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Topic Starter
Aoba Misaki
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Ichigaki
Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map :)

Called from ♪ ichia7x's [AllMode] Modding Queue ♪



[General]
  1. Song Setup :
    1. Metadata : I think the right romanised title is 'Pile & Suzuko Mimori & Yoshino Nanjo' (Reference, but i don't sure with this.
    2. Other : Clear
  2. Music and background :
    1. Music : Clear
    2. Background : Clear
  3. Kiai and audio preview point :
    1. Kiai : Clear
    2. Audio preview point : How about start it from 00:51:431 - ?
Diff spread E-H-H isn't rankable!

[Normal]
Please look up here, try to add something to make the star here above 1.5
  1. 00:02:567 (3) - Move to x:280 y:232
  2. 00:01:658 (2,4,1) - Fix the blanket please
  3. 00:10:294 (2) - Stretch this 'till 00:10:749 -
  4. 00:13:249 (1,2) - Fix the blanket
  5. 00:22:794 (1,2) - How about change it into blanket?
  6. 01:00:067 (3,1) - Fix the blanket
  7. 01:17:567 (4) - Stretch this 'till 01:18:022 -
  8. 01:21:431 (2) - Move this to x:368 y:104
  9. 01:22:112 (3) - Move this to x:436 y:240 if the last mod applied
  10. 01:23:704 (2) - Move this to the last blue tick ( 01:23:590 - )
  11. 01:25:295 (5) - Move this to 01:25:067 - , Change it into normal slider, and decrease the length to 01:25:408 -
  12. 01:25:749 - Add a note here if last mod applied
  13. 01:29:385 (4,5) - Merge it please
[Hard]
  1. 00:29:158 - You miss a note here. The sound is same with 00:28:249 (2,3,4,5) -
  2. 00:31:772 - You miss a note here. The sound is same with 00:32:340 (7) -
  3. 00:36:885 (1) - Move it to x:324 y:256. The last is a bit hard because you're not use the DS
  4. 00:48:931 (3,4) - How about blanket both sliders?
  5. 00:50:522 (6) - Add 1 more reverse tick, and reverse the slider (ctrl+G)
  6. 01:29:385 (2,3,4) - Merge it, and make a something different pattern on last part of slider
[Insane]
  1. 00:08:703 (3,1) - How about blanket this?
  2. 00:16:317 - Add a note here. I'm suggest to put it on x:352 y:96
  3. 01:13:249 (1,2,3,4) - How about remove it all, and change it with spinner start from 01:13:135 - 01:13:931 - ?
  4. 01:14:272 (2) - Remove this, no sound like 01:14:385 (2,3,4) - there
  5. 01:16:090 (5) - Move this to 01:16:317 - and change the pattern by your own style
  6. 01:17:795 (10) - NC
  7. 01:29:385 (2,3,4) - Merge it, and same reason with the last one
Maybe this mapset need Easy. PM me if you want me to make it ;)

Good song, good diff, good luck :oops:
Topic Starter
Aoba Misaki

ichia7x wrote:

Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map :)

Called from ♪ ichia7x's [AllMode] Modding Queue ♪



[General]
  1. Song Setup :
    1. Metadata : I think the right romanised title is 'Pile & Suzuko Mimori & Yoshino Nanjo' (Reference, but i don't sure with this.
    2. Other : Clear
  2. Music and background :
    1. Music : Clear
    2. Background : Clear
  3. Kiai and audio preview point :
    1. Kiai : Clear
    2. Audio preview point : How about start it from 00:51:431 - ? > sorry, i think 00:51:317 - is more good.
Diff spread E-H-H isn't rankable!

[Normal]
Please look up here, try to add something to make the star here above 1.5
  1. 00:02:567 (3) - Move to x:280 y:232 > fix!
  2. 00:01:658 (2,4,1) - Fix the blanket please > fix!
  3. 00:10:294 (2) - Stretch this 'till 00:10:749 - > fix!
  4. 00:13:249 (1,2) - Fix the blanket > fix!
  5. 00:22:794 (1,2) - How about change it into blanket? > some fix.
  6. 01:00:067 (3,1) - Fix the blanket > fix!
  7. 01:17:567 (4) - Stretch this 'till 01:18:022 - > fix!
  8. 01:21:431 (2) - Move this to x:368 y:104 > fix!
  9. 01:22:112 (3) - Move this to x:436 y:240 if the last mod applied > fix!
  10. 01:23:704 (2) - Move this to the last blue tick ( 01:23:590 - ) > um... not fix. but, i'll think about it.
  11. 01:25:295 (5) - Move this to 01:25:067 - , Change it into normal slider, and decrease the length to 01:25:408 - > fix. but, i'm moved to 01:25:522 -
  12. 01:25:749 - Add a note here if last mod applied > some fix.
  13. 01:29:385 (4,5) - Merge it please > fix!
[Hard]
  1. 00:29:158 - You miss a note here. The sound is same with 00:28:249 (2,3,4,5) - > fix!
  2. 00:31:772 - You miss a note here. The sound is same with 00:32:340 (7) - > fix!
  3. 00:36:885 (1) - Move it to x:324 y:256. The last is a bit hard because you're not use the DS > some fix.
  4. 00:48:931 (3,4) - How about blanket both sliders? > fix!
  5. 00:50:522 (6) - Add 1 more reverse tick, and reverse the slider (ctrl+G) > hmm, i'll think about it.
  6. 01:29:385 (2,3,4) - Merge it, and make a something different pattern on last part of slider > not fix.
[Insane]
  1. 00:08:703 (3,1) - How about blanket this? > fix!
  2. 00:16:317 - Add a note here. I'm suggest to put it on x:352 y:96 > good idea add circle here but, i think not good idea: put it on x:352 y:96. so, not fix.
  3. 01:13:249 (1,2,3,4) - How about remove it all, and change it with spinner start from 01:13:135 - 01:13:931 - ? > some fix.
  4. 01:14:272 (2) - Remove this, no sound like 01:14:385 (2,3,4) - there > fix!
  5. 01:16:090 (5) - Move this to 01:16:317 - and change the pattern by your own style > a little ambiguous... haha, i'll think about it! :)
  6. 01:17:795 (10) - NC > fix!
  7. 01:29:385 (2,3,4) - Merge it, and same reason with the last one > not fix.
Maybe this mapset need Easy. PM me if you want me to make it ;)

Good song, good diff, good luck :oops:
> Thanks to mod my low quality's map!! T_T
Akatsuki Nagi
Called from Kagamine Ren & Nagi awa’s nm/m4m queue


[Insane]

  • 00:02:567 (2,3,4) - Ctrl+g
    00:03:703 (8,9,10,11,1,2,3) - Move this pattern to x:xx y:xx and move 00:04:499 (2,3) - to the slider's tail
    00:05:749 (6) - Try x:386 y:206
    00:13:931 (7) - Hard to read, better to remap this pattern such as
    00:23:703 (5) - Hard to read, try ↓
    00:13:931 (7) - Move x:249 y:280
    00:41:658 (3,4) - Ctrl + g
    00:42:794 (2,3,4) - move 3,4 to the slider's tail
    00:52:340 - Add a note here and move 00:51:772 (2,3,1,2,3,1) - to
    00:59:840 (6) - Move to x:453 y:127
    01:07:567 (9) - Move to x:460 y:151
[Hard]

  • 00:28:931 (5) - Delete the note
    00:35:976 (6,7,8,9) - Try this
    or
Hope useful :)
Nice song! XD Good luck>~<
MagicSnow
I like this song :)
TEKON_old
Hello hello |’。ω。)
Cool song and cool hitsounding.

Easy:
00:08:703 (1) - place so, that slider points to it
00:52:567 (2) - this is always hard for beginners to click, so you can try make it a slider from 00:52:340 till 00:52:794
01:29:385 (2) - this can be a beat, but doesn't have to

Normal:
00:52:567 (6) - new combo
00:50:976 (3) - rotate this 20 degrees, so it points towards the next beats
01:30:067 (2) - either you delete this, or you give it a finish sound, else it sounds strange after the finish sound before

Hard:
00:24:612 (6) - slider end has clap, is it on purpose? else, delete it
00:31:203 (3) - can this be clap instead of whistle?
00:33:931 (2) - remove clap from end
00:38:476 (4) - remove the sound in the beginning
The beat at 01:11:772 (2) should stick out a bit more
01:15:294 (1) - remove clap
01:23:703 (7) - this is too loud, can you add two inherited time sections around that solve this?

I hope this helps, sorry if not. :(
-shikaco-
❤One more mods to go XD
But I can do nothing much
He Ang CTB


I REALLY LIKE [INSANE] DIFFICULTY ADD IT BACK PLEASEEEE QUQ
Kawashiro
Hello, Hello- im come here from your m4m, thanks!

한글로 할게요 그냥
전부 다 제안들이니 무시하셔도 됩니다

[Insane]
태그에 영어로 Love Live! 도 추가하시는게 좋을 것 같습니다... 일부러 일본어로 검색하는 유저도 적을텐데...
00:00:530 초반 볼륨이 좀 큰거 같은데... 60 정도로 변경 추천
00:05:757 (9) - 클랩 추가, 5번 위에 겹쳐두거나 x:376 y:112 둘중 하나로 변경하는걸 추천합니다
00:06:893 초반에 60으로 변경하셨을 경우 여기는 70쯤으로 변경 추천
00:09:848 (2) - y:284로 변경 추천... 12번 간격이랑 23번 간격 맞추는게 더 보기 좋네요
00:13:939 (4) - 반복으로 해두니 히트사운드가 너무 시끄럽고 안어울리는 느낌이네요... 앞의 슬라이더처럼 변경해보세요
00:31:893 (7,8) - 8번을 없애고 7번을 한번 반복시키는게 낫지 않을까요?
00:52:348 01:13:030 키아이 여기서 끝내는게 좋을 것 같습니다
01:19:848 (4) - 연타의 시작지점을 2번 슬라이더의 머리 다음으로 맞춰두는게 좋을거 같네요
01:30:075 마지막 히트사운드는 20 정도로 해서 잘 안들리게 하는게 더 부드러운 느낌이 납니다
Topic Starter
Aoba Misaki

UnLock- wrote:

Hello, Hello- im come here from your m4m, thanks!

한글로 할게요 그냥
전부 다 제안들이니 무시하셔도 됩니다

[Insane]
태그에 영어로 Love Live! 도 추가하시는게 좋을 것 같습니다... 일부러 일본어로 검색하는 유저도 적을텐데... (source에 원어, tags에 영어로 표시했습니다.)
00:00:530 초반 볼륨이 좀 큰거 같은데... 60 정도로 변경 추천 (ok)
00:05:757 (9) - 클랩 추가, 5번 위에 겹쳐두거나 x:376 y:112 둘중 하나로 변경하는걸 추천합니다 (옮겼으나 클랩 추가 안했습니다.)
00:06:893 초반에 60으로 변경하셨을 경우 여기는 70쯤으로 변경 추천 (ok)
00:09:848 (2) - y:284로 변경 추천... 12번 간격이랑 23번 간격 맞추는게 더 보기 좋네요 (no)
00:13:939 (4) - 반복으로 해두니 히트사운드가 너무 시끄럽고 안어울리는 느낌이네요... 앞의 슬라이더처럼 변경해보세요 (일단은 냅두었는데 다른 사람들도 이걸로 지적하면 수정해볼게요.)
00:31:893 (7,8) - 8번을 없애고 7번을 한번 반복시키는게 낫지 않을까요? (ok)
00:52:348 no 01:13:030 키아이 여기서 끝내는게 좋을 것 같습니다 (no)
01:19:848 (4) - 연타의 시작지점을 2번 슬라이더의 머리 다음으로 맞춰두는게 좋을거 같네요 (고려 해보겠습니다.)
01:30:075 마지막 히트사운드는 20 정도로 해서 잘 안들리게 하는게 더 부드러운 느낌이 납니다 (ok)
Thanks ^^
Euny
안녕하세요 your request! came from my queue
언락님이 한글모딩하신걸 봤어요! 저도 한글로 모딩할게요!



  • Easy
  1. 00:51:893 (4,1) - 제가 느끼기엔 이 부분 흐름이 매우 불편합니다. 제 생각엔 00:51:893 (4)이 슬라를 00:51:893에서 시작하고 리버스로 변환해보시는거 어떠세요? 뒤에 이어지는 (1)콤부터는 블럭씌우셔서 ctrl H,J로 뒤콤보들 모두를 적당히 옮겨주시면 될거같아요.
  2. 01:04:166 (1) - 슬라이더 머리에 볼륨 60퍼센트만 해서 피니시 추가해주세요~
  3. 01:29:393 (2) - 끝부분을 살리시려고 하신건 알겠지만, 박자가 이미 끝났는데 슬라가 있는것보단 그냥 싱글노트로 깔끔하게 끝내는게 더 어울릴거같아요.
  • Normal
  1. 00:03:030 (4) - 슬라이더 마지막 점 x490y117로 옮겨주세요 담요 아주살짝 흐트러졌네요.
  2. 01:04:166 (1) - 피니시 넣어주세요.
  3. 01:29:848 (2) - 이지와 같은이윱니다 박자가 끝났는데 불필요해보여요 지우시는거 어떠세요?
  • Hard
  1. 00:56:893 (1) - 슬라이더 꼬리에 피니시 없애주세요
  2. 01:29:848 (1) - 으앜ㅋㅋ 또있네요 ㅠㅠ 그냥 스타일이시면 하드부터는 살리세요 이지 노멀은 없애주는쪽이 혼동을 덜할거같으니 없애주시구용
  3. 제가 모딩실력이 부족한것도 있지만, 우선 봤을때는 하드는 잡을게 없네요 담요도 엄청깔끔하고..
  • Insane
  1. OD -0.5 (그냥 7로 해둬도 괜찮을거같아요)
  2. 00:19:393 (4) - 뉴콤 넣어주세요.
  3. 00:21:666 (8) - ^
  4. 00:28:711 (6) - ^
  5. 00:31:893 (7) - ^
  6. 00:45:757 (6) - ^
  7. 00:57:120 (2) - 피니시는 지워주세요.
  8. 00:59:620 (4) - 이 슬라이더 지금보단, 1/4슬라가 지금 흐름상 더 잘 어울리는거같습니다. (배치는 헬로님 편하실대로 해주세요)
  9. 01:04:166 (1) - 피니시 추가해주세요!
  10. 01:06:893 (5) - 뉴콤 넣어주세요.
  11. 01:10:530 (9) - ^
  12. 01:12:348 (6) - ^
  13. 01:22:348 (1) - 피니시 넣어주세요.
  14. 01:26:666 (4) - 뉴콤해주세요.
노래도 즐겁고 맵도 시원시원하네요
더타하면 스트림 완전재밌어요 ㅋ
랭크되길 바랄게요!GL
Krauv
Hihi. From Krauv's Queue

Easy
Nothing found
Normal
00:32:348 (4) - move grid space to left to match with (2)
01:29:848 (2) - feels out of place to me (not sure what could be done about it) whistle doesn't sound good with this, either (maybe just remove the hitsound).
Hard
Move HP Drain and Overall by .5?
00:51:211 (6) - ctrl+g?
01:29:848 (1) - whistle doesn't sound good with this (maybe just remove the hitsound).
Insane
00:10:984 (8,9,10) - inconsistent with the rest of the stream. Would suggest NC on (8) if you're gonna keep it like this.
00:13:484 (2,3,4,5,6) - move closer to (1) so there's equal spacing between each slider
00:50:530 (5) - NC
00:50:984 (9) - ^
01:06:893 (5) - ^
01:18:258 (6) - ^
01:28:484 (6) - ^
01:29:848 (3,4) - whistle doesn't sound good with this (maybe just remove the hitsound).

All suggestions, feel free to ignore everything if you so please. Very clean map.
Topic Starter
Aoba Misaki
Thanks Euny, Krauv >< almost fix
Intelli
Hey, from mod q

Easy:
  1. 00:26:439 (1) - Align with the start of 2 horizontally

  2. 00:36:893 (1) - Spacing looks off between the prev. circle/slider. Didn't count, it just looks/feels off.

  3. 00:38:711 (3) - Spacing again, fixing the previous slider should fix it

  4. 01:11:893 (4,5) - Feels kinda empty. Add a circle maybe?

  5. 01:23:257 (1,2) - Maybe align these better (SLIGHT movement). It breaks the flow the way it is at a weird angle.

    Noice Easy m8
Normal:
  1. 00:02:802 (2,3) - Add a circle here. It feels over syncopated. http://gyazo.com/543a7c632c31afbe94534680066ccc64 (It did a weird overlap thing, but you get the idea)

  2. 00:33:257 (1,2,3) - Maybe line these up so that they form 1 line? Kinda hard to do, but at least make the 2 fit the 3's pattern.

  3. 00:42:120 (4,5) - Invert these. The contrary motion feels too weird for a Normal

  4. 00:49:393 (3) - I wouldn't hide this under the slider.

  5. 01:02:348 (1,2) - Are these the same angle? It looks slightly off, but i didn't count.

  6. 01:27:348 (3) - You could get away with keeping it, but I'd remove it. It overcomplicates the rhythm.

    Overall pretty good. Probably the worst out of the 4 imo, but still not bad.
Hard:
  1. 00:22:120 (1) - Flip? This is kinda cruel for a Hard.

  2. 00:37:575 (2) - Line this up with the end of 4 slider

  3. 00:43:484 (4) - Weird break in the motion

  4. 00:50:530 (4) - Move down

  5. 00:51:780 (2) - Put this at the end of the 1 slider

  6. 00:52:575 (4) - ^(only replace 1 with 3)

    Lol nothing after 1 minute. Very fun to play
Insane:
  1. 00:17:007 (2) - Awkward on the hands

  2. 00:49:848 (1) - Remove NC or remove note? It's just kinda, there to add a big jump, and nothing more. #overmapped

  3. 00:56:439 (7) - Awkward on the hands

  4. 01:05:530 (5) - Flip

  5. 01:29:848 (3,4) - Remove

    I think I figured out which difficulty you spent the most time on XD and it definitely shows. WP
All in all very fun to play. <3
[ Zzz ]
Hi~ Hello-
By Euny
은이누나한태 맵받은다음 이분 한국인이라 들은거같은데.. 하고 유페가보니 "모딩좀 해주세요 현기증나요ㅠㅠ" 라고 하셔서 왔어요!! :3

Easy
  1. 00:03:939 (1) - 여기 슬라이더에 끝에있는 휘슬을 피니시로 체인지. 00:05:302 (2) - 그후 이거 제거.
  2. 00:08:711 (1) - 이것도 제거. 쉬운 이지라는 특성상 제거해주시는게 좋아보여요. ( 박자로만 따지면 00:08:257 (1) - 여기에 들어가야되요. 그런데 스핀떄문에.. ) 그래서 제거. 그리고 제거하면 다음으로의 리듬도 어울리구요 :3
  3. 00:42:802 (3) - 슬라이더 앞에 클렙추가. 뒤에 휘슬제거. 00:43:711 (4) - 휘슬을 클렙으로 변경하고 셈플셋 오토로 변경. ( 잡음을 잡는것 보다는 .. 확실히 들리는 음을 잡는게 더 중요해요. ( 00:40:984 (1,2) - 여기에 클렙 힛사가 들어가있고 00:44:166 (1,2) - 여기에도 들어가있는데 .. 일정하던 히트사운드가 갑짜기 이상해지면 조금 그러니까 ㅇㅇ...
  4. 00:45:984 (3) - 이것도 셈플셋 오토로 변경하고 클렙으로 바꿔주세요.
  5. 00:47:575 (1,2) - 여기 둘다 슬라이더의 끝에 클렙 넣어주세요. 00:50:075 (2) - 여기 슬라이더의 시작과 엄청 잘어울려요.
  6. 00:59:166 (4,5) - 이것도 셈플셋 오토로 하시고 휘슬대신 클렙넣어주세요. 00:56:893 (1,3) - 여기랑 01:00:530 (1,2) - 여기에 비해 어색해요.
  7. 01:22:348 (1) - 슬라이더의 중간에 휘슬보단 클렙이 더 어울릴꺼같아요.
  8. 01:25:757 (1,2) - 슬라이더의 끝에 클렙추가. 둘다.
  9. 모딩은 이걸로 이지는 다 끝났는데 .. 제안이 하나있어요. 꼭 바꾸라는건 아니고.. 원하시면 바꾸시되 무리하게 바꾸려고 하지는 말아주세요. 지금상태로도 충분히 맵 좋으니 :3
  10. 01:15:984 (1) - 여기에서부터 01:17:575 (3) - 여기까지 상관은 없긴한데 .. 전에 매핑하셧던 부분과 같은 느낌이 들게 이렇게 해주시는건 어떨까요? 01:16:439 -여기서부터 시작해서..

Normal
  1. 00:01:666 (2) - 슬라이더의 시작에 .. 잔잔한 부분이기도 하고 클렙은 필요 없을꺼같아요. 소리가 있어야되겠다 싶으시면 피니시 추천.
  2. 00:04:393 (1) - 마찬가지 .. 이긴한데 .. 이건 소리업는편이 더 나아보여요.
  3. 00:20:984 (2) - 여기 셈플셋 오토해주시고 휘슬을 클렙으로 변경.
  4. 00:34:848 (3) - 슬라이더의 끝에 셈플셋 오토해주시고 휘슬을 클렙으로 변경.
  5. 00:36:439 (5) - 이 슬라이더의 중간에는 히트사운드 없는게 더 어울리는거같아요. 셈플셋은 알아서 ..
  6. 00:43:257 (2) - 지금대로면 저런박자에 클렙까지 엇박이라 너무 안좋네요. 서클 제거해주세요.
  7. 00:43:711 (2) - 슬라이더의 앞에 클렙추가.
  8. 00:47:575 (1) - 이게 원래 맞는박자에요. 보컬보다는 박자가 좋아요. 이지 노말같은경우에는 :3
  9. 00:58:711 (4,6) - 4번 뒤에 6번 앞에 셈플셋 오토로 변경후 휘슬을 클렙으로 변경.
  10. 01:05:984 (3) - 슬라이더의 중간에 셈플셋 오토로 변경후 휘슬을 클렙으로 변경.
  11. 01:07:348 (4) - 슬라이더의 끝에 셈플셋 오토로 변경후 휘슬을 클렙으로 변경.
  12. 01:23:711 (3) - 셈플셋 드럼말고 오토로 변경후 휘슬을 클렙으로 변경.
  13. 01:27:575 (4) - 슬라이더의 끝에 같은이유.

Hard
  1. 00:00:530 (1) - 00:04:848 (3) - 뿍뿍소리 안들려요. 제거좀 그리고 00:04:848 (3) - 여기 처음과 끝에 휘슬을 피니시로 체인지.
    뿎뿍 ㄴㄴ
  2. 00:24:620 (6) - 슬라이더 끝에 클렙제거. ( 과도한건 뭐든지 화를 불러온답니다 :3 )
  3. 00:43:711 (5) - 슬라이더의 맨 앞에 클렙 추가.
  4. 00:49:166 (4) - 클렙 빠졋어요.
  5. 00:59:166 (2) - 여기도 빠졋어요.
  6. 00:59:848 (5) - 여기 끝에도.

Insane
  1. 초반 뿍뿍 ㄴㄴ
  2. 00:24:848 (5) - 슬라이더의 끝에 클렙 ㄴㄴ
  3. 01:28:484 (6) - 간격이 달라지니 뉴콤보 추가해주세요.
  4. 01:29:848 (3,4) - 이런거 꼭 신경써서 넣으실 필요는 없어요. 제거후 녹색선도 제거해주세요.

초보 치고 맵이 엄청좋으시네요 :3 그리고 틱설정이나 이런저런거까지 잘하시고 :3

굿굿!! 랭크 힘내세요!
Kyle Y
quick modding

[General]
SPOILER
I know you want to blanket
but the truth is that...


Offset I think it is okay, or you can try 544 (1/32 beat later)

[Insane]
SPOILER
00:03:484 (7,8) - perfer follow 00:02:575 (3,4,5) -
00:04:507 (4) - ^
00:12:348 (2) - stack 00:12:575 (3) -
00:21:211 (4) - del?
00:22:120 (2) - end 00:22:348 -
00:23:711 (5) - del and 00:23:257 (4) - reverse
00:23:939 (1,2,3) - please follow vocal
00:24:620 (4) - 1/2 beat slider
00:24:848 (5,6) - move to 00:25:075 - and del 00:25:757 (7) -
00:25:870 (8) - 00:25:984 (1) - del and 1/4 beat slider at 00:26:211 -
00:25:984 (1) -
00:26:893 (3) - blanket
00:27:348 (4) - move to 00:27:575 - and del 00:27:802 (1) -
00:28:257 (3,5,7) - better stack together
00:30:643 (3) - del
00:37:802 (3) - stack 00:36:893 (1) -
00:40:530 (1) - 1/2 beat and 1 circle at 00:40:984 -
00:41:666 (3) - stack 00:42:120 (1) -
00:42:575 (2) - 2 circles
00:42:120 (1,2) - a little weird on the timing (?)
00:50:075 (1) - I somehow think that kiai time can be more difficult, maybe about the sv
00:51:780 (2,3,1) - good vocal, not follow it?
00:55:530 (3) - 1/2 beat and del 00:55:757 (4,5) -
01:08:711 (3,4) - stack 01:07:802 (1) -
01:13:257 (1) - move to 01:13:143 - end 01:14:620 -
01:15:757 (3) - stack 01:14:848 (1) -
Anxient
from my mod queue, insane only ;o
Insane

00:03:492 (7) - ctrl+g
00:05:992 (1) - move 00:05:878 - end 00:07:583 -
00:46:674 (4) - ctrl+g
00:50:083 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - why not make into a smoother stream? if you wanna do like this its fine, but put some curves on it? like 00:50:992 (1,2,3,4) -
01:03:038 (4) - move to 01:02:924 -
01:03:265 (5) - move to 01:03:151 - extend slider until 01:03:492 -
01:05:538 (5) - ctrl+g
01:06:901 (1,2,3,4) - pretty sudden drop in ds isn't it?
01:12:697 (2) - ctrl+g?
01:20:765 (2) - ^
01:25:083 (4) - ^
01:28:947 (1) - continue combo
01:29:401 (2) - NC -w-

good luck! -w-
Nathan
hi from modding queue =w=

[Normal]
  1. 00:51:788 (1,2) - Might wanna turn this into a slider to make the rhythm easier to read. Some new players may be confused and play 00:50:992 (6,1,2) like they're 1/2 apart when 00:51:788 (1) is offbeat
[Hard]
  1. 00:24:628 (6) - I don't think the end needs a clap here, feels forced
  2. 00:41:901 (4,1) - The vocals here are just as strong as in 00:40:083 (7,1) but why are they lower in spacing? 00:41:901 (4) should be bumped down a bit to create the emphasis again for the vocals on 00:42:128 (1)
  3. 00:49:174 (4,1) - Sort of the same thing here, there should be a bit of a jump here to emphasize vocals like you did in 00:48:265 (2,3)
  4. 00:51:219 (6,2) - Try making these parallel?
  5. 01:15:310 (1,2) - Don't see point of the increased spacing here, it's out of place if you compare it to the rest of the map after kiai
Ranger
[Easy]

  1. 00:28:719 (3) - 보컬 따라가면 1/1 슬라이더로 만들어야 어울립니다
  2. 00:47:583 ~ 00:51:447 - 갑자기 스택 많아진 느낌이 드는데 좀 줄이시는게 좋을거같아요 00:49:856 (1) 이거 지운다던가..
[Normal]

  1. 00:51:901 (1,2) - 박자가 잘 안맞는거 같아요. 패턴 이렇게 바꿔 보시는거 어떠세요?
  2. 01:07:810 (5,1) - 뉴콤 스왑해주세요
[Hard]

  1. 00:03:947 (1,2) - 지금은 약간 듣기 어색한거 같은데 패턴 이렇게 바꾸시는거 추천합니다
  2. 00:52:810 , 00:53:038 - 여기 노트 넣으시는거 추천
  3. 01:28:719 (4,5,6) - 이거 일직선으로 맞추는게 더 보기 좋을것 같아요
[Insane]

여담으로 AR같은거 0.5배수로 안하면 지적당할수 있으니 유의해주세요 (지금 AR 8.4인데 8.5로 바꾸시는게 나아요)

  1. 00:10:992 (1,3) - 뉴콤 스왑해주세요
  2. 00:11:901 (1) - ^위에꺼 수정하셧으면 여기 뉴콤 지워주시고
  3. 00:55:878 (5) - 이거 1/4박자 뒤로 옮기는게 더 어울리는거 같네요
GL :3
PuttyoU
from my modding queues
sorry for delay

[General]
  1. add Tags : μ's

[Easy]
  1. 00:26:901 (2) - don't fit rhythm.00:26:901 - 00:27:356 and 00:27:810 - 00:28:265 slider please~
  2. 00:45:992 (3) - ^ . This diff is Easy.please use white line.
  3. 00:51:788 (1) - rhythm is OK.but I think Easy diff doesn't use blue line ;(
    so how about remove 00:51:788 (1,2) - there note?
  4. 01:02:356 (3,4,1) - I think Easy diff don't use straight slider in a low.so 01:04:174 (1) - this slider add curve.
  
  
[Normal]
  1. 00:36:447 (5) - more slant to left
  2. 00:51:788 (1,2,3) - same reason in Easy
  3. 01:09:401 (4) - Um~,change circle in 01:09:401 and slider in 01:09:628 ~ 01:10:083 .because 01:09:628 - there sound is big
  4. 01:21:219 - if you use Drum samleset in there, i want Drum sampleset in 01:21:447 - 01:21:674 -

[Hard]
  1. 00:05:992 (1) - spinner start in 00:05:878 -
  2. 00:18:492 (1) - if you stack it, i think this slider stack in 00:17:583 (7) - this slider head.
  3. 00:43:719 (5) - I'm concerned it. because 00:43:038 (3) - this slider doesn't same it,but same color.how about change combo color?
  4. 01:28:719 (4,5) - more good

[Insane]
  1. 00:51:447 (1) - how about change SV??
  2. 01:03:719 (6,7) - more good flow
  3. 01:13:151 (1,1) - spinner end here 01:14:401.I think it's unrankble this pattern.

all diff verrrrrrrry good :)
I want ranked it!!!
Topic Starter
Aoba Misaki
ありがとうございます!お陰様で大分助かりました!!
えっと、殆フィックスしました。

Thanks^^
naoe dami
from my queue why must Love Live! D:
[Easy]
00:51:901 (4) - the slider head must start in 00:51:788

[Normal]
00:26:901 (2) - slider 1/1
00:28:038 (4,5) - ^ like this?

00:51:901 (1) - same as easy

I think just that, cuz the hard looks good for me,sorry for little mod
Topic Starter
Aoba Misaki

naoe dami wrote:

from my queue why must Love Live! D: < haha ;; You don't like Love Live's songs maybe...?

[Easy]
00:51:901 (4) - the slider head must start in 00:51:788 -k

[Normal]
00:26:901 (2) - slider 1/1 -No.
00:28:038 (4,5) - ^ like this? -k

00:51:901 (1) - same as easy -^

I think just that, cuz the hard looks good for me,sorry for little mod
Thanks.
guineaQ
#modreqs

개인적으로 맵 잘 찍으신 듯
더군다나 이게 처음이면 더더욱 ㅎㄷㄷ한 퀄리티

[Insane]
  1. 00:13:947 (4) - 여기에 1/8이 있는게 아니라 00:14:117 - 여기에 1/8이 있어요
    ㄹㅇ 잘 찍으심
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:538 (1,3) - 담요가 눈에 띄게 어긋나있네요
    직선형 슬라이더가 좀 없어서 아쉬웠지만 이 정도면 고 퀄리티 하드네요
[Normal]
  1. 00:04:856 (2,3) - 세번째 슬라 빼시고 2번째 슬라이더를 리버스로 만드는게 훨씬 더 나음 개인적으로
[Easy]


아아아앜 BN 신청 할 걸

BG 퀄이 좀 낮아서 t/191777&start=0 여기에다가 부탁을 하면 금방 (빠르면 30분안에 옴 ㅎㄷㄷ) 퀄을 높여줌
Topic Starter
Aoba Misaki

guineaQ wrote:

#modreqs

개인적으로 맵 잘 찍으신 듯
더군다나 이게 처음이면 더더욱 ㅎㄷㄷ한 퀄리티

[Insane]
  1. 00:13:947 (4) - 여기에 1/8이 있는게 아니라 00:14:117 -여기에 1/8이 있어요 - 할까말까 10분정도 망설였는데, 일단 그냥 놔두는걸로 했네요ㅋ 만약 문제가 심하다면 바로 고치겠습니다.
    ㄹㅇ 잘 찍으심
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:538 (1,3) - 담요가 눈에 띄게 어긋나있네요 -고쳤습니다.
    직선형 슬라이더가 좀 없어서 아쉬웠지만 이 정도면 고 퀄리티 하드네요
[Normal]
  1. 00:04:856 (2,3) - 세번째 슬라 빼시고 2번째 슬라이더를 리버스로 만드는게 훨씬 더 나음 개인적으로 >고쳤습니다.
[Easy]


아아아앜 BN 신청 할 걸

BG 퀄이 좀 낮아서 t/191777&start=0 여기에다가 부탁을 하면 금방 (빠르면 30분안에 옴 ㅎㄷㄷ) 퀄을 높여줌
엌 칭찬 감사합니다. (^o^)/
Trynna
[Hard]

01:28:833 (5) - move to x:76 y:208

[Insane]

00:13:947 (4) - remove back arrow and along the slider

no more problems I think
sorry for small mod
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