Sugar Donut - Dark Envy Knight · forum

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-01-30T15:13:44+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 3월 1일 월요일 at 오후 4:19:29

Artist: Sugar Donut
Title: Dark Envy Knight
Source: Sugar Dount's 3rd Album SugardonutS
Tags: DJMAX DJ MAX Telescope D
BPM: 195
Filesize: 7293kb
Play Time: 01:44
Difficulties Available:

Easy (2.08 stars, 112 notes)
Hard (4.99 stars, 267 notes)
MX (5 stars, 331 notes)
Normal (4.21 stars, 169 notes)

Download: Sugar Donut - Dark Envy Knight
Download: Sugar Donut - Dark Envy Knight (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 17th beatmap :3

Sugar Donut's Rock song in DJMAX Series

Original Song name is 'Telescope' in Sugar Donut's 3rd Album 'SugardonutS'
Included DJMAX Clazziquai Edition.

Composed & Sung by Sugar Donut
Visualized by D

Last edited by MoonFragrance 2010-03-01T07:20:24+00:00, edited 11 times in total.

bmin11

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bmin11 2010-02-03T01:04:11+00:00

[MX]
최고입니다 ㄷㄷ
00:11:605 (6) - 앞에 피니쉬 추가
00:54:528 (10) - 이걸 속도가 줄어든 슬라이더 하나로 바꿔도 괜찮을것 같아요. 지금도 좋지만요 ㅎ
01:07:605 (3) - 앞에 피니쉬 추가?

[Hard]
00:02:835 (2) - 1번과 일렬로 맞추지 마시고 조금만 옮겨주세요
00:44:682 (7) - 속도를 반으로 줄여봐도...? 지금도 훌륭하지만요
01:14:528 (1) - 앞에 피니쉬 추가?

[Normal]
00:44:989 (1) - 피니쉬 추가
00:59:758 (1) - ^

[Easy]
01:04:374 (3) - White tick까지 늘리세요

쿠도스 모으는대로 분홍별 쏘겠습니다 ㅡㅜb

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-02-03T01:41:19+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

LKs

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LKs 2010-02-04T08:19:06+00:00

LK COMMON MODDING~

OVERALL
tags : "DJMAX DJ MAX Telescope D" .lol why

easy
[00:38:22] new combo
[00:38:22] move 1 grid up
[00:39:45] move 1 grid down

normal
[01:31:45] (4,5) move them 1 grid down

hard
fine

MX
[01:04:52] remove new combo
[01:05:60] new combo
[01:06:22] ^
[01:06:83] ^
[01:06:98] remove new combo
[01:07:45] new combo
[01;08;06] ^

well done
+star~

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-02-04T08:43:01+00:00

fixed except new combo modding :3

kino77

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kino77 2010-02-04T14:02:57+00:00

Nice one~
Star~
>w<

Dusty

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Dusty 2010-02-05T04:47:56+00:00

[Easy]
00:56:989 (4) - I'm a little worried, this note is hidden, that might not be so good on an Easy

everything else is awesome

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-02-05T08:24:40+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

EEeee

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EEeee 2010-02-05T16:32:33+00:00

kino77 wrote:
Nice one~
Star~
>w<

what he said >w<

Leorda

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Leorda 2010-02-05T17:18:55+00:00

Hayeonghaseyo!

[Hitsound]
1) The normal hitsound is too loud. Make it volume lower bit?

[Easy]
00:07:143 (3) - Move 1 grid left?
00:08:989 (2) - Move 1 grid right?
00:24:374 (2) - Move 2 grid right?

[Normal]
01:00:066 (2,4) - Move 1 grid right?

Not bad, but I can't find some issue
STAR

Breeze

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Breeze 2010-02-05T17:34:03+00:00

[General]

Well, DJMAX was already in the tag, is it needed to add DJ and MAX to tag? :/
To all diffculties : 00:05:605 - 00:13:912, custom normalclap1 sounds loud, 50% volume is better to me

[Easy]

01:45:297 (1) - I thinks slider ends here better, end at blue tick sounds odd

nice map though, this time you didn't use suit custom sound
my ears fill with custom normalclap, "bah, bah, bah..." it's boring :/
you know, the custom sound didn't become one part of the music. That's not good
star.

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2010-02-06T02:40:56+00:00

Easy
Fine

Normal:
01:33:912 - I don't like the fact that you use so many claps here D:.

Hard:
Same as normal.

MX:
Fine

Not much to mod here :3.

Star

.

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-02-06T06:00:10+00:00

Leorda wrote:
[Easy]
00:07:143 (3) - Move 1 grid left?
00:08:989 (2) - Move 1 grid right?
00:24:374 (2) - Move 2 grid right?
- they are skipped for make regular shapes

[Normal]
01:00:066 (2,4) - Move 1 grid right?
- it doesn't fit D:

Breeze wrote:
[General]
Well, DJMAX was already in the tag, is it needed to add DJ and MAX to tag? :/
- some people serch DJMAX song by 'DJ MAX' :3

[Easy]
01:45:297 (1) - I thinks slider ends here better, end at blue tick sounds odd
- the last sounds is on blue tick, so i didn't fix it

nice map though, this time you didn't use suit custom sound
my ears fill with custom normalclap, "bah, bah, bah..." it's boring :/
you know, the custom sound didn't become one part of the music. That's not good
- i reduced volume. if others pointed it too, i'll fix it.

CDFA wrote:
Normal:
01:33:912 - I don't like the fact that you use so many claps here D:
- they are fitted to snare drum on music

others all fixed :3
thanks for modding XD

DJPop

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Here since the beginning

DJPop 2010-02-06T16:10:38+00:00

Lower the volume in every diffs D:

~Easy~
00:15:451 (1) - hitfinish
01:18:835 (4) - silence the end
01:20:066 (1) - soft-hitnormal is too loud
01:23:143 (1) - hitwhistle at start
01:42:220 (6) - hitfinish at start
01:44:682 (1) - silence the slidertick

~Normal~
00:32:682 (1) - hitfinish
01:20:066 (1) - soft-hitnormal is too loud
01:43:451 (4) - hitfinish

~Hard~
00:24:989 (6) - hitfinish at the end
00:40:066 (1) - hitfinish at start
01:16:989 (1) - ^
01:20:066 (1) - soft-hitnormal is too loud

~MX~
Bassdrums are so annoying D:
00:25:451 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I heard someone's firing cannons here LOL
00:34:835 (8) - hitfinish at the end
00:40:066 (1) - hitfinish at start
01:20:066 (1) - soft-hitnormal is too loud

+Star

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-02-07T04:55:09+00:00

Make lower the hitsounds.
All fixed :3

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2010-02-07T07:37:06+00:00

Easy
01:36:374 (4) - New Combo
01:40:989 (4) - ^

Other diffs. are great. Star ~ ☆

La Valse

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La Valse 2010-02-07T14:57:57+00:00

별

gdeath

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gdeath 2010-02-09T14:31:07+00:00

[Easy]
fine

[Normal]
01:43:143 (3,4) - spacing.set the same spacing with 01:42:528 (2,3)

[Hard]
no problems

[MX]
good

Star.

Sushi

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Sushi 2010-02-09T22:41:49+00:00

Dammit, good map <3

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-02-10T05:20:23+00:00

fixed

Diasios

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Diasios 2010-02-13T16:41:27+00:00

Offset: 720

Nice map, btw

Vanmonky

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Vanmonky 2010-02-15T01:55:38+00:00

As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. Lowercase all the tags.
2. The video offset is a bit late IMO.

[Easy]
Increase the Slider Tick Rate to 1 because it fits to the song. And by that, you can custom the slidertick with the clap sound.
00:35:758 (1) - Move it closer to the middle of the spinner, maybe. [?]
01:18:835 (4) - Better silence the end.

[Normal]
01:18:835 (5) - Better silence the end.

[Hard]
I always feel that the offset is a bit early when I play this diff. Idk.
01:41:451 (3) - Move 1 tiny grid right.

[MX]
01:38:220 (8) - Kinda like hidden slider.

Star.

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-02-17T06:48:43+00:00

fixed :3

James2250

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James2250 2010-02-20T06:08:46+00:00

easy:
why not make tick rate 1 as other mod said?
(nazi modding..you don't have to follow this if you don't want to)
00:08:412 (1,2) - align?
00:15:489 (1) - start at 00:15:181 and add a repeat like the others?
00:35:797 (1) - move 1 grid up
00:38:259 (3) - move 2 tiny grids left to mirror 2? (don't forget to realign notes after this when u change)
00:40:720 (2) - change so it stacks on the 2 from before?
00:49:951 (1) - move 1 tiny grid down

normal:
00:18:874 (3) - move 1 tiny grid down?
01:04:105 (5) - move 1 tiny grid up
01:27:489 (2) - move 1 tiny grid down

hard:
00:09:643 (6,7) - align?
00:34:566 (7) - make symmetrical?

MIX:
looks good

PM me after you have looked at those and I will pubble

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-02-20T12:18:48+00:00

James2250 wrote:
easy:
why not make tick rate 1 as other mod said?
(nazi modding..you don't have to follow this if you don't want to)
00:08:412 (1,2) - align?
- they are shaped to regular triangle
00:15:489 (1) - start at 00:15:181 and add a repeat like the others?
- they are fitted to guitar & drum sounds <_<
00:35:797 (1) - move 1 grid up
- why? O_o
00:38:259 (3) - move 2 tiny grids left to mirror 2? (don't forget to realign notes after this when u change)
- it's fitted by distance snap

hard:
00:09:643 (6,7) - align?
- they are shaped to regular triangle

others all fixed :3

James2250

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James2250 2010-02-20T17:47:08+00:00

ok all looks good
Pubbled!!

Astom

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Astom 2010-02-20T18:05:21+00:00

[Easy]

-00:15:335 maybe a circle =)

[Normal]

-I don't see problems

[Hard]

-I don't see problems

[MX]

-00:01:950(3) <-> 00:02:412(1) and 00:03:181(3) <-> 00:03:643(1), different distance but same time, maybe you can make a fix.

Pretty good nothing more to say.

Good luck and my star

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-02-20T23:35:10+00:00

Astom wrote:
[Easy]

-00:15:335 maybe a circle =)
- it makes Easy harder

[MX]

-00:01:950(3) <-> 00:02:412(1) and 00:03:181(3) <-> 00:03:643(1), different distance but same time, maybe you can make a fix.
- i think it's not a ploblem <_<

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2010-02-26T10:17:46+00:00

TAG only "DJMAX" is enough.. then delete "DJ MAX" from the TAG, and In fact, It's DJMAX not DJ MAX, IMO

nice map, starrr

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-02-26T12:01:12+00:00

orioncomet wrote:
TAG only "DJMAX" is enough.. then delete "DJ MAX" from the TAG, and In fact, It's DJMAX not DJ MAX, IMO

You're right. But unfortunately, some people search DJMAX Song by 'DJ MAX' keyword <_<
Btw, thank you for star :3

Neo Adonis

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Neo Adonis 2010-02-27T00:45:32+00:00

[Easy]
01:39:489 (2), 01:41:028 (1) - Why don't you stack both to make map prettier.

[Normal]
00:45:028 (1) - Move 1 grid down to keep symetry

[Hard]
Why don't you reduce overrall diff an star? On that diff you should have enough time to see the first note when no song is running before it.

I don't see many problems. The map is so hard, though. ^^'

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-03-01T07:19:35+00:00

fixed :3

Teara

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Teara 2010-03-01T18:11:42+00:00

Modded, and I detect no problems!

[MX] Is a tad bit repetitive in the start thou.