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CommanderGwonam - I.M. Crazy

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Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, February 23, 2010 at 5:49:24 PM

Artist: CommanderGwonam
Title: I.M. Crazy
Source: I.M. Meen
Tags: Youtube Poop YTP YTPMV Furries Blender Commander Gwonam
BPM: 180.05
Filesize: 9095kb
Play Time: 01:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. Mean (3.75 stars, 83 notes)
  2. Meaniepants (4.94 stars, 317 notes)
  3. Nice (1.49 stars, 47 notes)
Download: CommanderGwonam - I.M. Crazy
Download: CommanderGwonam - I.M. Crazy (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Wow this can oddly be considered my first beatmap.

Anyways, 4th attempt at a beatmap, hope it doesn't suck like the other 3 :3.

EDIT: Feb 6: Added normal (Mean), Added easy (Nice), Took Ichigo-Sora's and LKs's modding. Thank you :D
EDIT: Feb 7: Took MoonFragrance's, DiamondCrash's, Breeze's, and Nakata Yuji's modding. Thank you :D. Map moved to pending.
EDIT: Feb 8th: Took sonnyc's and Leorda's modding. Thank you :D.
EDIT: Feb 9th: Took arken1015's modding. First MAT to mod this :3. Thank you :D.
EDIT: Feb 10th: Took jamesleao's [DBF]'s, and gdeath's modding. Thank you :D
EDIT: Feb 11th: Took some of samipale's modding, and AgnesChan's modding. Thank you :D.
EDIT: Feb 15th: Took Natekke Desu's, Derekku Chan's, YGOkid8's, FuukoLover's, Shulin's, roxkyuubiforever's, and DJPop's modding. Thank you :D. Special thanks to Derekku Chan for fixing the BPM <3. Re-made Meaniepants
EDIT: Feb 16th: Took Derekku Chan's modding. Thank you :D.
EDIT: Feb 17th: Pubbled <3. Made self-found spacing adjustments.
EDIT: Feb 18th: Took Neo Adonis's modding. Thank you :D.
EDIT: Feb 19th: Took Dusty's modding. Thank you :D.
EDIT: Feb 20th: Took James2250's modding. Thank you :D.
EDIT: Feb 21st: Took Xgor's, Lokamp's, x3ns0r's, Symbolic's and Midget's modding. Thank you :D.
EDIT: Feb 23rd: Took orioncomet's modding. Thank you :D. Special thanks to Dakeyrus for modding <3.
Last edited by Shohei Ohtani , edited 35 times in total.
Ichigo-Sora
162 posts
Joined February 2009
Ichigo-Sora
All of these are suggestions, so you don't have to follow them ^^

[Nice]
00:10:232 (3) - Align with 2
00:24:232 (1) - I think a note after a spinner is too hard for an [Easy] map
00:40:232 (1,2) - These 2 sliders don't look that nice ^^" Also, maybe you can somehow move the first one so it's not covering the 2nd one?
00:49:565 (1) - Straigten slider?

[Mean]
So many spinners :o
Pretty good ^^ You could tidy up the sliders a bit, but otherwise, I don't think there are any outstanding problems.

[Meaniepants]
00:09:565 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Pattern looks kinda strange. Maybe you can move it down a bit so you can fit 7 at the top?
00:34:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Very confusing patter D: But I'm guessing this is [Insane] so it might be okay.
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Thanks for the modding :D

AgnesChan said he might be making a diff for this, so be expecting one <3.
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
LK COMMON MODDING~

what is the BG? its too Strange
check offest? not very anastomosis try 2885

nice
[00:30:89] 2 grids up and right
[00:31:56] 1 grid right and 4 grids up
[01:00:23] use green line

Mean

[00:18;23] move 1 grid right?

Meaniepants
awesome,but good
[00:20:23] lol make more Clear
[00:47:56] (5,6,7) move them 1 grid left

+star~
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Added everything you said, except for the background (I'll change it if more people start to dislike it, but it WAS the background of CommanderGwonam's youtube page for a while, so it's kind of fitting :3.)
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
aRiskOfRain
Nice:

00:08:218 (1) - Straighten it up?
00:10:218 (3) - In line with the 2?
00:14:218 (2,3) - Line the two with the one and the three with the two?

Mean:

00:14:884 (4,5,6,7) - Move down one level 3 grid.
00:16:218 (1) - Same.

Meaniepants:

Awesome name.

00:10:384 (6,7) - Up one grid.
00:58:718 (8) - Up one grid.

Very good, have a star.
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
MoonFragrance
[Nice]
00:30:218 (2,3,4) - make regular triangle

[Mean]
00:14:551 (3,4) - align
00:52:218 (1) - remove new combo

[Meanipants]
00:50:218 (13,15) - align with 00:50:051 (12)
Nakata Yuji
471 posts
Joined April 2009
Nakata Yuji
I'm a drug free person. And listening to this song has convinced me to stay that way.

Nice:
Imo, you could increase the overall difficulty one or two ticks.
00:09:551 (2,3,1) - I would put 2 more notes between these.
00:17:551 (2) - Make the beginning have the whistle hitsound as well.
00:26:884 (1) - You should break this down into individual notes. One long slider will seem boring to the beginning player.
00:59:551 (4) - Make this a finish.

Good difficulty.

Mean:
00:13:551 (1) - If this is supposed to be a normal, then this shouldn't be here.
00:25:551 (5) - Is not on the same y-axis as 6,7, and 8.
|->00:24:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Either way, I think you can do much more with this part than what you have. Make a design :3
00:24:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Again, this can be more intuitive.

Meaniepants:
00:10:551 (7) - Nazi.
00:37:551 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - I think you can change that.
Fun.

Nice map.
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Thanks everyone for the modding :3.

Hoping to get this looked at by some MATs or BATs soon :3.
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
Timing seems good

[General]
  1. Youtube, in, a should not be tag, they contains to much :/
[Nice]
  • notes are fine, some hitsound suggestion, choose which you like to fix :
  1. 00:05:218 (2) - use clap here
  2. 00:11:884 (1) - add clap
  3. 00:17:551 (1) - remove whistle, remove finish at 00:18:218 (2), add clap
  4. 00:23:884 (1) - add finish
  5. 00:49:218 (1) - add clap
  6. 00:53:218 (3) - remove clap
[Mean]
  1. 00:21:218 (1) - remove clap
  2. 00:42:551 (1) - remove clap
[Meaniepants]
  1. 00:55:884 (1) - remove clap
lol This song drive me crazy
nice map, star
Sonnyc
7,761 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Hello

Nice
  • 00:52:218 (3) Clap at end
Mean
  • 00:18:884 (1) Clap
    00:40:218 (1) ^
Mean+
  • lol
Star
Luvdic
2,113 posts
Joined July 2009
Luvdic
Meaniepants:

D:!!! Lol this map... D:
If you want to make this map meanier, id recommend you to reduce circle size... Lol (Not that im encouraging you to do it, in fact, i would hate you if you were to do that Lol)

Now putting aside what said above. I don't really like the way on which this map flows, specially those back and forth beats... You don't really have to do anything about this, but if you do, it will be more fun to me to play.

Rest... nothing to say about them
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hello!

[General]
1) If the song is over, why there's some another song and video? Please cut after end of slider

[Nice]
00:10:884 (1) - Move 1 grid right?
00:14:884 (3) - Move 1 grid down?
00:37:551 (2) - Allign with 1 (end of slider) It's bad if this slider overlapped with previous slider
00:48:218 (3) - Move 1 grid down?

[Mean]
00:02:884 (1) - Make parallel?
00:37:551 (2) - Allign with 1 (end of slider) It's bad if this slider overlapped with previous slider

[Meaniepants]
00:52:884 (5) - Make parallel?

Well, this not too scary about that
GREAT MAP!
STAR
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Allright, all finished fixing :3.

Thanks everybody for the modding :D.

@Leorda: I personally like how the extra video unintentionally lines up with the results page, so I'd prefer to keep it there :3.
arien666
6,290 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
[Nice]
00:16:21(1,2) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
00:30:88(2) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down and left?

[Mean]
00:26:55(8) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down and left?

[Meaniepants]
Most crazy lol!!!



Good(?) song :3
Anyway... Last diff makes me loled<
Umm...?
SP 8+2*3
Good luck :3

Here's my star :3

edit. Star!!!
JamesLeao
366 posts
Joined October 2008
JamesLeao
[Meaniepants]
00:36:218 (9) - new combo
00:38:884 (9) - new combo
[Mean]
00:05:551 (3) - new combo
[Nice]
nice , yea
you don't have to fix that , that's not very big problem , i think.

My english is not very well , sorry :cry:
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
gdeath
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Modding taken :D.

Thank you :3.

If anybody mods this map on Friday or Saturday (United States, PST), then I probably won't be able to get to your suggestions until monday (no school :D.).

Thank you once again :D.
[DBF]
1,827 posts
Joined January 2009
[DBF]
first i want to write : i like this is song.

[Nice]
00:10:551 - hmm.. spacing?
[Mean]
00:12:884 - spacing.
00:34:884 - i dont approve long sliders, bored.
[Meaniepants]
Oh, this is diff dont have dynamic.. very hard for playing..

00:34:884 - i like it.
00:41:718 - new combo, i think..
00:44:384 - ^

My advice to you - remake insane, and use more sliders, this is song really can have good insane, star~
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
I didn't take your spacing advice, and I only re-located a few sections on Insane, but thank you for modding :D. When I have the time, I'll think of some new ideas for insane to give it more win :D.

Thank you :D
SamiPale
766 posts
Joined October 2009
SamiPale
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Agnes
osu! Alumni
1,153 posts
Joined July 2009
Agnes
Saw this in the queue, and modding. Yay.

[Nice]

No errors.

[Mean]

No errors.

[Meaniepants] I giggled...

00:23:093 (2,3) - Fix spacing slightly?
00:23:176 (3,4) - ^

Star'd.
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Ok, took the modding :D.

I only took some of samipale's Meaniepants modding, as some stuff, imo, sounded better without a hitsound :D.
Natteke
6,538 posts
Joined August 2009
Natteke
Hi.

If I put "(?)" - it means im not sure.
You don't have to follow my modding if you don't want to.

Lol, that bg scares me :O

[Nice]

00:31:551 (3) - Mby move that one to the left one grid? (using grid level 3)


[Mean]

Looks fine, I guess.


[Meaniepants]
00:58:551 (7) - Spacing is wrong
YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
2,729 posts
Joined February 2009
YGOkid8
General
You must have an ending point for Kiai Time. End it at 01:05:551.

Nice
00:29:551 (5) - New Combo here instead of 00:30:218 (1).
00:37:551 (2) - New Combo.
00:42:884 (2) - ^
00:48:218 (3) - New Combo here instead of 00:49:551 (1)
00:50:884 (2) - New Combo.
00:58:884 (3) - ^

Mean
00:10:884 (3) - New Combo.
00:32:218 (3) - ^
00:50:884 (3) - ^
00:58:884 (3) - ^

00:14:884 (1) - No New Combo.

00:10:884 (3,4,5,6) - Make these symmetrical.

Meaniepants
00:21:384 (1) - No New Combo.
Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
[General]
*add 'youtube' to tags on all diffs?
*BPM seems to be a tiny bit off. I keep testing over and over again, and it seems like the bpm slowly falls behind throughout the map, so as to being up to 30ms late at the end. 180.05 seems to be MUCH better, but I'm not 100% positive. Remember to resnap after changing that on all diffs, please. :)

[Nice]
00:32:218 (1) - End a white tick earlier.
00:53:551 (1) - ^

[Mean]
I don't like the overlapping sliders in here (same with the easier diff). They just kinda look sloppy to me. =X

[Meaniepants]
00:34:051 (4) - (nazi) move up a grid because it's offscreen in the editor.
00:51:551 (5) - I'd end this farther away from the next note because I thought that there wasn't a gap in time between them and missed.

Besides what I pointed out, there really isn't anything "unrankable" in this map, but I feel like you could've made it look a bit better, aesthetically speaking. I'd like to see more patterns instead of just notes going any which way around the screen. x.x;
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Sorry for the unnanounced absence :(.

Anyways, so this is the second time I've been told my map needs a bit more funs, so I'll probably re-map some parts that I feel don't have too many patterns ~.

Thank you all for modding :D.

Changes will be made tomorrow.
Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
Oh, they're still fun, but they could just look a bit better with patterns and yada yada yada. :) Have fun remapping~
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Yay :D.

Is there any specific spot that you feel needs work? :D
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
What is this song? O_O"
Sounds like a nico MAD.

~Nice~
Fine.

~Mean~
00:16:218 (1) - move start right 1 grid (Lv3)
00:34:884 (1) - add finish at start
00:54:551 (4) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)

~Meaniepants~
00:49:551 (9) - new combo
01:01:051 (1) - remove new combo
01:01:551 (4) - new combo
01:03:718 (1) - remove new combo
01:04:218 (4) - new combo


+Star
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Ok, took the modding :3.

Thank you Derekku for fixing the BPM (I thought it was odd myself, but I couldn't figure out why.)

Re-mapping will still happen, but once all of this modding is finished (and once I can actually have music on louder than "as quiet as possible"

:3.
Fuuko
486 posts
Joined June 2009
Fuuko
Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA! <33'

Nice

00:16:218 (1,2) - Extend by 1 beat.
Mean

Nothing wrong found but...
00:45:539 (1) - This slider bugs me...it's hell ugly. My suggestion is http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3698
That's all~ Have your star. :3
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Thank you for modding.
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
General:

-- Low res BG try and find a better one if you can.
-- Source “I.M Meen” ~ is this intentionally mispelt?

Nice:

00:05:552 (1) – Nice combo?
00:06:885 (4) – Right one square (to get those sliders all nicely aligned turn of gridsnap and use distance snap)
00:12:217 (2) – Move down so it doesn’t overlap with 00:10:884 (1) –
00:18:881 (1) – Add clap.

Mean:

00:13:548 (7) – Too close.
00:18:557 (5) – Move right 2 squares?

Meaniepants:

-- This difficulty feels a bit disorganised to me making it slightly hard to play (but then again I am used to symmetrical maps lol) examples below.

00:02:884 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – When these two combo’s overlap it looks slightly messy, consider starting 00:04:217 (1) – below the previous combo.
00:15:380 (4) – Up one square?
00:18:879 (1,2,3,4) – Same here going back to the direction the previous combo disrupts the flow imo.
00:23:378 (5) - Spacing too close.
00:24:544 (2) – Down one square.
00:28:210 (5) – Up one square.
00:28:543 (6) – Left one square.
00:39:040 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – This overlap and going back over the previous combo looks messy etc.
00:58:534 (7,8) – Spacing compare with the rest of this combo.
00:58:867 (1,2,3,4,5) – Misalignments like this look somewhat messy, raise 1 by 2 squares and 2 by 1 square?

Imo this difficulty could do with a few more sliders, stacks, patterns etc. To me it felt slightly disorganised (unlike the other difficulties), hopefully you'll get some good ideas when you remap ^^ (if your still remapping that is XD)

Idk about the bpm it seems okay but the song started giving me a headache after a while sorry :(

~ Star.
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
That was... scary~

Nice
  1. 00:48:204(1) - Too far from the (2). For a easy difficulty like this one, is pretty hard to deduce. I recomend spin this slider (Ctrl + >) and make it closer to the (2).
Mean
  1. 00:02:884(1) - Point this slider to the South. The way that is now is confusing and hard to deduce when it ends.
  2. 00:13:215(2) - Move 7 level 3 grids to the left
Overall
  1. 01:00:200(Timing section) - Replace this timing section, it's off.
  2. 01:05:532(Timing Section) - ^
Star, but next time, use distance snap =/
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Re-made Meaniepants mode.

Took Shulin's modding. I'll take roxkyuubi's modding once I finish doing something super fast.

Thank you all :D.

Shulin wrote:

-- Source “I.M Meen” ~ is this intentionally mispelt?
The person used in this video is the title character from the game "I.M. Meen"
Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
[Nice]
*Incorrect bpm. 180.054 != 180.05 o:
00:10:882 (1) - Looks ugly overlapping the circles
00:13:881 - Perhaps add a note here?
00:14:547 - ^
00:18:879 (1) - I'd end this with a finish instead of a clap
00:53:536 (1) - finish instead of clap

[Mean]
*BPM is correct~
00:18:880 (1) - finish?
00:24:212 (1) - this bugs me that it's not centered asldkfj
00:40:207 (1) - finish?
00:52:203 (3) - I'd add a repeat (then fix spacing)

[Meaniepants]
*Incorrect bpm. 180.054 != 180.05 o:
A bit linear, but less messy and I see some nice patterns in there. Good~
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Thanks once again, Derekku <3.
Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
Looks good to me!

Here's your Pubble! :3
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Thanks for the pubble <3.
Neo Adonis
320 posts
Joined November 2009
Neo Adonis
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
[Nice]
-No problem

[Mean]
-No problem

[Meaniepants]
-No problem but is a bit difficult ^^u


Good luck and my star :3
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
:?

yeah, sure, have a star

[Mean]
but those sliders are ugly.
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Thanks Astom and Dusty :3.

I didn't give you kudosu, Astom, since you didn't really say anything beneficial. Sorry 3:. But thank you for the time you took to look at this map :3.
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom

CDFA wrote:

Thanks Astom and Dusty :3.

I didn't give you kudosu, Astom, since you didn't really say anything beneficial. Sorry 3:. But thank you for the time you took to look at this map :3.
sure, no problem ^^
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
nice:
seems fine

mean:
00:06:883 (5) - move down 2 tiny grids to align with 2
00:07:216 (6) - move down 1 tiny grid to align with 1 (then realign 7,8)

meaniepants:
00:18:880 (1) - move down to align with 2,3,4
00:27:877 (4) - move 1 tiny grid down
00:45:372 (1,2) - switch new combo
01:05:533 (1) - move 1 tiny grid up to put at center of grid

*star*
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Thanks for the modding James <3.
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
iDwarf
1,202 posts
Joined February 2010
iDwarf
[Nice]

All Ok (Some hitsounds are weird placed)

[Mean]

Ok (Some notes placed weird - 00:53:537 - Maybe a square formation will be better)

[Meaniepants]

Guess, that's ok (?)
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Nice
00:28:877 (4,1) - whistle the 4th, finish the 1st
00:46:872 (2) - replace claps with whistles!
00:48:205 (1) - clap the 1st repeat of this slider
00:49:538 (2) - whistle ALL this slider!

Mean
00:17:547 (2,3,4,5) - find a more original spacing here... (plus, new combo on 2nd)

Meaniepants
00:23:212 (4,5,6,7,8) - refine spacing, please...

Cute. Delicious. Fabulous. Awesome. (means star ;3)
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