tsukamaete wrote:

Hard:
hitsounds - no silence

00:45:680 (3) - 要和前面节奏一样00:34:771 (4,5,6,7) - 这样会比较舒服

00:48:408 (7) - ^

00:58:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 太丑了

01:24:203 (10) - Newcombo

00:12:953 (1) - No NC

00:13:294 (1) - ^

00:33:408 (1) - ^

00:00:340 删除绿线

offset 344

• Song Setup - Audio: Set Audio lead-in to 2 seconds, at least.
  1280*720 video resolution is absolutely too big. It lags a lot. Please resize to at least 640*360. If you don't know how to do it, you can ask me to compress it.
  Offset: 350
  Remove "Azu" from Tags, it's useless.

• .Suggestions:
  01:22:840 (1) - this spinner is too short

• .Suggestions:
  01:26:934 (1) - end this at 1:28:298?

1. 有两个osb文件:abc - (TV size) ([Ghost])和Azu - For you(TV size) ([Ghost])
   看到你osb文件里有这个code
   

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"delay.png",320,240
    M,0,-2387,-2216,320,240,572,397
    M,0,-2216,-1535,572,397,585,403
    M,0,-1535,-341,585,403,47,88

   我用photoshop打开看了下,没有任何东西,这个设置貌似完全无意义,所以
   请删掉delay.png和两个osb文件再full submit
2. 可能是video的原因,我玩起来卡得要死= =,你该考虑换个video? avi格式的比较好
3. 给每个难度设置一个统一的preview time, 个人觉得00:55:571比较合适,移到00:55:571,选择timing-set current position as preview point
4. Card N'FoRcE 跟你说加audio lead-in你怎么没加呢o.o至少2秒
5. 我怎么感觉01:04:605这走音了囧,音乐本身就这样?

1. slider tick rate太高了,送分不是这样送的,降至2比较合适=''=
2. 喜儿说的对,按这歌的音效来加clap绝对没错,歌里有clao的地方都加上clap吧
3. 01:22:844 - spinner - auto君刚好能转到+2000...对于normal来说这个spinner短了点,建议还是用note替代好了

2. 00:31:537 (3-8) - 蓝线开始的3连打...听起来玩起来都会比较奇怪,最好从红线或者白线开始

xierbaliti wrote:

- - 这歌音效声太好了0.0 按歌来+没错
建议:添加 空白音效 soft-sliderslide.wav 和soft-slidertick.wav
00:29:828 (6) - 去掉这个 然后在00:30:169(7 8中间)放1个circle 如图[attachment=0:d1f8b]002.jpg[/attachment:d1f8b]
00:55:567 (?) - 在00:55:908 (1) -的位置添1个note?
01:00:680 (10,11) - 去掉这2个 在10的位置+1个折返的slider 如图[attachment=1:d1f8b]001.jpg[/attachment:d1f8b]
01:09:203 (?) - 这里+1个note听起来不错
01:26:930 (1) - spinner结束在01:28:294比较好

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- General:

• Song Setup - Audio: Set Audio lead-in to 2 seconds, at least.
  1280*720 video resolution is absolutely too big. It lags a lot. Please resize to at least 640*360. If you don't know how to do it, you can ask me to compress it.
  Offset: 350
  Remove "Azu" from Tags, it's useless.

- Normal:

• .Suggestions:
  01:22:840 (1) - this spinner is too short

- Hard:

• .Suggestions:
  01:26:934 (1) - end this at 1:28:298?

Map is fine, but there are some things to fix, like video and lead-in.
If you have other questions, feel free to ask me.

Breeze wrote:

鬼鬼o.o

比人的post对你有用的话应该给kudosu吧o.o

[General]

1. 有两个osb文件:abc - (TV size) ([Ghost])和Azu - For you(TV size) ([Ghost])
   看到你osb文件里有这个code
   

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"delay.png",320,240
    M,0,-2387,-2216,320,240,572,397
    M,0,-2216,-1535,572,397,585,403
    M,0,-1535,-341,585,403,47,88

   我用photoshop打开看了下,没有任何东西,这个设置貌似完全无意义,所以
   请删掉delay.png和两个osb文件再full submit
2. 可能是video的原因,我玩起来卡得要死= =,你该考虑换个video? avi格式的比较好
3. 给每个难度设置一个统一的preview time, 个人觉得00:55:571比较合适,移到00:55:571,选择timing-set current position as preview point
4. Card N'FoRcE 跟你说加audio lead-in你怎么没加呢o.o至少2秒
5. 我怎么感觉01:04:605这走音了囧,音乐本身就这样?

[Normal]

1. slider tick rate太高了,送分不是这样送的,降至2比较合适=''=
2. 喜儿说的对,按这歌的音效来加clap绝对没错,歌里有clao的地方都加上clap吧
3. 01:22:844 - spinner - auto君刚好能转到+2000...对于normal来说这个spinner短了点,建议还是用note替代好了

[Hard]

2. 00:31:537 (3-8) - 蓝线开始的3连打...听起来玩起来都会比较奇怪,最好从红线或者白线开始

其他不错
star

lesjuh wrote:

Your BG is a little too big, 1024x768 is the max size for beatmaps, just cut a small part of the width

Hard:

00:37:869 (5) - Place it right under the previous sliders end.

Fix and I'll proto-bubble :>

Shinxyn wrote:

Mmm... hmm
xD pure distance snap map~
Taught you to add hitsounds to slider ends... but you kinda messed up on the repeating sliders xD xD
Since the map's very... basic and "flawless", time to.... err nazi

I warn you, you might not like these list
Normal- Nice and easy~
The hitsound mod... sorta...

SPOILER

00:14:006 - missing a clap
00:17:415 (1) - okay, you understand how to add claps to slider sides now, but.... you screwed up and used timing panels, too, lets see if I can explain without images... when you highlight the slider, and click a side, that side (and all it's repeats) gets highlighted red, and you can add hitsound to it~ correct, then... if you don't want it on all the ends? Highlight the slider, and highlight the note (or slider end) you want with hitsound ON THE TIMING BAR (where the red/white/blue ticks) and that one (or however many you clicked in the mouse's range) turns red, and you can add the hitsound, instead of blanking out one side of the slider with timing panels >_< (if you don't get it.... ask me for an image ._.)
00:18:779 (2) - ^ (and remove the extra whistle at end, don't mix with clap)
00:20:824 - ^
00:26:960 (7,8) - ^
00:33:779 (1,2) - ^
00:37:869 (4) - ^
00:39:915 - clap~? (and remove whistle)
00:41:279 (5) - remove whistle please
00:42:642 - clap~
00:46:733 - +clap, -whistle
and so on... you know the pattern (add clap to music, and don't mix clap with whistles please)
01:22:869 (1,2) - maybe add whistles so this part sounds a bit like 01:20:142 (1)?
01:26:279 (4) - add timing panel to make each finish quieter than the next~

New combo nazi that I did while you were adding claps, don't look if you don't wanna~

SPOILER

00:20:142 (3) - new combo, trying to sorta follow the vocal verse
00:25:597 (5) - ^
00:28:324 (8) - ^
00:41:279 (5) - ^ (maybe, or just keep long(ish) combo)
00:58:324 (6) - ^
01:03:779 (7) - ^
01:09:233 (6) - ^

Hard-
hitsound mod(ish)

SPOILER

00:15:370 (8) - remove whistle please (when mixed with clap)
00:20:824 - ^
00:21:506 (4) - that long paragraph I wrote in Normal >_< (and remove whistle mixed with clap)
00:24:915 (9) - remove whistle when mix with clap, etc etc
00:34:460 (3) - ^
You SHOULD know the pattern by now!!!
00:56:279 (2) - clap instead of whistle?
01:08:551 - can't do much about this clap in song, unless you wanna make custom slider tick, rather not though~
01:26:960 (1) - add finish, oh wait, the spinner's so quiet you might not hear the finish, your choice

New combo mod I did while you were adding claps

SPOILER

00:47:415 (6) - new combo for new verse in vocal?
00:50:142 (10) - ^
01:17:415 (6) - ^
01:22:869 (8) - ^ (maybe)
01:24:233 (1) - if you do new combo for (8), then remove new combo here >:?(i retain it)

I'm crazy?

Zekira wrote:

Use an offset of 1040 please. Resnap, etc. etc.

DJPop wrote:

~Normal~
Fine.

~Hard~
SliderTickRate:2


+Star

minyeob wrote:

OMG it's Ghost

Please look at LKs' suggestion.
After you check that, I'll bubble this.

pete2528 wrote:

after i play

nice map

star+