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PJ Lequerica - Pokemon Johto (TV Size)

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NoHitter
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, January 02, 2007 at 6:17:57 AM

Artist: PJ Lequerica
Title: Pokemon Johto (TV Size)
Source: Pokemon: The Johto Journeys
Tags: Ash Pikachu jockeytiyan jockey
BPM: 116
Filesize: 5316kb
Play Time: 00:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Croconaw (3.27 stars, 82 notes)
  2. Cyndaquil (2.11 stars, 54 notes)
  3. Ho-Oh (4.9 stars, 141 notes)
  4. Lugia (4.85 stars, 148 notes)
  5. Meganium (4.42 stars, 103 notes)
Download: PJ Lequerica - Pokemon Johto (TV Size)
Download: PJ Lequerica - Pokemon Johto (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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For my beatmap project: Pokemon Opening Themes
I mapped Ho-oh, Meganium and Croconaw and jockeytiyan mapped Lugia and Cyndaquil.

This by far has to be the theme that really captured my attention and made me want to watch Pokemon again after I quit midway.
Last edited by NoHitter , edited 56 times in total.
Kytoxid
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[General]

With such a short song, you could get away with a higher-resolution video.
Background is terrible resolution. :(
Background colour to white?
Consider using custom combo colours.
Offset sounds better at 720 to me, remember to shift timing sections, especially kiai starts.

[Cyndaquil]

Structurally fine, unless I want to be picky (such as the symmetry of 00:38:503 (1,2,3,4,5,6)). It felt very very bland though, a constant stream of 1/1s with sliders thrown in. Don't be afraid to use the occasional red tick, especially if the patterns or rhythms spice up the map a little.

[Croconaw]

00:58:910 (1,2,3,4) - Centering a note after a spinner needs to be moved down 2 grids to align properly in play mode. Also, the red is hard to see against the spinner. :(

[Meganium]

00:37:598 (6) - Move onto the 1/3?
00:46:753 (1,2,3) - I recommend not halving the spacing until you actually hit a 1/2 BPM slider. This 1/2 section doesn't really make sense to me though.
00:54:339 (1,2,3) - Sounds like it should have some 1/6 thrown in there, watch out.
00:58:908 (1,2,3) - Don't know how possible this jump is...

Nice, star~
NoHitter
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Waiting for jockeytiyan to update his easy diff.
I just fixed the timing sections.

720 sounds early to me. 730?
ouranhshc
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Meganium
00:37:626 (6) - move to red tick
00:54:178 (1,2,3) - use 1/4 divisor?

Croconaw
increase distance snap plz, it feels like im in a cave.

Cyndaquil
same for croconaw and don't start the easiest diff one red ticks plz.
jockeytiyan
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This is why I hate getting dictated on what to do for my map. >.>

I'll update my diff later, it should come with the other Meganium.

ouranhshc wrote:

Cyndaquil
same for croconaw and don't start the easiest diff one red ticks plz. TBH, NoHItter wanted my map to be lyric-beaten, that's why I started it at the red tick. Don't blame me if it really looks ugly.

Kytoxid wrote:

[Cyndaquil]

Structurally fine, unless I want to be picky (such as the symmetry of 00:38:503 (1,2,3,4,5,6)). It felt very very bland though, a constant stream of 1/1s with sliders thrown in. Don't be afraid to use the occasional red tick, especially if the patterns or rhythms spice up the map a little. Still NoHItter's fault except for the symmetry part. Fixed it already. Thanks for pointing out.
And with these comments, I'll most likely be making the other diff rhythm-beaten. Hehehehe
NoHitter
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oh shi

:(
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[Cyndaquil]
00:38:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - huh, improve alignment and symetry?

[Crocronaw]
Fine

[Meganium]
00:46:764 (1,2,3) - slowdown is surprising.


Technically correct.

I think that there is a big gap between the easy Diffs and the hardest diff.
NoHitter
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Waiting for a diff from jockey :) to serve as a Hard diff.
Zekira
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[Timing]
I don't believe it lol. *autostar*

[General]
Can you make the first green section (the chorus) an uninherited one? The time signature resets there.

[Cyndaquil]
00:25:557 (3) - I find this a bit repetitive. Suggestion: Make it a note lol, so that a new object can be at the place where the last tail was and have new combo.
00:36:936 (3) - can you make it congruent with the figure of 1 and 2

[Croconaw]
Too many uneven stacks for a Normal IMO.

[Meganium]
00:37:712 (6,7) - move 6 to the next red tick and fix the spacing afterward.
First try lolz:

arien666
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[General]
I'll not suggest about Kiai time but 2nd Kial time seems unnecessary...

[Cyndaquil]
00:20:90(5) - [Suggestion] How about align with (4)'s end?
00:46:24(4) - [Suggestion] How about align with (3)'s end?

[Crocronaw]
00:32:28(5,6) - [Suggestion] How about move little down to align with (4)'s end?
00:39:52(2,3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up?
00:58:91(1,2,3,4) - Any reason why these notes are not on center?

[Meganium]
00:48:83(5,6) - How about align with (4)'s end?
00:51:41(3) - [Suggestion] How about move little up to make regular triangle?




Good song :3
But Err???

lol quick +6 XD
Good luck.

Here's my star :3
NoHitter
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arken1015 wrote:

00:58:91(1,2,3,4) - Any reason why these notes are not on center?

Kytoxid wrote:

00:58:910 (1,2,3,4) - Centering a note after a spinner needs to be moved down 2 grids to align properly in play mode. Also, the red is hard to see against the spinner. :(

And it's very hard to align sliders on one grid :(
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NachoPiggy wrote:

Gave the video and .mp3
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
aRiskOfRain
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Cyndaquil:

00:26:592 (5) - New combo?
00:27:109 (1) - No new combo?
00:36:936 (3) - Not quite parallel; move the end down one, I think.

Croconaw:

Fine.

Meganium:

Good.

You can has star. Very enjoyable to play map.
DJPop
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~Cyndaquil~
00:58:919 (1) - too short for the easiest diff

~Crocronaw~
Fine.

~Meganium~
00:06:290 (3) - don't stack (or) new combo
00:08:359 (3) - ^
00:55:816 (6) - new combo
00:55:945 (1) - remove new combo
00:58:919 (1,2,3) - D:


+Star
jockeytiyan
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NoHItter wrote:

It's a collab with me and jockeytiyan
Take this out already so I can mod...
Sonnyc
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Hello~

Cyndaquil
  • 00:22:971 (3) Clap
    00:46:764 (End of 4) Finish
    00:58:919 (1) ^
Crocronaw
  • 00:55:816 (4) Move to 00:55:557
    00:59:695 (4) Whistle + Finish
Meganium
  • 00:35:255 (x) Add note
    00:41:592 (x) ^
Star
Fuuko
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Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA!

Cyndaquil:

00:47 - Is this break really necessary? The mapped time is already short.
00:59:695 - End the kiai here.

Other than that, a solid map.
Croconaw:

00:59:695 - End the kiai here.
Meganium:
00:59:695 - End the kiai here.
Well, star for the map and keep up the good work.
Arusha Shuna
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Request Accepted

Cyndaquil
00:23:488 (1) - spacing and line it with (3)
00:58:919 (1) - too short for easy diff
Crocronaw
00:09:264 (1) - one grid up
00:33:057 (1,2,3,4) - don't stack?
00:36:678 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:41:247 (1) - move 6 1/6 purple ticks forward, still finish on the white tick
00:58:919 (1,2,3,4) - don't stack?
Meganium
00:49:867 (6) - move this away from the previous slider

Nice overall! STAR! :D
Diasios
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Offset: 750 Much better imo :D
jockeytiyan
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Nevermind modding and such.

Get a hold of this. :3

Download: PJ Lequerica - Pokemon Johto (TV Size) (NoHItter) [Lugia].osu
NoHitter
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Kytoxid
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[General]

Ouch, that background is so low-res. =/
Why a red timing section to start kiai?
Cyndaquil and Lugia have different kiai than the others, take a look.

[Meganium] 00:49:867 (5) - Don't like this concealed slider.
[Meganium] 00:50:514 - Double timing section here.
[Lugia] Different hitcircle colours, intended?
[Lugia] 00:12:367 (4) - Reverse this slider?
[Lugia] 00:15:988 (1) - This 2x BPM slider doesn't really make sense.
[Lugia] 00:20:902 (9,1) - Space them out a bit more? (didn't like the overlapping stream before, but whatever. :P)
[Lugia] 00:24:005 (2,3,4) - Deceptive spacing.
[Lugia] 00:30:730 (1) - Might be better if you made this the same length as the previous one, and removed the 2 kicksliders, for consistency.
[Lugia] 00:56:074 (1,2,3) - Very hard to read, don't put a 1/2 BPM slider followed by a bunch of identical-looking 1xBPM sliders.
[Ho-oh] 00:20:126 (2,3,4) - Quite hard to read timing on this.
[Ho-oh] 00:25:557 (1) - Shorten this by a repeat (so it doesn't repeat), and then add a beat 1/4 before the next repeating slider sounds really cool.
[Ho-oh] 00:40:298 (1) - Don't think this fits quite well.
[Ho-oh] 00:49:867 (6) - Same thing about this concealed slider.
[Ho-oh] 00:52:712 (1) - Don't think this fits either. XD

Poke me after you've taken a look. :)
jockeytiyan
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Kytoxid wrote:

[Lugia] Different hitcircle colours, intended? Yes.
[Lugia] 00:12:367 (4) - Reverse this slider? Nah, I like the jump. But I'll try to get a second opinion for it.
[Lugia] 00:15:988 (1) - This 2x BPM slider doesn't really make sense. Guess what, I agree. Let's change it.
[Lugia] 00:20:902 (9,1) - Space them out a bit more? (didn't like the overlapping stream before, but whatever. :P) lol, I can't space them up farther. DS makes it go farther to the next slider (for the whole combo), while relocating it elsewhere doesn't really make sense for me. I just hid (1) in (9) so it wouldn't take up much distance. Sorry~
[Lugia] 00:24:005 (2,3,4) - Deceptive spacing. I think this is allowed, I wanna keep it that way.
[Lugia] 00:30:730 (1) - Might be better if you made this the same length as the previous one, and removed the 2 kicksliders, for consistency. TOLD YOU SO NOHITTER! HA!
[Lugia] 00:56:074 (1,2,3) - Very hard to read, don't put a 1/2 BPM slider followed by a bunch of identical-looking 1xBPM sliders. Lengthened and re-snapped. :3
Darn, I sound like a stubborn mapper...

Download: PJ Lequerica - Pokemon Johto (TV Size) (NoHItter) [Lugia].osu
NoHitter
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Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Ouch, that background is so low-res. =/
Why a red timing section to start kiai?
Cyndaquil and Lugia have different kiai than the others, take a look.

[Meganium] 00:49:867 (5) - Don't like this concealed slider.
[Meganium] 00:50:514 - Double timing section here.
[Lugia] Different hitcircle colours, intended?
[Lugia] 00:12:367 (4) - Reverse this slider?
[Lugia] 00:15:988 (1) - This 2x BPM slider doesn't really make sense.
[Lugia] 00:20:902 (9,1) - Space them out a bit more? (didn't like the overlapping stream before, but whatever. :P)
[Lugia] 00:24:005 (2,3,4) - Deceptive spacing.
[Lugia] 00:30:730 (1) - Might be better if you made this the same length as the previous one, and removed the 2 kicksliders, for consistency.
[Lugia] 00:56:074 (1,2,3) - Very hard to read, don't put a 1/2 BPM slider followed by a bunch of identical-looking 1xBPM sliders.
[Ho-oh] 00:20:126 (2,3,4) - Quite hard to read timing on this.
[Ho-oh] 00:25:557 (1) - Shorten this by a repeat (so it doesn't repeat), and then add a beat 1/4 before the next repeating slider sounds really cool.
[Ho-oh] 00:40:298 (1) - Don't think this fits quite well.
[Ho-oh] 00:49:867 (6) - Same thing about this concealed slider.
[Ho-oh] 00:52:712 (1) - Don't think this fits either. XD

Poke me after you've taken a look. :)
Those "concealed sliders" are to emphasize the repeating of the lyrics :|. But everything else is done
The red timing section is because the time signature resets there
Combo colors fixed
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[Crocrocaw]
You sure this is spelled right?
The snap is setting itself to 1/6, move it back to 1/4.

[Meganium]
00:49:867 (5) - lolno

[Lugia]
00:24:911 (4) - loldickmove
00:53:488 (4) - 1 grid down

[Ho-Oh]
00:49:867 (6) - lolanotherdickmove

Starres
NoHitter
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Oh fine. No more concealed sliders :|
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00:24:911 (4) - Okay, should have been more specific. (4) is too far from (3), imo.

I'll proto this.
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Cyndaquil
00:58:919 (1) - IMO too short for Easy, assuming:

Cyndaquil = Easy
Croconaw = Normal
Meganium = Hard
Lugia = Insane
Ho-oh = Insane

Croconaw
I think there's a bit too many Finish sounds here. Think you can reduce a bit...?

Meganium
Fine.

Lugia
I... don't like the usage of Whistles at the start :|

Ho-oh
Same thing with Croconaw with the Finish sounds.
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Seeing how the scores and difficulty is so similar for Lugia and Ho-oh, is it really needed to have those two? Just a thought. Otherwise, not many problems, so star ~ ☆
James2250
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slightly confused why this is pubbled
*popped*

is there meant to be an un-inherited timing section starting kiai?
there is no reason for kiai times to be different across diff's, make them all the same

Cyndaquil:
00:55:816 (5) - move to 00:55:557
00:56:074 (1) - start to 00:55:816
(make all the kiai times like this)

Croconaw:
00:55:816 (4) - move to 00:55:557
00:55:945 (1) - move to 00:55:816
00:58:919 (1,2,3,4) - center on grid

Meganium:
00:06:161 - add note
00:06:290 (3) - move to 00:06:419
00:08:230 - add note
00:08:359 (3) - move to 00:08:488
00:18:574 (1,2) - move up 3 tiny grids to mirror other combo
00:22:712 (1,2) - move up 2 tiny grids to mirror other combo
00:58:919 (1,2,3,4) - put on horizontal center line?

Lugia:
00:05:643 (3,4) - switch position of 3 and 4
00:07:454 (2,3) - switch position of 2 and 3
00:11:980 (3,4) - spacing..move 4 closer or turn it the other way around
00:16:635 (5) - move slider so it isnt under all the other notes
00:24:523 (3,4) - spacing
00:39:005 (1,2,3) - keep spacing equal
00:47:540 (1) - move to 00:47:281
00:48:574 (1) - move to 00:48:316
00:49:867 (1) - move to 00:49:350
00:49:350 (1) - move up
00:50:126 (1) - start at 00:49:867

Ho-oh:
00:06:290 (3) - move to 00:06:419
00:08:359 (3) - move to 00:08:488
00:20:126 (2,3,4) - spacing
00:29:954 (3) - add note
00:34:092 (3) - ^
00:43:661 (5,1) - align?

PM me after fixes and I will will re-pubble....
NoHitter
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James2250 wrote:

is there meant to be an un-inherited timing section starting kiai? - The time signature resets there.
there is no reason for kiai times to be different across diff's, make them all the same - There's a break in Cyndaquil. You want to use kiai on a break? and in Lugia there will be no note to start kiai on there

Cyndaquil:
00:55:816 (5) - move to 00:55:557 done
00:56:074 (1) - start to 00:55:816 done
(make all the kiai times like this)

Croconaw:
00:55:816 (4) - move to 00:55:557 done
00:55:945 (1) - move to 00:55:816 done
00:58:919 (1,2,3,4) - center on grid viewtopic.php?f=29&t=21548

Meganium:
00:06:161 - add note no
00:06:290 (3) - move to 00:06:419 -it follows the lyrics
00:08:230 - add note no
00:08:359 (3) - move to 00:08:488 -it follows the lyrics
00:18:574 (1,2) - move up 3 tiny grids to mirror other combo done
00:22:712 (1,2) - move up 2 tiny grids to mirror other combo done
00:58:919 (1,2,3,4) - put on horizontal center line? viewtopic.php?f=29&t=21548

Lugia:
00:05:643 (3,4) - switch position of 3 and 4 viewtopic.php?f=61&t=23024
00:07:454 (2,3) - switch position of 2 and 3 viewtopic.php?f=61&t=23024
00:11:980 (3,4) - spacing..move 4 closer or turn it the other way around
00:16:635 (5) - move slider so it isnt under all the other notes
00:24:523 (3,4) - spacing
00:39:005 (1,2,3) - keep spacing equal
00:47:540 (1) - move to 00:47:281
00:48:574 (1) - move to 00:48:316
00:49:867 (1) - move to 00:49:350
00:49:350 (1) - move up
00:50:126 (1) - start at 00:49:867

Ho-oh:
00:06:290 (3) - move to 00:06:419 -it follows the lyrics
00:08:359 (3) - move to 00:08:488 -it follows the lyrics
00:20:126 (2,3,4) - spacing - they're properly spaced
00:29:954 (3) - add note no
00:34:092 (3) - ^ -no
00:43:661 (5,1) - align? - no

PM me after fixes and I will will re-pubble....
James2250
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I meant remove the kiai time from 00:47:281 to 00:50:643 as I don't really think it fits but I guess up to you
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James2250 wrote:

Lugia:
00:05:643 (3,4) - switch position of 3 and 4 lol no.
00:07:454 (2,3) - switch position of 2 and 3 ^
00:11:980 (3,4) - spacing..move 4 closer or turn it the other way around ^
00:16:635 (5) - move slider so it isnt under all the other notes Reversed slider.
00:24:523 (3,4) - spacing I know right? No.
00:39:005 (1,2,3) - keep spacing equal Looks ugly, but still done.
00:47:540 (1) - move to 00:47:281 No.
00:48:574 (1) - move to 00:48:316 ^
00:49:867 (1) - move to 00:49:350 ^
00:49:350 (1) - move up I guess this is a typo. lol
00:50:126 (1) - start at 00:49:867 No.
This time, I'm not being cooperative with the mods. orz. Sorry~

Download: PJ Lequerica - Pokemon Johto (TV Size) (NoHItter) [Lugia].osu
NoHitter
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Updated, but I agree with this:
00:24:523 (3,4) - spacing
I believe it's unrankable
James2250
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Cyndaquil:
fine

Croconaw:
fine

Meganium:
I still think 00:06:290 (3) and 00:08:359 (3) sound much better on the white ticks but whatever

Lugia:
00:11:592 (2,3,4) - I won't agree with this spacing unless you can really show me its ok
2 and 3 are 1/4 apart and are right next to each other. 3 and 4 are 1/4 apart and are very far away from each other...equal spacing is needed..
00:16:635 (5) - this is still under a whole bunch of notes.can't you make it so we can actually see its a slider easily?
00:24:523 (3,4) - as much as you seem to like disagreeing.....spacing. check distance snap and im 100% sure this wont be ranked
00:49:867 (1) - I said move this up so it isnt half way off the grid for no real reason

Ho-oh:
00:06:290 (3), 00:08:359 (3) - same comment as earlier..

Fix the problems on Lugia at least and I suppose I will pubble (will let BAT's complain about anything else)
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Download: PJ Lequerica - Pokemon Johto (TV Size) (NoHItter) [Lugia].osu
James2250
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Although I could keep complaining about minor things I have a feeling you wouldn't want to change them :P (at least spacing seems better now)

Pubbled!! :)
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Thanks
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iDwarf
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~Overall~
  1. Even if you have a video, some people use no video. So I suggest to change BG to higher quality.
  2. Offset in first section feels too early.
  3. Make kiai without breaks; Similar in all difficulties

Good map. Star~
blissfulyoshi
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Not touching the p-bubble.

Source: Change the source to" Pokemon: The Johto Journeys" (well that is what the video says)

Cyndaquil:
Combo mod:
00:23:488 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 00:19:867 (4)?

Croconaw:
Normal mod:
00:19:609 (1,2,3,4,5) - hard to see (but I don't think much can be done about that)

Meganium: fine

Lugia:
Normal mod:
00:06:290 (6) and 00:08:359 (6) - bring down stack leniency 2 notches to make these 2 notes look better
00:20:902 (9) - this is disorienting for me since there is a half note pause for this note in a slightly hard to read stream

Ho-oh: fine (I sort of have the complaint with 00:16:764 (9) as I did with Lugia's 00:20:902 (9), but this one is easier to read)

=====================================
Nice map. Star.
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blissfulyoshi wrote:

Cyndaquil:
Combo mod:
00:23:488 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 00:19:867 (4)? Moved new combo to 00:25:557 (1) -

Lugia:
Normal mod:
00:06:290 (6) and 00:08:359 (6) - bring down stack leniency 2 notches to make these 2 notes look better Done. :3
00:20:902 (9) - this is disorienting for me since there is a half note pause for this note in a slightly hard to read stream Added a note at the "half-note" pause. ^^
Done and all. ^^

Download: PJ Lequerica - Pokemon Johto (TV Size) (NoHItter) [Cyndaquil].osu


Download: PJ Lequerica - Pokemon Johto (TV Size) (NoHItter) [Lugia].osu

YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
2,729 posts
Joined February 2009
YGOkid8
don't have to do this, but maybe to the Tags, you could add the season number for it (ie. What season this opening was used)? Just a thought. (no kds for this post kthxbai)
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Cjndaquil
00:17:798 (1,3) - whistle here
00:21:936 (1,2) - clap the 1st, whistle the 2nd

Croconaw
00:30:212 (1) - whistle here
00:33:574 (3) - ...clap?
00:54:523 (2,3,4) - refine spacing, it's not really clear...

Meganium
[General] maybe more claps in this mode can make it better...
00:54:781 (4,5) - move them 21-2 squares down

Lugia
Sounds fine!

Ho-oh
[General] apply some of the AIMode's suggestions for this mode...
00:52:195 (2,3) - move them a square up and a square right

A final hint before starring this good map: make the spinner on 00:41:850 (Ho-oh) start at the same time in the other modes!
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
DerekMcD
*Star*
Aoitenshi
711 posts
Joined February 2009
Aoitenshi
Ho-oh:
00:17:540 - 00:18:833 = For the sake of symmetry, Move these note 2 Grid up in Level 3 Grid (The note position is not symmetric vertically)
00:21:678 - 00:22:971 = ^

Croconaw:
00:17:798 = Missing Finish?
00:21:936 = ^
RandomJibberish
osu! Alumni
1,833 posts
Joined August 2009
RandomJibberish
Wow the bg's horrible. I've attactched one that isn't quite the same but at least it's good quality lol.
SPOILER

Meganium

00:08:747 (1) - I don't like how this sounds. either reduce the volume or change the hitsounds


Lugia

00:20:385 (6,7,8,9,10) - Really hard to read :/

No other problems, Star~
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
Good map, I cant see a real problem

Small IRC mod for [Ho-oh]

Star!
Garven
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5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
[Cyndaquil]
00:05:627 Starting on an offbeat (red tick) threw me off a bit, but afterward it was fine.

[Croconaw]
00:05:385 [1, 2, 3, 1, 2, 3] Are these purposely not lined up straight?

[Meganium]
00:09:264 Spacing? I didn't have a problem reading it, so meh.
00:23:488 [1, 2, 3, 4] The timing on the 3, 4 made me 50 and flub up on the followup beats.

[Lugia]
00:20:126 [4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9,10] I couldn't see the return hits at all.

[Ho-oh]
The OD was brutal to me on this one. Make one or two mistakes and you're dead.
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