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Shimotsuki Haruka - Kyouri Haruka

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gdeath
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年2月9日 at 15:40:17

Artist: Shimotsuki Haruka
Title: Kyouri Haruka
Source: Atelier Iris - Eternal Mana
Tags: alvisto Atelier series vocal collection Folkslied
BPM: 92
Filesize: 6907kb
Play Time: 03:31
Difficulties Available:
  1. alvisto's Insane (4.63 stars, 427 notes)
  2. Easy (1.24 stars, 147 notes)
  3. Hard (4.41 stars, 344 notes)
  4. Normal (3.83 stars, 279 notes)
Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - Kyouri Haruka
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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15th Beatmap

霜月はるか「郷里はるか」

PS2 GAME : Atelier Iris - Eternal Mana(イリスのアトリエ エターナルマナ)

Thanks to my friend for mapping a difficulty for me<3
alvisto
gdeath~~~ SUKI des ! *I mean your map* lol

Good job, star !

EDIT : 1 suggestion, after play through several times, this slider 03:28:846 (5) - ends at a weird place. Suggest either end it here 03:29:987 or here 03:30:803 with a silent end. xD
Topic Starter
gdeath
>alvisto

indeed.Fixed ^^
Luvdic
Overall:

- Set a preview point
- I can see that this song comes from a play station 2 game, i would add the name of the game to the source field
- Also seeing as youre not using storyboard, ive been told before to delete the osb file and do a full submit, so i guess i would say the same to you as well

Easy:

I would use a slider of half tick lenght with one repeat. Ex: a sldier staring at 01:13:194, ending at 01:13:520 , with repeats until 01:13:846 (in total one repeats).
Anyways as i was saying, i would use those sliders in some parts like:

01:13:194 -
01:39:281 -
02:41:890 -
etc, Pretty much any place with that sound where you are using just 2 circles

Hard:

00:26:564 - Add circle here. Seeing your patterns i would just stack it up in the same place as last note
00:26:727 - Add circle here. Seeing your patterns i would just stack it up in the same place as last note
00:31:129 - Add circle here. Prefarable stacked with the note that comes after this
00:32:433 - Add circle here. Prefarable stacked with the note that comes after this
00:37:651 - Add circle here. Prefarable stacked with the note that comes after this
00:42:868 - Add circle here. Prefarable stacked with the note that comes after this
00:48:411 (2) - Extend by a 1/4 or add circle at 00:48:901 -
00:49:064 (4) - Extend by a 1/4 or add circle at 00:49:553 -
01:34:390 - Add circle
01:34:553 - Add circle, prefarable stacked with 01:34:390 and 01:34:716 (1) -
02:01:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I dont really like the look of these objects being so scrambled.

Good map overall. And remember, these are just some suggestions, some are more ignorable than others. Up to you to use it or not
DeadAlready
>w</

射星星~~ :D

SPOILER
對了...這裡有個很nazi的意見... Orz
02:00:151 (7,8,9,10) - 這四個notes你好像是想要把它們壓在01:58:846 (6) - 底下吧0.0?
可是真正玩的時候它們會偏走...lol

試試看把這四個notes往下兩格再往右兩格如何?_?

這樣玩起來就會像這樣疊在下面了...0.0

呃...如果你本來不是這個意思的話...
對不起,忽視我吧... D:

其他我覺得都ok :D 很送分>w</ (喂

P.S:
啊~~gd你怎麼我要看你的圖的時候都不在,這種nazi問題我實在很想就直接用in-game pm和你講講就好的呀~~o__Q(被打死

Topic Starter
gdeath

ErufenRito wrote:

Overall:

- Set a preview point
- I can see that this song comes from a play station 2 game, i would add the name of the game to the source field <Done
- Also seeing as youre not using storyboard, ive been told before to delete the osb file and do a full submit, so i guess i would say the same to you as well <Done

Easy:

I would use a slider of half tick lenght with one repeat. Ex: a sldier staring at 01:13:194, ending at 01:13:520 , with repeats until 01:13:846 (in total one repeats).
Anyways as i was saying, i would use those sliders in some parts like:

01:13:194 - <Done
01:39:281 - <Done
02:41:890 - <Done
etc, Pretty much any place with that sound where you are using just 2 circles

Hard:

00:26:564 - Add circle here. Seeing your patterns i would just stack it up in the same place as last note
00:26:727 - Add circle here. Seeing your patterns i would just stack it up in the same place as last note
00:31:129 - Add circle here. Prefarable stacked with the note that comes after this
00:32:433 - Add circle here. Prefarable stacked with the note that comes after this
00:37:651 - Add circle here. Prefarable stacked with the note that comes after this
00:42:868 - Add circle here. Prefarable stacked with the note that comes after this
00:48:411 (2) - Extend by a 1/4 or add circle at 00:48:901 -
00:49:064 (4) - Extend by a 1/4 or add circle at 00:49:553 -
01:34:390 - Add circle
01:34:553 - Add circle, prefarable stacked with 01:34:390 and 01:34:716 (1) -
02:01:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I dont really like the look of these objects being so scrambled. <Changed

Good map overall. And remember, these are just some suggestions, some are more ignorable than others. Up to you to use it or not
thx for your modding ^^

quintitem wrote:

>w</

射星星~~ :D <接星星 ^^/

對了...這裡有個很nazi的意見... Orz
02:00:151 (7,8,9,10) - 這四個notes你好像是想要把它們壓在01:58:846 (6) - 底下吧0.0?
可是真正玩的時候它們會偏走...lol Yeah.Done

P.S:
啊~~gd你怎麼我要看你的圖的時候都不在,這種nazi問題我實在很想就直接用in-game pm和你講講就好的呀~~o__Q(被打死
人不在是为了送kds给学姐<3
SamiPale
我是路过的 :oops:
SPOILER
bad mod :(

[Normal]

01:24:281(1~) - 个人觉得这样比较好 0.0



[Hard]

00:26:237(1) - New Combo?
00:55:911(10~) - 虽然这里感觉到你是特意这样设计的,不过还是给出我的参考
03:02:759(2) - New Combo?
gd is a nice slider boy(girl?)

Topic Starter
gdeath

samipale wrote:

bad mod :( <No.not bad.all modders' suggestions are welcome : )

[Normal]

01:24:281(1~) - 个人觉得这样比较好 0.0
[attachment=1:3882b]1.jpg[/attachment:3882b]


[Hard]

00:26:237(1) - New Combo? <Yeah.changed~
00:55:911(10~) - 虽然这里感觉到你是特意这样设计的,不过还是给出我的参考
[attachment=0:3882b]2.jpg[/attachment:3882b]03:02:759(2) - New Combo?[/spoilerbox]
gd is a nice slider boy(girl?)
<why am i a slider boy?confused xDDD
half BPM slider is my favourite patter<3
thx MOD~
kino77
>w<

时间不容许,只能快速MOD~
倒没看出啥问题...-
所以上星星~
闪~
alvisto
<3

Finished~~

I hope you like it and I hope my map style this time makes sense. (I took a different rhythm approach to map this difficulty so that it would be different from your Hard a bit. xD)

Oh yea, you are free to modify any combo mod of my difficulty and any other misc changes. xD

Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - Kyouri Haruka (gdeath) [alvisto's Hard+].osu
Topic Starter
gdeath
>kino77

thx for your checking and star~

>alvisto

Love you and your diff so so so much<3
Breeze
:oops:
xierbaliti
:)
Topic Starter
gdeath
>Breeze
微风 :oops:

>xierbaliti

喜儿 :oops:
Shohei Ohtani
So, I like your wonder map, so yeah ;3.

Easy:
Great :D

Normal:
03:31:129 - Move the spinner's beginning to here. end the spinner where you see fit.

Hard:
Same as normal.

Insane:
Same as hard.

Overall, I love this map <3.

Star woowoo.
Topic Starter
gdeath
>CDFA

first,thx for your modding and comment : )

you'll find the accent is on the 03:31:210 if you listen carefully.

so...

anyway,kds is yours ^^
yaya
offset : 11224
[alvisto]
02:22:324 (2) - 建议加个note,soft finish的音效

others fine.

EDIT:bubble
Mafiamaster
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Breeze
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Cyril Scarlet
☆彡(ノ^^)ノCongratulationsヘ(^^ヘ)☆彡
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