This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年2月15日 at 下午 10:07:43

Artist: DECO*27
Title: Hachigatsu Sanjuu Ichinichi feat. Hatsune Miku
Tags: kous 40mP awoko Vocaloid Conti New 8gatsu 31nichi August 31st Birthday 2014
BPM: 127
Filesize: 4465kb
Play Time: 03:18
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.48 stars, 189 notes)
2. Hard (2.63 stars, 376 notes)
3. Normal (1.65 stars, 253 notes)

Download: DECO*27 - Hachigatsu Sanjuu Ichinichi feat. Hatsune Miku
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おめでとう。
maybe it's too late to celebrate...
happy birthday song for you, miku :>

-Mapset-
Easy - done
Normal - done
Hard - done
SB - done by me

hope you enjoy this map ></
我真是個眼殘智障+3級阿qwq...
2nd ranked map!!

大青蛙san重出江湖:OOOOO

沙發

窩不是怪叔叔

逃

不 還是回來坐沙發好了

+U喔

(以上來亂)
之前測的時候 節奏好像是3/4 重音的關係ba ouo

我本來也想幫這首弄SB... 想到最後一段可以飄個盆栽(? 或是音符之類的@u@

也可以試試看一首一首以前MIKU的名曲歌名濺層出來又消失得那種感覺

如果不清楚的話可以看看日本那邊8/31 NICONICO 的留言 看到的時候很感動R QuQ


ㄛ對窩想試試做Hard+ 或Insane... 不過可能會卡因為我超渣derˊˋ 泥可以先繼續

泥如果覺得不太對也可以無視>w>

不過看了一下做的真好Q_Q 真心希望這個泥可以RK

\MIKUMIKUMIKUMIKUMIKUMIKUMIKUMIKUMIKUMIKUMIKUMIKUMIKUMIKUMIKU/ 洗板 拖出去

Tsumetaku wrote:

大青蛙san重出江湖:OOOOO

沙發

窩不是怪叔叔

逃

不 還是回來坐沙發好了

+U喔

(以上來亂)
之前測的時候 節奏好像是3/4 重音的關係ba ouo

我本來也想幫這首弄SB... 想到最後一段可以飄個盆栽(? 或是音符之類的@u@

也可以試試看一首一首以前MIKU的名曲歌名濺層出來又消失得那種感覺

如果不清楚的話可以看看日本那邊8/31 NICONICO 的留言 看到的時候很感動R QuQ


ㄛ對窩想試試做Hard+ 或Insane... 不過可能會卡因為我超渣derˊˋ 泥可以先繼續

泥如果覺得不太對也可以無視>w>

不過看了一下做的真好Q_Q 真心希望這個泥可以RK

\MIKUMIKUMIKUMIKUMIKUMIKUMIKUMIKUMIKUMIKUMIKUMIKUMIKUMIKUMIKU/ 洗板 拖出去

好的我會試試看其他更多的設計 ww
因為目前對SB還不是很了解阿阿阿...(攤

GD的部分是很樂意阿 :3 只要不要overmap什麼都好 (欸你
謝謝你的支持喔~一直都很喜歡miku的歌想不到DECO居然出了初音的生日歌
聽了很久果斷還是做了 XDDD 只可惜在音效上好像沒辦法做太多的變化可能會有點無趣

也誠心希望這手可以rank不過坑了好多張圖...
會盡力加油的

HiHi // From PM!





Sorry for poor modding orz
GL~

Karia wrote:

HiHi // From PM!

General

1. This is very silent song. So mute-sliderside is better to hear imo have add mut-sliderslide in the data, but not used...
2. Hard : End KIAI time at 03:09:527 plz.

ok i change after some time XD

Easy

1. 00:04:330 (3) - Make the same shape like (1)? looks better I think ok
2. 00:18:503 (1) - Too short spin in Easy diff. Change it into 2/1 slider plz fixed
3. 00:24:172 (6,7) - change into 2/1 slider like others same rhythm plz, don't want to change :<
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:39:763 (4) - looks good the symmetric pattern. But,,00:40:235 this beat is really surely strong..So this rhythm is better imo.. ok :3
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:53:936 (1,2) - the vocal is continuous. So 2/1 slider is better I think. (I can't explain exactly lol) still want some change
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:55:353 (2,3) - Same as above ^
7. 00:56:771 (3) - The vocal is surely 3 beats. So 1/1 slider and note is better imo (or 1/1 repeat slider match with the next slider) okay
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:21:810 (1,2) - swap the NC
9. 01:26:535 (1) - End at 01:30:787 and check out the letterbox all diff oh,ok
10. 01:31:731 (1) - Delete? nope, there is a little bit sound here..
11. 02:26:062 (5,6) - 02:26:062 - this beat is strong, and 02:26:535 - this beat is very weak and 02:27:479 - this beat is strong again. So I mean, Try this. Better with music imo. sure :>
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 02:37:873 (1) - Not fit spin I think. Delete this and add the something plz you are right QAQ
13. 02:40:235 (1) - from this, 55% volume plz. (to kiai's end) ok
14. 03:02:913 (4) - Make more smooth plz ok~
15. 03:09:999 (1) - volume 30% ^
16. 03:15:668 - volume 20% ^
    
    SPOILER

    

Normal

1. 00:18:503 (1) - Same as Easy ok
2. 00:24:645 (8) - two 1/1 note plz prefer this pattern
3. 00:39:290 (4,5,6) - This is better with vocal imo ahh...though NM should follow vocal, but i still want to follow rhythm :3
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:53:936 (1,2,3) - Normal players feel strange cuz the vocal is continuous. Try this rhythm just deliberate..
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:04:566 (2) - delete nope
6. 01:27:007 (1) - end at 01:30:787 fixed
7. 01:31:731 (1) - Delete? ^as Easy
8. 01:51:574 (4,5) - try this ok
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:55:590 (2) - Actually, this head has no strong beat. (tail is more strong... ;w;) This is better imo don't want to change..
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 02:00:550 (1) - change into a note nope
11. 02:38:818 (1) - Too short in Normal ;w; fixed ;w;
12. 02:42:125 (4) - NC ok
13. 03:06:456 (5,1) - Try this rhythm think a little weird sorry QAQ
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 03:14:251 (5) - Easy is 1/1 repeat slider here. But why 2/1 slider here QwQ 3 notes plz oops...you are right,but the 1/2 slider iver here looks very fit ;w;

Hard

1. 00:02:912 (1,2) - Two 1/2 slider is better imo don't think so :<
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:25:117 (6,7) - slider is better I think [color=#FF0000]it's deliberate :>
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:47:794 (5) - 1/1 slider for consistency nope..since the background sound
4. 01:26:535 (1,1) - Same as other diffs ok, thx ><
5. 01:56:298 (4) - try this yeah :3
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:07:164 (3) - very little overlap..more overlapping this or separating is better imo xD you are right, but i have no idea to change xD
7. 02:17:558 (3) - NC here and 02:18:503 (1) - delete this NC ok
8. 02:20:393 (8) - NC ^
9. 02:36:928 (6) - Same as above looks not very fit..
10. 03:09:527 (8) - delete the whistle like E,N plz i think it's fit here :<

Sorry for poor modding orz
GL~

your mod is very detailed, not poor modding, it's terrific ><!!
thanks for modding too!!

From in-game request.

Red : Must fix.
Bold : I'm not really sure, but you should fix.

[General]
you have three .osb file, delete the wrong two, please.

[Easy]
Wow you put stack in Easy. O_O

00:15:668 (2) blanket with (1).
00:19:920 (1) it's too short for newbie to reaction after spinner, you have some ways to fix this: delete spinner and change to slider, or delete this slider and add slider on 00:20:393. Just like this:
00:48:267 (1,2,3) can blanket better.
00:58:188 (6) why don't let it blanket? I think it looks great.
01:49:212 (1) make the fourth anchor more curve to blanket better with (2).
02:27:952 (7) can blanket better with (6).

[Normal]
I hope it can change to CS4.

00:07:164 (7,8) change to a reverse slider on 00:07:637 heard better.
00:19:920 (1) same as Easy
02:40:235 (1) ^

[Hard]
I hope it can change to CS5.

00:56:771 (1,2,3,4,5) Change to a star jump looks great.
00:59:133 (8) use the same slider as (6)?
01:22:991 (2) fix blanket.
01:53:464 (9) move to x 480 y 176? It's more parallel with (8).
01:56:771 (5) why don't let the anchor move down a bit and blanket (4)? It looks great!
02:40:235 this part should let the distance farther or increase the SV, it matches the rhythm better.


Good map, hope it rank on 2015/08/31.
Good luck.

Hi 我是从你的queue中冒出来的gorgon大叔>.O
我不怎么听Vocal的歌曲啊。所以这个mod不是个好mod。如果你认为我的mod没有帮助，请不要给我KUDOwO
实际上我感觉可以从你的图里学到一些摆EZ，NM的技巧。我摆的图简直丑QAQ
祝你的图早日RANK OwO

hi there!
mod from my queue.
might be rather short cause I've got much more requests than expected ;-;

I'm just making suggestions, feel free to disagree!

General

1. You need some hitsounds, I barely hear any!
   maybe ask around in #modhelp for someone who's good with hitsounds
   I'd try to help, but I suck with them myself, so.. sorry. xD
2. you need a break somewhere. low bpm or not, more than 3 minutes without some time for re-adjustment isn't good to play, especially in easier diffs!

Easy
looks okay overall, I think you need to work a bit on some movements/flow. it should be smoother, so beginner players can focus on rhythm and don't get confused with "tricky" patterns. I'm especially talking about back-forth-stacking, cause that movement is reaaally unnatural. so -

1. I'd prefer if you at least decrease the amount of back-forth-stacks, cause they are unnecessarily hard to read.
   also, I don't think it matches the song that well. it's so calm and relaxing, abrupt movement doesn't match with that, does it?
   I know it sucks to remove something "major" of your diff, but it's worth it, if the diff becomes more enjoyable for beginners to play!
2. 00:09:054 (2,3) - example of movement you can improve slightly. just take a look here -
   heeeeeereeeee ~

   
   red = movement right now
   green = most natural movement, easy to read, easy to play, begnninners could focus on rhythm instead of concentrating on where to move
   solution - just move 3+following objects slightly further to the left
   example

   
3. 00:12:834 (7,1,2) - wow, this looks so crowded. how about refining the shape, so 2+3 banket each other perfectly?
   like this

   
   maybe just move the pattern more upwards, so it's not offscreen
4. 00:17:086 (1) - the recovery time after this spinner is waaaay too short for the Easy diff! you could replace the spinner with a slider, tho. that fits much better imo -
   
5. 00:27:007 (2,3,4) - instead of stacking 4 below 2's tail stack it below 2's head? that's easier to read and improves the flow by a lot!
6. 00:53:936 (1) - move this further to the left, so it's easier to move there from 00:52:519 (6) - . maybe around 104|228?
7. 01:03:857 (1) - how about playing this slightly differently, so the movemen to the next object is smoother?
   example

   
   I know, blankets look awesome, but flow is more important in Easy. ;-; at least that's what I think..
8. 01:05:275 (2,3,4) - just an alternative to get rid of the back-forth-stack
   right here >w<

   
   it's optional ofcourse!

Normal
plays okay, too. overall this diff is a little too close to Easy. because flow is a looot better here it's barely any difference.
you should alternate some rhythms and use some more cirlces, maybe. cause they are harder to catch :3

1. diff settings are close to Easy, you could
   increase HP to 4
   increase AR to 5
   increase OD to 4.5 or 5
   your spread gets better balanced that way, too
2. 00:02:912 (1,2) - first example: you ignore some beat here, this rhythm matches as well and looks more fun to play (to me) -
   
   if you're going to change some pattern you might want to think about increasing DS to 1.4. that's rather drastic change, but that definitely improves readability, cause objects won't overlap then. rhythms like the one above become more fun to play, tho, because you have to move more :3
   think about it!
3. 00:08:582 (1) - to add some variety consider replacing some of these sliders (there are quite a lot of them) with two circles! it'll be more fun to play, I promise! c:
4. 00:16:377 - add a cirlce here? the beat's well audiable, I'd expect one
5. 00:17:086 (1) - similar to Easy diff.. I'm sure you can think of some nice rhythm to match the music way better than a spinner! example -
   
6. 00:32:204 (3,4,5) - 4 looks like it wants to be blanketed by 3 ;-; how about this?
   screen

   
7. 00:43:070 (2,4) - make sure stacks like this are perfect, it immediately catches the eye if it's off by just a pixel!
8. 01:20:629 (7) - mentioned this before, please replace with two circles!
   sliderends on the downbeat usually don't play that well, cause sliderends have the least impact on gameplay while the strongest/loudest beats often are on the downbeat

whelp, I'm getting a headache. x-x gotta stop here, hope I could help even if I don't mod Hard ;n;
Good luck to you!
*squee*

Squirrel wrote:

hi there!
mod from my queue.
might be rather short cause I've got much more requests than expected ;-;

I'm just making suggestions, feel free to disagree!

General

1. You need some hitsounds, I barely hear any!
   maybe ask around in #modhelp for someone who's good with hitsounds
   I'd try to help, but I suck with them myself, so.. sorry. xD okay,i'll try :3
2. you need a break somewhere. low bpm or not, more than 3 minutes without some time for re-adjustment isn't good to play, especially in easier diffs!

but there is really no time to break..

Easy
looks okay overall, I think you need to work a bit on some movements/flow. it should be smoother, so beginner players can focus on rhythm and don't get confused with "tricky" patterns. I'm especially talking about back-forth-stacking, cause that movement is reaaally unnatural. so -

1. I'd prefer if you at least decrease the amount of back-forth-stacks, cause they are unnecessarily hard to read.
   also, I don't think it matches the song that well. it's so calm and relaxing, abrupt movement doesn't match with that, does it?
   I know it sucks to remove something "major" of your diff, but it's worth it, if the diff becomes more enjoyable for beginners to play! hmm...but i think it's "Style", not must to follow rules too much ><
2. 00:09:054 (2,3) - example of movement you can improve slightly. just take a look here -
   heeeeeereeeee ~

   
   red = movement right now
   green = most natural movement, easy to read, easy to play, begnninners could focus on rhythm instead of concentrating on where to move
   solution - just move 3+following objects slightly further to the left
   example

   
   ^as i said above
3. 00:12:834 (7,1,2) - wow, this looks so crowded. how about refining the shape, so 2+3 banket each other perfectly?
   like this

   
   maybe just move the pattern more upwards, so it's not offscreen it's deliberate
4. 00:17:086 (1) - the recovery time after this spinner is waaaay too short for the Easy diff! you could replace the spinner with a slider, tho. that fits much better imo - oh...i think it's ok right now
   
5. 00:27:007 (2,3,4) - instead of stacking 4 below 2's tail stack it below 2's head? that's easier to read and improves the flow by a lot!
   oops, but how can i fix the next slider...
6. 00:53:936 (1) - move this further to the left, so it's easier to move there from 00:52:519 (6) - . maybe around 104|228? nope..
7. 01:03:857 (1) - how about playing this slightly differently, so the movemen to the next object is smoother?
   example

   
   I know, blankets look awesome, but flow is more important in Easy. ;-; at least that's what I think.. sorry...prefer this pattern...
8. 01:05:275 (2,3,4) - just an alternative to get rid of the back-forth-stack
   right here >w<

   
   it's optional ofcourse!

nope ><

Normal
plays okay, too. overall this diff is a little too close to Easy. because flow is a looot better here it's barely any difference.
you should alternate some rhythms and use some more cirlces, maybe. cause they are harder to catch :3

1. diff settings are close to Easy, you could
   increase HP to 4
   increase AR to 5
   increase OD to 4.5 or 5 only chose this one~
   your spread gets better balanced that way, too
2. 00:02:912 (1,2) - first example: you ignore some beat here, this rhythm matches as well and looks more fun to play (to me) -
   
   if you're going to change some pattern you might want to think about increasing DS to 1.4. that's rather drastic change, but that definitely improves readability, cause objects won't overlap then. rhythms like the one above become more fun to play, tho, because you have to move more :3
   think about it! oh...i just like this temple :<, but i think you are right!
3. 00:08:582 (1) - to add some variety consider replacing some of these sliders (there are quite a lot of them) with two circles! it'll be more fun to play, I promise! c: but it's Normal...too many circle may be too hard for beginner to play
4. 00:16:377 - add a cirlce here? the beat's well audiable, I'd expect one but if i added a circle here, i really don't know where i can put the circle...
5. 00:17:086 (1) - similar to Easy diff.. I'm sure you can think of some nice rhythm to match the music way better than a spinner! example -
   hmm...i just don't know what to fix the distance there, maybe your suggestion is right though...
6. 00:32:204 (3,4,5) - 4 looks like it wants to be blanketed by 3 ;-; how about this?
   screen

   
   i don't want to add anymore stack...
7. 00:43:070 (2,4) - make sure stacks like this are perfect, it immediately catches the eye if it's off by just a pixel! but it's already very perfect i think...maybe it can be bent, but i still want to remain the same
8. 01:20:629 (7) - mentioned this before, please replace with two circles!
   sliderends on the downbeat usually don't play that well, cause sliderends have the least impact on gameplay while the strongest/loudest beats often are on the downbeat

don't want to change...

whelp, I'm getting a headache. x-x gotta stop here, hope I could help even if I don't mod Hard ;n;
Good luck to you!
*squee*

anyway, thanks for your modding!!
you've worked hard

hi
just shxt nazi mod ww

[H]
00:03:149 (2) - end x152y244
00:06:220 (8) - end point down 1 to flow into (9) more?
00:12:361 (4,5,6) - maybe increase spacing? slowdown feels kinda odd when playing..w
00:17:086 (7) - maybe make this slider without red point
00:23:700 (3) - x228y248, end x320y244
00:28:424 (1) - http://puu.sh/c9UAC/a785750603.jpg maybe more like (for flow)?
00:29:842 (4) - make end flow into (5) better
00:44:015 (4) - end point right 1
00:44:960 (7,1) - odd flow feeling imo
00:50:157 (4) - x288y240
01:06:692 (1) - end left1
01:08:109 (4) - end down1
01:20:865 (4) - end maybe up1
01:35:038 (3) - slider tail is maybe too short '.'
02:00:550 (1) - red point right2up1
02:06:220 (1) - maybe get first part of curve to blanket 3?
02:25:353 (5) - end down1
02:29:842 (3) - x-1/2 y-1/2
02:30:314 (4) - end right1
02:42:598 (3) - end right1
03:09:999 (1) - middle point right1

mod other diff later

From PM

[General]
SB開頭要不要把bg黑掉啊 直接進SB有點突然

[E]
00:15:668 (2) - 和1靠的太近了 沒必要窩在左下半屏來擺

[N]
00:58:897 (8) - 重音在slider尾還是有點不舒服 用circle就夠了吧
01:18:031 (3) - 末端出屏
03:11:416 (2) - 也是有點近 不過還能接受

[H]
00:05:983 (7) - 結合後面來看這裡應該nc的
00:29:842 (4) - 感覺3/4不是很有意義 後面00:40:235 (2) - 這裡vocal有變化還可以 這裡就……
00:40:235 (2) - ^ 啊不過看你都是這麼放的 那就算了 不要在意
01:49:212 (4) - 這裡nc 後面跟著這裡也亂了
03:14:960 (7) - 同normal 這裡我也是建議去掉slider尾 在那裡直接下一個circle

圖不錯 給SB點個贊 star

updated~!!

General: Add 'Vocaloid' to tags





Overall: This is a really good mapset, I hope it gets ranked soon.

Yuthuil wrote:

General: Add 'Vocaloid' to tags okay

Hard:

00:31:259 (1,2) - try a blanket here it's already blanket i think..

00:32:676 (4) - I think this would be good stacked with 00:31:259 (1) - 's tail , if applied then rearrange following objects nope, want to remain intact

00:34:094 (1) - I dont think you should use a 1/1 slider here, try not to only follow instrument...? 00:34:566 here is a better place to use that slider imo i don't think so, sorry

00:50:157 (4,5) - try to blanket these two change a little bit

00:56:771 (1,2,3,4) - feels a bit random, even though I know you're not mapping vocals, try map both at once still prefer this pattern

00:57:716 (5) - end this here 00:58:070 and move 00:58:424 (6) - 00:58:188 here, it feels better imo and make 6 a 1/1? okay~

01:06:692 (1,2) - blanket properly fixed

01:22:283 (1,2) - ^ ^

01:51:338 (4) - I think NC here is better changed

02:07:164 (3) - move x332 y184 okay...i finally change my mind..distance ;w;

02:07:164 (3) - try a blanket triangle pattern? not really understand..

02:09:763 (2,3,4,5) - ^ ^

02:21:101 (3) - would prefer an NC here.. not think so

02:36:928 (6) - move x368 y204 and why not try blanket 02:35:983 (4) - r with six? slider blankets would be diff from usual just want to keep the distance...it's my persistence

02:52:519 (8) - create small overlap with 02:52:991 (1) - ? this would not only increase difficulty but would keep it constant nope, i think overlap there not looks well...

03:04:330 (1) - a reverse here feels too random but i think it's fit there ><

03:05:747 (3) - ^ ^

03:07:164 (1) - blanket with 03:06:456 (4) - ? nope, it's fine now

Normal:

OD 3 or 4? since this diff's star is almost same as Easy, so i think 5 is nice

00:13:306 (7) - better placement maybe..confusing for normal but when it's time to hit (7) the 00:12:125 (5)'s locus has been disappear

00:21:101 (3) - delete note perhaps, I know there's a beat there but since it's normal it sounds okay with the absence of it i think it's fit here...

00:26:771 (3) - ^ ^

00:29:133 (6) - would be great if you moved it 00:29:369, feels way better to follow instrument and vocal but the rhythm in this diff is almost the same rhythm like this ><

00:38:109 (2) - delete ? nope

00:56:535 add a note here? to carry off from before hmm...but i think it's not necessary..

01:08:818 (3) - NC here want to remain intact

01:11:653 (2) - the rhythm would be better if it was 01:11:889 here imo but the rhythm over there is regular

01:17:322 (2) - move to x104 y280, flow would be better...im- in my opinion change a little

01:26:062 (8) - for emphasis here, why not use three hitcircles instead, it feels better to me as well! changed~

01:36:928 (9) - fix, it doesn't really follow instruments or vocals, two circles here would feel better don't think so

01:55:590 (2) - move 01:55:826 ^same reason as above

02:05:747 (8,1) - blanket properly fixed

02:08:346 (5) - circle would be better here, it emphasizes the abrupt break in her voice more yeah, but the next one is follow background sound

02:28:424 (2,3) - blanket okay

02:42:598 (2,3) - ^ ^

02:58:188 (5) - remove grid snap and make this completely opposite to 02:57:716 (4) - , its kind of lower not really understand..

03:07:637 (2) - suggestion - remove? I prefer personally but if you like it then keep sorry

03:12:834 (4,5) - blanket better. and maybe make 5 follow the vocals okay~

Easy:

OD 2? wow why not try getting that star rating to below 1.5 nope ><, and i have tried orz

00:14:251 (1,2) - fix blanket here fixed maybe

00:24:172 (6) - clone this of 00:22:755 (4) - just think it's okay ><

00:49:684 (3,5) - try not to do this in easy. I remember when I was a beginner i helplessly tried to grab the tail of what you'd call slider 5 in this case oops...but i think it's a good pattern

00:58:188 (7,8) - fix blanket okay

01:08:109 (5) - try shorten this nope

01:35:038 (5,6,7) - don't do this in easy ok,i have change my mind

01:46:850 (5) - dont hide this under the slider tail fixed

02:20:393 (5,6) - blanket this nope, it'll be overlap 02:19:448 (4)

02:32:204 (5) - don't hide fixed

02:37:873 (5,6,7) - how about a smiley face? >:) good idea!! but i still want to keep the 02:38:818 (7,1) like this

02:44:487 (4,5) - blanket these two pro want to remain intact

02:49:212 (4) - dont hide, but since it's the last chorus, maybe? anyways your choice it's very hard to fixed here, so...

03:04:330 (1,2) - blanket these two pro, like this one is epic 03:05:275 (2,3) - but i think it's already very perfect

Overall: This is a really good mapset, I hope it gets ranked soon.

thanks for your diligently mod it's helpful!

Sorry for late~



[General]

• 
  In storyboard, this lycris is change to 2 enter (is ugly if this lycris about image Miku)
  
  SPOILER

  

[Easy]

• 
  OD -1
  00:35:511 (6) - blanket
  00:56:771 (5) - NC (New Combo)
  00:57:716 (6) - blanket

[Normal]

• 
  AR +1 and OD -1
  00:13:306 (7) -
  SPOILER

  
  01:23:700 (4) - NC (New Combo)
  01:40:235 (5) - NC (New Combo)

[Hard]

• 
  AR +0,5 or 1
  Is perfect diff, i like this~ ><

Sorry if my mod is bad~ (NO KDS if not change all)

Good Luck~

Hi, bigfrog! requested via PM!

Nice song btw~

I think that's all i can mod for now, great song!
Good Luck, frog :3/

EASY

00:02:912 (1,2) - Do it like this to improve flow


00:11:889 (5) - Quite unsure about stacking like this for easy

00:19:920 (1) - Cannot start so early. Let people find their cursors

00:27:952 (3) - Stacking isn't recommended for easy, and it also makes the flow really bad

00:49:212 (2,3) - The flow leads to (3) before (2). High chances are they will click (3) first. Change the arrangement

00:58:188 (7) - Move it higher for better flow

01:57:716 (4,5) - They will click (5) before (4). Rearrange the notes

02:01:968 (3,4) - Make these parallel. They don't have the same perfect gradient

02:44:487 (4) - Curve a bit more

STORY BOARD

Could jya fade in and out on all the images? well, at least miku :> And the first date image. Other than that lyric line that was overlapping miku, SB is fine

Wheee~

I might come back

Forum PM

Easy

00:02:912 - 01:03:857 - no hitsounds at all, this is not good, there should at least be some element of hitsounds for effects, or else it is poorly hitsounded
00:19:920 (1) - honestly too quick after a spinner for Easy, I don't think this would be really tolerated
00:29:842 (5,1) - can you improve the blanket here?
01:31:731 - 02:16:141 - no hitsounds at all
02:44:487 (4,5) - blanket their curve

The lack of hitsounds for most part of the song makes it empty and incomplete. I am sure you can find a custom hitsound to fit the bell which you can hear at parts like 01:49:212

Normal

00:02:912 - 01:03:857 - lack of hitsounds again, I don't want to repeat my explaination
00:12:125 (5,6,7,8) - the flow between 00:12:125 (5,6) is awkward, especially when 00:12:834 (6,7) are circles and they move downwards after the slider was already tilted down, a clockwise triangle instead of the current anti-clockwise one would be better movement
00:56:771 (5,7) - can you make them parallel to each other
01:19:920 (6) - NC here
01:21:338 (1) - remove NC
01:22:283 (3) - NC
01:31:731 - 02:16:141 - no hitsounds at all
02:27:952 (1,2) - I always found flow like this to be weird, because of the repeated curve movement caused by putting them like this
02:34:566 (1,2) - blanket them
02:37:401 (5,6) - ^
02:38:818 (6,1) - ^

Once again about the hitsounds. The movement in Normal isn't really very smooth in some parts, mostly in the verses

Hard

00:02:912 - 01:03:857 - no hitsounds at all
00:08:109 (7) - shift the slider, it can look better in the patter, as well as make the flow smoother:
01:09:527 (6) - NC
01:13:779 (4) - NC
01:15:196 (7) - NC for more matching and consistent patterns for the different phrases in the chorus
01:25:117 (7) - NC
01:31:731 - 02:16:141 - no hitsounds at all
02:10:472 (5) - make it have the same spacing from 02:09:763 (2,3) like how 02:10:235 (4) is spaced from them
03:12:834 (5) - NC here, the music here starts to reduce in intensity

The whole mapset really needs more hitsounding, it is a soft and mellow song, but hitsounds are still important, and can even help amplify the effect.

Good Luck

neonat wrote:

Forum PM

Easy

00:02:912 - 01:03:857 - no hitsounds at all, this is not good, there should at least be some element of hitsounds for effects, or else it is poorly hitsounded okay, i'll try to find it
00:19:920 (1) - honestly too quick after a spinner for Easy, I don't think this would be really tolerated hmm...okay, i have made the spinner shorter than before...
00:29:842 (5,1) - can you improve the blanket here? all blanket? i just want to a little part of this slider...
01:31:731 - 02:16:141 - no hitsounds at all okay
02:44:487 (4,5) - blanket their curve it'll overlap 02:45:905 (5)

The lack of hitsounds for most part of the song makes it empty and incomplete. I am sure you can find a custom hitsound to fit the bell which you can hear at parts like 01:49:212

Normal

00:02:912 - 01:03:857 - lack of hitsounds again, I don't want to repeat my explaination
00:12:125 (5,6,7,8) - the flow between 00:12:125 (5,6) is awkward, especially when 00:12:834 (6,7) are circles and they move downwards after the slider was already tilted down, a clockwise triangle instead of the current anti-clockwise one would be better movement totally fixed
00:56:771 (5,7) - can you make them parallel to each other can't find the object you said
01:19:920 (6) - NC here ok
01:21:338 (1) - remove NC ^
01:22:283 (3) - NC ^
01:31:731 - 02:16:141 - no hitsounds at all
02:27:952 (1,2) - I always found flow like this to be weird, because of the repeated curve movement caused by putting them like this i think it's nice ><
02:34:566 (1,2) - blanket them nope
02:37:401 (5,6) - ^ have been blanket very perfect i think...
02:38:818 (6,1) - ^ ^

Once again about the hitsounds. The movement in Normal isn't really very smooth in some parts, mostly in the verses
it might because it's the diff between easy and hard, so i just can make the object between easy and hard...
i'll consider to remake normal

Hard

00:02:912 - 01:03:857 - no hitsounds at all
00:08:109 (7) - shift the slider, it can look better in the patter, as well as make the flow smoother:

SPOILER

still want to keep the distance..
01:09:527 (6) - NC
01:13:779 (4) - NC
01:15:196 (7) - NC for more matching and consistent patterns for the different phrases in the chorus
01:25:117 (7) - NC above all add
01:31:731 - 02:16:141 - no hitsounds at all
02:10:472 (5) - make it have the same spacing from 02:09:763 (2,3) like how 02:10:235 (4) is spaced from them okay
03:12:834 (5) - NC here, the music here starts to reduce in intensity okay~

The whole mapset really needs more hitsounding, it is a soft and mellow song, but hitsounds are still important, and can even help amplify the effect.

really, i should try to do what you said...
since you mention it many times

Good Luck

thanks for modding ><
feel very grateful~

Hi

[General]

Hitsound:

• 
  this need add more hitsound, very lack hitsound, let me give tips for you

1. 00:02:912 at 00:19:920 you have add whistle patten this thing http://puu.sh/cP4v6/25dfb8da2b.jpg for every pattern, expect 00:07:164 (5,6,7) and 00:12:361 (4,5,6) this thing you need add whistle every 1/1 if you do that would be so nice for listen and play.
2. 00:19:920 at 00:59:605 - add whistle only white tick long like you did pattern in 01:03:857 at 01:25:117
3. 01:31:731 at 02:11:416 - ^ same
4. 03:09:999 at 03:15:196 - ^ same

[Hard]

Gameplay:

1. 00:18:503 (1) - this spinner is very small, not really fine for this diff, remove this spinner, add slider long 1/1 begin and end 00:19:448 or add 1 note in
2. 00:18:503, this spinner is useless IMO
3. 00:24:645 (5,6) - 00:23:464 (2,3) this part do blanket, but this part don't ?
4. 00:41:180 (5) - for me look un-symentrical, the second point need grid 1 down, and forth point need grid 1 right and final point need grid 1 right and 1 down so this will perfect symentrical (nazi)
5. 00:52:046 (3) - the second point need grid 1 up to pefect blanket with 00:51:810 (2)
6. 01:09:527 at 01:15:196 - this part is inconsistency combo color there need remove new combo and new combo, they are :
   - > 01:10:944 (1)
   - > 01:13:779 (1)
   - > 01:16:613 (1)
   - > 01:18:031 (7,8,9,10,1) - put new combo in (7) and remove new combo in (1)
   - > 01:20:865 (8,9,10,1) - new combo in (8) and remove new combo in (1)
   - > 01:23:700 (4,5,6,1) - new combo in (4) and remove new combo in (1)
   - > 01:36:456 (1) - remove new combo
   - > 01:42:125 (1) - remove new combo
   - > 01:47:794 (1) - remove new combo
   - > 01:51:338 (1,2,3) - remove new combo in (1) and new combo in (3)
   this part could consistency because you did pattern in 01:54:881 at 02:11:416 and many more pls recheck this pattern
7. 01:22:283 (1) - this is off blanket with 01:22:991 (2)
8. 01:23:700 (4) - Need NC same explain before
9. 01:53:464 (6) - try this ryhthm http://puu.sh/cP5JB/63d806968d.jpg this is better because follow piano IMO
10. 02:04:802 (4) - this is same happened in 01:53:464 (6)

[Normal]

Song Setup:

1. Od need -1 or -2 for spread with hard

Gameplay:

1. 00:17:086 (1,1) - very close for this normal, the spinner need reduce length, end in 00:18:975
2. 00:33:621 (1,2) - you don't have NC in (1) because (2) remove new combo (1) and nc (2) is nice like you did pattern in 00:45:196 (5,1)
3. 00:36:928 (1,2,3) - (1) shape is different from (3), not try same shape?
4. 00:48:267 (1,3) - shape very different
5. 01:40:235 (1,2) - remove new combo (1) and nc (2)
6. 01:52:519 (5) - this could NC for consistency
7. 02:01:023 (2,3) - shape different
8. 02:18:975 (5,1) - new combo in (5) and remove new combo in (1)
9. 02:21:810 (4,1) - new combo in (4) and remove new combo in (1)
10. 02:24:645 (4,1) - new combo in (4) and remove new combo in (1)
11. 02:30:314 (5,6,1) - new combo in (5) and remove new combo in (1)
12. 02:33:621 (4,5,1) - new combo in (4) and remove new combo in (1)
13. 02:35:983 (3) - nc
14. 02:38:818 (6) - NC I know is alone but could fix consistency your style pattern
15. 02:44:487 (5) - Missing NC
16. 02:52:991 (5) - ^ same
17. 02:57:716 (1) - remove new combo and 02:58:661 (3) - put new combo and 03:00:078 (1) remove new combo http://puu.sh/cP78P/c917b3822c.jpg~
18. 03:12:834 (4) - NC

[Easy]

Gameplay:

1. 00:17:086 (1) - not sure is fine, very small and harder for this diff, talk bats or qats
2. 00:12:834 (7) - put new combo and 00:14:251 (1) - remove new combo
3. 00:56:771 (1) - could remove new combo for consistency this diff

very consistency
[]
Hitsound -> need add more
Gameplay -> I did lot mod combo color because they are inconsistency and missing with your style pattern for all diff's pls recheck
follow music and flow is nice, any question ask me so I will explain better
I wish good luck and happy birthday miko ( really? o.o)

Hello!
Mod as requested
Mostly suggestions

[Easy]

1. 01:36:455 (7) - Not snapped
2. 00:14:251 (1,2) - The overlap with 00:12:834 (7) - doesn't look good. I suggest doing something like this to improve the flow:
   
   Click

   
   
3. 01:15:196 (5) - Try splitting this slider into a 1/1 slider and circle to emphasize more the voice. I think it fits better.
4. 01:43:542 (1,2) - Combine those into one slider to follow the voice.
   
   This needs more hitsounds, try putting whistles in all large white ticks like you did in some parts.

[Normal]

1. 00:29:369 (2,3) - Turn these into a 1/2 repeat slider to follow the voice better.
   
   Click!

   
2. 01:18:739 (4) - Delete this note, it's not following anything.
3. 01:47:086 - Add a note here.
4. 02:07:637 (4,5,1,2) - Suggestion to (maybe) improve this part.
   
   Click!

   
5. 03:07:164 (1) - Move this half a beat back to follow the voice.
   
   This one needs hitsounds too

[Hard]

1. 00:07:164 (5) - Why is this slider 3/4? It feels weird. I recommend making it shorter.
2. 00:31:259 (1,2) - Blanket! Looks like you didn't do it intentionally but it looks better blanketed in my opinion.
3. 01:02:913 - You can map something in this part following the piano.
4. 01:50:157 (3,5) - Stack these better.
5. 02:18:739 (4) - It would flow better if you stacked this on the start of the slider "2" instead of stacking it on its end.
6. 02:58:188 (6) - Make this slider end on the red tick to follow the vocals better.

Thats all.
GL

prefer my pattern but changed to not overlap01:15:196 (5) - Try splitting this slider into a 1/1 slider and circle to emphasize more the voice. I think it fits better. hmm...you are right, but this diff is easy...i think it's not necessary to make them plentiful, also avoid to overmap...01:43:542 (1,2) - Combine those into one slider to follow the voice. nope

This needs more hitsounds, try putting whistles in all large white ticks like you did in some parts.[Normal]

1. 00:29:369 (2,3) - Turn these into a 1/2 repeat slider to follow the voice better. okay
   
   Click!

   
2. 01:18:739 (4) - Delete this note, it's not following anything. just want to add othere beat
3. 01:47:086 - Add a note here. yeah, and changed 01:45:905 (4) into a circle
4. 02:07:637 (4,5,1,2) - Suggestion to (maybe) improve this part. but the is still the same pattern most as 00:53:936 (1,2,3,4)
   
   Click!

   
5. 03:07:164 (1) - Move this half a beat back to follow the voice. the rhythm there is very loudly ><
   
   This one needs hitsounds too

[Hard]

1. 00:07:164 (5) - Why is this slider 3/4? It feels weird. I recommend making it shorter. just want some others pattern
2. 00:31:259 (1,2) - Blanket! Looks like you didn't do it intentionally but it looks better blanketed in my opinion. okay
3. 01:02:913 - You can map something in this part following the piano. it's deliberate, sorry
4. 01:50:157 (3,5) - Stack these better. i have tried, but it's very difficult to make them stack perfect...
5. 02:18:739 (4) - It would flow better if you stacked this on the start of the slider "2" instead of stacking it on its end. yeah, you're right, thanks
6. 02:58:188 (6) - Make this slider end on the red tick to follow the vocals better.

same reason as 00:07:164 (5)


Thats all.
GLthanks for modding!!! very useful [/box]

updated!!!

small metadata mod

Add Conti New to the tags as the song is from the album Conti New (although this is the 40mp piano remix version)
shouldn't the title be August 31st?
or at least use the title 8月31日 and then say August 31st or how ever you pronounce that in Japanese in the romanized section

guineaQ wrote:

small metadata mod

Add Conti New to the tags as the song is from the album Conti New (although this is the 40mp piano remix version)
shouldn't the title be August 31st?
or at least use the title 8月31日 and then say August 31st or how ever you pronounce that in Japanese in the romanized section

have add Conti New in the tags, but i'm not sure if i changed the Romanised Title to August 31st is a good choice...
don't worry, i'll try to ask others peple, and thank you

From my queue~

[General]

1. difficulty spread has the big problem. too close between easy and normal.
   
   Ranking Criteria

   
   I suggest to make Easy-diff easier
2. Romanised title: I think "8/31" is no problem. romanised title is not found in official afaik.
   but if you afraid of it, how about "8gatsu 31nichi"? source is the following thread (but it is still not rule)
   http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/142383
3. add soft-sliderslide2.wav of silence

[SB]

1. lyric-3.png: check the bottom of sentence (vanish...?)

[Easy]

1. make more 2/1 sliders for depressing difficulty. for example, 00:02:912 (1,2,3,4) - can be changed like this
   
2. decrease circles and exchange them to slider for depressing difficulty. for example, 00:11:416 (4,5,6) - can be changed like this
   
3. 01:31:731 (1) - delete. after spinner, long blank is better for easy

[Normal]

1. 00:15:196 (2) - suggetion. 1/2 rhythm is better like other parts
   
2. 00:36:692- add a note. I prefer to stack on the head of 00:36:928 (1) -
3. 00:53:700- add a note
4. 01:21:810 (4) - 1/2 slider is better
   
5. 01:37:637- add a note

[Hard]

1. I think there are many unnecessary jumps. I recommend to recheck spacing
2. 00:08:109 (7) - rotate clockwise more
3. 00:09:527 (3) - not stack is better for good flow
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:12:361 (4) - I prefer 1/2 rhythm
   
5. 00:24:645 (5,6) - I recommend to blanket fo good flow
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:25:590 (1,2) - check blanketting
7. 00:30:314 (5) - rotate anti-clockwise more
8. 01:18:031 (4,5,6,7) - umm, not good flow. suggetion
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:19:448 (1,2) - short spacing is not suitable at this part, imo
10. 01:42:125 (4,5) - not good jump. I recommend to conform Ds
11. 01:58:424 (2) - Ctrl+G?
12. 02:35:983 (4,6) - avoid overlapping
13. 02:22:519 (6,1) - not good flow
14. 02:33:621 (5) - curve downward
15. 02:52:519 (8) - how about this?
    
    SPOILER

    

cute SB reproduced awoko's <3
nice relax map ~☆
~Good Luck~

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]

1. difficulty spread has the big problem. too close between easy and normal.
   
   Ranking Criteria

   
   I suggest to make Easy-diff easier okay, i'll try~
2. Romanised title: I think "8/31" is no problem. romanised title is not found in official afaik.
   but if you afraid of it, how about "8gatsu 31nichi"? source is the following thread (but it is still not rule)
   http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/142383 i still want to keep this title xD
3. add soft-sliderslide2.wav of silence

okay
[SB]

1. lyric-3.png: check the bottom of sentence (vanish...?)

oh, okay
[Easy]

1. make more 2/1 sliders for depressing difficulty. for example, 00:02:912 (1,2,3,4) - can be changed like this
   
2. decrease circles and exchange them to slider for depressing difficulty. for example, 00:11:416 (4,5,6) - can be changed like this
   i'll try ^^
3. 01:31:731 (1) - delete. after spinner, long blank is better for easy

oops, but there is a tone over there ><
[Normal]

1. 00:15:196 (2) - suggetion. 1/2 rhythm is better like other parts you are right
   
2. 00:36:692- add a note. I prefer to stack on the head of 00:36:928 (1) - maybe too hard to hit, and so as playing with hidden mode
3. 00:53:700- add a note not fit here i think
4. 01:21:810 (4) - 1/2 slider is better don't think so ><
   
5. 01:37:637- add a note

^same as 00:53:700
[Hard]

1. I think there are many unnecessary jumps. I recommend to recheck spacing but i think it's necessary, it's hard, and without jump, this diff would be like normal+, sorry
2. 00:08:109 (7) - rotate clockwise more okay
3. 00:09:527 (3) - not stack is better for good flow it's deliberate
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:12:361 (4) - I prefer 1/2 rhythm yeah,i have spent much time to fix
   
5. 00:24:645 (5,6) - I recommend to blanket fo good flow nope, it's deliberate
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:25:590 (1,2) - check blanketting okay
7. 00:30:314 (5) - rotate anti-clockwise more not necessary
8. 01:18:031 (4,5,6,7) - umm, not good flow. suggetion prefer mine pattern, and i think it's "okay" to play xD
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:19:448 (1,2) - short spacing is not suitable at this part, imo but this pattern can emphasize the accent tone over there
10. 01:42:125 (4,5) - not good jump. I recommend to conform Ds don't think so
11. 01:58:424 (2) - Ctrl+G? a little strange ><
12. 02:35:983 (4,6) - avoid overlapping still want to blanket 02:35:983 (4)'s end
13. 02:22:519 (6,1) - not good flow hmm...but it's not east to fix this problem, i'll think about it.
14. 02:33:621 (5) - curve downward it's deliberate
15. 02:52:519 (8) - how about this? prefer my pattern
    
    SPOILER

    

cute SB reproduced awoko's <3
nice relax map ~☆
~Good Luck~

thanks for your star and modding ></ (there is most no modder want to shoot a star to me )

Hi there, coming from your request in our/my Modding Queue. Be so kind to take some minutes (or seconds, lets be honest) to answer to my mods. Dont be a dick and just "lol didnt changed stuffs hurr durr" without an explanation. If I told you something that was against your map, tell me why. This way mapper and modder both gain something.

(copy paste end)

Heya, sorry for being late :v




Feel free to pm me ingame if something's unclear

Yauxo wrote:

Hi there, coming from your request in our/my Modding Queue. Be so kind to take some minutes (or seconds, lets be honest) to answer to my mods. Dont be a dick and just "lol didnt changed stuffs hurr durr" without an explanation. If I told you something that was against your map, tell me why. This way mapper and modder both gain something.

Unrankable
Suggestion

Other than that, colours yellow to red indicate how important changes would be in my opinion

(copy paste end)

Heya, sorry for being late :v

[Easy]
■ 00:15:668 (2) - Blanket could/should be improved. it has been blanket very perfect
■ 00:25:590 (1) - Move it so that it fits into this line? make a line not means good flow...i just think it'll be more stiff

(http://puu.sh/d7xum/a3f867ab92.jpg)

■ 00:27:007 (2) - Blanket(s) can be improved same as 00:15:668 (2)
■ 00:31:259 (1,2,3,4) - Imo, Slider Circle Slider Circle fits better than Circle Slider Circle Slider. 00:31:259 (1) - Would support the long Na vocal better than the Circle does right now and 00:33:149 (4) - starts on a rather quiet vocal and has a louder one in the middle of it. Having a Slider on 00:32:676 (3) - to support the longer Wa vocals would be better oops, but i still want to maintain this pattern since if i changed the rhythm here, this diff should be remap for consistence
■ 01:03:857 (1) - Blanket could/should be improved same as above
■ 01:32:204 (2) - It's probably just me, but I'd NC this one, since the vocals continue here. 01:31:731 (1) - feels like a bonus circle to me. okay, added
■ 02:04:802 (5,6) - Whistle on every point to support the piano more? Same goes for this in every diff but i think it's not fit, the last 1/4 part at a full beat add whistle is very strange ><

[Normal]
■ 00:26:771 (3) - I'd move this one clloser/not too far away like this. It'd be more enjoyable not to have that little hop in there maybe too hard for beginner to hit anyway, it's still jump for them

Similar cases

00:31:968 (2) -
01:08:818 (3) -
01:38:582 (2) -
03:07:637 (2) -

■ 00:30:314 (3,4) - ctrl+g? oh, thanks!
■ 00:44:487 (4) - I wouldnt have this overlap with the Slider before. It could be confusing to a few players - and having it somewhere in the open, clearly visible sounds like a better idea. sorry but same reason as above, i might consider this suggestion

Similar cases

01:44:960 (3) -
01:50:157 (2) -
02:37:401 (5) -

■ 01:32:204 (2) - Similar to Easy, NC here? yeah
■ 02:05:275 (4) - x215 to overlap with the Slider correctly i have fixed the 02:03:385 (1) end
■ 02:18:503 (1) - Either remove this NC or add this NC to other difficulties as well. For consistency okay

■ The NCing in the Kiai is really inconsistent. There are short combos, middle-lenght combos and long lenght combos in your map. Try to be consistent with these. I'd suggest you to redo the NCing there so that it fits in with the rest of the NCing from this diff (longer combos, not too short) Stuff like 02:57:716 (1,2) - is pretty out of place, since this is the only time you use it like this.
yeah, you are right, i have try to fix this problem but there are still some problem that not easy to fix, i'll tried

[Hard]
■ 00:07:164 (5) - How about lowering the volume of the Sliderend a little? hmm...i think that is not necessary since the volume has been very low and doesn't influence the whole map ><

Similar cases

00:29:842 (4) -
00:39:763 (1) -
00:46:377 (2) -
00:47:794 (5) -
Basically, any other 3/4 Slider.

■ 00:44:960 (7) - I'd shorten this one to 1/2 lenght and place a (NC) 1/2 Slider on 00:45:432 - (-> remove the repeat of the Slider after that obviously) yes, you are right, but in this part, i really don't want so many 1/2 beat, it may heard a little noise
■ 01:11:653 (3) - Stack this one properly. Check the coordinates of the Sliderend by ctrl+g'ing. THis goes for every overlap that's off in position (they are rather easy to spot) have tried~

■ 01:11:889 (4) - Similar to 44:960. The problem I have with these is that you map a big white (and actually a strong beat) tick as a Sliderend. I think these strong sounds should be clickable, may it be in form of a Slider or Circle, I dont mind. Supporting the long vocal is okay, in theory, but not if a stronger beat gets ignored because of that. I'd highly suggest that you go through your map and think about changing any slider that plays as weird like this one. (I didnt mention these before because I thought that these would only happen one or two times, but doing this though the whole map is rather bad) oh...really? i'll consider your suggestion but i really have no much time to do it >< and i also think this problem is not so serious as you said, maybe i can try to look others people's suggestion first
■ 02:26:535 (1) - Ghostnote. There is no sound that'd support the beginning of this Slider. Remove it and place a normal Circle where the end would be ahh...would be what O.o? sorry i really don't want to changed here, since in the diff, there isn't have any 2-1/4 blank at all, it might will be a little weird i think
■ 02:36:928 (6) - Move it further up so that it doesnt touch the Slider still want to blanket 02:35:983 (4)'s end

Feel free to pm me ingame if something's unclear

thanks for modding~~!!!
it's very detailed

Estellia- wrote:

M4M~

• 
  [Easy]

1. 00:02:912 (1,2) - Maybe have their slider bodies blanket? nope
2. 00:05:747 (4,1) - Make these symmetrical? oh...but i think not necessary
3. 00:08:582 (1,2,3,4) - Consider having blankets her/fix flow. The notes seem rather messy i might try others pattern
4. 00:12:834 (5,1) - Blanket fix has been very perfect i think
5. 00:14:251 (1,2) - ^ fix a little bit
6. 00:22:755 (4,6) - Symmetry? not necessary
7. 00:27:007 (2,3,4) - Fix blanket ok
8. 00:29:842 (5,1) - ^ ^
9. 00:29:842 (5,2) - Parallel? nope, it's intention
10. 00:31:731 (2,4) - Same angle? ^
11. 00:35:511 (6,2) - Fix blanket has been very perfect i think
12. 00:48:267 (1,3) - ^ fix a little bit
13. 00:50:629 (4,5) - ^ ^
14. 00:51:101 (5,6) - ^ nope, it's intention
15. 01:03:857 (1,2) - ^ fix a little bit
16. 01:05:275 (2,4) - ^ nope, it's intention
17. 01:15:196 (5,1) - ^ + parallel hmm...fix a little
18. 01:16:613 (1,3) - Parallel nope, it's intention
19. 01:39:763 (4,5) - Fix blanket fix a little bit
20. 01:42:125 (6,1) - ^ has been very perfect i think
21. 01:44:015 (2,3) - Suggest blanket okay
22. 01:44:960 (3,5) - fix blanket fix a little bit
23. 01:55:353 (2,3) - Flow is rather awkward, try parallel or curve any slider it's intention
24. 02:20:393 (5,6) - fix blanket fix a little bit
25. 02:29:369 (2,3) - ^ ^
26. 02:35:038 (2,3) - ^ ^
27. 02:40:235 (1,1) - ^ has been very perfect i think
28. 02:41:653 (1,2) - ^ fix a little bit
29. 02:47:794 (2,3,4) - The overlap can be rather confusing but the flow and it's the last part of this song...
30. 03:00:078 (2,3) - fix blanket fix a little bit
    
    This Easy is rather coarse. As an Easy is a difficulty that is meant to be much neater than the rest, your blanket issues are a definite no-no. I may be a nazi here, but you have to change them. Also, I notice how your flow isn't really spot-on, for example:
    
    1st example

    
    2nd example

    
    3rd example

    
    
    The flows here are all broken since the sliders don't directly lead into the next, so it feels awkward for the player to play. Try fixing these issues in your map and your Easy should be ready. hmm...i think all best flow is not good but make a little boring diff, sorry for bad manner and not understand...
    
    [Normal]
31. 00:04:802 (4,5) - Blanket fix has been very perfect i think
32. 00:06:692 (6,7) - ^ nope, it's intention
33. 00:07:164 (7) - I don't really see a use for this slider being weirdly shaped since the music has a vibrato there
34. 00:11:416 (4,5) - Flow fix it's okay to hit
35. 00:14:251 (1,2) - Blanket fix tried
36. 00:16:141 (3) - This note is very out of place. Try making 2 lead into it better not really understand
37. 00:26:062 (2,3,4) - Shift 3 inside so flow isn't abruptly broken okay
38. 00:28:424 (1,2) - flow fix it's okay to hit
39. 00:30:314 (3,1) - blanket fix has been very perfect i think
40. 00:31:259 (1,3) - symmetry okay
41. 00:40:235 (2,3) - blanket fix has been very perfect i think
42. 00:46:850 (3,1) - ^ ^
43. 01:08:105 (2,3,4) - flow fix it's intention
44. 01:12:830 (4,1) - blanket fix tried
45. 01:12:830 (4,2) - Overlap may be confusing it's normal, may be no problem
46. 01:22:279 (1,2) - symmetry tried
47. 01:40:704 (1,2) - blanket not necessary
48. 01:43:535 (1,3) - confusing overlap same as i said above
49. 01:44:483 (2,3) - blanket fix has been very perfect i think
50. 01:48:735 (5,2) - confusing overlap ^
51. 01:56:767 (4,1) - blanket not necessary
52. 02:01:964 (3,1) - ^ fix a little bit
53. 02:37:397 (1,2) - ^ has been very perfect i think
54. 02:42:594 (2,4) - confusing overlap same as i said above
55. 02:50:625 (2,3) - blanket not necessary
56. 02:52:987 (1,2) - ^ tried
57. 02:54:405 (3,1) - ^ tried
58. 02:55:822 (1,3) - try blanket ^
59. 03:09:995 (1,2) - ^ has been very perfect i think
60. 03:12:357 (3,4) - ^ fix a little bit
61. 03:12:830 (4,1) - ^ okay
    
    Flow is way better compared to Easy, but still many blanket fixes need to be done.
    
    [Hard]
    
    Wow, this diff is practically perfect! Aside from the potential blanket problems, I feel like the other rather major problem is the overlaps. The sliders that overlap may be rather confusing to players. I played the map and I feel like its generally ok, but still try to fix those overlaps. Overlapping sliders can prove to be a problem esp. when they are close to each other on the timeline, hence players may occasionally be unable to see the sliders.

That's all from me. GL

wow, what a long mod....
i spent much time to reply

anyway, thanks for your modding!!!

never forget your request
from paper modding team
Some small problems but I think overall its very nice
gl on ranking

Alex Li wrote:

never forget your request
from paper modding team

General

1. turn epilepsy warning off because your story board doesn't have any flash fixed
2. make sure your have a break, the time is too long to not have a break, 180s and didn't have a break is unrankable in normal sets

i'll try, but this song really have no time to put the break time

Easy

1. 00:22:755 (4,6) - make sure they are exactly symmetrical so looks way more better okay..
2. 00:31:731 (2,4) - if make 2 and 4 same, it will have a better looking don't think so
3. 01:05:275 (2,4) - make the 4 more straight so it fits 2 more ok
4. 01:10:944 (1,2) - it is possible to do a blanket here not fit i think
5. 01:55:353 (2,3) - if i were u ill do this oops, but...how to fix flow
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:56:298 (3,5) - if u did ^, make sure those two are a y symmetrical pattern
7. 02:33:149 (6,2) - make 2's end perfectly attach to the head of 6

oh, fixed

Normal

1. 00:11:416 (4,5) - doesn't look really nice, if u can make 4 a little bit curve, it will look better tried
2. 00:24:645 (4) - music doesn't have 1/2 here so im not recommended over map here you're right, but i did it at others part...so i still don't want to change
3. 00:39:763 (1) - i think its better to make this curve okay
4. 01:05:747 (4,2) - better if u stick those two together yes
5. 01:55:590 (2) - i think its better to make this curve okay
6. 02:10:472 (3) - will look much nicer if u make a pattern that symmetry with 02:09:054 (1) - in fact, i really like every slider symmetry...but i still changed
7. 02:34:566 (1,2) - fix blanket fixed
8. 02:37:401 (1,2) - ^ ahh...maybe fixed
9. 02:55:826 (1,3) - i think its better to make a symmetrical pattern here

okay

Hard

1. 00:39:763 (1,2) - try this nope, it's intention
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:47:322 (4) - isn't look really nice, I would recommend to have exactly same pattern with 00:46:850 (3) - ^same as above
3. 00:52:519 (4) - whistle on head nope, i steadily didn't put whistle at the last part of a whole beat
4. 01:22:283 (1,2) - fix blanket okay...
5. 01:50:157 (3,2) - it doesn't really stick well it's very hard to stack perfect, i think it's okay
6. 02:07:637 (4,5) - try this pattern maybe? prefer my pattern
   
   SPOILER

   

Some small problems but I think overall its very nice
gl on ranking

thanks for modding~~
you really very powers of observation

Hello! M4M from my queue!
Well, here's my mod:




Overall, very good mapset. Love the SB and the song.
Here’s a star.
Good Luck!

DECO*27 loves his 3/4s

-Nya- wrote:

Hello! M4M from my queue!
Well, here's my mod:

Easy:
00:27:007 (2) – I don’t recommend the placement of this slider. Not good flow in my opinion. Rather do this:

Picture

Just a suggestion. Feel free to decline it. still prefer my pattern00:29:842 (5,1) – Nazi. Improve the blanket. Just move the tail of the slider a bit downwards and then it should be fine.

Picture

ok

00:33:149 (4) – Rather copy and paste 00:31:731 (2) – then move the new slider till it looks like the picture below. Looks neater in my opinion. it's intention

Picture

00:51:101 (5) –I also don’t really recommend the placement of this slider cuz of the overlapping and since it’s an Easy diff, it can get confusing for beginners. but when it go on to 00:50:629 (4) the trace of 00:49:684 (3) has been disappear00:50:629 (4,6) – Improve stack. Move 00:52:519 (6) – till it’s here: X:160 Y:144. fixed00:53:936 (1) – Rather place this slider here: X:156 Y:244 for better flow. I know you wanted to stack, but there’s no need. It’s more important to ensure a good flow. stack on 00:51:101 (5) start01:10:944 (1,2) –The flow from the previous slider to the next can also be improved by placing 01:12:361 (2) –somewhere here: X:188 Y:188 still prefer my pattern 01:22:283 (1,2) – I think a blanket here will look better. not need i think

Picture

01:31:731 (1,1) – Blanket. ^

Picture

01:55:353 (2,3) – Also blanket. ^

Picture

02:16:141 (1,2) – A blanket here will also look much nicer. sorry, but i still don't like to make so much blanket...

Picture

02:36:456 (4,7) – Try to avoid an ugly overlap like this one. It will look better if you make a blanket with 02:38:346 (6,7) -

Picture

i changed it to other pattern

02:40:235 (1) – If you follow my suggestion above, then just Ctrl+G 02:40:235 (1) – and place it somewhere here: X:284 Y:220. To avoid having to change a lot of things unnecessarily. ^03:05:747 (3) – Ctrl+G? Plays better in my opinion. nope03:18:857 Why not place this green line here: 03:18:975 – Rather place it on a tick to be safe.Nice diff. Sorry about all the blanketing suggestions. Just feels that this diff lack them a bit, and one can really spice up an Easy diff with them.

Normal:
00:05:747 (5) – Move this slider till it’s somewhere here: X:416 Y:176 for a better blanket with 00:04:802 (4) – okay00:17:086 (1,1) – The recovery time after the spinner may be too little for a Normal diff. I think you can improve that by placing 00:19:920 (1) – right in the middle of the spinner. Here: X:256 Y:192 so the player will have more time to recover. changed as easy diff 00:43:070 (2,4) – This looks ugly in my opinion. Rather copy and paste 00:43:070 (2) – then Ctrl+H and then Ctrl+G and then stack it perfectly, so somewhere here: X:265 Y:112. maybe fixed

Picture

01:12:834 (4,2) – Improve the stack. Place 01:14:251 (2) – here: X:196 Y:183 fixed02:01:023 (2,3) – Rather make these two sliders look the same. It looks neater in my opinion.

Picture

okay and also takes me sometime to fix the distance

02:08:346 (5) – Rather remove this slider and just place a hitcircle here: 02:08:346 - . Fits better. change to other patternAlso place a note here: 02:08:818 – The vocals support it. ^02:23:700 (2) – I’m not sure if you did this, but if you did, sorry. I suggest copy and pasting 02:23:227 (1) - , then Ctrl+J. It will then look something like this:

Picture

okay

02:54:409 (3,1) – Nazi. Improve the blanket. fixed02:56:771 (3) – Move this slider till it’s here: X:80 Y:368 to make this pattern: 02:55:826 (1,2,3) – look better. not think so...02:58:188 (2) – Move this slider a bit upwards till it’s here: X:384 Y:268 okayLike in Easy, place that last green line on the white tick sure
Also a very nice diff. Could hardly find anything.

Hard:
00:08:109 (7) – Rather do this? nope

Picture

Copy and paste 00:07:637 (6) – then Ctrl+H and then Ctrl+G00:11:416 (1) – And rather this? nope

Picture

Looks neater.00:13:779 (7) – Maybe this will work better. maybe you are right, but i prefer original pattern

Picture

00:40:235 (2) – Ctrl+H? it's intention01:16:141 (6) – Rather do this? nope ><

Picture

01:21:810 (6) – This slider has to move a bit to make this pattern: 01:20:865 (4,5,6) – look better. So do something like this:

Picture

not necessary i think

01:31:731 (1) – NC for consistency with the other diffs. okay01:44:960 (4,6) – Improve stack. Place 01:45:905 (6) – here: X:125 Y:11301:50:157 (3,2) - ^, place 01:50:629 (1) – here: X:160 Y:252 tried
Love the creativity of this diff.

Overall, very good mapset. Love the SB and the song.
Here’s a star.
Good Luck!

thanks for modding ~

Add the epilepsy warning.

Btw, couldn't mod this, because i can't rind any problems...

But here's 1 kd for that!

-Tochi wrote:

Add the epilepsy warning.

Btw, could mod this, because i can't rind any problems...

But here's 1 kd for that!

it's okay :3
thanks for your star~!!!

M4M
[General]
Add "8gatsu 31nichi" to Tags for romanised title?
Just my opinion, you can add more hitsounds positively to follow the instrumental, especially whistles.
[SB]
01:19:448 Maybe 3-times lyric3 appeared a bit delay, so I suppose 01:18:975 would be correct timing to follow vocal.
02:31:731 ^
02:55:826 ^
[Easy]
Rhythm
01:26:535(1) Shorten this spinner at 01:29:369 better because next note is soon after a spinner for the Easy diff.
[Normal]
Placement
01:32:913(2) Replace this slider like this? Current flow is a bit odd for playing.
02:18:975(1) Remove NC better to be consistence with previous part.(01:06:220)
Rhythm
00:51:101(1,2) Sounds a bit weird bacause you ignored the vocal, so try to this rhythm and it would be more suitable to play.
01:09:999(5) Similar suggestion on here. Try to follow the vocal better than instrumental.
01:15:905 Add 1/2 slider on here to follow the vocal?
03:07:637(2) Remove this note better, so next slider looks effective to follow the vocal.

Hit Sound
02:01:968(3) Add whistle at head for pattern.
[Hard]
Placement
00:39:763(1) Bent this slider on reversed way, and the flow would be more fine.
00:58:897(8) Current angle is a bit sharped, so try to be smmetrical with (6) better.
01:05:275(4) NC here to be same as 02:17:558.
01:48:267(5) Curved slider would be better than liner one because this flow would be more seamlessly. e.g.)
02:33:621(5) ^
02:24:645(4) Try to this slider? Just flow suggestion.

Good luck.

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M
[General]
Add "8gatsu 31nichi" to Tags for romanised title? okay
Just my opinion, you can add more hitsounds positively to follow the instrumental, especially whistles. try, thanks
[SB]
01:19:448 Maybe 3-times lyric3 appeared a bit delay, so I suppose 01:18:975 would be correct timing to follow vocal.
02:31:731 ^
02:55:826 ^ hmm, but i use this pattern every part, don't want to change
[Easy]
Rhythm
01:26:535(1) Shorten this spinner at 01:29:369 better because next note is soon after a spinner for the Easy diff. i think the time between two note is enough
[Normal]
Placement
01:32:913(2) Replace this slider like this? Current flow is a bit odd for playing. prefer this pattern, i think it's okay xd

SPOILER

02:18:975(1) Remove NC better to be consistence with previous part.(01:06:220) okay
Rhythm
00:51:101(1,2) Sounds a bit weird bacause you ignored the vocal, so try to this rhythm and it would be more suitable to play. yes, thanks

SPOILER

01:09:999(5) Similar suggestion on here. Try to follow the vocal better than instrumental. but the object after next slider is also 1/2 slider, so i prefer to remain my pattern

SPOILER

01:15:905 Add 1/2 slider on here to follow the vocal? nope, sorry
03:07:637(2) Remove this note better, so next slider looks effective to follow the vocal. really like this pattern, sorry

Hit Sound
02:01:968(3) Add whistle at head for pattern. okay
[Hard]
Placement
00:39:763(1) Bent this slider on reversed way, and the flow would be more fine. but 00:39:054 (6,1) - flow would be bad

SPOILER

00:58:897(8) Current angle is a bit sharped, so try to be smmetrical with (6) better. it's intention :3
01:05:275(4) NC here to be same as 02:17:558. fixed
01:48:267(5) Curved slider would be better than liner one because this flow would be more seamlessly. e.g.) still prefer mine pattern

SPOILER

02:33:621(5) ^ ^

SPOILER

02:24:645(4) Try to this slider? Just flow suggestion. ^

SPOILER

Good luck.

thanks for modding!!!

will reply and update later since the final test this week
thanks for modding in advance !!

lkx_Shore wrote:

General

1. 有未使用的音效
   soft-whistle.wav 這個有用到
   soft-whistle2.wav ^其實當初想用這個增音版的whistle但忘記設定了

Hard

1. 00:04:330 - 重音要让玩家“打击”下去，才会有最佳的效果。唔可是我覺得如果這裡重音下去,後面在放一個1/2的滑條...會感覺太緊湊
2. 00:07:164 (5) - 不必要的3/4，直接用1/2会更好，这种3/4滑条一般压在很紧密的1/1长音。顺便 Whistle 直接加在你跟的音轨里的重音就好，例如00:07:164 - 和00:07:637 - 还有00:08:109 - 。仍然覺得用3/4比較好,因為00:07:164這裡的鋼琴音有刻意拉長的感覺,所以覺得1/2不太適合...然後音效方面是故意不放的,在4條白線的最後一條總沒有歌詞,只有背景音,所以覺得加音效可能會有點覆蓋到整體的音量,而有歌詞的部分我都有加了
3. 00:11:889 (2,3,4) - 音乐没有什么大的变化，却使用了两种变化较大的间距，这样不好。 00:12:125 (3) - 是高音的位置,其實我認同你的想法,但把間距縮小看起來很奇怪阿 如果真的必須的話我一定會改的
4. 00:24:172 (4) - 滑条头有人声重音和钢琴重音，加 Whistle突出重音，后面的钢琴重音也加，因为你在00:22:755 (1) - 的滑条头也加了 whistle （钢琴重音）. 理由同上
5. 00:29:842 (4) - 同上上的理由。 在00:29:842 (4) - 的開頭有一個重音,而我在其他段也是使用這個模式
6. 00:39:763 (1) - 这种才是正确的3/4滑条用法。摁
7. 00:44:960 (7,1) - (7) 的尾巴有重音却没让玩家击打下去...而 (1) 滑条头没有因却让玩家打击下去..？已更正
8. 01:05:983 (3) - 同上. ^
   后面基本上都是一些重复的问题，就不重复说了。
   把KIA部分該跳的重音都修好了

Normal

1. Fine.

Easy

1. Fine.

Others

最近没什么时间上线所以来晚了...
Call me back.

感謝抽空mod
拒絕了滿多真的很抱歉但我真的覺得不改比較好...

lkx_Shore wrote:

我思考了会为什么这个软件会报错，仔细看了看是你的音效命名方式错了，正确的命名方式应该是这样↓
-soft-hitwhistle 了解, 已修正

Hard

1. 00:04:330 - 重音要让玩家“打击”下去，才会有最佳的效果。唔可是我覺得如果這裡重音下去,後面在放一個1/2的滑條...會感覺太緊湊 让图变得简单而忽略最佳打击点是不好的... 已修改
2. 00:07:164 (5) - 不必要的3/4，直接用1/2会更好，这种3/4滑条一般压在很紧密的1/1长音。顺便 Whistle 直接加在你跟的音轨里的重音就好，例如00:07:164 - 和00:07:637 - 还有00:08:109 - 。仍然覺得用3/4比較好,因為00:07:164這裡的鋼琴音有刻意拉長的感覺,所以覺得1/2不太適合...然後音效方面是故意不放的,在4條白線的最後一條總沒有歌詞,只有背景音,所以覺得加音效可能會有點覆蓋到整體的音量,而有歌詞的部分我都有加了 其实他并没有可以拉长...你可以找几个人听听 ^
3. 00:11:889 (2,3,4) - 音乐没有什么大的变化，却使用了两种变化较大的间距，这样不好。 00:12:125 (3) - 是高音的位置,其實我認同你的想法,但把間距縮小看起來很奇怪阿 如果真的必須的話我一定會改的 也不是一定要改...只是很轻很轻的高音突然跳出去我觉得不好. 呃...最後還是決定不改...抱歉 其實也是因為很多地方都是這樣放, 所以就覺得沒關係了orz

已更新 o/

额...你删去了S:1音效的话记得把音效也删掉呀。

Edit:TAG加上 August 31st Miku Birthday 2014
罗马音标题名用 Hachigatsu Sanjuuichinichi。
艺术家应该是 DECO＊27 feat. 初音ミク / DECO＊27 feat. Hatsune Miku

都弄好以后记得喊我

alacat終於把多的那張刪了 (表示感動
已更新~

osb多出了4个，留下这个↓
DECO27 feat. Hatsune Miku - Hachigatsu Sanjuuichinichi (bigfrog).osb
音效轨没用到S:1，把S:1的音效删去...

lkx_Shore wrote:

osb多出了4个，留下这个↓
DECO27 feat. Hatsune Miku - Hachigatsu Sanjuuichinichi (bigfrog).osb
音效轨没用到S:1，把S:1的音效删去...

其實音效上次更新有刪掉,但因被搞亂又重載一次結果忘記刪了...
抱歉很多地方都沒注意到,有些地方還不太清楚為什麼
都修正好更新了