bagus2.. dan malas ngeliat2nya XD

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• Let's try a Nardo style mod!!

1. 01:19:734 (482,483,484) - kkk would fit the vocal well as it is relatively high compared to 01:18:518 (473,474,475) - .
   
   Ok, I'm not good at Nardo's pro mod style...especially on a Nardo map...

1. 00:36:964 (74,75,76,77) - k dkd plays and sounds very nice here. Really recommend it.
2. 00:52:167 (155,156) - You can swap these to follow vocals better. Won't affect following drums much since it's mainly bass kicks.
3. 00:58:451 (181) - d? Gives a bit of emphasis and flow to this little section, unless you want to avoid so much d k d k d k d k d.

1. 00:19:228 - Maybe add a k to match the density increase in Oni at this part?
2. 00:40:410 (57,58) - Deleting these would make a for a nice muzu break, in the sense that Oni has 1/2 breaks throughout this part, but Muzu doesn't have any 1/1 breaks to match with it. Only one should be needed along this string of notes.
3. 01:05:748 (14,15) - and 01:18:721 (64,65) - Maybe swap these, so that it can alternate between d d k and d k d into the d k d ddd k d pattern?

1. 00:53:180 (59) - Would be a nice note to delete to minimize continuous 1/1 mapping a bit.

1. 00:08:586 (6) - and 00:15:072 (12) - Maybe change to k to map to the high guitar chords? Then the last one can be its own d k d instead of showing twice in a row.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Hey!

[General]

1. Preview point is unsnapped. fixed

[Nardo's Inner Oni]

• Let's try a Nardo style mod!!

1. 01:19:734 (482,483,484) - kkk would fit the vocal well as it is relatively high compared to 01:18:518 (473,474,475) - . Yeah, but kdk would help emphasize the cymbal at 01:19:734 (482) - and the instrument at 01:19:937 (484) - in a way better.
   
   Ok, I'm not good at Nardo's pro mod style...especially on a Nardo map...

Difficulty gaps are consistent, so spread checks out (I hope). Call me back!

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Hey!

[General]

1. Preview point is unsnapped. Fixed

[Oni]

1. 00:36:964 (74,75,76,77) - k dkd plays and sounds very nice here. Really recommend it. Fixed
2. 00:52:167 (155,156) - You can swap these to follow vocals better. Won't affect following drums much since it's mainly bass kicks. Fixed
3. 00:58:451 (181) - d? Gives a bit of emphasis and flow to this little section, unless you want to avoid so much d k d k d k d k d. No change

Rest looks good!
[Muzukashii]

1. 00:19:228 - Maybe add a k to match the density increase in Oni at this part? Triplet here is not fit imo
2. 00:40:410 (57,58) - Deleting these would make a for a nice muzu break, in the sense that Oni has 1/2 breaks throughout this part, but Muzu doesn't have any 1/1 breaks to match with it. Only one should be needed along this string of notes. Deleted these notes
3. 01:05:748 (14,15) - and 01:18:721 (64,65) - Maybe swap these, so that it can alternate between d d k and d k d into the d k d ddd k d pattern? Fixed

[Futsuu]

1. 00:53:180 (59) - Would be a nice note to delete to minimize continuous 1/1 mapping a bit. Deleted

[Kantan]

1. 00:08:586 (6) - and 00:15:072 (12) - Maybe change to k to map to the high guitar chords? Then the last one can be its own d k d instead of showing twice in a row. Make them both k k d

Difficulty gaps are consistent, so spread checks out (I hope). Call me back!

shionelove wrote:

from queue
already bubbled=i should BN check
Artist is not Sano Gaku?if you have some source or confirm with QAT or etc put plz then i qf easily I think so. This will be considered by Meow2 though.
BG mp3 nothing
Source ok
no custom hitsounds ez

[Nardo's Inner Oni]
01:32:910 (557) - D? Retained to follow the high-pitched vocal. I used d at 00:05:342 - because ddkkkkd could emphasize the drums more.

one of the maps EZ Qualify
and EZ PP

shionelove wrote:

from queue
already bubbled=i should BN check
Artist is not Sano Gaku?if you have some source or confirm with QAT or etc put plz then i qf easily Fixed
BG mp3 nothing
Source ok
no custom hitsounds ez
[Kantan]
nothing breaks patterns enough
[Futsuu]
00:01:288 (2,4,6) - k(free to change or not) Changed. This also applied for the same part
[Muzu]
00:15:072 (52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59) - make same as 00:08:586 (26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33) - ? No change, I want to try a variation here
00:19:126 (69,70,71,72) - d kkk d i think(if you need break ignore this plz) Definitely need break here
[Oni]
nothing

one of the maps EZ Qualify
and EZ PP

DakeDekaane wrote:

Congratulations!