This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年3月8日 at 20:19:50

Artist: ESTi
Title: Ladymade Star
Source: DJMAX
Tags: Portable technika djpop
BPM: 136
Filesize: 14595kb
Play Time: 02:00
Difficulties Available:

1. DJPop's Technika (5 stars, 523 notes)
2. EZ (2.87 stars, 153 notes)
3. HD (4.91 stars, 355 notes)
4. lepidon's Taiko Oni (5 stars, 502 notes)
5. NM (4.28 stars, 208 notes)

Download: ESTi - Ladymade Star
Download: ESTi - Ladymade Star (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first beatmap> <
and i love this song>w<
Space idol pop in DJMAX Portable2 and DJMAX TECHNIKA =v=
Composed by ESTi
Visualized bY TIV
Vocal by Sanch

redownload it if u download before 3.3

2.19 distance fixed in HD
2.20 NM Style added
2.20 some fixed in HD
2.20 EZ Style addad
2.22 taiko Style addad
2.22 added BG in NM & EZ
2.24 fixed distance and hitsound in each diff
2.24 DJPOP's Technika Style added
2.24 custom hitsound added plz redownload it~
2.28 smaller bg added in HD
3.1 some fix in HD
3.3 bg added in taiko style

ESTi!! and DJ LZY!!

thx ur star nagi=3=

DJ lzy!

hi =)

good song i like it :3

[HD]

-There are many changes in the distance between notes with the same time
for example 00:10:289 - 00:10:510 and 00:10:730 - 00:10:951 same time but much difference in distance
try using a little more "distance snap"
-Try to add another break

in general i can play it without any problem so good luck ;3

ladymade star must give star

Astom wrote:

hi =)

good song i like it :3

[HD]

-There are many changes in the distance between notes with the same time
for example 00:10:289 - 00:10:510 and 00:10:730 - 00:10:951 same time but much difference in distance
try using a little more "distance snap"
-Try to add another break

in general i can play it without any problem so good luck ;3

thank u:33
distance fixed but it's diffcult to add another break0.0..but i will try it:33
thx> <

ZeTia wrote:

ladymade star must give star

thx ur star zetia=w=

LZY GJ!

nice~

WTF~~ Where are the reply?!!!!!!

Good job >w<
Ladymade Star~☆ミ>///<

果断Star...
另外问一句:这是原唱吧,不是从DJMAX里直接提出来的?感觉的DJMAX里的有点不一样..

have your star~

tankms wrote:

果断Star...
另外问一句:这是原唱吧,不是从DJMAX里直接提出来的?感觉的DJMAX里的有点不一样..

恩是OST

Crazy Jay wrote:

have your star~

THANK U :333333

(づ￣ 3￣)づ
中医转职了

STAR.

the mapper asked me star this map TwT

just kiding

nice map

LZY up!!!!!!!!!

我觉得音效还能再顺耳点……（挑骨头中）

魔炮！ （lzy爆点中

tu shi bu cuo
dan wo shi bei bi de

OKAMI！！！！！！！！！！！！

Here's Taiko diff.
It's worth Oni ★X6, so It's mild, not that hard. (but still hard for taiko begginers)

Oh and you can change the name of diff. anyway you want.

Download: ESTi - Ladymade Star (lzy) [lepidon! - Taiko Oni].osu

lepidopodus wrote:

Here's Taiko diff.
It's worth Oni ★X6, so It's mild, not that hard. (but still hard for taiko begginers)

Oh and you can change the name of diff. anyway you want.

thx for ur taiko diff :333

hmm, the map sets are nice, but... the hitsounds come weak, really weak... not the volume, i mean, it's lacking a lot of hitsounds for the soft hitsound set, and the few you have already don't really follow anything well... in other words, add more
You didn't use Distance snap at all it seems... I would suggest you to for your first map...
I can't mod taikooo, though, add "lepidon" to his map's tags (maybe add "taiko", too?)
Set preview point~!

EZ- I'm not sure... theres no distance snap... I could point out spacing inconsistencies from how you placed it... but I'd prefer you used distance snap for the Easy diff at least~~

NM- again, with no distance snap, its kinda inconsistent, but playable...
01:14:260 (3) - new combo?
01:20:436 (1,2) - switch new combos?

HD- hitsounds are a slight bit better here, but still lacking
I'm not so worried about the spacing on this, heck, its actually fairly nice ^^, though new combo to indicate some changes would be nice...
00:19:995 (6,13) - new combo either or both of these?
00:25:068 (5) - new combo? and stack under slider end better (turn off grid snap to do so, or re-place note)
00:26:392 (9,10) - stack under slider end better (turn off grid snap or re-place notes)
01:04:995 (3,4,5,1) - you moved this so the stack ends up on "right spot", correct? but the notes aren't stack on "perfectly"..
01:09:848 (6) - stack under slider end better~
01:38:524 (10) - new combo?
01:44:701 (6,13) - same as 19:995
01:49:774 (5) - same as 25:068

I'm not sure you meant to or didn't know, but you can change the slider velocity (speed) for the map's under the timing panel, which effects the distance snap or hold alt to change distance snap to your liking
I don't mind the custom spacing for NM and HD, but would be better for EZ... needs more hitsounds...
Star for potential~!

Download: ESTi - Ladymade Star.rar


You can change my diff's name to "DJPop's MX" or "DJPop's SC" if you want.

You haven't set a preview point yet, set one

<EZ>
01:44:701 (5) - Bad spacing. Similar problems may exist at other places, like 01:53:304 (1,2,1,1).

<NM>
This map still has some bad spacings
00:21:981 (2) - Remove this clap or add claps at other corresponding notes.
01:21:980 (2) - new combo

<HD>
01:18:010 - Add a note here

star'd. call back for recheck or pubble

HD

01:17:899 (13) - 这里有点违和 改成2连 白线结束好点

Shinxyn wrote:

hmm, the map sets are nice, but... the hitsounds come weak, really weak... not the volume, i mean, it's lacking a lot of hitsounds for the soft hitsound set, and the few you have already don't really follow anything well... in other words, add more
You didn't use Distance snap at all it seems... I would suggest you to for your first map...
I can't mod taikooo, though, add "lepidon" to his map's tags (maybe add "taiko", too?)
Set preview point~!

EZ- I'm not sure... theres no distance snap... I could point out spacing inconsistencies from how you placed it... but I'd prefer you used distance snap for the Easy diff at least~~

NM- again, with no distance snap, its kinda inconsistent, but playable...
01:14:260 (3) - new combo?
01:20:436 (1,2) - switch new combos?

HD- hitsounds are a slight bit better here, but still lacking
I'm not so worried about the spacing on this, heck, its actually fairly nice ^^, though new combo to indicate some changes would be nice...
00:19:995 (6,13) - new combo either or both of these?
00:25:068 (5) - new combo? and stack under slider end better (turn off grid snap to do so, or re-place note)
00:26:392 (9,10) - stack under slider end better (turn off grid snap or re-place notes)
01:04:995 (3,4,5,1) - you moved this so the stack ends up on "right spot", correct? but the notes aren't stack on "perfectly"..
01:09:848 (6) - stack under slider end better~
01:38:524 (10) - new combo?
01:44:701 (6,13) - same as 19:995
01:49:774 (5) - same as 25:068

I'm not sure you meant to or didn't know, but you can change the slider velocity (speed) for the map's under the timing panel, which effects the distance snap or hold alt to change distance snap to your liking
I don't mind the custom spacing for NM and HD, but would be better for EZ... needs more hitsounds...
Star for potential~!

all fixed~~
thx :333

ignorethis wrote:

You haven't set a preview point yet, set one

<EZ>
01:44:701 (5) - Bad spacing. Similar problems may exist at other places, like 01:53:304 (1,2,1,1).

<NM>
This map still has some bad spacings
00:21:981 (2) - Remove this clap or add claps at other corresponding notes.
01:21:980 (2) - new combo

<HD>
01:18:010 - Add a note here

star'd. call back for recheck or pubble

all fixed:3333~~
thank u~~

Just showing this. orz. =/

Download: ESTi - Ladymade Star (lzy) [Ladymade Fuuko].osu

Modded in IRC.

Pubbled

Hi

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these .

1. Timing looks good
2. "DJMAX" does not have to be in the tags and the source. it only needs to be in the source, so delete it from the tags.

[EZ]

Nice

[NM]

Seems fine

[HD]

Some of the jumps seem awkward, but It isn't too bad

[DJPop's Technika]

01:59:701 (1,2,3,4) - Because of the odd stack just before this, I had no idea how this went, and it completely confused me. Perhaps you should space these beats out more so they are clearer to see, since right now, I can't read this part.

I won't pop the protobubble because the fixes are not that serious. Nice map by the way

Starred

Doomsday93 wrote:

[DJPop's Technika]

01:59:701 (1,2,3,4) - Because of the odd stack just before this, I had no idea how this went, and it completely confused me. Perhaps you should space these beats out more so they are clearer to see, since right now, I can't read this part.
Fixed.

Download: ESTi - Ladymade Star (lzy) [DJPop's Technika].osu

[General]
- Here have 2 .osb file delete some of both or both and full submit
- delete "DJMAX" from your TAG It's already on Source
- BG Colour: Black

[EZ]
If you would like to fix them then fix
00:11:833 (2) - spacing
00:33:230 (4) - ^
00:44:701 (4,5) - ^
01:27:274 (3,4,5) - ^
01:44:039 (3,4) - ^
01:57:936 (5) - ^

[NM]
00:31:686 (5) - try remove sound clap at begin of silder and add sound finish
01:49:334 (5) - ^
01:52:863 (5) - ^

[HD]
00:24:627 (4) - try replace sound whistle with finish at begin of silder
00:28:157 (5) - ^
00:31:686 (5) - ^
00:42:274 (1) - remove new combo 00:43:157 (4) - new combo OR 00:43:157 (4) - new combo
00:57:054 (6) - new combo
00:45:804 (1) - remove new combo 00:46:465 (3) - new combo
01:27:495 (6) - new combo
01:49:333 (4) - try replace sound whistle with finish at begin of silder
01:52:863 (5) - ^
01:56:392 (5) - ^
01:58:598 (1) - try sound finish

[DJPop's Technika]
Nice Technika

starrrrrrr Go go

cool diffs name
overall
tags 里不要出现 "DJMAX"(all diffs
circle颜色好相近，不妨改一下（建议
试试position time=[01:04:11]

EZ
[00:16:90] 最好spacing调到和之前一样，向左3格
[00:33:89] 这里加一个spinner，停止在 00:35:65
[00:46:68] 向上一个
[02:00:36] normal finish plz

NM
[00:27:71](4,5) 关掉grid snap，把他们压得更好点
[00:31:24](4,5) ^
[00:31:90] no finish 如果加就加在下一根白线（添加一个note
[00:53:74] 重合不完整
[01:44:70] (6,7)这里6的末尾的小点向上一格，7也是这样，然后7整体向上一格
[02:00:36] normal finish plz

HD
[00:43:37] 向左一格
[01:49:33] 向下一格
good

lepidon's Taiko Oni
[00:08:74] 或许这里也要clap

DJPop's Technika
为什么grid level=1 不知道这种程度的spacing会不会被要求resnap
all in all , good

star

[General]

1. Not all Difficulty's have the same TAGs, please fix (!)
2. Add DJPop and Lepidon in TAGs.
3. Remove ESTi from TAGs, because it's already the artist.
4. Offset 360.

[DJPop's Technika]

00:56:389 (8) - I don't like this slider shape, it looks very ugly. Doesn't fit the sexy map. ):
01:44:698 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make this go the same as 01:37:639 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7). Now it's too much of a mind fuck, because I thought it would go again in the same way as the 1/4 pattern before. But this one goes a different route. And that route is impossible to read.

[HD]

1. Background is too big. (1024 x 768 is max.) Yours has 1229 x 768. Please resize.

00:30:139 (1) - Remove this new combo and..
00:30:580 (2) - ..Add a new combo here instead.
00:56:830 (5) - Add new combo here.
01:16:465 (7) - ^
01:54:848 (1) - Same as at 00:30:139 (1) above.
01:57:716 (1) - Remove new combo.

[NM]

01:46:465 (8) - Add new combo here.
01:47:348 (1) - Remove new combo here.
01:55:289 (1) - ^
01:56:392 (4) - Spacing, too close to (3). Please fix. (!)

[EZ]

1. Decrease Overall Difficulty by one (?)

00:27:051 (5) - Add new combo here.
00:56:830 (1) - Evil jump for an Easy difficulty. You might want to change this.
01:15:801 (1) - Remove new combo.

Star!

LKs wrote:

lepidon's Taiko Oni
[00:08:74] 或许这里也要clap

I put don instead of kat(whistle or clap) on purpose, as there is drum sound didn't appeared before. I don't fix that one now, but if it sound too wierd then I should change that....

Gladi wrote:

[DJPop's Technika]
00:56:389 (8) - I don't like this slider shape, it looks very ugly. Doesn't fit the sexy map. ):
Fixed.
01:44:698 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make this go the same as 01:37:639 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7). Now it's too much of a mind fuck, because I thought it would go again in the same way as the 1/4 pattern before. But this one goes a different route. And that route is impossible to read.
No D:
It's possible, just put the cursor on the middle of them and click.

Download: ESTi - Ladymade Star (lzy) [DJPop's Technika].osu

orioncomet wrote:

[General]
- Here have 2 .osb file delete some of both or both and full submit
- delete "DJMAX" from your TAG It's already on Source
- BG Colour: Black

[EZ]
If you would like to fix them then fix
00:11:833 (2) - spacing
00:33:230 (4) - ^
00:44:701 (4,5) - ^
01:27:274 (3,4,5) - ^
01:44:039 (3,4) - ^
01:57:936 (5) - ^

[NM]
00:31:686 (5) - try remove sound clap at begin of silder and add sound finish
01:49:334 (5) - ^
01:52:863 (5) - ^

[HD]
00:24:627 (4) - try replace sound whistle with finish at begin of silder
00:28:157 (5) - ^
00:31:686 (5) - ^
00:42:274 (1) - remove new combo 00:43:157 (4) - new combo OR 00:43:157 (4) - new combo
00:57:054 (6) - new combo
00:45:804 (1) - remove new combo 00:46:465 (3) - new combo
01:27:495 (6) - new combo
01:49:333 (4) - try replace sound whistle with finish at begin of silder
01:52:863 (5) - ^
01:56:392 (5) - ^
01:58:598 (1) - try sound finish

[DJPop's Technika]
Nice Technika

starrrrrrr Go go

fixed

LKs wrote:

cool diffs name
overall
tags 里不要出现 "DJMAX"(all diffs
circle颜色好相近，不妨改一下（建议
试试position time=[01:04:11]

EZ
[00:16:90] 最好spacing调到和之前一样，向左3格
[00:33:89] 这里加一个spinner，停止在 00:35:65
[00:46:68] 向上一个
[02:00:36] normal finish plz

NM
[00:27:71](4,5) 关掉grid snap，把他们压得更好点
[00:31:24](4,5) ^
[00:31:90] no finish 如果加就加在下一根白线（添加一个note
[00:53:74] 重合不完整
[01:44:70] (6,7)

SPOILER

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这里6的末尾的小点向上一格，7也是这样，然后7整体向上一格
[02:00:36] normal finish plz

HD
[00:43:37] 向左一格
[01:49:33] 向下一格
good

lepidon's Taiko Oni
[00:08:74] 或许这里也要clap

DJPop's Technika
为什么grid level=1 不知道这种程度的spacing会不会被要求resnap
all in all , good

star

fixed.

Gladi wrote:

[General]

1. Not all Difficulty's have the same TAGs, please fix (!)
2. Add DJPop and Lepidon in TAGs.
3. Remove ESTi from TAGs, because it's already the artist.
4. Offset 360.

[DJPop's Technika]

00:56:389 (8) - I don't like this slider shape, it looks very ugly. Doesn't fit the sexy map. ):
01:44:698 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make this go the same as 01:37:639 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7). Now it's too much of a mind fuck, because I thought it would go again in the same way as the 1/4 pattern before. But this one goes a different route. And that route is impossible to read.

[HD]

1. Background is too big. (1024 x 768 is max.) Yours has 1229 x 768. Please resize.

00:30:139 (1) - Remove this new combo and..
00:30:580 (2) - ..Add a new combo here instead.
00:56:830 (5) - Add new combo here.
01:16:465 (7) - ^
01:54:848 (1) - Same as at 00:30:139 (1) above.
01:57:716 (1) - Remove new combo.

[NM]

01:46:465 (8) - Add new combo here.
01:47:348 (1) - Remove new combo here.
01:55:289 (1) - ^
01:56:392 (4) - Spacing, too close to (3). Please fix. (!)

[EZ]

1. Decrease Overall Difficulty by one (?)

00:27:051 (5) - Add new combo here.
00:56:830 (1) - Evil jump for an Easy difficulty. You might want to change this.
01:15:801 (1) - Remove new combo.

Star!

fixed

NM:
00:46:683 (4,5) - spacing? try to move 00:47:345 (5) - 5 grid down for better spacing. At your choice.

Taiko:
where is the background?

abalee wrote:

Taiko:
where is the background?

//Background and Video events
Video,-1400,"YouTube - Ladymade Star (from DJMAX Portable 2)[2].flv"
0,0,"lady1680X1050.jpg"

There was lady1680X1050.jpg, but now it's gone. Should change to ladymade star1.jpg.

abalee wrote:

NM:
00:46:683 (4,5) - spacing? try to move 00:47:345 (5) - 5 grid down for better spacing. At your choice.

Taiko:
where is the background?

fixed

lepidopodus wrote:

abalee wrote:

Taiko:
where is the background?

//Background and Video events
Video,-1400,"YouTube - Ladymade Star (from DJMAX Portable 2)[2].flv"
0,0,"lady1680X1050.jpg"

There was lady1680X1050.jpg, but now it's gone. Should change to ladymade star1.jpg.

done

confirm fixed

[Overall]

Remove file .osb and full submit.

[Difficulties]

[EZ]

I don't like much the spacing on this difficulty, can you do something?

[NM]

00:13:595 (6,7) - Do not silence completely these notes.
01:55:948 (3,4) - Too close.

[HD]

00:12:933 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same here about silenced notes. I suggest to use normal hitsounds with low volume.
00:19:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - ^
00:48:227 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:03:889 (1) - ^
01:10:286 (1) - From here I can't hear good hitsounds, I think the volume of them are too low.

[lepidon's Taiko Oni]

Add the same preview point of the other difficulties.

[DJPop's Technika]

Add the same preview point of the other difficulties.
Add DJPop into the tags.

00:36:095 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Sounds really weird to me.
00:39:624 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
00:43:154 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^

[NM]

00:13:595 (6,7) - Do not silence completely these notes.
01:55:948 (3,4) - Too close.

fixed


[HD]

00:12:933 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same here about silenced notes. I suggest to use normal hitsounds with low volume.
00:19:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - ^
00:48:227 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^

these are custom hisound.. not silenced


01:03:889 (1) - ^
01:10:286 (1) - From here I can't hear good hitsounds, I think the volume of them are too low.

fixed

[lepidon's Taiko Oni]

Add the same preview point of the other difficulties.

done