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ChouCho - Natsu no Hi to Kimi no Koe (TV size ver.)

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Maboyu
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Maboyu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年12月26日 at 下午 11:55:18

Artist: ChouCho
Title: Natsu no Hi to Kimi no Koe (TV size ver.)
Source: GLASSLIP
Tags: グラスリップ opening p.a.works ちょうちょ iamkwan yf_bmp size project
BPM: 107
Filesize: 19691kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.22 stars, 71 notes)
  2. Hard (2.65 stars, 192 notes)
  3. KwaN's Normal (1.77 stars, 130 notes)
  4. yf's Insane (3.74 stars, 260 notes)
Download: ChouCho - Natsu no Hi to Kimi no Koe (TV size ver.)
Download: ChouCho - Natsu no Hi to Kimi no Koe (TV size ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#4 グラスリップ Opening Rank!
Easy By Me 100%
Normal By IamKwaN 100%
Hard By Me 100%
Insane By yf_bmp 100%
(BG and video) by Shad0w1and thanks you :3

If downloading before 2014/12/24,please redownload !

Last edited by Maboyu , edited 67 times in total.
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
http://puu.sh/aXmIE/f30f8eb1df.rar

これが恋かな... <3
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
Quick check
offset 540?
[Hard]
00:16:505 (2) - end point 324,140 more nature……
00:17:066 (3) - could blanket better
算了看你这图横平竖直的给你指条明路，全选，旋转3度。
00:42:019 (5) - move 2nd point little right,more nature
[KwaN's Normal]
00:31:084 (4) - blanket 还能优化一下……
00:36:411 (1) - 往下移一小格……嗯差不多了
[Easy]
00:08:094 - space...太空……
00:24:355 (2,3) - 改成折返啊亲
00:39:776 (2) - blanket还能优化一下
话说你NC怎么断的能讲讲么……
OblivioN
OblivioN
[Easy]
00:09:495 (1) - ctrl j 和 00:05:009 (1) - 一下一上不挺好w？

00:25:477 (4,5) - 这里好几次没有读懂orz 还有就是 觉得00:26:598——00:27:159 这种节奏不太明显的地方可以跟一下vocal

00:47:346 转盘往后退一点然后这里补个note：ほら　あ——这样的感觉;w;

01:12:299 这里就不用叮的音效了吧;w;【个人觉得用normalhit 就不错/w\ 】稍微斟酌一下

[骏马normal]

;w; nice

[Hard]
00:37:533 (3) - 用和00:36:411 (1) - 一样的形状？w
SPOILER

00:40:897 (1) - 是个重音，可以放远一些，比如放在和00:42:019 (5) - 转折处stack的位置:
SPOILER
坐标x224 y92

01:00:524 (5,1) - 这两个直滑条显得有些死板了;w;弯一些？

01:12:299 和ez处的建议一样w

[General]
挺好的;w;说不出来什么，我还太年轻orz
祝rank，先射个星(╯‵ w ′)╯︵
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
Fixed all and several patterns and hitsounds adjusted. :3
Thanks for mod!
SPOILER
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Glasslip Opening.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 49028
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13981,31925,87159
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Natsu no Hi to Kimi no Koe (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:夏の日と君の声 (TV Size)
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ChouCho
Creator:AliomLoung
Version:KwaN's Normal
Source:glasslip
Tags:グラスリップ opening  p.a.works iamkwan
BeatmapID:481913
BeatmapSetID:203721

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sodarose
607 posts
Joined July 2011
sodarose
我是来骗kud的 ;w;

[easy]
00:05:009 (1) - 到00:13:981 (1) - 中间太空了，填些东西进去把
00:25:477 (4,5) - 这两个听起来怪怪的（可能是我的错觉;w;)

[KwaN's Normal]
看作者就知道摸不动;w;

[hard]
hard作为最高难度的话我觉得可以适当的把四围提高一点。比如OD or HP+1
00:13:281 (6) - 这个滑条尾拉到00:13:701 的红线上会好一点把
00:45:383 (1) - 这个滑条形状有点怪（可能是我的错觉;w;)

渣摸见谅orz
FastBoy
140 posts
Joined July 2013
FastBoy
走過來見到順便mod一mod

[Easy]

大概00:06:131~00:09:215和00:10:617~00:13:701左右的時間神馬都沒有...
弄個spinner出來也好啊=A=
但還是憑你自己的感覺和風格吧
始終你的經驗還是比我多...

00:24:636 (3) - 就這樣放個短的在Easy中...感覺有點怪怪的...試試把00:24:355 (2,3)合起來弄成一條長一點的吧

01:21:271 (1) - 我在這裡重覆聽了很多遍(其實應該說看了很多遍...)如果Ctrl+G的話感覺可以flow得更好,但還是看你的吧

完美OAO...
對於我這種新手真的不知道可以幫到你多少=A=
但還是會去看看Normal和Hard滴~

[KwaN's Normal]

(KwaN君的耶OAO~

靠...完全找不到有神馬問題...
我輸了...

[Hard]

00:13:281 (6) - 感覺拉長一個16分音聽起來舒服一點

00:45:383 (1) - 雖然不太喜歡這形狀,但還是看你的吧

高手弄的果然不同...

我真的完全輸了...
加油~你的圖一定會被rank的~
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs

IamKwaN wrote:

Fixed all and several patterns and hitsounds adjusted. :3
Thanks for mod!
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hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh现在有什么感想没有
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN

ts8zs wrote:

IamKwaN wrote:

Fixed all and several patterns and hitsounds adjusted. :3
Thanks for mod!
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh现在有什么感想没有
沒有
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
As ur request.

[General]

Fine.

[Easy] 節奏是沒什麼大問題，只是音效應該可以稍微配個whistle(玩的時候感覺vocal地方有點安靜)，看看這些位置可不可以加。(記得加的時候要跟Hard對應加)

whistle能加的位置:
00:15:383 (2) - 前頭
00:16:224 (3) - 中間折返
00:19:869 (2) - 前頭
00:20:710 (3) - 中間折返
00:24:355 (2) - 前頭
00:55:757 (2) - ^
01:10:056 (3) - ^

01:11:178 (4) - 連續三個叮聲有點吵，remove this?

[KwaN's Normal]

00:16:224 (1) - 前段whistle配合vocal似乎適合。
00:20:710 (1) - ^
00:27:159 (4) - 這前端應該是whistle而不是clap?
00:29:963 (2,3,4) - 這之間的空隙不同有點不太好看。
00:32:766 (2) - 前段whistle配合vocal似乎適合。
00:45:383 (1) - ^
01:01:925 (3) - 照前面這樣聽，這邊前端應該要加whistle?

[Hard] 昨天幫你試玩後，沒什麼問題。

個人覺得whistle能加的位置 (如果不適合就別硬加了):

00:06:552 (5) - whistle
00:08:795 (6) - 前頭
00:10:897 (3) - 尾端
00:12:159 (3) - 前頭
00:13:281 (6) - ^

00:45:383 (1,2,3) - 這三個全選，然後使與 00:47:907 (2,3) 成三角形比較好看， 下面那個3記得跟00:48:748 (5) stack.
01:11:178 (3) - 同Easy


Good luck.
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN

smallboat wrote:

[KwaN's Normal]
00:16:224 (1) - 前段whistle配合vocal似乎適合。 nope, I only add whistles on high pitches.
00:20:710 (1) - ^ ^
00:27:159 (4) - 這前端應該是whistle而不是clap? why?
00:29:963 (2,3,4) - 這之間的空隙不同有點不太好看。 more or less the same
00:32:766 (2) - 前段whistle配合vocal似乎適合。 ...no
00:45:383 (1) - ^ ^
01:01:925 (3) - 照前面這樣聽，這邊前端應該要加whistle? nope, compared to previous two, this got a lower pitch.
@Loneight: Fixed in my way.
@小魚: 加了2000ms的audio-leadin.
Thank you. Fixed some other patterns.
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236,270,81552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,81832,1,8,0:0:0:0:
215,103,82112,2,0,P|272:93|324:122,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
388,185,82953,2,0,L|380:246,1,60,8|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
346,328,83514,5,4,0:1:0:0:
256,192,83795,12,0,87159,0:0:0:0:
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Loneight
osu! Alumni
1,332 posts
Joined January 2011
Loneight
o/
Request from In-game


  • 黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
    藍色 是建議改掉
    紅色 是unrankable

[general]

  1. lead-in再加個1000~1500, 目前來說第一顆note的出現時間還是太快了, 會反應不及, 不過聽說rank後會自動加, 我不太清楚

[Easy]

  1. 00:34:168 (3) - 在我眼裡感覺不太好看, 試試這個?
    code
    482,143,34168,2,0,B|488:204|468:247|468:247|488:280|480:332,2,180,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:58:000 (4) - , 01:03:327 (1,2,3) - , 01:10:056 (3,4,5,1) - 同Hard
沒什麼可以說的

[KwaN's Normal]

  1. 00:28:841 (3,1) - 交換NC, 像這種來回然後又有遮擋的, 對newbie來說很難讀圖, 所以最好有個不同顏色的combo提示, 就像01:13:981 (4,1) -
  2. 01:07:533 (3,1) - 交換NC, 就像vocal一樣, slider跟著變化, NC也跟著變化, 而且美觀上會更好
嘛... 還不錯

[Hard]

  1. 00:06:411 (4,6) - , 00:08:654 (5,6) - 這兩個所佔的地方我剛好都聽到有類似預設的drum-hitnormal的聲音, 不訪試試? 後面有相同的地方我就不多說了
  2. 00:30:103 (3) - 刪掉whistle如何? 讓這00:29:963 (2,3,4) - 音效有種漸入漸出的感覺. 00:31:084 (7,10) - , 00:47:907 (2,3) - 這兩個同這
  3. 00:35:710 (5) - 這裡建議來個whistle, 打起來會更有感覺, 而且我聽這裡的吉他聲音跟00:31:224 (8) - 很像, 需要音效加持. 00:39:495 (2,4) - (2)跟(4)的開頭同這
  4. 00:53:234 (3) - 不彷試試在開頭跟迴轉箭頭地方加個whistle? 我聽起來是更有感覺, 決定權在於你
  5. 00:58:000 (2,3,4,1) - 太多finish有點吵雜, 而且聲音又如此大聲把原音樂蓋過去了, 試試來個漸漸提高音量的設置, 比如00:58:000 (2) - 設15%音量, 00:58:281 (3) - 20%, 00:58:561 (4) - 25%, 00:58:841 (1) - 原來的音量, 這樣聽起來不是比較舒服么?
  6. 01:03:327 (1,3,1) - 我在開頭都聽到了一個跟00:58:841 (1) - 開頭很像的聲音, 卻沒有S:C2的finish, 試試加上去, 然後記得跟隨音樂裡那聲音調音量
  7. 01:10:617 (2,3,4,1) - 同音量聽起來感覺很奇怪, 明明音樂有高低音的, 試試01:11:178 (3,1) - 設置20%音量, 01:11:738 (4) - 30%
嘛, flow上跟排列上基本都沒有問題, 就單純音效比較多而已, 無論如何, solid diff
就這些了~
加油囉!
bigfrog
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
bigfrog
hello, from In-game~

Easy
00:34:168 (3) - 覺得紅點前的部分再彎曲點會更好看,因為這個滑條有反覆所以時間比較長,不用特別在意跟上一個滑條的關係?(抱歉我不知道在說什麼)
01:22:953 (2) - 弄成1/4的反覆滑條感覺比較好

KwaN's Normal
00:47:626 (1,2,3,4,5) - 覺得排成半圓弧狀比較好看,調一下(5)??
01:19:028 (1,3) - 互相平行?

Hard
00:24:355 (3) - 逆轉30度打起來比較順的樣子,而且和00:25:477 (2)感覺比較不會有違和感...
01:16:084 - 加一個circle在這,其實最後那一段也有...但是好像不好改,主要還是看你怎麼想囉 :P

大概就這些,都抓不出什麼問題 XD
GL~!!
F D Flourite
811 posts
Joined March 2013
F D Flourite
Hello, Sorry for being late a little bit~

[General]
  1. Fine.
[Easy]
  1. 00:25:196 - 其实这里是有音的~把00:25:477 (4) - 提前到这里开始压到白线好一些？虽然跟vocal问题不大，但是和00:22:953 (1) - 处于不同音轨，有点别扭。
  2. 00:43:140 (3,1) - nazi，Blanket没做好。而且00:43:140 (3) - 的弧度其实可以再修的圆滑一点。
  3. 01:20:150 (4,1) - nazi，blanket没做好
  4. Nice overall.
[给喵's Normal]
  1. 00:15:944 (3,1,2) - 等边三角形没修好
  2. Awesome diff! Nothing to say. 怎么感觉像低BPM的Fycho's Hard
[Hard]
  1. 00:15:383 (3,4,1,2,3) - 这里节奏没做好。音轨换的太突然了。要么都跟琴要么都跟vocal。建议把3去掉，4向前延长1/2跟vocal，前后衔接自然一点。
  2. 00:26:598 (4,1) - nazi blanket
  3. 00:35:851 (6,1) - ^
  4. 00:41:178 (2,5) - ^
  5. 00:47:346 (3,1,2,3,4) - nazi 五边形
  6. 01:21:832 (2,1,2,3,4) - ^
  7. 01:03:327 (1,3) - nazi blanket
  8. 基本上都是nazi mod~这种曲子一般节奏不怎么会出问题
Good Luck~
Maboyu
373 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Maboyu
包子

ts8zs wrote:

Quick check
offset 540? 感覺Offset 524就可以了>.<
[Hard]
00:16:505 (2) - end point 324,140 more nature……
00:17:066 (3) - could blanket better
算了看你这图横平竖直的给你指条明路，全选，旋转3度。修改了w
00:42:019 (5) - move 2nd point little right,more nature 改了!
[Easy]
00:08:094 - space...太空…… 的確!!!
00:24:355 (2,3) - 改成折返啊亲 ok改了:D
00:39:776 (2) - blanket还能优化一下 好>< fixed
话说你NC怎么断的能讲讲么…… NC全fixed
謝謝包子R:D

OblivioN

OblivioN wrote:

[Easy]
00:09:495 (1) - ctrl j 和 00:05:009 (1) - 一下一上不挺好w？摁 改了:D

00:25:477 (4,5) - 这里好几次没有读懂orz 还有就是 觉得00:26:598——00:27:159 这种节奏不太明显的地方可以跟一下vocal OK改了!!但是跟你的節奏不太一樣

00:47:346 转盘往后退一点然后这里补个note：ほら　あ——这样的感觉;w; um..這邊我考慮一下

01:12:299 这里就不用叮的音效了吧;w;【个人觉得用normalhit 就不错/w\ 】稍微斟酌一下 其實我比較喜歡叮的音效:D

[Hard]
00:37:533 (3) - 用和00:36:411 (1) - 一样的形状？w
SPOILER
保持原來的吧><

00:40:897 (1) - 是个重音，可以放远一些，比如放在和00:42:019 (5) - 转折处stack的位置:
SPOILER

坐标x224 y92 比較喜歡原來這樣>.<

01:00:524 (5,1) - 这两个直滑条显得有些死板了;w;弯一些？ 好!

01:12:299 和ez处的建议一样w 同EZ

[General]
挺好的;w;说不出来什么，我还太年轻orz
祝rank，先射个星(╯‵ w ′)╯︵
謝謝你的mod and star:D

sodarose

sodarose wrote:

我是来骗kud的 ;w; ;w;

[easy]
00:05:009 (1) - 到00:13:981 (1) - 中间太空了，填些东西进去把 好~
00:25:477 (4,5) - 这两个听起来怪怪的（可能是我的错觉;w;) 修改了:D

[hard]
hard作为最高难度的话我觉得可以适当的把四围提高一点。比如OD or HP+1 感覺這樣就好了~~
00:13:281 (6) - 这个滑条尾拉到00:13:701 的红线上会好一点把 好!
00:45:383 (1) - 这个滑条形状有点怪（可能是我的错觉;w;) 會嗎OAO?

渣摸见谅orz
謝謝你的MOD :D

FastBoy

FastBoy wrote:

走過來見到順便mod一mod 感恩^^

[Easy]

大概00:06:131~00:09:215和00:10:617~00:13:701左右的時間神馬都沒有... 的確QAQ
弄個spinner出來也好啊=A=
但還是憑你自己的感覺和風格吧
始終你的經驗還是比我多...

00:24:636 (3) - 就這樣放個短的在Easy中...感覺有點怪怪的...試試把00:24:355 (2,3)合起來弄成一條長一點的吧 OK修改了

01:21:271 (1) - 我在這裡重覆聽了很多遍(其實應該說看了很多遍...)如果Ctrl+G的話感覺可以flow得更好,但還是看你的吧 摁.以fixed

完美OAO...
對於我這種新手真的不知道可以幫到你多少=A=
但還是會去看看Normal和Hard滴~

[Hard]

00:13:281 (6) - 感覺拉長一個16分音聽起來舒服一點 的確:D 改了

00:45:383 (1) - 雖然不太喜歡這形狀,但還是看你的吧 摁....

高手弄的果然不同... 我不是高手QAQ

我真的完全輸了...
加油~你的圖一定會被rank的~
謝謝你的MOD>.<
Pho
1,785 posts
Joined November 2013
Pho
M4M~ (greetings from KwaN ;) )

[General]
Referring to this website: http://vgmdb.net/album/45718 . As far as I know, '(TV Size)' is not allowed in titles anymore, but should be renamed into 'TV Edit'.

[Easy]
00:05:009 (1) - The note density until 00:13:981 - is very sparse, even more than a few seconds ago when there wasn't even real tension in the music.
Why don't you add backsliders at 00:07:252 - and 00:11:738 - , just with more quiet hitsounds?
00:34:168 (3) - try to make the slider more appealing to the music by emphasizing the hiccup http://puu.sh/b0sQH/8b9803aad3.jpg
00:39:776 (4) - Similar case to above ^

[Normal]
00:00:524 (1,2,1,2) - As far as I know, 20% vol. is minimum for clickable objects, so please increase them by 5%.
00:22:393 (3) - I'd add the clap HS here instead of 00:22:112 -
00:29:963 (2,3) - nazi stuff, but don't you want to make them parallel?

[Hard]
HP5 and OD5 would give a more balanced feeling in this map.

00:26:598 (4,1) - Try to blanket here.
01:03:327 (1,3) - ^

Nice maps, nice song. Good luck! :D

Greetings,
paseli
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
Yo.
from my queue

[Easy]
  1. 00:24:355 (2) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. try this.
    img
  2. 00:49:869 (1) - ...I'm not sure this break time... Easy diff must be more break time.Try this
  3. 00:58:000 (4) - Not too fond of the straight flow here.
    img
[Hard]
  1. Nothing to Say. nice diff :3
Good luck :3
Maboyu
373 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Maboyu

Loneight wrote:

o/
Request from In-game


  • 黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
    藍色 是建議改掉
    紅色 是unrankable

[general]

  1. lead-in再加個1000~1500, 目前來說第一顆note的出現時間還是太快了, 會反應不及, 不過聽說rank後會自動加, 我不太清楚 lead-in我改成2000


[Easy]

  1. 00:34:168 (3) - 在我眼裡感覺不太好看, 試試這個? 到覺得還好就這樣吧!
    code
    482,143,34168,2,0,B|488:204|468:247|468:247|488:280|480:332,2,180,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:58:000 (4) - , 01:03:327 (1,2,3) - , 01:10:056 (3,4,5,1) - 同Hard ok fixed :D
沒什麼可以說的

[Hard]

  1. 00:06:411 (4,6) - , 00:08:654 (5,6) - 這兩個所佔的地方我剛好都聽到有類似預設的drum-hitnormal的聲音, 不訪試試? 後面有相同的地方我就不多說了 都加上了w
  2. 00:30:103 (3) - 刪掉whistle如何? 讓這00:29:963 (2,3,4) - 音效有種漸入漸出的感覺. 00:31:084 (7,10) - , 00:47:907 (2,3) - 這兩個同這 好~! 00:31:084 (7,10)這個地方我刪除7跟9 00:47:907 (2,3)這個地方就保持這樣吧>.<
  3. 00:35:710 (5) - 這裡建議來個whistle, 打起來會更有感覺, 而且我聽這裡的吉他聲音跟00:31:224 (8) - 很像, 需要音效加持. 00:39:495 (2,4) - (2)跟(4)的開頭同這 好 後面地方也補上音效了!
  4. 00:53:234 (3) - 不彷試試在開頭跟迴轉箭頭地方加個whistle? 我聽起來是更有感覺, 決定權在於你 感覺不錯! 加了!
  5. 00:58:000 (2,3,4,1) - 太多finish有點吵雜, 而且聲音又如此大聲把原音樂蓋過去了, 試試來個漸漸提高音量的設置, 比如00:58:000 (2) - 設15%音量, 00:58:281 (3) - 20%, 00:58:561 (4) - 25%, 00:58:841 (1) - 原來的音量, 這樣聽起來不是比較舒服么? 的確這樣比較舒服fixed
  6. 01:03:327 (1,3,1) - 我在開頭都聽到了一個跟00:58:841 (1) - 開頭很像的聲音, 卻沒有S:C2的finish, 試試加上去, 然後記得跟隨音樂裡那聲音調音量 以加上!!
  7. 01:10:617 (2,3,4,1) - 同音量聽起來感覺很奇怪, 明明音樂有高低音的, 試試01:11:178 (3,1) - 設置20%音量, 01:11:738 (4) - 30% ok fixed
嘛, flow上跟排列上基本都沒有問題, 就單純音效比較多而已, 無論如何, solid diff
就這些了~
加油囉!
謝謝你的mod !!:D
Maboyu
373 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Maboyu

smallboat wrote:

As ur request.

[General]

Fine.

[Easy] 節奏是沒什麼大問題，只是音效應該可以稍微配個whistle(玩的時候感覺vocal地方有點安靜)，看看這些位置可不可以加。(記得加的時候要跟Hard對應加) 好~

whistle能加的位置:
00:15:383 (2) - 前頭 以補上
00:16:224 (3) - 中間折返 ^
00:19:869 (2) - 前頭 ^
00:20:710 (3) - 中間折返 ^
00:24:355 (2) - 前頭 ^
00:55:757 (2) - ^ ^
01:10:056 (3) - ^ ^

01:11:178 (4) - 連續三個叮聲有點吵，remove this? 這邊我調低音量了~~

[Hard] 昨天幫你試玩後，沒什麼問題。 WW

個人覺得whistle能加的位置 (如果不適合就別硬加了):

00:06:552 (5) - whistle 補上!
00:08:795 (6) - 前頭 ^
00:10:897 (3) - 尾端 ^
00:12:159 (3) - 前頭 ^
00:13:281 (6) - ^ ^

00:45:383 (1,2,3) - 這三個全選，然後使與 00:47:907 (2,3) 成三角形比較好看， 下面那個3記得跟00:48:748 (5) stack. 這邊是故意放這樣的
01:11:178 (3) - 同Easy 一樣都調低音量了


Good luck.
謝謝小船>.<
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IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN

bigfrog wrote:

KwaN's Normal
00:47:626 (1,2,3,4,5) - 覺得排成半圓弧狀比較好看,調一下(5)?? 好
01:19:028 (1,3) - 互相平行? 那是故意ctrl+<<的

F D Flourite wrote:

[给喵's Normal]
  1. 00:15:944 (3,1,2) - 等边三角形没修好 好的
  2. Awesome diff! Nothing to say. 怎么感觉像低BPM的Fycho's Hard ;w;

paseli wrote:

[Normal]
00:00:524 (1,2,1,2) - As far as I know, 20% vol. is minimum for clickable objects, so please increase them by 5%. ah, this isn't the case. If it fits, I can use 15% as well.
00:22:393 (3) - I'd add the clap HS here instead of 00:22:112 - nah.. i just follow the pattern earlier
00:29:963 (2,3) - nazi stuff, but don't you want to make them parallel? no w

Satellite wrote:

Yo. Yo.
Thank you guys :D
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