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Toyosaki Aki - Cagayake! GIRLS (Full Ver.)

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Iluhiwizel
go go b1 =w=b
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Cyril Scarlet
Thanks ☆☆** v(o^▽^o)v**☆☆ Thanks ~ for STAR !!!!
orioncomet
~[General]~
- สีBG เป็นสีดำดีกว่านะ เข้าดีด้วยฮะ
- Source มันมีมั้ยนิ มะมีก็ไม่เป็นไร แฮ่ะๆ หนูก็ไม่รู้ ฮ่าๆๆๆ

~[Normal]~
fine OwO
แต่พลอยฟังเสียงตอนสไลด์ในนอมอลมันแปลกๆไงไม่รู้สิ สไลด์บางตัวช่วงหมุนกลับมันอยู่ตรงเส้นสีน้ำเงินเลยฟังดูแปลกๆมั้ง

~[Hard]~
00:40:510 - remove clap? ;_;
01:42:628 - add clap, maybe?

~[Insane]~
สปินเนอร์โหดแฉด แง้งงง /me กัดคอ
00:37:687 (1) - Orz พอพลอยเจอสไลด์วางตัวหมุนกลับเส้นสีฟ้าทีไรเสียงมันแปลกมากๆสำหรับพลอยทุกที
00:41:746 (1) - ทำเตือน x2 หน่อยมั้ย? (อย่าเปรียบเทียบกะที่แมพดีเจป้อบไม่มีนะ เพราะช่วงนั้นยังไม่เข้มเรื่องป้ายเตือนเท่าเดี๋ยวนี้)
00:47:393 (1) - ^
00:53:040 (1) - ^

go go bakaru ;)
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
thank you orion ~
Onizuki
Cool!
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
thank you for star Onizuki ^^
Kytoxid
[General]

I feel like Normal is a bit too hard for the easiest difficulty.
If possible, could you reduce the SB images to 800x600 or smaller? Generally that's the size limit.
White notes + kiai = pain.
Consider adding jpop as 1 word in the tags.
Timing feels 20ms early or so, try 472?
Lots of unused timing sections lying around, try tidying those up.

[Normal]

00:09:804 (5) - Awkwardly placed repeat.
00:38:040 (4) - ^
00:39:628 (1) - End 1/2 sooner?
01:03:099 (6) - Extend by 1/4?
02:39:648 - Consider mapping this break; ending a break with a spinner...right into another break feels a bit weird..

The rhythms on this difficulty really stood out for me, they were very cool.

[Hard]

00:46:157 (4) - Felt a bit out of place, a note on the white tick before it would be cool too.
02:39:628 - Same thing here as on Normal.
02:54:804 (1) - Not the best place for a spinner, imo.

Neat too.

[Insane]

Wow, high max score. It's pretty difficult though, so I guess it's okay.

Overall, it's pretty good. Feels overmapped in many places though.

Star~
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
SB I'm use 900 , umm but last time I'm use1280 BAT said changed to 1024

maybe i think 900 it'sok ^^

other fixed !!
timing double check by DJPop

thank you for STAR ゚+.・゚+。(〃・ω・〃)。+゚・.+゚
Tomoka Rin
star~
Lybydose
Offset seems fine, although I was doing better with -7ms or so.

However, the offset is not placed correctly. You should place it two white lines forward from where it is now. After you do that, move your kiai sections to be exactly on the white lines so the fountains aren't a few ms early. Based on what you've got now, you could just add +20ms to all green timing sections to fix that.

Also a few minor suggestions for Hard:

00:52:001 (3) - awkward. The 3 sounds better to me if you move it back 1/2 to the red tick
01:38:236 - also awkward. add a note here?
02:28:883 - add note here?
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
゚☆,。・:*:・゚★o(´▽`*)/♪Thanks♪ for Moddin ~

- Status -

Fixed
MegaManEXE
(ノ゚ω゚)ノ(ノ゚ω゚)ノ(ノ゚ω゚)ノ
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Card N'FoRcE
- General:
  • How about forcing the DJpop's K-on skin? :P
    Offset feels late to me, i suggest 1160/1165
- Normal:
  • .Opinions:
    Good
- Hard:
  • .Opinions:
    ^^
- Insane:
  • .Opinions:
    00:43:001 (3,1) - i misread this as a jump, because of the previous patterns. Maybe it's just me, but i think it's confusing.
    Nothing else
Sweet SB as usual and great map.
Let me know about the skin and fix the offset, then i'll consider protobubbling ^^
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
okay ~ Fixed ~ :oops:
Sonic Fumes
You need more combos.
You need a hit circle (If you don't)
You need a crucial element
Diasios
Pubbled~
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
SonicArena1 thank for STAR ~ but i don' want to add skin in this map :3

and xxheroxx thank for pub ^^///
Ichigo-Sora
Star ^^
Maybe add K-On as the source and not the tag? Just a suggestion.
No kudosu for this post ^^
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
eh ~ I'm already added it :3 ~

thank you for STAR ^^
Tanmak
huhu~ Good song and SB :P

Starred~
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
thank you for STAR (๑╹◡╹๑)
DeadAlready
ruru nice map >w</

stared~ <3
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
thank you for star ^^ quin ~
Larto
Map an easier difficulty? :< Normal has some evil parts that can AND WILL kill newer players. :<
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
OKAY ~ I'll make easy diff (ノ゚ω゚)ノ

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Larto
Great!
James
my only concern here is the uhh..
kiai.. too many.. not that it is wrong but im sure alot of bats will complain about it.

and the epic part was not mapped.. :(
03:15:988 - 03:27:282

and those 2x sliders at insane.. players should get that after missing the first slider..

pretty solid map otherwise, nothing to complain except for the kiai part
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
yaya
rank
James
those kiai stars are perfectly fine for me, but im pretty sure other bats will rage on it.

also dam u yaya
Mystearica
i hate k-on now but that's ok cause it's bakaru

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Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
thank you James yay for check map. ^^

thank you Mys ^^
Kytoxid
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orioncomet
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Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
Thank you ^^

Kytoxid and orion
MegaManEXE
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Breeze
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Ouch :!: Ouch :!: White note + KIAI (*゚д゚*)
死ね死ね orz
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
haha XD

don't kill me Breeze (ノ゚ω゚)ノ
Scar
congratz~ <3
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
thank you scar ^^//
Alice
Gratssssss S i R i R u~~
Natteke
Siriru wants to remap all DJPop maps? o.o
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
Alice Margatroid > thank you ^^ ~

Natteke desu > no ~ XD I'm just saw K-on again before make this =w= ( and like full ver, DJPop's map is TV size (๑╹◡╹๑) )
MegaManEXE
Oh yes I'm going to start using that face now too

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Ephemeral
All this modding and somehow everybody misses the hitsounds being almost completely inaudible behind the music.

:|
Derekku
A bit low, but not TOO bad imo. :?
James
since when does hitsounds are included in ranking criteria?
if it is, 80% of maps should have been unranked already..
Ephemeral
Hey, you're right.

We should start fixing that.

Might I also add that the hitsounds are not at fault (volume is at 70%) - the mp3 is mastered poorly and is +2dB louder than it should be.
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
(´・ω・`) umm sorry , if hit sounds is low

for me I feel they're to loud orz
YUUCHANN_old
[報價 =的“S I受體 I受體 ü”]感謝你明星Onizuki ^ [/帖]
K-ON!輕音部 萬歲 :)
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