M4M
[General]
Add "8gatsu 31nichi" to Tags for romanised title?
Just my opinion, you can add more hitsounds positively to follow the instrumental, especially whistles.
[SB]
01:19:448 Maybe 3-times lyric3 appeared a bit delay, so I suppose 01:18:975 would be correct timing to follow vocal.
02:31:731 ^
02:55:826 ^
[Easy]
Rhythm
01:26:535(1) Shorten this spinner at 01:29:369 better because next note is soon after a spinner for the Easy diff.
[Normal]
Placement
01:32:913(2) Replace this slider like this? Current flow is a bit odd for playing.
02:18:975(1) Remove NC better to be consistence with previous part.(01:06:220)
Rhythm
00:51:101(1,2) Sounds a bit weird bacause you ignored the vocal, so try to this rhythm and it would be more suitable to play.
01:09:999(5) Similar suggestion on here. Try to follow the vocal better than instrumental.
01:15:905 Add 1/2 slider on here to follow the vocal?
03:07:637(2) Remove this note better, so next slider looks effective to follow the vocal.
Hit Sound
02:01:968(3) Add whistle at head for pattern.
[Hard]
Placement
00:39:763(1) Bent this slider on reversed way, and the flow would be more fine.
00:58:897(8) Current angle is a bit sharped, so try to be smmetrical with (6) better.
01:05:275(4) NC here to be same as 02:17:558.
01:48:267(5) Curved slider would be better than liner one because this flow would be more seamlessly. e.g.)
02:33:621(5) ^
02:24:645(4) Try to this slider? Just flow suggestion.
Good luck.
[General]
Add "8gatsu 31nichi" to Tags for romanised title?
Just my opinion, you can add more hitsounds positively to follow the instrumental, especially whistles.
[SB]
01:19:448 Maybe 3-times lyric3 appeared a bit delay, so I suppose 01:18:975 would be correct timing to follow vocal.
02:31:731 ^
02:55:826 ^
[Easy]
Rhythm
01:26:535(1) Shorten this spinner at 01:29:369 better because next note is soon after a spinner for the Easy diff.
[Normal]
Placement
01:32:913(2) Replace this slider like this? Current flow is a bit odd for playing.
02:18:975(1) Remove NC better to be consistence with previous part.(01:06:220)
Rhythm
00:51:101(1,2) Sounds a bit weird bacause you ignored the vocal, so try to this rhythm and it would be more suitable to play.
01:09:999(5) Similar suggestion on here. Try to follow the vocal better than instrumental.
01:15:905 Add 1/2 slider on here to follow the vocal?
03:07:637(2) Remove this note better, so next slider looks effective to follow the vocal.
Hit Sound
02:01:968(3) Add whistle at head for pattern.
[Hard]
Placement
00:39:763(1) Bent this slider on reversed way, and the flow would be more fine.
00:58:897(8) Current angle is a bit sharped, so try to be smmetrical with (6) better.
01:05:275(4) NC here to be same as 02:17:558.
01:48:267(5) Curved slider would be better than liner one because this flow would be more seamlessly. e.g.)
02:33:621(5) ^
02:24:645(4) Try to this slider? Just flow suggestion.
Good luck.