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Topic Starter
Tatsuo

lizzehb wrote:

Loves it.
Thanks~

Argh, remind me to irc mod your beatmap D<
Neethime
Pink words:You should fix this
Black words:Just suggestions
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[Trance]
01:57:076 - Add a note here?
02:00:197 - ^
02:04:019 - ^
02:23:247 - ^

[simplistiC's Jump Style]
So many jumps and traps...lol...(fail
01:15:696 (7) - new combo?
01:18:918 (7) - ^
02:39:455 (7) - ^
02:42:676 (7) - ^

Nice map,I can't find more to point out :D.
+Star :)
Topic Starter
Tatsuo
SPOILER

Neethime wrote:

Pink words:You should fix this
Black words:Just suggestions
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[Trance] I took nothing from here D=
01:57:076 - Add a note here?
02:00:197 - ^
02:04:019 - ^
02:23:247 - ^

[simplistiC's Jump Style] I think simplistiC would also take nothing from here, but I'm not simplistiC lol.
So many jumps and traps...lol...(fail
01:15:696 (7) - new combo?
01:18:918 (7) - ^
02:39:455 (7) - ^
02:42:676 (7) - ^

Nice map,I can't find more to point out :D.
+Star :)

Thanks for the star~
mekadon_old
^_^ Quite perfect, star~~~

SPOILER
general
Some flashes work well in this song lol

softcore
01:33:415 (3) - Align all points as 01:35:025(4)
02:05:629 - Add note
02:36:233 - ^
02:44:388 - Maybe a spinner or sth?


trance
01:26:166 (2) - Remove whistle
01:29:388 (3,4) - ^
01:32:609 (6) - ^
01:35:831 (3,4) - ^
01:46:300 (1,2,3,4,5) - What? Just continue the streams until 01:49:321 lol

jumpstyle
00:22:542 (5) - Change it to alternating streams. Like StrangeProgram's ending?
01:19:723 (10,11,12, 13) - Semi-oibon jumps?
01:49:522 (5) - Same as 00:22:542 (5)
02:05:629 (1) - Make it a jump
Topic Starter
Tatsuo

mekadon95 wrote:

^_^ Quite perfect, star~~~

SPOILER
general
Some flashes work well in this song lol I originally storyboarded flashes into the beatmap, but uhhh... I removed them because I suck at storyboarding, and I wanted more flashes in other places than Kiai time, and I didn't quite know where to put them :o

softcore
01:33:415 (3) - Align all points as 01:35:025(4) Done~
02:05:629 - Add note Done~
02:36:233 - ^ Umm... no for now, but I'll think about it.
02:44:388 - Maybe a spinner or sth? Left as is.


trance
01:26:166 (2) - Remove whistle Done~
01:29:388 (3,4) - ^ Done~
01:32:609 (6) - ^ Done~
01:35:831 (3,4) - ^ Done~
01:46:300 (1,2,3,4,5) - What? Just continue the streams until 01:49:321 lol After looking at this, I changed this to hit circles and two sliders.

jumpstyle I shall wait for simplistiC's input.
00:22:542 (5) - Change it to alternating streams. Like StrangeProgram's ending?
01:19:723 (10,11,12, 13) - Semi-oibon jumps?
01:49:522 (5) - Same as 00:22:542 (5)
02:05:629 (1) - Make it a jump
Thank you for the mod and star~ :D
kino77
Very good map~

[Soft Core]
All spin - Volume up?
01:06:435 (1) - 1 grid left?
01:23:750 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Make the volume increase here?

[Trance]
All spin - Volume up?
Add whistle to place like 00:13:280, 00:14:086, 00:14:891, 00:15:696 ?
01:28:985 (1) - Remove nc?
01:46:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Use whistle partten like before?

[simplistiC's]
Fabulous~!

STAR~!
Topic Starter
Tatsuo

kino77 wrote:

Very good map~

[Soft Core]
All spin - Volume up? Oh thanks, I fixed it~
01:06:435 (1) - 1 grid left? I don't see why not.
01:23:750 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Make the volume increase here? Done~

[Trance]
All spin - Volume up? Done~
Add whistle to place like 00:13:280, 00:14:086, 00:14:891, 00:15:696 ? Um... No thanks~
01:28:985 (1) - Remove nc? Done~
01:46:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Use whistle partten like before? I forgot to add hit sounds when I changed this! Thanks!

[simplistiC's]
Fabulous~! simplistiC will be so happy lol.

STAR~!
Thanks for the star~
Garven
As per your request:

[Easy]
00:14:488 (3) - Can you make this overlap a little less, kind of like how 1 and 2 are?
00:26:166 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for an easy.
00:55:159 (1) - ^
01:36:636 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Can you scoot these away from each other a little bit? It just looks bad with all that overlap. Breaking distance snap a tiny bit on sliders won't topple anyone's milk.
01:53:146 (1) - Soon, spinner. Yay.
01:58:381 (5,1) - Maybe be confusing to new players as to when the bouncing slider is going to end. I'd do a long slider or something instead.
02:18:918 (1) - I think you know what I'm going to say.
02:24:153 (4) - Same comment before as 01:58
02:33:817 (1,2,3,4,5) - For an easy?
02:37:039 (5) - Yeh
02:40:260 (1) - Uh huh

[Normal]
This kind of feels cramped like the previous difficulty.
01:08:448 (2) - Spacing?
Nothing technically wrong... just kind of felt blah to me.

[Style]
Fun. :D

The easiest diff is kind of on the difficult-side, but that's my only real concern with the map set.
Derekku
[General]
*Hitsounds are a bit quiet, but making them louder would kinda ruin the nice sounds in the music that are substituting them. Sounds great, imo.
*I expected a single kiai fountain at 02:44:287 to end the song
*Offset feels a tiny bit early. Perhaps try 12,885 and resnap? P:

[Soft Core]
00:22:542 (1) - expected this to get louder throughout to match the music a bit.
00:26:166 (1) - too far away from the center of the center (or too soon, like Garven said).
*Same comments for all of the other spinners and subsequent notes in this diff. Otherwise, a nice easy/relaxing difficulty.

[Trance]
*Same comments as the last diff regarding making the spinners a bit louder or using a crescendo.

[simplistiC's Jump Style]
*letterboxing and countdown aren't the same as the other diffs, but since this is a guest diff I guess it really doesn't matter.. :v
*similar crescendo spinner comments
01:20:529 (1) - Silencing this with the soft sampleset would get rid of the popping noise that's heard with the normal sampleset at the end.
01:49:522 (5) - 00:22:542 (5) sounded better imo

Very very minor suggestions/issues here. I'd say that his map is bubble-worthy once you can find a BAT. Great job!

PS: I disagree with Garven and think that the easiest diff is fine. It's got a couple of tricky spots with repeating sliders, but nothing too bad.
Topic Starter
Tatsuo

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[Easy]
00:14:488 (3) - Can you make this overlap a little less, kind of like how 1 and 2 are? Done
00:26:166 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for an easy. I moved this closer to the center to make it easier for new players.
00:55:159 (1) - ^ ^
01:36:636 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Can you scoot these away from each other a little bit? It just looks bad with all that overlap. Breaking distance snap a tiny bit on sliders won't topple anyone's milk. Done
01:53:146 (1) - Soon, spinner. Yay. Fixed.
01:58:381 (5,1) - Maybe be confusing to new players as to when the bouncing slider is going to end. I'd do a long slider or something instead. I like the way it is.
02:18:918 (1) - I think you know what I'm going to say. I do.
02:24:153 (4) - Same comment before as 01:58 I like the way it is.
02:33:817 (1,2,3,4,5) - For an easy? Yes, for an easy.
02:37:039 (5) - Yeh Yep
02:40:260 (1) - Uh huh Mhmm

[Normal]
This kind of feels cramped like the previous difficulty.
01:08:448 (2) - Spacing? Oops. I moved it one grid to the right to make sense. It still doesn't fix your "spacing" comment though. I like the way it is.
Nothing technically wrong... just kind of felt blah to me.

[Style]
Fun. :D Of course this is fun~

The easiest diff is kind of on the difficult-side, but that's my only real concern with the map set.

Derekku Chan wrote:

[General]
*Hitsounds are a bit quiet, but making them louder would kinda ruin the nice sounds in the music that are substituting them. Sounds great, imo.
*I expected a single kiai fountain at 02:44:287 to end the song Errr... Hmm.. No thanks (Had to think)
*Offset feels a tiny bit early. Perhaps try 12,885 and resnap? P: Personally... I feel like my offset is better. Although let's see what a BAT thinks~

[Soft Core]
00:22:542 (1) - expected this to get louder throughout to match the music a bit. Fixed.
00:26:166 (1) - too far away from the center of the center (or too soon, like Garven said). Moved towards center.
*Same comments for all of the other spinners and subsequent notes in this diff. Otherwise, a nice easy/relaxing difficulty. Thank you~

[Trance]
*Same comments as the last diff regarding making the spinners a bit louder or using a crescendo. Fixed.

[simplistiC's Jump Style]
*letterboxing and countdown aren't the same as the other diffs, but since this is a guest diff I guess it really doesn't matter.. :v
*similar crescendo spinner comments
01:20:529 (1) - Silencing this with the soft sampleset would get rid of the popping noise that's heard with the normal sampleset at the end.
01:49:522 (5) - 00:22:542 (5) sounded better imo I agree with this. Lol.

Very very minor suggestions/issues here. I'd say that his map is bubble-worthy once you can find a BAT. Great job!

PS: I disagree with Garven and think that the easiest diff is fine. It's got a couple of tricky spots with repeating sliders, but nothing too bad.
Thank you BOTH for your mods~~
Mianki
Awesome map ^^
Didn't found anything wrong with it, so have a star :P
Topic Starter
Tatsuo

Mianki wrote:

Awesome map ^^
Didn't found anything wrong with it, so have a star :P
Thanks for the star ^^
Doodley
I hear a slight click at the beginning of the MP3. Not a major problem, but could you remove it? You should also be careful on placing notes upon notes, mainly because the 300/100/50 sometimes cover it up. Other than those, I can't find any problems.

Timing sounds perfect.

Man, you guys have to stop posting flawless maps in my queue. Star.
Topic Starter
Tatsuo

stickmeister wrote:

I hear a slight click at the beginning of the MP3. Not a major problem, but could you remove it? You should also be careful on placing notes upon notes, mainly because the 300/100/50 sometimes cover it up. Other than those, I can't find any problems.

Timing sounds perfect.

Man, you guys have to stop posting flawless maps in my queue. Star.
Thank you stickmeister for pointing out the mp3 fail in my beatmap. It has been fixed and I gave you kudosu because of it.
DJPop
Offset: 12,920
Delete "B0UNC3 - Distorted Reality (I_Tatsuo_I).osb" in the folder.


~Soft Core~
Fine.

~Trance~
00:39:857 (4,6) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
01:06:435 (3) - ^

~simplistiC's Jump Style~
Fine.


+Star
Topic Starter
Tatsuo

DJPop wrote:

Offset: 12,920 This sounds better than what I had. Fixed.
Delete "B0UNC3 - Distorted Reality (I_Tatsuo_I).osb" in the folder. Fixed.


~Soft Core~
Fine.

~Trance~
00:39:857 (4,6) - move left 1 grid (Lv3) Fixed.
01:06:435 (3) - ^ Fixed.

~simplistiC's Jump Style~
Fine.


+Star
Thank you DJPop~
roflninja
Hi,

I don't think countdown is to fitting with this song, thats just imo

[soft core]
fine~
01:58:228 (1) - maybe stack with (5)?

[trance]
also fine~
00:36:477 (4,5) - confused me first play, but I think it's just me, dont worry about it
maybe +1 to hp drain?

[jump style]
also fine~

nice map ;)
Muya
[Soft Core]
00:20:973 (4) 1grid right
02:32:249 (3) 1grid up
02:32:651 (4) 2grid up
02:33:457 (5) 3grid up
02:33:859 (1.2.3.4.5) 2grid up , 2grid left

[Trance]
00:41:107 (1) 1grid right
01:15:738 (6) 1grid left
01:29:832 (5) 1grid up
01:33:859 (2) 1grid right
01:46:342 (1) 2grid down 1grid right
01:46:544 (2) 1grid down
02:27:416 (1) 1grid left or (3) 1grid right
02:37:081 (2.3) 1grid down

[simplistiC's Jump Style]
offset:12920
banvi
Hello. :D
Soft Core
00:27:013 (2,3) 1 grid right?(grid lv3)
00:46:342 (3,4) 1 grid down?
02:00:034 (3) 1 grid left&1 grid down?
02:05:671 (5) 1 grid down?
Trance
01:17:349 (5,6) 1 grid right?
01:53:993 (3) 1 grid left?
simplistiC's Jump Style
00:22:542 (5) new combo?
01:49:522 (5) ^

Sorry for many nazi mod
nicemap
star & gl ;)
Topic Starter
Tatsuo

roflninja wrote:

Hi,

I don't think countdown is to fitting with this song, thats just imo I've been debating for some time to remove the countdown on my difficulties... I might.

[soft core]
fine~
01:58:228 (1) - maybe stack with (5)? No thanks~

[trance]
also fine~
00:36:477 (4,5) - confused me first play, but I think it's just me, dont worry about it Alright then~
maybe +1 to hp drain? HP Drain stays as is. This IS a normal difficulty.

[jump style]
also fine~

nice map ;)
Thanks ninja~~

Muya wrote:

[Soft Core]
00:20:973 (4) 1grid right
02:32:249 (3) 1grid up
02:32:651 (4) 2grid up
02:33:457 (5) 3grid up
02:33:859 (1.2.3.4.5) 2grid up , 2grid left

[Trance]
00:41:107 (1) 1grid right
01:15:738 (6) 1grid left
01:29:832 (5) 1grid up
01:33:859 (2) 1grid right
01:46:342 (1) 2grid down 1grid right
01:46:544 (2) 1grid down
02:27:416 (1) 1grid left or (3) 1grid right
02:37:081 (2.3) 1grid down

[simplistiC's Jump Style]
offset:12920
Everything was used from you Muya, thanks~

banvi wrote:

Hello. :D
Soft Core
00:27:013 (2,3) 1 grid right?(grid lv3)
00:46:342 (3,4) 1 grid down?
02:00:034 (3) 1 grid left&1 grid down?
02:05:671 (5) 1 grid down?
Trance
01:17:349 (5,6) 1 grid right?
01:53:993 (3) 1 grid left?
simplistiC's Jump Style
00:22:542 (5) new combo?
01:49:522 (5) ^

Sorry for many nazi mod
nicemap
star & gl ;)
Thanks for the nazi banvi~

Thanks for your mods everyone! :)
KRZY
[Soft Core]
Fine.

[Trance]
While testing this diff, I felt that the map does not live up to the music; there were nothing wrong with patterns, spacing, etc. but the map felt restrained and conservative while the music was outgoing and progressive.
Therefore, I suggest you increase the overall difficulty of this diff. to 7 or 8. 8 played fined with me.
If you have time, maybe you might wanna arrange the notes with an increased distance snap.

[simplistiC's Jump Style]
Fine.



Nice map.

Star!
Topic Starter
Tatsuo

DJ KRZY wrote:

[Soft Core]
Fine.

[Trance]
While testing this diff, I felt that the map does not live up to the music; there were nothing wrong with patterns, spacing, etc. but the map felt restrained and conservative while the music was outgoing and progressive.
Therefore, I suggest you increase the overall difficulty of this diff. to 7 or 8. 8 played fined with me.
If you have time, maybe you might wanna arrange the notes with an increased distance snap.

[simplistiC's Jump Style]
Fine.



Nice map.


Star!
I understand what you are saying, and I thank you for your input. I'll mull over what you said for a bit.
Luvdic
Everything is fine is suppose...
Only thing i can say is that i dont really like the low distance snap you used in soft core. But thats only me though, and at this stage of your map, i wouldnt do anything to it (just consider this opinion for your future maps :p)
Topic Starter
Tatsuo

ErufenRito wrote:

Everything is fine is suppose...
Only thing i can say is that i dont really like the low distance snap you used in soft core. But thats only me though, and at this stage of your map, i wouldnt do anything to it (just consider this opinion for your future maps :p)
I have already fixed this in Paradise on Earth, I am still currently remaking it, and I have learned from it. So don't worry~
Future maps have already learned.
Krisom
I'm really sorry I took so long, this computer is not working ok so the mod may be a little crappy.

[Soft]
00:48:758 (1) - Allign?
02:35:873 (3) - You forgot a clap here, at the start.

[trance]
01:12:517 (7) - Why is this slider whistled like that? It breaks the pattern you had before. Fix it unless you have a very good reason.
01:26:208 (2) - UnWhistle the end.
Nice! I'd like to see more sliderspeed, but you won't change it at this point ;D

[Jump]
As far as I can tell, this diff is great. As far as I can tell because I can't play really well with this mouse x_x
I loved the ending!!

~star!
Topic Starter
Tatsuo

Krisom wrote:

I'm really sorry I took so long, this computer is not working ok so the mod may be a little crappy.

[Soft]
00:48:758 (1) - Allign? Done
02:35:873 (3) - You forgot a clap here, at the start. Oops! Thanks!

[trance]
01:12:517 (7) - Why is this slider whistled like that? It breaks the pattern you had before. Fix it unless you have a very good reason. Fixed.
01:26:208 (2) - UnWhistle the end. Done.
Nice! I'd like to see more sliderspeed, but you won't change it at this point ;D I know =(

[Jump]
As far as I can tell, this diff is great. As far as I can tell because I can't play really well with this mouse x_x
I loved the ending!!

~star!
Thanks Krisom!
Kurai
Star~
Topic Starter
Tatsuo
Thanks~
dkun
Hello there~

Trance
I also agree with KRZY with the map not living up to what it sounds like it should be. I also put in the recommendation to increase OD a click or so.
00:20:973 (3,4) - Don't stack this? Just a small recommendation.
01:10:101 (6,7) - Add a beat for a stack of three.
02:05:671 (6) - Why does this end here? This break doesn't fit.

Soft Core
a-ok!

simplistiC's Jump Style
a-ok as well! :)

❤ = ★ ~
Take a kudosu star as well, Tatsuo! Let's get this baby ranked.
Topic Starter
Tatsuo

dkun wrote:

Hello there~

Trance
I also agree with KRZY with the map not living up to what it sounds like it should be. I also put in the recommendation to increase OD a click or so. I know, but it's a normal difficulty
00:20:973 (3,4) - Don't stack this? Just a small recommendation. Nah
01:10:101 (6,7) - Add a beat for a stack of three. Kay~
02:05:671 (6) - Why does this end here? This break doesn't fit. simplistiC has the same break but you don't complain about it? >_> Anyways I like the break. I feel like it DOES fit.

Soft Core
a-ok!

simplistiC's Jump Style
a-ok as well! :)

❤ = ★ ~
Take a kudosu star as well, Tatsuo! Let's get this baby ranked.
Topic Starter
Tatsuo
Note: I am well aware of the mis-aligned inherited timing sections due to offset changes. I will get to them and fix them in the next few days. For anyone that is modding, please ignore them for now.

Edit: Fixed
Edit 2: Spacing increased on [Soft Core], should look better and less cramped.
Musty
I Love this song >> :D
Star~

PS:The source is http://newgrounds.com/ a free community of Flash and of music! (Free to DL songs)
And in Newgrounds , the songs are all different and you can send your songs that you create (Most music on Newgrounds are made with FLStudio
Topic Starter
Tatsuo

Sweyax wrote:

I Love this song >> :D
Star~

PS:The source is http://newgrounds.com/ a free community of Flash and of music! (Free to DL songs)
And in Newgrounds , the songs are all different and you can send your songs that you create (Most music on Newgrounds are made with FLStudio
Thank you for the star. My source is already set as Newgrounds, and I am not going to set the source as a website.
Also, I know what newgrounds is~
Ra-s
:)
Topic Starter
Tatsuo
Thank you for the star, and Nivalis for the pretty pink star
rust45
[Trance]
00:16:141 (1) - I really don't like this slider, I like what you did in the rest of this section more.

[Jump Style]
Amazing

This map gets a well deserved star.
Topic Starter
Tatsuo
Forgot to thank you rust!

Thanks!

(I'll figure out a way to fix that slider you pointed out.)
deepsea
._.
Natteke
simplistic is awesome <3
Topic Starter
Tatsuo
Holy sh- Thank you deepsea for the bubble! :)

Natteke, yes indeed simplistiC is awesome
Andrea
[simplistiC's Jump Style]

This difficulty doesn't have a Countdown but the other two yes. Add Countdown here as well.


Fix and I'll rank!
Topic Starter
Tatsuo

osuplayer111 wrote:

[simplistiC's Jump Style]

This difficulty doesn't have a Countdown but the other two yes. Add Countdown here as well.


Fix and I'll rank!
Fixed~
Andrea
Here we go!

Ranked~
Topic Starter
Tatsuo
Thank you!
<3
roflninja
gratz Tatsuo
Krisom
Finally, gratz Tatsuo
Teras
HAAX
Garven
Hey hey, nice. Gratz!
Topic Starter
Tatsuo
Thank you guys :D
dNextGen
awesome as hell

this is the real techno songs 8-)
orioncomet
gzzz ~

more jump simplistiC!! moree jumpppp~ xD
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