impossiblexu wrote:

虽然图编的还行，但BPM明显有问题。建议你找人给你测一下：
比如这里：http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=60&t=13795
或者上传到WIP
测到正确的BPM和offset再找我给你mod一下。

yuckothegreat wrote:

Pretty good beatmap, a few things though:

0.3x Lunatic
0:08:474 - This pause is really awkward.

0.7x Lunatic
1:37:010 - Are all these new combos really nessesary? You don't do this anywhere else.

1.0x Lunatic
0:56:823 - 1:01:304 - I think it would look better if these "circles" of sliders be in the same spots in stead of moving outward.

By the way, the timing is off.

[Wriggle] wrote:

Great beatmap. You deserve a star for it.

Zekira wrote:

[General]
I must say, if you alone timed this, I'm impressed.
Just... move the offset from 1002 to 1939 though. The time signature is appearing wrong if you don't.

Also, hitsound work pl0x. It's kind of hard to mod a map that doesn't make use of hitsounds.

Not starring just yet; having no hitsounds = NO.

orioncomet wrote:

ohhhhhh.. it's your 1st map?? well.. timing look so hard to found ;_; I see there have many red timing selection and bpm changes so far

[General]
- I prefer first note should be after red timing selection then use 1012 for offset If you don't mind
I did as you said some time ago……But I found that The time signature is appearing wrong if I do that…… This sentence is from Zekira's mod ORZ.
- Dark combo colour a bit have to see with black hair of the girl in the BG ._.
Changed color
[Easy]
02:07:068 (10) - now combo? This combo a bit so long >_<
fixed~
[Normal]
00:27:260 (4) - spacing ~ ?
fixed~
01:22:195 (1,2,3,4,5) - Yay, 1/4 streams always look SO hard for Normal for me ;_;
So I deleted the 1,2,3,4
oh and after this part 01:23:115 look a bit crazy though
Yeah……Now it‘s like this
[Lunatic]
- Resnap all note ;w;
Fixed~
+ Star

LoweH wrote:

Hi!

Easy
01:12:455 (3) - New combo here
01:50:884 (4) - More precise to 01:49:700 (3)
02:13:384 (1) - Start KIA time
02:22:858 (6) - New combo here

Normal
02:13:384 (1) - Start KIA time

Lunatic
01:13:039 (4) » 01:13:234 (5) - Spacing wrong
02:13:384 (1) - Start KIA time

PS. 02:22:858 (1),(2),(3),(4),(5),(6),(7) this stream is fantastic ^^

All fixed,thanks!
Maybe 02:22:858 (1),(2),(3),(4),(5),(6),(7) stream to prevent some insane player from full combo it at the first try
*Starrr ~

• • Add Touhou to the Source

• • 01:13:818 (2) - Move this circle here 01:14:013 (white tick)
  • 01:14:208 (3) - Start this slider here 01:14:403 (white tick) and end it here 01:15:182 (white tick)
  • 01:49:700 (3) - End this slider here 01:50:490 (white tick)
  • 02:02:332 (3) - End this slider here 02:03:121 (white tick)

• • 02:11:016 (4,5) - Spacing (keep "Distance Snap" active and fix it)
  • 02:12:000 (x) - Add a break
  • 02:18:516 (7,1) - Spacing

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

• • Add Touhou to the Source

[Easy]

• • 01:13:818 (2) - Move this circle here 01:14:013 (white tick)
  • 01:14:208 (3) - Start this slider here 01:14:403 (white tick) and end it here 01:15:182 (white tick)
  • 01:49:700 (3) - End this slider here 01:50:490 (white tick)
  • 02:02:332 (3) - End this slider here 02:03:121 (white tick)

[Lunatic]

• • 02:11:016 (4,5) - Spacing (keep "Distance Snap" active and fix it)
  • 02:12:000 (x) - Add a break
  • 02:18:516 (7,1) - Spacing

thepianist wrote:

Great job on the beatmap! ~Star

Easy/Normal are fine. Normal seems a little harder for a normal, but iono probably just me.

Lunatic
00:33:494 (7) - Perhaps new combo?
00:45:961 (5) - ^
01:49:700 (7) - ^

Just a small opinion on my side
Perhaps have streams such as 01:56:016 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) in lunatic with accelerated spacing be more consistent (ie if 01:37:068 (1,2,3,4) were individual hitcircles use it in the same manner? Or even possibly 01:24:222 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7). [02:21:279 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) if you're feeling evil, but I think that goes into too much.] But it's up to you.) So this way it doesn't stick out as what some people may think as artificially inflating difficulty if it appears in other sections with the same musical motif.

;)Because I'm not that evil so I decide not to make it too hard~ All fixed thanks

samipale wrote:

:oops:

James wrote:

gimme original resolution bg image pls

Lots of thanks to your detailed modding!

Lybydose wrote:

This timing is based on awp's timing for this song, with small changes made to fit your different mp3.

BPM: 128.00 Offset: 1,955 feels better!
BPM: 132.00 Offset: 7,580 feels better!
BPM: 134.00 Offset: 9,398 feels better!
BPM: 137.00 Offset: 11,189 feels better!
BPM: 142.50 Offset: 12,928 feels better!
BPM: 152.00 Offset: 16,284 feels better!
BPM: 154.00 Offset: 22,599 feels better!
BPM: 149.10 Offset: 82,643 I feels a little late,so I change it to 82,636 (but bpm 149.10 truely better than 149.00 )
BPM: 152.00 Offset: 95,497 feels better!

Or if you want to copy it into the .osu (this is for Lunatic):

SPOILER

[TimingPoints]
1955,468.75,4,2,0,100,1,0
7580,454.545454545455,4,2,0,100,1,0
9398,447.761194029851,4,2,0,100,1,0
11189,434.782608695652,4,2,0,100,1,0
12928,421.052631578947,4,2,0,100,1,0
16284,394.736842105263,4,2,0,100,1,0
22599,389.61038961039,4,2,0,100,1,0
39639,-200,4,2,0,100,0,0
40418,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
52106,-200,4,2,0,100,0,0
52886,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
82643,402.414486921529,4,2,0,100,1,1
95497,394.736842105263,4,2,0,100,1,0
109608,-200,4,2,0,100,0,0
110398,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
133391,-50,4,2,0,100,0,1
146023,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0

General:

Delete the .osb file and full submit since your storyboard isn't using it.
deleted
Delete normal-sliderslide.wav since you aren't using Normal hitsounds anywhere.
deleted
soft-sliderslide.wav is bugged and won't open. Is it supposed to be a silent file? Your sliders aren't silent, so it isn't working.
But if I remove this file away,I can hear the slider ball rolling sound again
Comboburst should be a maximum of 500px wide. Yours is 577px.
fixed
Remove "Imperishable Night" from the source (so the source should just be "Touhou"). Remove touhou and lunatic princess from the tags (since they are already in the source and song name) and then add Imperishable Night to the tags if you want.
fixed
Lunatic:
01:14:417 (2) - sounds better if you remove one repeat
01:49:700 (1) - I think this would sound better as a normal speed slider with a repeat on it at 01:49:996
01:52:068 (6) - Remove one repeat from this. The player is going to expect 3 hits on this slider based on the previous few notes.
All fixed~

no-7 wrote:

soft-sliderslide.wav is bugged and won't open. Is it supposed to be a silent file? Your sliders aren't silent, so it isn't working.
But if I remove this file away,I can hear the slider ball rolling sound again

Cyclone wrote:

I talked with peppy about this actually. You may keep the current title, but I wish to see Flight of the Bamboo Cutter in the tags. (This is actually mandatory.)

As far as any other changes are concerned, follow what lybydose said.

Lybydose wrote:

no-7 wrote:

soft-sliderslide.wav is bugged and won't open. Is it supposed to be a silent file? Your sliders aren't silent, so it isn't working.
But if I remove this file away,I can hear the slider ball rolling sound again

Well I can still hear it even with that file in there.

Try replacing it with this one:

[attachment=0:fa07d]soft-sliderslide.rar[/attachment:fa07d]

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO
Thanks for your "NI HAO" and detailed modding~
Blue words are my replies

[General]
1) 00:56:884 ~ 01:08:573 - The breaks a tooooooo long, I suggest you to map from 01:03:120
Maybe a 12 seconds' break is necessary?
2) 01:22:636 ~ 01:35:497 - This kiai doesn't fit at this song
So I changed it to the following part
[Easy]
00:01:017 (1) - Make a same slider like 00:03:830 (3)?
00:16:284 (1) - Add finish at the start of slider?
00:19:441 (5) - ^
00:22:599 (1) - ^
00:24:157 (4) - ^
00:30:391 (3) - ^
00:31:560 (4) - New combo here?
00:37:793 (4) - ^
00:44:027 (4) - ^
00:50:261 (4) - ^
01:15:586 (1) - Add finish at the start of slider?
01:38:654 (5) - New combo?
01:44:970 (5) - ^
01:51:286 (4) - ^
01:57:602 (4) - ^
02:03:918 (4) - ^
02:10:233 (4) - ^
02:16:549 (3) - ^

[Normal]
00:05:236 (4) - New combo?
00:12:502 (5) - ^
00:16:284 (1) - Add a finish at the start of slider?
00:19:441 (1) - ^
00:22:599 (1) - ^
00:25:715 (1) - ^
00:29:222 (2) - Maybe try allign with 1 at the end of slider and 00:29:611 (3) allign with 2?
00:30:391 (4) - Add a finish at the start of slider?
00:34:676 (x) - Add note? Feels empty
01:14:222 (3) - I think clap here doesn't fit, IMO and add a finish at the end of slider

[Lunatic]
00:09:398 (5) - Add a finish at the start of slider?
00:16:284 (1) - ^
00:19:441 (1) - Add a finish?
00:22:599 (1) - ^
00:24:157 (1) - ^
00:25:715 (1) - ^
01:30:684 (3) - New combo?
All of the above fixed
Great song
STAR

wzh0604 wrote:

N难度有陷阱……>_<
L难度果断放弃

1. Timing looks good (well, its awp timing, so It'd have to be good)
2. Really, you should never place beats before the first timing section. It still works fine, but its more convenient this way. What I would do it move the red timing section that is at 00:01:95 to 00:01:017. That should fix that.

Thanks a lot. All fixed~

Doomsday93 wrote:

Hi

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these

1. Timing looks good (well, its awp timing, so It'd have to be good)
2. Really, you should never place beats before the first timing section. It still works fine, but its more convenient this way. What I would do it move the red timing section that is at 00:01:95 to 00:01:017. That should fix that.

[EASY]

Great


[NORMAL]

Map itself is fine, but it seems waaay too hard for a Normal. All those streams make it pretty tough. Perhaps you could remove some of the longer streams to help make it a little easier?

[SAMI'S HARD]
Still a WIP I guess.

00:28:832 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - All these jumps don't make much sense to me. They don't fit the song very well. Perhaps you could remove these and map something else there?
00:35:066 (3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^
01:17:144 (8) - New combo? Since the combo here is really long.
01:18:702 (15) - ^
01:20:261 (18) - ^

[LUNATIC]

Seems fine enough

Nice map, for the most part.

Starred

Doomsday93 wrote:

[SAMI'S HARD]
Still a WIP I guess. yay

00:28:832 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - All these jumps don't make much sense to me. They don't fit the song very well. Perhaps you could remove these and map something else there?
00:35:066 (3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^

Actually I'm not so willing to remove these because this is my first inspiration to do this map;_; but it's really too far to a Hard.I'll make them closer, if more suggestion about these jumps i will consider to change it

01:17:144 (8) - New combo? Since the combo here is really long.
01:18:702 (15) - ^
01:20:261 (18) - ^

it's still WIP :3

soulfear wrote:

May I have a diff?
and I think it woulb be [I].

DJPop wrote:

~Easy~
00:13:770 (6) - move right 1 grid & down 1 grid (Lv3) OR move right 3 grids & down 2 grids (Lv3)
00:36:235 (2) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
00:45:586 (3) - move right 4 grids & down 1 grid (Lv3) ?
01:24:233 (3) - make them symmetry and more smoothly curve
01:30:672 (3) - ^
01:49:707 (3) - make the curve more smoothly

~Normal~
00:09:845 (2) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
01:49:510 (4) - move left & down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:51:286 (1,3) - make them symmetry and more smoothly curve
01:56:023 (5) - clap on 3rd note
02:04:707 (4) - move end point to right side ?

~Lunatic~
00:46:365 (2) - move left 1 grid (Lv3) OR 00:46:754 (3) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
00:52:209 (10) - don't overlap with (1) (make it curve left ?)
01:25:843 (1) - move end point up a bit


+Star

Thanks a lot , fixed

NatsumeRin wrote:

star..太鼓不错.
但是...5个I肯定rank不能的,想都不要想.
看看怎么调整会比较好吧....

orioncomet wrote:

[Easy]
- Where is 2nd timing? Add [BPM: 134, Offset: 9398] - and resnap all note

[sami's Hard]
- I prefer first note should be at/after the first hitnote, so use offset [1017] for 1st offset
- Fix 8th timing to [Offset: 82624] - and resnap all note

Fighto!

dksslqj wrote:

[Easy]
overall +1
00:08:943 - how about add the note?

[Normal]
It's so hard....
how about fix diff name Normal+?

just.

Doomsday93 wrote:

[SAMI'S HARD]

Seems better than it was (mainly because it wasn't finished last time I checked it), and for the most part, its pretty good. I'm still not keen on th jumps like at 00:28:832 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2, etc), but they are not completely unplayable, and if you really want to keep them, I'm not stopping you. Apart from those, I quite like this.

Tonoko wrote:

:)
总体上希望能仔细调教一下slider的头尾点和中点,这有什么意义我也说不清,但是最好尽量斟酌一下.
以后的图里会尽量注意，不过这个图里就……难改了，不好意思Lun
00:10:293 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里只有6个好像怪怪的 这里跟背景音

00:15:454 (1,2,3,1) - 这里似乎应该是3下重节奏再接后面的串 我觉得我这个节奏……也许更好？

个人有个看法:2个kiai前的一节是相对宁静的部分,尝试放些慢点的节奏喂kiai部分作铺垫>< (当然这会伤筋动骨的,所以公主请3思)
……考虑中

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Spread is E H I I I ~ isn't balanced? (Taiko is also included)

Easy:

-- Some of the spinners seem a bit too short to be deemed easy. I know , I'll consider it at my next easy,thanks

01:27:452 (1) - Unsilence the end? Or silence the whole spinner? It sounded odd.done

Normal:

00:02:892 (2) - Silence this tick.done
01:21:040 (1,2,3) - Confusing just after a spinner.deleted
02:24:246 (5) - Delete.done

Hard:

-- Hitsounds are too quiet.
-- More claps and finishes please, whistle gets annoying mid way through the song.
-- Streams are kinda insane... I guess it doesn't matter much.

Taiko:

00:11:525 (21,22,23) - Unsnapped.
01:49:970 (6,7) - Snapped to 1/8 fix this.
01:52:569 (9) - Whistle here.
02:02:602 (40,41) - Snapped to 1/8 fix please.
02:15:233 (6,7) - ^
02:36:932 (72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89) - Song is fading out, taiko sounds stupid here.
02:39:464 (1) - Unnecessary. (Also on 1/8 end it 1/1)

Lunatic:

-- X2 section is rather pointless.

00:03:829 (5) - End on white tick 00:04:298. fixed
01:58:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Stream is at an awkward angle.. fixed
02:14:970 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - New combo for every note isn't necessary.. fixed
02:20:299 (2,3,4) - Following your pattern the new combo's are missing.. fixed
02:21:286 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - New combo's aren't necessary.. fixed
02:22:865 (1,2,3) - Why the 1/4 spacing change?sorry but I don't want it to be too insane
02:23:654 (1,2,3) - ^

+ Star.

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Spread is E H I I I ~ isn't balanced? (Taiko is also included)

Easy:

-- Some of the spinners seem a bit too short to be deemed easy.

01:27:452 (1) - Unsilence the end? Or silence the whole spinner? It sounded odd.

Normal:

00:02:892 (2) - Silence this tick.
01:21:040 (1,2,3) - Confusing just after a spinner.
02:24:246 (5) - Delete.

Hard:

-- Hitsounds are too quiet.
-- More claps and finishes please, whistle gets annoying mid way through the song.
-- Streams are kinda insane... I guess it doesn't matter much.

Taiko:

00:11:525 (21,22,23) - Unsnapped. Really!?I don't think so
01:49:970 (6,7) - Snapped to 1/8 fix this. Is too crazy...
01:52:569 (9) - Whistle here. Here!?...done
02:02:602 (40,41) - Snapped to 1/8 fix please. Aren't you feel strange!?
02:15:233 (6,7) - ^ Ibid
02:36:932 (72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89) - Song is fading out, taiko sounds stupid here.
So you say that ... more whispered to modify it?
02:39:464 (1) - Unnecessary. (Also on 1/8 end it 1/1) Oh ... used to put spin in the final
Lunatic:

-- X2 section is rather pointless.

00:03:829 (5) - End on white tick 00:04:298.
01:58:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Stream is at an awkward angle.
02:14:970 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - New combo for every note isn't necessary.
02:20:299 (2,3,4) - Following your pattern the new combo's are missing.
02:21:286 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - New combo's aren't necessary.
02:22:865 (1,2,3) - Why the 1/4 spacing change?
02:23:654 (1,2,3) - ^

+ Star.

Thank you very much,Lunatic fixed,Normal will be remapped soon~

Lybydose wrote:

delete the blank .osb file and full submit

Easy:

These spinners are a bit too short for the easiest difficulty, and they have notes right after them!

01:27:452 (1) -
01:33:891 (1) -
02:11:812 (1) -

Normal:

This is a bit too difficult for what would be expected of a normal difficulty. The main issue is all those kick sliders, like the parts at 01:52:865 (5,6,7) and 02:03:918 (1,2,3,4,5,6). Also here: 02:10:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6) and here: 02:18:720 (7,1).

00:51:040 (2,3) - this is kind of confusing because the sliders aren't stacking properly

Sections like this can also be hard to hit for normal players: 01:57:602 (1,2,3,4,5,6), especially since the slider velocity is higher than the spacing.

Some of the spinners are a bit short as well, but it's not as bad as Easy.

sami's Hard:

The hitsounds are almost impossible to hear. Increase the volume!

This could really use OD+1

Increase HP Drain slightly?

00:35:066 (3) - it's kind of hard to see this is a slider because it's covered by a hitburst. Try switching the 3 and 4.
all fixed

Lunatic:

00:52:988 (4) - doesn't really seemed synced to anything with the music. Sounds better as just a circle on the white tick. It would probably be best if you also made 00:52:988 (3) a single circle as well.fixed

02:21:286 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - you said you changed the new combos on every note in Shulin's mod post, but they are still here, so change that if you want.fixed

02:13:391 (1,1,1,1) - ^ here toofixed

02:22:865 (1,2,3) - the spacing increase on this stream is really randomfixed

02:23:654 (1,2,3) - ^fixed


TAIKO!!1


00:11:525 (21,22,23) - these notes are not snapped
02:02:635 (40,41) - should be snapped at 1/4, so the 40 should be on the blue tick and the 41 on the red tick
02:15:266 (6,7) - ^ same thing
02:26:023 (1) - why are all the notes completely silent after this point?
all fixed

Shinxyn wrote:

ZUN~

Normal- D: bg image doesn't fit song (nor the easier diff)
D:Houraisan Kaguya's nice pictures...really not much....OMG D: I'll try to solve this
01:12:469 (1) - preferably shorten this by 1/2 (to keep up the slower pace), but no matter, keep the different pace if you want ><
fixed~
Plays... fair, kinda iffy on some of the parts though...what happened to Easy? D:
D: Easy...easy...abandoned....D:

sami's-
00:24:157 (5) - .... eh? new combo this since all the patterns before this only had 4 notes per combo too O.o?
00:52:988 (11,1) - >< switch new combo?
01:22:209 (1) - finish doesn't match this part..
..... too much whistles imo...

Lunatic-
Some of the streams' spacing aren't consistent, no big deal, don't really feel like pointing them out =|
result of remapping Lunatic 8 times(yeah...trully 8 times OMG...As a noob maybe I'm really not good at insane diffs...D:)
D: 2x section D:
02:22:865 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - evil ending xD
XD
This sounds... okay...

D:Hitsounds are terrible?D:....

Reading the older post makes me wonder if this map changed a lot... huh...
Unsure about this map