Toyosaki Aki - Cagayake! GIRLS (Full Ver.) · forum

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-02-11T06:25:13+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年2月16日 at 1:16:05

Artist: Toyosaki Aki
Title: Cagayake! GIRLS (Full Ver.)
Tags: K-on anime jpop
BPM: 170
Filesize: 9497kb
Play Time: 04:01
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.38 stars, 202 notes)
Hard (4.78 stars, 475 notes)
Insane (4.99 stars, 674 notes)
Normal (3.77 stars, 344 notes)

Download: Toyosaki Aki - Cagayake! GIRLS (Full Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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- STATUS -

Easy > Finished
Normal > Finished
Hard > Finished
Insane > Finished
Lyric SB > Finished

Map is finished, Ready for Modding

this time I'm make SB in Lyric style...Tired.... to make Effect orz....

☆ - Special Thanks - ☆

MOD 1 : osu_CN_yaya (irc mod / timing help)
MOD 2 : orioncomet (Style , Sounds)
MOD 3 : Kytoxid (Style , offset)
MOD 4 : Lybydose(style note)
MOD 5 : Card N'FoRcE (offset note)

*2010/02/13 Full Submit 12:50 pm
*2010/02/15 Full Submit 11:10 am changed Pic Size
*2010/02/16 1:10 am added EASY

Lyric

SPOILER

Chatting Now
ガチでカシマシ　Never Ending Girls' Talk
終業チャイムまで待てない
遅刻はしても早退は Non Non Non!
精一杯 Study After School

ドキドキが止まんない　フルスロットルな脳内
希望・欲望・煩悩　リボンかけて包装
ネタどっさり持ち寄り　New Type Version 打ち込み
男子禁制のプリ帳　恋綴った日記帳

スカート丈 2cm　詰めたら跳ぶよ
昨日より遠く　おとといよりオクターブ高く

Jumping Now
ガチでウルワシ　Never Ending Girls' Life
日々マジ　ライブだし待ったなし
早起きしても早寝は Non Non Non!
目一杯 Shouting　ワッショイ
ガチでスバラシ　Never Ending Girls' Song
午後ティータイムには持ってこい
片思いでも玉砕で Here We Go!
歌えば Shining After School

ふわふわ生きてるせい？　事件ばっかしエブリデイ
微分積分は追試　当分恋愛は中止
二時限目には鳴くよ　四次元だし胃袋
ヤバ、ついに限界超　ウェイト書いた (秘) 帳

前髪 3mm　切ったら見えた
答案真っ白でも　未来がバラ色ならよくね？

Chatting Now
ガチでカシマシ　Never Ending Girls' Talk
終業チャイムまで待てない
遅刻はしても早退は Non Non Non!
精一杯 Study　エンジョイ
ガチでスバラシ　Never Ending Girls' Song
午後ティータイムには持ってこい
型破りなコードでも Here We Go!
歌えば Shining After School

永遠にループするサイズ
down↑　up↓　down↑　up↓
でも気分いつでも
up↑　up↑↑　up↑↑↑　up↑↑↑↑
集まるだけで笑えるなんて
歌うだけで幸せなんて
かなり地球に優しいエコじゃん

Jumping Now
ガチでウルワシ　Never Ending Girls' Life
日々マジ　ライブだし待ったなし
早起きしても早寝は Non Non Non!
目一杯 Shouting　ワッショイ
ガチでスバラシ　Never Ending Girls' Song
午後ティータイムには持ってこい
片思いでも玉砕で Here We Go!
歌えば Shining After School

So
Shining Shiner Shinyest
Girls be ambitious & shine

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Breeze

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Breeze 2010-02-11T07:22:53+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

ft1717492

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ft1717492 2010-02-11T10:24:00+00:00

Aenna

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Aenna 2010-02-11T13:00:54+00:00

K-ON?!

Ra-s

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Ra-s 2010-02-12T05:23:10+00:00

Star

taNa

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taNa 2010-02-12T07:44:43+00:00

K-ON!

Scar

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Scar 2010-02-12T08:22:11+00:00

Awesome <3

taka1235

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taka1235 2010-02-12T09:01:03+00:00

taNa wrote:
K-ON!

Masana

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Masana 2010-02-12T11:17:34+00:00

good map!!!

Iluhiwizel

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Iluhiwizel 2010-02-12T11:47:00+00:00

go go b1 =w=b

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-02-13T12:13:21+00:00

Thanks ☆☆** v(o^▽^o)v**☆☆ Thanks ~ for STAR !!!!

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2010-02-13T12:42:40+00:00

~[General]~
- สีBG เป็นสีดำดีกว่านะ เข้าดีด้วยฮะ
- Source มันมีมั้ยนิ มะมีก็ไม่เป็นไร แฮ่ะๆ หนูก็ไม่รู้ ฮ่าๆๆๆ

~[Normal]~
fine OwO
แต่พลอยฟังเสียงตอนสไลด์ในนอมอลมันแปลกๆไงไม่รู้สิ สไลด์บางตัวช่วงหมุนกลับมันอยู่ตรงเส้นสีน้ำเงินเลยฟังดูแปลกๆมั้ง

~[Hard]~
00:40:510 - remove clap? ;_;
01:42:628 - add clap, maybe?

~[Insane]~
สปินเนอร์โหดแฉด แง้งงง /me กัดคอ
00:37:687 (1) - Orz พอพลอยเจอสไลด์วางตัวหมุนกลับเส้นสีฟ้าทีไรเสียงมันแปลกมากๆสำหรับพลอยทุกที
00:41:746 (1) - ทำเตือน x2 หน่อยมั้ย? (อย่าเปรียบเทียบกะที่แมพดีเจป้อบไม่มีนะ เพราะช่วงนั้นยังไม่เข้มเรื่องป้ายเตือนเท่าเดี๋ยวนี้)
00:47:393 (1) - ^
00:53:040 (1) - ^

go go bakaru

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-02-13T13:22:51+00:00

thank you orion ~

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Onizuki

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Onizuki 2010-02-13T13:40:17+00:00

Cool!

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-02-13T13:54:52+00:00

thank you for star Onizuki ^^

Kytoxid

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Kytoxid 2010-02-14T06:46:51+00:00

[General]

I feel like Normal is a bit too hard for the easiest difficulty.
If possible, could you reduce the SB images to 800x600 or smaller? Generally that's the size limit.
White notes + kiai = pain.
Consider adding jpop as 1 word in the tags.
Timing feels 20ms early or so, try 472?
Lots of unused timing sections lying around, try tidying those up.

[Normal]

00:09:804 (5) - Awkwardly placed repeat.
00:38:040 (4) - ^
00:39:628 (1) - End 1/2 sooner?
01:03:099 (6) - Extend by 1/4?
02:39:648 - Consider mapping this break; ending a break with a spinner...right into another break feels a bit weird..

The rhythms on this difficulty really stood out for me, they were very cool.

[Hard]

00:46:157 (4) - Felt a bit out of place, a note on the white tick before it would be cool too.
02:39:628 - Same thing here as on Normal.
02:54:804 (1) - Not the best place for a spinner, imo.

Neat too.

[Insane]

Wow, high max score. It's pretty difficult though, so I guess it's okay.

Overall, it's pretty good. Feels overmapped in many places though.

Star~

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-02-14T07:28:07+00:00

SB I'm use 900 , umm but last time I'm use1280 BAT said changed to 1024

maybe i think 900 it'sok ^^

other fixed !!
timing double check by DJPop

thank you for STAR ﾟ+.･ﾟ+｡(〃・ω・〃)｡+ﾟ･.+ﾟ

Tomoka Rin

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Tomoka Rin 2010-02-14T08:15:35+00:00

star~

Lybydose

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Lybydose 2010-02-14T08:38:56+00:00

Offset seems fine, although I was doing better with -7ms or so.

However, the offset is not placed correctly. You should place it two white lines forward from where it is now. After you do that, move your kiai sections to be exactly on the white lines so the fountains aren't a few ms early. Based on what you've got now, you could just add +20ms to all green timing sections to fix that.

Also a few minor suggestions for Hard:

00:52:001 (3) - awkward. The 3 sounds better to me if you move it back 1/2 to the red tick
01:38:236 - also awkward. add a note here?
02:28:883 - add note here?

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-02-14T08:59:12+00:00

ﾟ☆,｡･:*:･ﾟ★o(´▽｀*)/♪Thanks♪ for Moddin ~

- Status -

Fixed

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MegaManEXE

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MegaManEXE 2010-02-14T09:15:11+00:00

(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-02-14T09:23:29+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Card N'FoRcE

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Card N'FoRcE 2010-02-14T14:35:26+00:00

- General:

How about forcing the DJpop's K-on skin?
Offset feels late to me, i suggest 1160/1165

- Normal:

.Opinions:
Good

- Hard:

.Opinions:
^^

- Insane:

.Opinions:
00:43:001 (3,1) - i misread this as a jump, because of the previous patterns. Maybe it's just me, but i think it's confusing.
Nothing else

Sweet SB as usual and great map.
Let me know about the skin and fix the offset, then i'll consider protobubbling ^^

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-02-14T14:50:25+00:00

okay ~ Fixed ~

Sonic Fumes

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Sonic Fumes 2010-02-14T15:04:10+00:00

You need more combos.
You need a hit circle (If you don't)
You need a crucial element

Diasios

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Diasios 2010-02-14T16:50:37+00:00

Pubbled~

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-02-14T16:52:15+00:00

SonicArena1 thank for STAR ~ but i don' want to add skin in this map :3

and xxheroxx thank for pub ^^///

Ichigo-Sora

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Ichigo-Sora 2010-02-15T03:09:02+00:00

Star ^^
Maybe add K-On as the source and not the tag? Just a suggestion.
No kudosu for this post ^^

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-02-15T03:32:36+00:00

eh ~ I'm already added it :3 ~

thank you for STAR ^^

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Tanmak 2010-02-15T08:37:38+00:00

huhu~ Good song and SB

Starred~

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-02-15T11:22:18+00:00

thank you for STAR (๑╹◡╹๑)

DeadAlready

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DeadAlready 2010-02-15T13:56:54+00:00

ruru nice map >w</

stared~ <3

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-02-15T13:59:05+00:00

thank you for star ^^ quin ~

Larto

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Larto 2010-02-15T14:10:17+00:00

Map an easier difficulty? :< Normal has some evil parts that can AND WILL kill newer players. :<

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-02-15T14:23:57+00:00

~~OKAY ~ I'll make easy diff (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ~~

UPLOADED

Larto

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Larto 2010-02-15T18:40:17+00:00

Great!

James

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James 2010-02-17T00:49:45+00:00

my only concern here is the uhh..
kiai.. too many.. not that it is wrong but im sure alot of bats will complain about it.

and the epic part was not mapped..

03:15:988 - 03:27:282

and those 2x sliders at insane.. players should get that after missing the first slider..

pretty solid map otherwise, nothing to complain except for the kiai part

Cyril Scarlet

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