1. FurukawaPan's Tsukiumi (4.98 stars, 267 notes)
2. Kusano (2.02 stars, 85 notes)
3. Musubi (3.64 stars, 131 notes)

osuplayer111 wrote:

Removed another thread because of double beatmap, but there is still a problem with it.

[General]
Add a preview point
Use AIMod (Ctrl+Shift+A)

[Easy]
Use spacing more consistently
00:16:386 (4) - New combo
00:23:886 (5,6) - Stack at 4?
00:25:508 (9) - Align with 8
00:25:305 (9) - Start at 00:25:305 and ends at 00:25:305 would be better
00:26:521 (1) - Make it align with the two next hitcircles
00:33:819 (2,3,4) - Align with 1
00:50:440 (x) - Add note (maybe?)
00:52:062 (9) - End at the next white tick
01:06:454 (1) - Start at 01:06:454 and ends at 01:07:873

[Normal]
00:07:062 (5) - New combo
00:23:886 (12,13) - Stack at 11?
00:27:332 - Add note
00:27:738 (6,7) - Spacing
00:28:954 - ^ ?
00:29:765 (8) - New combo
00:32:805 (15) - ^
00:50:643 (12) - Move to 00:50:846
00:51:454 (13,14) - Move to next tick
01:00:575 (9) - New combo

[james039 difficulty]
00:06:454 (1) - Is this new combo needed?
00:55:407 (2) - This note felt somewhat weird
01:14:562 (3) - Align
01:15:170 (1) - Make it align with 1 of previous stream?

dlguiga wrote:

[james039 difficulty]
00:06:454 (1) - Is this new combo needed? no not really, so I removed it
00:55:407 (2) - This note felt somewhat weird changed
01:14:562 (3) - Align fixed
01:15:170 (1) - Make it align with 1 of previous stream? done


Great song, star!

Sushi971 wrote:

[james039's]
00:05:744 (4,5,6,7,8) - spacing. This part is supposed to be jumpy, but I see the confusion, so I've tried something else.
00:54:697 (3) - ^ I think fudging the (3) is reasonable since I'm treating 3,4,5 as though it were a stack centered at (4)
00:56:319 (3) - ^ same
00:57:332 (1,2,3,4) - obvious spacing As the first thing you mentioned, I've tried some slightly more sensible jumping here. This part is definitely supposed to be jumpy though.
same thing for following copypasta. Made exact same change for copy part

Chacha17 wrote:

Hai.

james039's difficulty.

I think this is supposed to be an insane. Tough spacing at the intro is tough.
better rename it to james039's Insane

well, it's "james039's difficulty", and well it's not hard enough for insane, but too hard for hard, so I'm stuck in the middle. I would call it JAMES DIFFICULTY but that's already taken by another James

00:08:278 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make this pattern symmetrical please ok
00:22:873 (1,2,3,4) - hate this stack. D:. change it to something else? *just a suggestion*
I like this stack. It's supposed to be a challenge.
00:24:292 (1,1,1) - new combo spam what. remove new combos from the next two sliders
A standard mapping style, nothing wrong with this.
00:45:981 (1,1,1) - 3 consecutive spinners and a break? D: change this to something else please
it's fine as is
01:25:305 (1) - extend this spinner to 01:28:548.
why?

Hikato wrote:

[james039 Difficulty]
00:05:440 (3,4,5) - Spacing between 4 and 5 is different than 3 and 4. 3-4 is a jump 4-5 is same spacing as 1-2-3
00:40:205 (2) - I don't think this fits here. I like it this way. Standard triplet.
00:57:940 (3) - Spacing. Yes, but it's a jump.

Frill wrote:

These are suggestions, you don't have to change anything.


[General]
- Move to pending map. (see is complete..)
- bg is 800x600 or 1024x768 resize plz
- add james039 all diffs' tags

[Easy]

00:16:386 (4) - spacing and new combo
00:29:359 (4) - new combo?
01:02:197 (3) - add whistle in end
01:03:819 (4) - remove whsitle
01:15:981 (5) - add finish
01:18:413 (6) - New combo please, since the combo are too long~
01:21:657 (1) - remove whistle?

[Normal]

*Circle size is move 1down
*Hp Drain is move 1 down
*OverAll Dif is move 1down

These are suggestions, you don't have to change anything.


[james039 Difficulty]

*OverAll Dif is move 1up
Hp Drain is move 1up

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- The BG is too big, max size is 1024 x 768. (Alternatively you can use 800 x 600).
-- A better .mp3 quality would be better... yeah.
-- +14 or so to the offset, current offset definitely feels off.
-- Soft clap doesn't really fit.
-- Oh right, tags don't need to be separated by commas.

Easy:

-- Slider velocity is kinda fast for an Easy.

00:20:035 (1) - The end is off screen.
00:22:873 (4) - New combo?
00:29:359 (1) - Hmm this slider is kinda ugly <_<
00:49:224 (4) - New combo.
01:05:035 (7,8) - Spacing?

Normal:

-- This also uses default settings... well I guess it is a normal =P

00:29:562 (x) - Note? (You're following the vocal right?)
00:29:765 (1) - Awkward claps.
00:47:603 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This bit is a bit awkward lying under the slider, imo move them away from the slider.
00:49:224 (9) - New combo?
00:49:832 (10,11) - Stacking looks off in game. (Grid snap them or use distance snap x0.0 or something)
01:02:400 (5) - This should really be 1/4 (01:02:501), but if you want to keep it 1/2 I'd recommend moving it from under the slider, at least then it's readable.
01:10:103 (6) - New combo?
01:10:609 (7) - 1/4 (01:10:609) imo (or move from the slider)

james039 difficulty:

-- Default settings? It doesn't work, especially with those jumps. + 2-3 overall difficulty imo to make the map readable.
-- Less kicksliders would be better I think. (And a new combo for every kickslider... why?)

00:06:048 (5,6,7) - Uhh... spacing?
00:28:974 (3,4,1,2,3) - Spacing here is hard to read, 00:29:582 (1,2,3) - specifically.
00:56:744 (1,1) - That kinda jump plays a bit weird.

Oh wait... this stuff has been said before right... hmm.

Keep working on it ^_^

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- The BG is too big, max size is 1024 x 768. (Alternatively you can use 800 x 600).
-- A better .mp3 quality would be better... yeah.
-- +14 or so to the offset, current offset definitely feels off.
-- Soft clap doesn't really fit.
-- Oh right, tags don't need to be separated by commas.

james039 difficulty:

-- Default settings? It doesn't work, especially with those jumps. + 2-3 overall difficulty imo to make the map readable.
-- Less kicksliders would be better I think. (And a new combo for every kickslider... why?)

00:06:048 (5,6,7) - Uhh... spacing?
00:28:974 (3,4,1,2,3) - Spacing here is hard to read, 00:29:582 (1,2,3) - specifically.
00:56:744 (1,1) - That kinda jump plays a bit weird.

Oh wait... this stuff has been said before right... hmm.

Keep working on it ^_^

ballban wrote:

nice map
i think it's ok
but.. no BG ??
i always download no video version..
so i have not video..
i think you can add a BG..
when i play your map.. background is all black..
it's all : p
star~ and sorry for my poor english >///<

Ashikabi wrote:

ballban wrote:

nice map
i think it's ok
but.. no BG ??
i always download no video version..
so i have not video..
i think you can add a BG..
when i play your map.. background is all black..
it's all : p
star~ and sorry for my poor english >///<

really? there is a video and a background

I think sliders so fast for easy, use slider velocity 1,00 or something like this.

1. Set tick 2, as on James's diff.
2. The slider speed is fine. Maybe 1.2 would be nice but I wouldn't consider it worth the effort.
3. 00:13:557 (1,2,3) - The slightly uneven spacing feels sloppy.
4. 00:24:909 (5,6) - Spacing.
5. 00:26:530 (1) - Symmetrify.
6. 00:29:368 (1) - Feels odd. Start a 1/1 later?
7. 00:32:612 (1) - ^
8. 00:39:098 (1) - The rebound feels awkward.
9. 00:39:098 (1,2,3,4) - Ugly overlap
10. 00:44:368 (1) - Ugly overlap with the blue combo. Horizontal flip the red and yellow combos?
11. 00:47:206 (3) - Ugly
12. 00:54:098 (1) - ^
13. 01:06:057 (9) - A stack of 2 plays more naturally here. Check for a few more like this in other spots.
14. 01:18:017 (4) - Move the new combo back 2 to this note.
15. 01:21:666 (1) - Lengthen by a 1/1.

1. Object placement seems random without too much thought or structure put into it. Easy difficulties should still be interesting.
2. Set tick 2, as on James's diff.
3. 00:19:030 (5) - A stack of 2 plays more naturally here. Check for a few more like this in other spots.
4. 00:24:909 (10) - Confusing overlap for a Normal.
5. 00:34:639 (7) - Finish. (take off the whistle)
6. 00:39:098 (1) - Begin this a 1/1 later.
7. 00:43:355 (3,4) - Fix this stack.
8. 00:54:098 (1) - Ugggly.
9. 01:10:112 (1) - This doesn't fit with anything. Just put a circle at 01:10:314?

1. 00:07:375 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
2. 00:13:355 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This feels rather squished and awkward.
3. 00:17:409 (3,4) - Same idea as 00:07:375. Probably the ONE AND ONLY hard rule of spacing I'd never let pass is putting a straight row of objects at equal distance with different timings.
4. 00:52 - Delete this break.
5. 00:54:402 (2,3) - Spacing.
6. 00:56:024 (2,3) - ^
7. 00:57:645 (2) - ^
8. 01:04:030 (2,3) - Spacing. Try vertical flipping the stream & putting it back up?
9. 01:07:071 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Horizontal flip this pattern? It faces the same way as the first occurrence.
10. 01:07:375 (2,3) - Spacing.
11. 01:08:997 (2,3) - ^
12. 01:25:314 (1) - Volume 30%

MetalMario201 wrote:

MyNaziList

Easy:

1. Set tick 2, as on James's diff.
2. The slider speed is fine. Maybe 1.2 would be nice but I wouldn't consider it worth the effort.
3. 00:13:557 (1,2,3) - The slightly uneven spacing feels sloppy.
4. 00:24:909 (5,6) - Spacing.
5. 00:26:530 (1) - Symmetrify.
6. 00:29:368 (1) - Feels odd. Start a 1/1 later?
7. 00:32:612 (1) - ^
8. 00:39:098 (1) - The rebound feels awkward.
9. 00:39:098 (1,2,3,4) - Ugly overlap
10. 00:44:368 (1) - Ugly overlap with the blue combo. Horizontal flip the red and yellow combos?
11. 00:47:206 (3) - Ugly
12. 00:54:098 (1) - ^
13. 01:06:057 (9) - A stack of 2 plays more naturally here. Check for a few more like this in other spots.
14. 01:18:017 (4) - Move the new combo back 2 to this note.
15. 01:21:666 (1) - Lengthen by a 1/1.

Normal:

1. Object placement seems random without too much thought or structure put into it. Easy difficulties should still be interesting.
2. Set tick 2, as on James's diff.
3. 00:19:030 (5) - A stack of 2 plays more naturally here. Check for a few more like this in other spots.
4. 00:24:909 (10) - Confusing overlap for a Normal.
5. 00:34:639 (7) - Finish. (take off the whistle)
6. 00:39:098 (1) - Begin this a 1/1 later.
7. 00:43:355 (3,4) - Fix this stack.
8. 00:54:098 (1) - Ugggly.
9. 01:10:112 (1) - This doesn't fit with anything. Just put a circle at 01:10:314?

james039 Difficulty:

1. 00:07:375 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
2. 00:13:355 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This feels rather squished and awkward.
3. 00:17:409 (3,4) - Same idea as 00:07:375. Probably the ONE AND ONLY hard rule of spacing I'd never let pass is putting a straight row of objects at equal distance with different timings.
4. 00:52 - Delete this break.
5. 00:54:402 (2,3) - Spacing.
6. 00:56:024 (2,3) - ^
7. 00:57:645 (2) - ^
8. 01:04:030 (2,3) - Spacing. Try vertical flipping the stream & putting it back up?
9. 01:07:071 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Horizontal flip this pattern? It faces the same way as the first occurrence.
10. 01:07:375 (2,3) - Spacing.
11. 01:08:997 (2,3) - ^
12. 01:25:314 (1) - Volume 30%

Alace wrote:

yo
maps are all fine for me

<Hitsounds>
Softclaps don`t sound really good in this song, i suggest to use softwhistles to replace them in all diffs

<FurukawaPan's Hard>
add 10~15% volume to the first red line ?
00:00:585 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - <3
00:16:801 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe make this easier to read, ex:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/22394
00:22:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ (i can beat it easily because i like 3/4 patterns so much)
00:57:341 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:00:584 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:19:233 (8) - new combo

FurukawaPan wrote:

Alace wrote:

yo
maps are all fine for me

<Hitsounds>
Softclaps don`t sound really good in this song, i suggest to use softwhistles to replace them in all diffs

<FurukawaPan's Hard>
add 10~15% volume to the first red line ?
00:00:585 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - <3
00:16:801 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe make this easier to read, ex:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/22394
00:22:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ (i can beat it easily because i like 3/4 patterns so much)
00:57:341 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:00:584 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:19:233 (8) - new combo

I did some volume tweaks and added a custom clap. The new combo works so I did that, the reading difficulties are intentionally done that way so they are unchanged.

http://up.ppy.sh/files/soft-hitclap.wav

And the osu! file:[attachment=0:504c0]Sekirei Cast - Sekirei (TV Size) (Ashikabi) [FurukawaPan's Hard].osu[/attachment:504c0]

Haneii wrote:

~General~
You don’t need “Sekirei” in tags since its already in the source and title.

~Easy~
00:37:882 (1) – delete this note and have the spinner end here instead? (I just think a note that soon after a spinner might be a bit difficult for an easy)
00:59:571 (3,4) – The HP bar covers them it a bit. Reposition them?

~Normal~
nothing

~FurukawaPan's Hard~
nothing




~Twinkle twinkle little star~

Haneii wrote:

I made a hitcircle (note: you don't have to use it if you don't want to)

[attachment=0:70837]hitcircle.png[/attachment:70837]

SPOILER

I also suggest using custom colours instead of the default. Here's my suggestion. I just took the two colours from the title in the opening (note: you don't have to use the colours I chose its just an example)

Ashikabi wrote:

cool! exacly the hitcircle I tried to use but hwo to put it in the map?

1. Add a hitcircleoverlay.png to the song folder to avoid conflicts with user skins. The templateskin's will do fine.

1. 00:32:612 (1,2,3,4) - The first slider comes early and might be information overload for an Easy player. I'd remove (2) and begin (1) a 1/1 later. Move (3, 4) further right to keep the rectangular pattern. (if you don't follow, have a look.)
2. 01:08:693 (2) - Feels out of place how this is the only linear slider in the entire map.

1. 00:35:855 (1) - Lengthen by a 1/1. (or shorten but beware the awkward gap)
2. 00:57:341 (5) - Lengthen by a 1/4.

1. Suggesting you rename this insane. It's ... steep.
2. 00:05:449 (3,4,5) - Spacing. Suggesting you'd move (4) down.
3. 01:05:652 (1) - I find this comes very suddenly.
4. 01:10:314 (1,2,3), etc. - Although this isn't confusing, it now looks sloppy. (and technically still isn't spaced. )
5. This difficulty feels frantic and doesn't really synergize with the music so well. I don't know what to say really.

MetalMario201 wrote:

All difficulties:

1. Add a hitcircleoverlay.png to the song folder to avoid conflicts with user skins. The templateskin's will do fine.

Easy:

1. 00:32:612 (1,2,3,4) - The first slider comes early and might be information overload for an Easy player. I'd remove (2) and begin (1) a 1/1 later. Move (3, 4) further right to keep the rectangular pattern. (if you don't follow, have a look.)
2. 01:08:693 (2) - Feels out of place how this is the only linear slider in the entire map.

Normal:

1. 00:35:855 (1) - Lengthen by a 1/1. (or shorten but beware the awkward gap)
2. 00:57:341 (5) - Lengthen by a 1/4.

FurukawaPan's Hard:

1. Suggesting you rename this insane. It's ... steep.
2. 00:05:449 (3,4,5) - Spacing. Suggesting you'd move (4) down.
3. 01:05:652 (1) - I find this comes very suddenly.
4. 01:10:314 (1,2,3), etc. - Although this isn't confusing, it now looks sloppy. (and technically still isn't spaced. )
5. This difficulty feels frantic and doesn't really synergize with the music so well. I don't know what to say really.

MetalMario201 wrote:

All difficulties:

1. Add a hitcircleoverlay.png to the song folder to avoid conflicts with user skins. The templateskin's will do fine.

FurukawaPan's Hard:

1. Suggesting you rename this insane. It's ... steep.
2. 00:05:449 (3,4,5) - Spacing. Suggesting you'd move (4) down.
3. 01:05:652 (1) - I find this comes very suddenly.
4. 01:10:314 (1,2,3), etc. - Although this isn't confusing, it now looks sloppy. (and technically still isn't spaced. )

MetalMario201 wrote:

This difficulty feels frantic and doesn't really synergize with the music so well. I don't know what to say really.

Alace wrote:

<FurukawaPan's Hard:>
00:57:341 (1,2,3,4,5) - this spacing is really hard to read
01:00:584 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ also 01:00:584 (3) is better for a newcombo start
01:13:557 (3) - new combo
01:14:166 (1) - remove new combo

1. Add an approachcircle.
2. Fix the tags, they don't need commas.
3. Just as a consistency thing, make the lead-in the same for all difficulties? It's fine either way.

1. Not telling you to change the whole map, but please modify the slider velocity for easier difficulties next time. The spacing is a little disconcerting right now, in comparison to the slider velocity.

1. You only fixed the tags in one difficulty.