wzh0604 wrote:

N难度有陷阱……>_<
L难度果断放弃

1. Timing looks good (well, its awp timing, so It'd have to be good)
2. Really, you should never place beats before the first timing section. It still works fine, but its more convenient this way. What I would do it move the red timing section that is at 00:01:95 to 00:01:017. That should fix that.

Thanks a lot. All fixed~

Doomsday93 wrote:

Hi

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these

1. Timing looks good (well, its awp timing, so It'd have to be good)
2. Really, you should never place beats before the first timing section. It still works fine, but its more convenient this way. What I would do it move the red timing section that is at 00:01:95 to 00:01:017. That should fix that.

[EASY]

Great


[NORMAL]

Map itself is fine, but it seems waaay too hard for a Normal. All those streams make it pretty tough. Perhaps you could remove some of the longer streams to help make it a little easier?

[SAMI'S HARD]
Still a WIP I guess.

00:28:832 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - All these jumps don't make much sense to me. They don't fit the song very well. Perhaps you could remove these and map something else there?
00:35:066 (3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^
01:17:144 (8) - New combo? Since the combo here is really long.
01:18:702 (15) - ^
01:20:261 (18) - ^

[LUNATIC]

Seems fine enough

Nice map, for the most part.

Starred

Doomsday93 wrote:

[SAMI'S HARD]
Still a WIP I guess. yay

00:28:832 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - All these jumps don't make much sense to me. They don't fit the song very well. Perhaps you could remove these and map something else there?
00:35:066 (3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^

Actually I'm not so willing to remove these because this is my first inspiration to do this map;_; but it's really too far to a Hard.I'll make them closer, if more suggestion about these jumps i will consider to change it

01:17:144 (8) - New combo? Since the combo here is really long.
01:18:702 (15) - ^
01:20:261 (18) - ^

it's still WIP :3

soulfear wrote:

May I have a diff?
and I think it woulb be [I].

DJPop wrote:

~Easy~
00:13:770 (6) - move right 1 grid & down 1 grid (Lv3) OR move right 3 grids & down 2 grids (Lv3)
00:36:235 (2) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
00:45:586 (3) - move right 4 grids & down 1 grid (Lv3) ?
01:24:233 (3) - make them symmetry and more smoothly curve
01:30:672 (3) - ^
01:49:707 (3) - make the curve more smoothly

~Normal~
00:09:845 (2) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
01:49:510 (4) - move left & down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:51:286 (1,3) - make them symmetry and more smoothly curve
01:56:023 (5) - clap on 3rd note
02:04:707 (4) - move end point to right side ?

~Lunatic~
00:46:365 (2) - move left 1 grid (Lv3) OR 00:46:754 (3) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
00:52:209 (10) - don't overlap with (1) (make it curve left ?)
01:25:843 (1) - move end point up a bit


+Star

Thanks a lot , fixed

NatsumeRin wrote:

star..太鼓不错.
但是...5个I肯定rank不能的,想都不要想.
看看怎么调整会比较好吧....

orioncomet wrote:

[Easy]
- Where is 2nd timing? Add [BPM: 134, Offset: 9398] - and resnap all note

[sami's Hard]
- I prefer first note should be at/after the first hitnote, so use offset [1017] for 1st offset
- Fix 8th timing to [Offset: 82624] - and resnap all note

Fighto!

dksslqj wrote:

[Easy]
overall +1
00:08:943 - how about add the note?

[Normal]
It's so hard....
how about fix diff name Normal+?

just.

Doomsday93 wrote:

[SAMI'S HARD]

Seems better than it was (mainly because it wasn't finished last time I checked it), and for the most part, its pretty good. I'm still not keen on th jumps like at 00:28:832 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2, etc), but they are not completely unplayable, and if you really want to keep them, I'm not stopping you. Apart from those, I quite like this.

Tonoko wrote:

:)
总体上希望能仔细调教一下slider的头尾点和中点,这有什么意义我也说不清,但是最好尽量斟酌一下.
以后的图里会尽量注意，不过这个图里就……难改了，不好意思Lun
00:10:293 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里只有6个好像怪怪的 这里跟背景音

00:15:454 (1,2,3,1) - 这里似乎应该是3下重节奏再接后面的串 我觉得我这个节奏……也许更好？

个人有个看法:2个kiai前的一节是相对宁静的部分,尝试放些慢点的节奏喂kiai部分作铺垫>< (当然这会伤筋动骨的,所以公主请3思)
……考虑中

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Spread is E H I I I ~ isn't balanced? (Taiko is also included)

Easy:

-- Some of the spinners seem a bit too short to be deemed easy. I know , I'll consider it at my next easy,thanks

01:27:452 (1) - Unsilence the end? Or silence the whole spinner? It sounded odd.done

Normal:

00:02:892 (2) - Silence this tick.done
01:21:040 (1,2,3) - Confusing just after a spinner.deleted
02:24:246 (5) - Delete.done

Hard:

-- Hitsounds are too quiet.
-- More claps and finishes please, whistle gets annoying mid way through the song.
-- Streams are kinda insane... I guess it doesn't matter much.

Taiko:

00:11:525 (21,22,23) - Unsnapped.
01:49:970 (6,7) - Snapped to 1/8 fix this.
01:52:569 (9) - Whistle here.
02:02:602 (40,41) - Snapped to 1/8 fix please.
02:15:233 (6,7) - ^
02:36:932 (72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89) - Song is fading out, taiko sounds stupid here.
02:39:464 (1) - Unnecessary. (Also on 1/8 end it 1/1)

Lunatic:

-- X2 section is rather pointless.

00:03:829 (5) - End on white tick 00:04:298. fixed
01:58:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Stream is at an awkward angle.. fixed
02:14:970 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - New combo for every note isn't necessary.. fixed
02:20:299 (2,3,4) - Following your pattern the new combo's are missing.. fixed
02:21:286 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - New combo's aren't necessary.. fixed
02:22:865 (1,2,3) - Why the 1/4 spacing change?sorry but I don't want it to be too insane
02:23:654 (1,2,3) - ^

+ Star.

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Spread is E H I I I ~ isn't balanced? (Taiko is also included)

Easy:

-- Some of the spinners seem a bit too short to be deemed easy.

01:27:452 (1) - Unsilence the end? Or silence the whole spinner? It sounded odd.

Normal:

00:02:892 (2) - Silence this tick.
01:21:040 (1,2,3) - Confusing just after a spinner.
02:24:246 (5) - Delete.

Hard:

-- Hitsounds are too quiet.
-- More claps and finishes please, whistle gets annoying mid way through the song.
-- Streams are kinda insane... I guess it doesn't matter much.

Taiko:

00:11:525 (21,22,23) - Unsnapped. Really!?I don't think so
01:49:970 (6,7) - Snapped to 1/8 fix this. Is too crazy...
01:52:569 (9) - Whistle here. Here!?...done
02:02:602 (40,41) - Snapped to 1/8 fix please. Aren't you feel strange!?
02:15:233 (6,7) - ^ Ibid
02:36:932 (72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89) - Song is fading out, taiko sounds stupid here.
So you say that ... more whispered to modify it?
02:39:464 (1) - Unnecessary. (Also on 1/8 end it 1/1) Oh ... used to put spin in the final
Lunatic:

-- X2 section is rather pointless.

00:03:829 (5) - End on white tick 00:04:298.
01:58:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Stream is at an awkward angle.
02:14:970 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - New combo for every note isn't necessary.
02:20:299 (2,3,4) - Following your pattern the new combo's are missing.
02:21:286 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - New combo's aren't necessary.
02:22:865 (1,2,3) - Why the 1/4 spacing change?
02:23:654 (1,2,3) - ^

+ Star.

Thank you very much,Lunatic fixed,Normal will be remapped soon~

Lybydose wrote:

delete the blank .osb file and full submit

Easy:

These spinners are a bit too short for the easiest difficulty, and they have notes right after them!

01:27:452 (1) -
01:33:891 (1) -
02:11:812 (1) -

Normal:

This is a bit too difficult for what would be expected of a normal difficulty. The main issue is all those kick sliders, like the parts at 01:52:865 (5,6,7) and 02:03:918 (1,2,3,4,5,6). Also here: 02:10:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6) and here: 02:18:720 (7,1).

00:51:040 (2,3) - this is kind of confusing because the sliders aren't stacking properly

Sections like this can also be hard to hit for normal players: 01:57:602 (1,2,3,4,5,6), especially since the slider velocity is higher than the spacing.

Some of the spinners are a bit short as well, but it's not as bad as Easy.

sami's Hard:

The hitsounds are almost impossible to hear. Increase the volume!

This could really use OD+1

Increase HP Drain slightly?

00:35:066 (3) - it's kind of hard to see this is a slider because it's covered by a hitburst. Try switching the 3 and 4.
all fixed

Lunatic:

00:52:988 (4) - doesn't really seemed synced to anything with the music. Sounds better as just a circle on the white tick. It would probably be best if you also made 00:52:988 (3) a single circle as well.fixed

02:21:286 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - you said you changed the new combos on every note in Shulin's mod post, but they are still here, so change that if you want.fixed

02:13:391 (1,1,1,1) - ^ here toofixed

02:22:865 (1,2,3) - the spacing increase on this stream is really randomfixed

02:23:654 (1,2,3) - ^fixed


TAIKO!!1


00:11:525 (21,22,23) - these notes are not snapped
02:02:635 (40,41) - should be snapped at 1/4, so the 40 should be on the blue tick and the 41 on the red tick
02:15:266 (6,7) - ^ same thing
02:26:023 (1) - why are all the notes completely silent after this point?
all fixed

Shinxyn wrote:

ZUN~

Normal- D: bg image doesn't fit song (nor the easier diff)
D:Houraisan Kaguya's nice pictures...really not much....OMG D: I'll try to solve this
01:12:469 (1) - preferably shorten this by 1/2 (to keep up the slower pace), but no matter, keep the different pace if you want ><
fixed~
Plays... fair, kinda iffy on some of the parts though...what happened to Easy? D:
D: Easy...easy...abandoned....D:

sami's-
00:24:157 (5) - .... eh? new combo this since all the patterns before this only had 4 notes per combo too O.o?
00:52:988 (11,1) - >< switch new combo?
01:22:209 (1) - finish doesn't match this part..
..... too much whistles imo...

Lunatic-
Some of the streams' spacing aren't consistent, no big deal, don't really feel like pointing them out =|
result of remapping Lunatic 8 times(yeah...trully 8 times OMG...As a noob maybe I'm really not good at insane diffs...D:)
D: 2x section D:
02:22:865 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - evil ending xD
XD
This sounds... okay...

D:Hitsounds are terrible?D:....

Reading the older post makes me wonder if this map changed a lot... huh...
Unsure about this map