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onoken - Quinine -A2D SIDE-

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tsuka
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年2月17日 at 15:51:44

Artist: onoken
Title: Quinine -A2D SIDE-
Tags: Ever17 MAD Dr_dy ignorethis
BPM: 180
Filesize: 17714kb
Play Time: 01:46
Difficulties Available:
  1. Another (5 stars, 402 notes)
  2. Beginner (1.94 stars, 100 notes)
  3. Hyper (4.89 stars, 300 notes)
  4. Lunatic (4.9 stars, 415 notes)
  5. Standard (4.21 stars, 159 notes)
Download: onoken - Quinine -A2D SIDE-
Download: onoken - Quinine -A2D SIDE- (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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MAD Project 1

All done

Hyper - Dr_Dy
Lunatic - ignorethis
Another - me
Standard - me
Beginner - me

Now pending ??
Niva
Well, I am a fan of Ruduen's version of Quinine (http://osu.ppy.sh/b/19569), and this is my suggestion for the map:

[00:16:174] - The 12th circle position is weird... Maybe you can combine it with the 11th circle so it becomes a slider?
[01:14:508] - The music shifts around here, add finish to the slider's end
[01:27:481] and [01:28:508] - In my opinion, these circles ruin the sound. Perhaps you could delete it?

This map is brilliant... *stars*
Topic Starter
tsuka

Nivalis wrote:

Well, I am a fan of Ruduen's version of Quinine (http://osu.ppy.sh/b/19569), and this is my suggestion for the map:

[00:16:174] - The 12th circle position is weird... Maybe you can combine it with the 11th circle so it becomes a slider?
it's readable imo :P
[01:14:508] - The music shifts around here, add finish to the slider's end ok
[01:27:481] and [01:28:508] - In my opinion, these circles ruin the sound. Perhaps you could delete it? hmm,so I decide to removed it :P

This map is brilliant... *stars*
not finished yet , waiting for last two diffi
Aakiha
越来越犀利了……

触卡fight =w=
Deye
於是,乃自己去修改,我其實做的腦殘了,也不難,也不簡單,不倫不類……

Download: Onoken - Quinine -A2D SIDE- (tsukamaete) [Hyper].osu
Breeze
o.o MAD
MMD I want jinkela
gdeath
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
freefish
she si ni
xierbaliti
:)
xBubu
star!!!!!!
kiddly
nice map~~
FUKOCLANNAD
stat!good
xipan_old
纳尼触卡又出烂图了?
(ノ゚ω゚)ノ(ノ゚ω゚)ノ(ノ゚ω゚)ノ
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:lol: :twisted: 擦 剁了你
ACC
是啊我又出烂图了 ╮(╯▽╰)╭
H_acg
suta
Topic Starter
tsuka
thank you guys stars <3
AngelHoney
留名加星..晚點來mod-3-
hvick225
我給你星 你別再講了= _ =
Topic Starter
tsuka

hvick225 wrote:

我給你星 你別再講了= _ =
打死你
lzy
(ノ゚ω゚)ノ(ノ゚ω゚)ノ(ノ゚ω゚)ノ
AngelHoney
Another

有些綠線再稍微改下位置?(向前或者向後)
00:33:174 (1) - 感覺這個note有點彆扭(也許是我錯覺吧
00:52:258 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 用1/3或1/6拍

Hyper

同樣是有些綠線稍微改下

00:37:841 (3) - 改下位置 ?
00:52:508 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 用1/3或1/6拍
01:11:841 (8) - 哨子聲再輕點?
01:28:841 (4,5,6) - 往上1格(lv3
01:29:841 (7,8) - 往上2格(lv3

Beginner

00:21:841 (7) - 哨子聲很突然..和奇怪 (刪除或者放在前一個note上?
00:27:174 (8) - ^
01:23:841 (11) - new combo ?後一個note去除new combo ?
01:45:174 (1) - 不是結束在線上?

背景色換成再深一點的藍色吧:3

:) :)
Topic Starter
tsuka

AngelHoney wrote:

Another

有些綠線再稍微改下位置?(向前或者向後)
00:33:174 (1) - 感覺這個note有點彆扭(也許是我錯覺吧 错觉00:52:258 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 用1/3或1/6拍 现在offset不准 不好改 但这里确实是个1/3拍╮(╯▽╰)╭

Hyper

同樣是有些綠線稍微改下

00:37:841 (3) - 改下位置 ? 我不懂哪有问题……
00:52:508 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 用1/3或1/6拍 事实上这样的1/4拍玩起来确实没有问题……就是offset不准
01:11:841 (8) - 哨子聲再輕點? 现在挺好……再轻不就没了么
01:28:841 (4,5,6) - 往上1格(lv3 这里是我朋友的难度 对于摆法 我尊重他:D
01:29:841 (7,8) - 往上2格(lv3

Beginner

00:21:841 (7) - 哨子聲很突然..和奇怪 (刪除或者放在前一個note上? 为了玩花样 看来不大适合
00:27:174 (8) - ^
01:23:841 (11) - new combo ?後一個note去除new combo ? 这里newcombo我想没错 每个小节都很明显
01:45:174 (1) - 不是結束在線上? 是结束在线上 最后一个音 只是带点拖音 没关系的:D

背景色換成再深一點的藍色吧:3 我会考虑

:) :)
ok all fixed done ,anyway ,thanks for you moding
ignorethis
finished

offset remains as in the older version and needs reset.

Download: Onoken - Quinine -A2D SIDE- (tsukamaete) [Lunatic].osu
DJPop
Artist: onoken
Don't capitalize it.


~Beginner~ <<< if follow IIDX level, change to "Normal"
00:21:174 (6) - new combo
00:26:508 (7) - ^
01:02:841 (1) - remove new combo
01:03:841 (3) - new combo
01:11:841 (1) - remove new combo
01:39:841 (6) - new combo

~Hyper~
00:10:174 (2) - cant see a note
00:54:841 (2,7) - add clap
00:57:508 (2,5) - ^
01:00:174 (2,7) - ^
01:02:674 (9) - new combo
01:04:508 (3) - add clap
01:07:841 (6) - new combo
01:46:502 (5) - silence the sliderslide

~Another~
Damn, what a killing jumps D:
00:16:171 (11,12) - don't overlap


+Star
Topic Starter
tsuka

DJPop wrote:

Artist: onoken
Don't capitalize it.


~Beginner~ <<< if follow IIDX level, change to "Normal"
00:21:174 (6) - new combo
00:26:508 (7) - ^
01:02:841 (1) - remove new combo
01:03:841 (3) - new combo
01:11:841 (1) - remove new combo
01:39:841 (6) - new combo

~Hyper~
00:10:174 (2) - cant see a note
00:54:841 (2,7) - add clap
00:57:508 (2,5) - ^
01:00:174 (2,7) - ^
01:02:674 (9) - new combo
01:04:508 (3) - add clap
01:07:841 (6) - new combo
01:46:502 (5) - silence the sliderslide

~Another~
Damn, what a killing jumps D:
00:16:171 (11,12) - don't overlap


+Star
ok fixed ok done
eustia
nice map~!

star~
touko_old
i will ss the map,wait me..
Topic Starter
tsuka
熟人多就是好啊= =骗各种星星 谢谢各位
Card N'FoRcE
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
subarasikibuta
wwwww
Dangaard
[general]
- Each diff starts with a green line on the exact time as the red line, either put half bpm to the red line or set negative offset to prevent overlaping timelines.
- You should credit the guest mappers at least in the map thread (Except they don't want credit)
- add/remove source to all diffs, right now there is only [Hyper] that got a source.

[Lunatic]
01:46:502 (10) - not snapped

[Another]
change offset, this diff is the only one with a different offset.

Nice map. fumoffu star :3
Card N'FoRcE
- General:
  • Offset: i think 1170 is better
    Also see Dangaard's
- Standard:
  • .Opinions:
    Good job
- Hyper:
  • .Opinions:
    Here too ^^
- Lunatic:
  • .Opinions:
    Lunatic? O.o is this a Touhou song? xD
    .Suggestions:
    00:35:841 (9) - new combo
    00:49:174 (9) - ^
    .Errors/Mistakes:
    01:46:091 - not snapped (as Dangaard said)
- Another:
  • .Suggestions:
    00:16:171 (11,12) - i don't like this :<
    00:52:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - uhm i swear anyone will fail this at first try. It seems a 1/4 stream and it took me a while to understand it, actually...
    .Errors/Mistakes:
    Fix offset to 1175 (if you don't want to change to my 1170), as Dangaard said
Anyway, great job ^^
Star in the meanwhile
ignorethis
uhh the name "Lunatic" was just used by me to distinguish my dif from tsuka's difs when mapping... This map has nothing to do with touhou series. :3
Cyril Scarlet
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Topic Starter
tsuka
thx for DAN and CNF's modding !~ all fixed now :D


and thank you bakaru for your star ><
1025
:?
lota78
nice done :d star ^^
Dangaard
Your current timing (-1.504 ms) is the same as 1.162 ms which is pretty early imo. To use the timing Card N'FoRcE suggested you should use -1.496 ms. Also you must snap the 2nd red line that appears in some diffs to current/new timing (no need for green lines since they inherit the timing from the first red line, but would be nice if you can snap them as well to the new timing).

[Another]
00:52:246 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is different from what I modded yesterday, don't know if this is what CNF pointed out or if this is your edited version after his mod. At any rate, it is pretty much unreadable that these are triplets (caused by the close spacing). Either you can make this a consistent stream (1/2 or 1/4) or you space this pattern out so that you can read the approach circles and distances between the triplets.
Topic Starter
tsuka
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Tonoko
:) YAYAYA
Dangaard
Ok, fumoffu pubble :3
sk3dnip
已经跟不上了。。。= =
taka1235
tsuka gogo~~
Derekku
[General]
*What is it with you people and using negative offsets? XP
*No source?
*'Dr_Dy' tag should only be in their diff
*'ignorethis' tag should only be in their diff
*I'd like to see an easier diff in this set. Standard is pretty tough...

[Standard]
*If you won't make an easier diff, could you at least lower the tick rate and slider velocity for this diff and fix it up to be easier? >.>;;
00:07:837 (2) - Can't see where the head of the slider is
00:10:504 (4) - ^

[Hyper]
00:52:254 (3) - Sounds like it starts early. *checks other diffs* Yep. Add a (3) to the last combo, remove repeats from the slider, and basically make it less awkward like how it is in [Lunatic]. :3
01:03:837 (1) - It's hard to see that this is a slider because of the 100/300's around it from previous notes.
01:08:504 (3) - ^
01:11:837 (8) - Sounds weird being silenced.
01:22:837 (3) - I thought that this slider was (1) and missed (2) (which blended into the background). Please move these notes around so that they're easier to see.
01:30:503 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Some of these are ambiguous as to which is the slider and which is the circle (especially with snaking sliders turned off). This is actually unrankable, but not always enforced. I want to enforce it right now, though. :/
01:38:503 (4) - Kinda hard to see where the slider head is.
01:43:837 (4) - ^

[Lunatic]
Looks good!

[Another]
00:18:087 (4) - It's hard to tell that this beat is here and I didn't expecct it. I thought the pattern would be 1/2 1/2 1/2 1/4 1/4 1/4 1/4 1, but that extra one was thrown in there @_@
00:33:170 (1) - Can't see the repeat under the 100/300 from a previous note. This is unrankable :S
00:51:670 (6) - (nazi) one grid to the right for symmetry please :B
01:13:337 (1) - I'd add one more note before this. That skipped beat is a trap o:

Nice job~
x2652300
STAR :)
LaunchedthousandShip
star
v2b
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Topic Starter
tsuka

v2b wrote:

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Starrodkirby86
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Topic Starter
tsuka
now more easier diffi has been added

thx ^^
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