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Topic Starter
[Ghost]
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Basicilla
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wmfchris
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Kirisame Alice
star it :)
tsuka
Hard:
hitsounds - no silence

00:45:680 (3) - 要和前面节奏一样00:34:771 (4,5,6,7) - 这样会比较舒服

00:48:408 (7) - ^

00:58:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 太丑了

01:24:203 (10) - Newcombo

00:12:953 (1) - No NC

00:13:294 (1) - ^

00:33:408 (1) - ^

00:00:340 删除绿线

offset 344
Topic Starter
[Ghost]

tsukamaete wrote:

Hard:
hitsounds - no silence

00:45:680 (3) - 要和前面节奏一样00:34:771 (4,5,6,7) - 这样会比较舒服

00:48:408 (7) - ^

00:58:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 太丑了

01:24:203 (10) - Newcombo

00:12:953 (1) - No NC

00:13:294 (1) - ^

00:33:408 (1) - ^

00:00:340 删除绿线

offset 344
00:58:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 太丑了 fixed

01:24:203 (10) - Newcombo fixed

00:12:953 (1) - No NC fixed

00:13:294 (1) - ^ fixed

00:33:408 (1) - ^ fixed

00:00:340 删除绿线 fixed

offset 344 fixed

added hitsounds (I forgot it :?)
DeadAlready
SPOILER
22:32 <[Ghost]> : 求意见 星星 rank@_@
求意見沒有,我不會mod。求星星沒有,不會mod所以沒有kds扔粉紅星給你。求rank也沒有,不會mod所以沒辦法殺人 ;_;

好啦,上面是亂說的,不過我真的打起來沒什麼問題0.0 雖然說我是真不會mod啦...
所以...

star >w</
xierbaliti
- - 这歌音效声太好了0.0 按歌来+没错
建议:添加 空白音效 soft-sliderslide.wav 和soft-slidertick.wav
00:29:828 (6) - 去掉这个 然后在00:30:169(7 8中间)放1个circle 如图
00:55:567 (?) - 在00:55:908 (1) -的位置添1个note?
01:00:680 (10,11) - 去掉这2个 在10的位置+1个折返的slider 如图
01:09:203 (?) - 这里+1个note听起来不错 ;)
01:26:930 (1) - spinner结束在01:28:294比较好

Snowball
+star
Card N'FoRcE
- General:
  • Song Setup - Audio: Set Audio lead-in to 2 seconds, at least.
    1280*720 video resolution is absolutely too big. It lags a lot. Please resize to at least 640*360. If you don't know how to do it, you can ask me to compress it.
    Offset: 350
    Remove "Azu" from Tags, it's useless.
- Normal:
  • .Suggestions:
    01:22:840 (1) - this spinner is too short
- Hard:
  • .Suggestions:
    01:26:934 (1) - end this at 1:28:298?
Map is fine, but there are some things to fix, like video and lead-in.
If you have other questions, feel free to ask me.
dkey
:D 有爱,Star~
Breeze
鬼鬼o.o

比人的post对你有用的话应该给kudosu吧o.o

[General]
  1. 有两个osb文件:abc - (TV size) ([Ghost])和Azu - For you(TV size) ([Ghost])
    看到你osb文件里有这个code
    Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"delay.png",320,240
    M,0,-2387,-2216,320,240,572,397
    M,0,-2216,-1535,572,397,585,403
    M,0,-1535,-341,585,403,47,88
    我用photoshop打开看了下,没有任何东西,这个设置貌似完全无意义,所以
    请删掉delay.png和两个osb文件再full submit
  2. 可能是video的原因,我玩起来卡得要死= =,你该考虑换个video? avi格式的比较好
  3. 给每个难度设置一个统一的preview time, 个人觉得00:55:571比较合适,移到00:55:571,选择timing-set current position as preview point
  4. Card N'FoRcE 跟你说加audio lead-in你怎么没加呢o.o至少2秒
  5. 我怎么感觉01:04:605这走音了囧,音乐本身就这样?
[Normal]
  1. slider tick rate太高了,送分不是这样送的,降至2比较合适=''=
  2. 喜儿说的对,按这歌的音效来加clap绝对没错,歌里有clao的地方都加上clap吧
  3. 01:22:844 - spinner - auto君刚好能转到+2000...对于normal来说这个spinner短了点,建议还是用note替代好了
[Hard]
  1. 00:31:537 (3-8) - 蓝线开始的3连打...听起来玩起来都会比较奇怪,最好从红线或者白线开始
其他不错
star
proseyu
゚・:,。゚・:,。★゚・:,。゚・:,。☆ (>w<)/ ゚・:,。゚・:,。★゚・:,。゚・:,。☆
Topic Starter
[Ghost]

xierbaliti wrote:

- - 这歌音效声太好了0.0 按歌来+没错
建议:添加 空白音效 soft-sliderslide.wav 和soft-slidertick.wav
00:29:828 (6) - 去掉这个 然后在00:30:169(7 8中间)放1个circle 如图[attachment=0:d1f8b]002.jpg[/attachment:d1f8b]
00:55:567 (?) - 在00:55:908 (1) -的位置添1个note?
01:00:680 (10,11) - 去掉这2个 在10的位置+1个折返的slider 如图[attachment=1:d1f8b]001.jpg[/attachment:d1f8b]
01:09:203 (?) - 这里+1个note听起来不错 ;)
01:26:930 (1) - spinner结束在01:28:294比较好
00:29:828 (6) - 去掉这个 然后在00:30:169(7 8中间)放1个circle fixed
01:09:203 (?) - 这里+1个note听起来不错 ;) fixed
01:26:930 (1) - spinner结束在01:28:294比较好 fixed

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- General:
  • Song Setup - Audio: Set Audio lead-in to 2 seconds, at least.
    1280*720 video resolution is absolutely too big. It lags a lot. Please resize to at least 640*360. If you don't know how to do it, you can ask me to compress it.
    Offset: 350
    Remove "Azu" from Tags, it's useless.
- Normal:
  • .Suggestions:
    01:22:840 (1) - this spinner is too short
- Hard:
  • .Suggestions:
    01:26:934 (1) - end this at 1:28:298?
Map is fine, but there are some things to fix, like video and lead-in.
If you have other questions, feel free to ask me.
video replaced
Song Setup - Audio: Set Audio lead-in to 2 seconds fixed
Offset: 350 (370?)
01:22:840 (1) - this spinner is too short fixed
01:26:934 (1) - end this at 1:28:298 fixed

Breeze wrote:

鬼鬼o.o

比人的post对你有用的话应该给kudosu吧o.o

[General]
  1. 有两个osb文件:abc - (TV size) ([Ghost])和Azu - For you(TV size) ([Ghost])
    看到你osb文件里有这个code
    Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"delay.png",320,240
    M,0,-2387,-2216,320,240,572,397
    M,0,-2216,-1535,572,397,585,403
    M,0,-1535,-341,585,403,47,88
    我用photoshop打开看了下,没有任何东西,这个设置貌似完全无意义,所以
    请删掉delay.png和两个osb文件再full submit
  2. 可能是video的原因,我玩起来卡得要死= =,你该考虑换个video? avi格式的比较好
  3. 给每个难度设置一个统一的preview time, 个人觉得00:55:571比较合适,移到00:55:571,选择timing-set current position as preview point
  4. Card N'FoRcE 跟你说加audio lead-in你怎么没加呢o.o至少2秒
  5. 我怎么感觉01:04:605这走音了囧,音乐本身就这样?
[Normal]
  1. slider tick rate太高了,送分不是这样送的,降至2比较合适=''=
  2. 喜儿说的对,按这歌的音效来加clap绝对没错,歌里有clao的地方都加上clap吧
  3. 01:22:844 - spinner - auto君刚好能转到+2000...对于normal来说这个spinner短了点,建议还是用note替代好了
[Hard]
  1. 00:31:537 (3-8) - 蓝线开始的3连打...听起来玩起来都会比较奇怪,最好从红线或者白线开始
其他不错
star
preview time加了
video已经换了,sb删了...
至于slider tick rate,这样的分数觉得差不多啦^ ^
01:22:844 - spinner - auto君刚好能转到+2000...对于normal来说这个spinner短了点,建议还是用note替代好了 fixed
00:31:537 (3-8) - 蓝线开始的3连打...听起来玩起来都会比较奇怪,最好从红线或者白线开始
这里应该没什么问题啦,毕竟音乐是这样的,而且刚好相隔1/2.
pete2528
after i play
:) :) :)
nice map

star+
[Chu]_old
+1
kioukiou
[Normal]

Your notes are not on the tick.

Resnap all notes plz.

[Hard]

Fine.

+ star.
xierbaliti
00:54:915 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这段稍微改了下 试着看看

Lesjuh
Your BG is a little too big, 1024x768 is the max size for beatmaps, just cut a small part of the width :P

Hard:

00:37:869 (5) - Place it right under the previous sliders end.

Fix and I'll proto-bubble :>
Topic Starter
[Ghost]

lesjuh wrote:

Your BG is a little too big, 1024x768 is the max size for beatmaps, just cut a small part of the width :P

Hard:

00:37:869 (5) - Place it right under the previous sliders end.

Fix and I'll proto-bubble :>
fixed~
TTTTTTTTTTTT
Star~
Shinxyn
Mmm... hmm
xD pure distance snap map~
Taught you to add hitsounds to slider ends... but you kinda messed up on the repeating sliders xD xD
Since the map's very... basic and "flawless", time to.... err nazi :P

I warn you, you might not like these list
Normal- Nice and easy~
The hitsound mod... sorta...
SPOILER
00:14:006 - missing a clap
00:17:415 (1) - okay, you understand how to add claps to slider sides now, but.... you screwed up and used timing panels, too, lets see if I can explain without images... when you highlight the slider, and click a side, that side (and all it's repeats) gets highlighted red, and you can add hitsound to it~ correct, then... if you don't want it on all the ends? Highlight the slider, and highlight the note (or slider end) you want with hitsound ON THE TIMING BAR (where the red/white/blue ticks) and that one (or however many you clicked in the mouse's range) turns red, and you can add the hitsound, instead of blanking out one side of the slider with timing panels >_< (if you don't get it.... ask me for an image ._.)
00:18:779 (2) - ^ (and remove the extra whistle at end, don't mix with clap)
00:20:824 - ^
00:26:960 (7,8) - ^
00:33:779 (1,2) - ^
00:37:869 (4) - ^
00:39:915 - clap~? (and remove whistle)
00:41:279 (5) - remove whistle please
00:42:642 - clap~
00:46:733 - +clap, -whistle
and so on... you know the pattern (add clap to music, and don't mix clap with whistles please)
01:22:869 (1,2) - maybe add whistles so this part sounds a bit like 01:20:142 (1)?
01:26:279 (4) - add timing panel to make each finish quieter than the next~
New combo nazi that I did while you were adding claps, don't look if you don't wanna~
SPOILER
00:20:142 (3) - new combo, trying to sorta follow the vocal verse
00:25:597 (5) - ^
00:28:324 (8) - ^
00:41:279 (5) - ^ (maybe, or just keep long(ish) combo)
00:58:324 (6) - ^
01:03:779 (7) - ^
01:09:233 (6) - ^

Hard-
hitsound mod(ish)
SPOILER
00:15:370 (8) - remove whistle please (when mixed with clap)
00:20:824 - ^
00:21:506 (4) - that long paragraph I wrote in Normal >_< (and remove whistle mixed with clap)
00:24:915 (9) - remove whistle when mix with clap, etc etc
00:34:460 (3) - ^
You SHOULD know the pattern by now!!!
00:56:279 (2) - clap instead of whistle?
01:08:551 - can't do much about this clap in song, unless you wanna make custom slider tick, rather not though~
01:26:960 (1) - add finish, oh wait, the spinner's so quiet you might not hear the finish, your choice
New combo mod I did while you were adding claps
SPOILER
00:47:415 (6) - new combo for new verse in vocal?
00:50:142 (10) - ^
01:17:415 (6) - ^
01:22:869 (8) - ^ (maybe)
01:24:233 (1) - if you do new combo for (8), then remove new combo here >:?

I'm crazy?
Topic Starter
[Ghost]

Shinxyn wrote:

Mmm... hmm
xD pure distance snap map~
Taught you to add hitsounds to slider ends... but you kinda messed up on the repeating sliders xD xD
Since the map's very... basic and "flawless", time to.... err nazi :P

I warn you, you might not like these list
Normal- Nice and easy~
The hitsound mod... sorta...
SPOILER
00:14:006 - missing a clap
00:17:415 (1) - okay, you understand how to add claps to slider sides now, but.... you screwed up and used timing panels, too, lets see if I can explain without images... when you highlight the slider, and click a side, that side (and all it's repeats) gets highlighted red, and you can add hitsound to it~ correct, then... if you don't want it on all the ends? Highlight the slider, and highlight the note (or slider end) you want with hitsound ON THE TIMING BAR (where the red/white/blue ticks) and that one (or however many you clicked in the mouse's range) turns red, and you can add the hitsound, instead of blanking out one side of the slider with timing panels >_< (if you don't get it.... ask me for an image ._.)
00:18:779 (2) - ^ (and remove the extra whistle at end, don't mix with clap)
00:20:824 - ^
00:26:960 (7,8) - ^
00:33:779 (1,2) - ^
00:37:869 (4) - ^
00:39:915 - clap~? (and remove whistle)
00:41:279 (5) - remove whistle please
00:42:642 - clap~
00:46:733 - +clap, -whistle
and so on... you know the pattern (add clap to music, and don't mix clap with whistles please)
01:22:869 (1,2) - maybe add whistles so this part sounds a bit like 01:20:142 (1)?
01:26:279 (4) - add timing panel to make each finish quieter than the next~
New combo nazi that I did while you were adding claps, don't look if you don't wanna~
SPOILER
00:20:142 (3) - new combo, trying to sorta follow the vocal verse
00:25:597 (5) - ^
00:28:324 (8) - ^
00:41:279 (5) - ^ (maybe, or just keep long(ish) combo)
00:58:324 (6) - ^
01:03:779 (7) - ^
01:09:233 (6) - ^

Hard-
hitsound mod(ish)
SPOILER
00:15:370 (8) - remove whistle please (when mixed with clap)
00:20:824 - ^
00:21:506 (4) - that long paragraph I wrote in Normal >_< (and remove whistle mixed with clap)
00:24:915 (9) - remove whistle when mix with clap, etc etc
00:34:460 (3) - ^
You SHOULD know the pattern by now!!!
00:56:279 (2) - clap instead of whistle?
01:08:551 - can't do much about this clap in song, unless you wanna make custom slider tick, rather not though~
01:26:960 (1) - add finish, oh wait, the spinner's so quiet you might not hear the finish, your choice
New combo mod I did while you were adding claps
SPOILER
00:47:415 (6) - new combo for new verse in vocal?
00:50:142 (10) - ^
01:17:415 (6) - ^
01:22:869 (8) - ^ (maybe)
01:24:233 (1) - if you do new combo for (8), then remove new combo here >:?(i retain it)

I'm crazy?
All fixed :)

not crazy,just serious :)
Thanks~Shinxyn
Ana_Coppola
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
taros
good map!
Zekira
Use an offset of 1040 please. Resnap, etc. etc.
Topic Starter
[Ghost]

Zekira wrote:

Use an offset of 1040 please. Resnap, etc. etc.
fixed
lcclarke
首先,你可以把全体的Hitsound音量稍微开大一点,然后用空白音替换掉Sliderside
总体的Hitsound感觉良好,但是我觉得某些音乐上出彩的地方在Note上没有很好的表现出来,所以我做了一些修改.
以下是我修改的部分:
00:19:790 - 00:23:199
00:28:994 - 00:30:017
00:33:767 - 00:34:960
00:36:494 - 00:37:687
00:52:346 我把Spinner提前了1/4拍,这样感觉更好
00:54:903 (1,2) - 这里的改动需要用Hitsound来配合效果才好,你需要在Timepoint里设置,把Hitnormal和Sliderside换成空白,然后只在Slider头上加上Whistle,这样1,2和3形成Jump.
00:55:585 (3) - 加上了Finish
01:08:199 - 01:09:051
01:15:528 - 01:17:062

呵呵~~以上是我的建议~~osu文件见附件 :)


来一个死大!!~~

Download: Azu - For You(TV size) ([Ghost]) [Hard].osu
Lesjuh
Everything looks fine to me, protobubbled:>
LKs
目前看来很有活力的图,一鼓作气直到rank吧!

\LK MOD/

NORMAL

[00:45:17] (1,2,3) 这三个键的位置有些不一致,让他们的距离相等

HARD

good,没有发现问题~

我只能说这张MAP很完美,没有瑕疵。但是,略微少了一点灵性,你在normal里面的相似的键位稍微多了一点,我并不反对,这张图完全可以rank,但以应该再之后的map里做出你自己的风格,这是我更希望的

GOOD! STAR FOR YOU!
Dangaard
fumoffu star :3
minyeob
OMG it's Ghost

Please look at LKs' suggestion.
After you check that, I'll bubble this.
yaya
SPOILER
鸣人~自来也~佐助~大蛇丸~纲手·我看了三遍才开始看map.都看video去了,啊哈哈。~
进步了不少嘛。
我说几点建议。
感觉有点hitsound泛滥,加太多了。
hard里
00:11:949 (1,2) - 这种,只在1加就够了
00:15:699 (1,2,3,4,5) - 5个一起加whistle就有点吵了
hitsound是用来配合map的,不要把hitsound弄成主旋律:)

为什么不让normal跟hard同样从一个地方开始呢?
00:00:358 (1) - normal里这根slider最好不要

for all diffs: 加一个无声的sliderslide.
DJPop
~Normal~
Fine.

~Hard~
SliderTickRate:2


+Star
Topic Starter
[Ghost]

DJPop wrote:

~Normal~
Fine.

~Hard~
SliderTickRate:2


+Star
SliderTickRate:4 , i feel fine>.<

minyeob wrote:

OMG it's Ghost

Please look at LKs' suggestion.
After you check that, I'll bubble this.
fixed~
and changed spinner skins.
aesopl19193
Good map ~
And here are just my suggestion ~


Hard
00:31:892(5) - 向後移到紅線
01:05:812 (3,4) 把hitsound 音量降低一格我覺得比較順耳

~star
orioncomet
Nice map Nice song, star~ ☆
minyeob
OwO
Bubbled. Good luck
abalee
=w=
Ranked. Good luck.
Breeze
+w+
Congratulations. Good luck
LKs
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
xierbaliti
Congratulations!
Cyril Scarlet
oh (*・x・)/゚・:*:・。☆Congratulations

>w<" sorry I can't come to see ~ I'm back home today
Irotsuki

pete2528 wrote:

after i play
:) :) :)
nice map

star+
I love NARUTO!!!!!!!!!! :) 8-) :P :oops: ;) :D
Taskmaster
good song :D
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