16:26 Xexxar: 00:40:091 (4,5,6,7) - 
16:26 Xexxar: ugly
16:26 ThePal: You pointed some point out
16:26 Xexxar: 00:24:472 (5,2) - 
16:26 Xexxar: blanket this better
16:26 Xexxar: 00:25:400 (4,6) - 
16:26 ThePal: blanket, what's that
16:27 Xexxar: consider going for a slider that blankets these notes better
16:27 Xexxar: second i'll show you
16:28 Xexxar: a blanket is where a note overlaps another
16:28 Xexxar: http://puu.sh/hL3qL/df9ee7eb1c.jpg
16:28 Xexxar: an example
16:28 ThePal: Oh, right
16:29 Xexxar: so like this: http://puu.sh/hL3w8/7de5eebc6e.jpg
16:29 ThePal: hmm
16:29 Xexxar: looks better because it flows together more
16:29 ThePal: You're unto something there. Niice
16:29 Xexxar: consider incorperating a blanket here as well. something like this:
16:30 Xexxar: http://puu.sh/hL3Cz/58b21226b1.jpg
16:31 Xexxar: 00:36:998 (2) - 
16:31 Xexxar: while this agree's with vocals you're avoiding a major downbeat, might want to consider changing this or leave it up to you
16:32 Xexxar: 00:42:720 (3,4) -  ugly and unneccesary overlap, blanket
16:32 Xexxar: arguably no reason for these to be straight, going with a more curved slider would allow for a consistent flowy motion
16:33 ThePal: 00:36:998 (2) - I like it how it is, I'll change it if more people start pointing it out, I'll keep it in mind, tho
16:34 Xexxar: these two notes would potentially be better if they were 1/4th bouncy back sliders cause the piano has a sort of triple sound to it.
16:34 Xexxar: great way to add some variety to the current 1/2th rhythm
16:35 Xexxar: or even a triple stream
16:36 ThePal: which ones?
16:36 Xexxar: 00:57:256 (4) -00:56:946 (1,2) - 
16:36 Xexxar: second thing
16:36 Xexxar: those two
16:38 ThePal: indeed, niiiice
16:39 Xexxar: 01:56:173 (1) - 
16:39 Xexxar: end this slider early and put a double 1/8th at the end of it into a triplet
16:39 Xexxar: i would consider incorperating this in a couple other places but this was the most easy
16:40 Xexxar: because theres that piano triplet thing going on again
16:40 Xexxar: and a double would be a nice variance
16:40 Xexxar: 01:59:421 (3,4,5) - 
16:40 Xexxar: move the note by itself to better reflect the shape intended
16:41 Xexxar: 216, 284 is better
16:41 Xexxar: or 217 287
16:41 ThePal: hmm
16:41 Xexxar: idk its probably fine
16:41 Xexxar: i thought i saw something
16:42 Xexxar: 02:13:648 (1,2) - 
16:42 Xexxar: consider flowing these notes into eachother more
16:42 Xexxar: aka aim the slider at the note
16:43 Xexxar: 02:40:709 (2,3) - 
16:43 Xexxar: this blanket is a wee bit off
16:43 ThePal: hmm
16:43 Xexxar: 401 57 would be better
16:44 Xexxar: 400 57 is best tho
16:44 Xexxar: 02:42:101 (7,8,9) - consider making these a bit more impactful with some more exciting jumps
16:45 Xexxar: they're pretty intense beats and could be a bit more exciting / energetic. maybe increase SV a bit and have some slightly more creative slider design without sacraficing sV
16:45 ThePal: sV, SV?
16:46 ThePal: Yeah, idk so many osu! verbs for things, sorry about that. hah
16:46 Xexxar: slider velocity
16:46 ThePal: But you're right about the shapes and jumps tho
16:46 Xexxar: same thing i just had a capital cause keyboards are hard
16:47 Xexxar: well that concludes my mod