From my queue
[General]
With you are a newbie in mapping. I think it is enough but still not enough for rank. You need to improve more on yourself style. See other ranked maps by almost famous mappers. I hope i can see your first ranked map soon but not this
[General]
- Your tittle song isn't completely correct. You need to change "TV edit" into "TV Edit". Tap on "E".
http://vgmdb.net/album/46104 YOu can see here. - I really still hope you can add hitsound for your map: clap, whistle, sliderslide,.... So I won't mod hitsound of this map.
- Your plan is current combo color? I think using the combo color is sensible at BG, still better.
- You can remove []op[/b] in tags because it didn't support for searching and remove tokyo ghoul because it is supported in Source. You can add 東京喰種 トーキョーグール (it is Knaji and Kana of the name of this anime series.
- 00:11:655 (1) - I really still don't like this slider pattern. How about this:Example
288,96,11655,6,0,B|280:128|280:128|288:148|288:148|272:184|272:184|284:208|268:240,1,142.500005435944
- 00:16:766 (1) - This slider isn't sensible for this rhythm. At the big white tick, there is a drum quite loud. I sugguest you changing into 2 circles and creat the jump. Example
- 00:16:766 (4) - is at 244/292
- 00:16:988 (1) - 200/156
- 00:28:544 - I sugguest putting circle here. Because drum is quite loud. So bad to ignore it.
- 00:30:766 (4) - I think more blanket wil be nicer with my way.Example
256,16,30766,2,0,B|244:56|244:56|256:88|256:88|236:120|248:160,1,142.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
- 00:34:544 (4) - Move to 264/308 to blanket with 00:33:877 (1,2,3). So if you fix them, move 00:35:877 (2) - to 196/276 not to stack with 00:34:544 (4) -
- 00:41:877 (2) - Move to 252/240 and 00:42:322 (3) - 125/197, so you can around 00:41:655 (1) - by 00:42:322 (3). Good pattern!
- 00:44:544 (4) - Remove because this is a ghost not. NOt have any sounds from song.
- 00:45:099 - I can hear a whistle - "Zig" here. I strongly sugguest for this rhythm. 00:45:211 (6) - Remove it. Put a slider from 00:45:099 - to 00:45:211. Excellent rhythm!Example
372,108,45099,2,0,L|320:100,1,35.625001358986
- 00:47:877 (3) - This slider ignored the voice here: 00:48:099. My way for this is remove this slider. Put a circle and a slider from 00:48:099 - to 00:48:322 -
- 00:48:544 (5) - Move to 112/40. I really don't see any nice to stack with 00:49:322 (2) -
- 00:55:211 (2) - This is quite difficult to read. Because usually, you used 1/4 with almost this pattern. some players can understand wrongly for this is "1/4 rhythm". I sugguest moving to 236/268
- 01:02:322 (1) - Remove NC, it didn't support anything
- 01:18:988 (4,1) - Quite far with default space for 1/4 in this map. MOve (4) nearer pls, like: 32/264
- 01:19:211 (1,2) - Change into 1/1 slider and move to 140/208. NO have any breaks in his voice at 01:19:433. Example
140,208,79211,6,0,B|188:184|228:208|228:208|264:196|264:196|296:208|336:184,1,190,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
- 01:20:988 - Put here a circle, then put spin at blue tick afterward.
- 01:20:322 (4,5) - I prefer my idea for the placement and pattern. Current will be not sensible when you move ur mouse.
- CS 3.5? I still really don't like it. Insane is used 4.5. Hard should be 4; 3.5 is so small
- You didn't use DS snap, that is thing I was realize. Someplace is 1.2x, someplace 1.02x. I'm agree that I and many mappers "always" use multiple DS but it is a plan. Your current diff isn't. That is my idea. Example like: 00:22:322 (1,2,3) - 00:19:655 (3) -
- 00:36:099 (6) - Ugly slider. I want to more straight.
- 00:47:877 - Put here a circle. Then let the slider 00:47:877 (1) - start to run.
- 00:57:877 (4) - Stack
- 01:09:877 (8,1,3) - ^
- 01:11:655 (4,6) - ^
- 01:15:655 (7) - NC, remove NC of 01:16:544 (1) -
- 00:08:099 (1,2) - First slider must be follow the voice. Second circle didn't follow anything yet. Fix rhythm: Repeat of slider is at 00:08:766 - . Then put a circle at 00:09:877 -
- 00:11:655 (1,2,3) - The voice didn't spell each words. He sings and "move-long". Fix this rhythm with my way like above:
- 00:39:211 (5,6,7) - Change into 1/2 has repeat. It won't be bored when u used the same rhythm with 00:35:655 (5,6,7) -
- 00:57:877 (4,1) - JUmp in Normal? I hope it isn't. Fix DS pls. Also remove NC
- 00:59:655 (3) - NC
- 01:02:322 (1) - Remove NC
- 01:03:211 (3) - NC
- 01:01:433 (6,3) - They are stacked. Quite difficult and bad, ugly for normal diff. Move far, yea, move far pls
- 00:21:877 (5,1,2) - Let see your DS, this is Easy. Jump? HOpe it isn't
- 00:41:877 (2) - NC becuase strong drum
- 00:56:099 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Oh so boring. I hope that you can map more insteresting.
- 01:20:099 (5,6) - My way is not stack. Easier for newbie. Your current is stack.
With you are a newbie in mapping. I think it is enough but still not enough for rank. You need to improve more on yourself style. See other ranked maps by almost famous mappers. I hope i can see your first ranked map soon but not this