1. Easy (1,58 stars, 117 notes)
2. Hard (3,78 stars, 417 notes)
3. Insane (5,16 stars, 650 notes)
4. Normal (2,13 stars, 205 notes)

Midge wrote:

o/

[Easy (blankets: the map)]

00:50:148 (1) - kinda ugly :L try this: http://puu.sh/aYEGj/4cf7e8b4bc.jpg something like that >.>
02:43:769 (1,1) - confusing since the spinner and slider overlap O_o

not much that i can say other than that, so i'll list off some wonky blankets:
02:17:045 (1,2) -
01:30:149 (2,3) -
01:38:424 (1,2) -
01:44:976 (3,1) - just move 3 in more
01:53:942 (2,3) -
01:59:804 (1,2) -
02:03:597 (2,1) -
02:17:045 (1,2) -
02:39:804 (1,2) -
02:47:735 (2,1) -
02:51:183 (1,2) -
02:53:597 (1,2) -
03:02:217 (3,1) -

Fixed most blankets! Some fixed themselves.

[Normal]

00:59:804 (1,2) - 2 doesn't have to be that close, move it down a little Manual stacking
01:23:942 (1) - move 2nd node to x:84 y:94 Fix
01:31:183 (1) - improve this too :L Fix
02:00:666 (2,3) - blanket this Dooooone
02:50:838 (5) - eeee i wouldn't repeat thrice. http://puu.sh/aYH9m/e37f1a85f4.jpg or http://puu.sh/aYH9R/c58542bfab.jpg etc. Gonna keep the repeats. I like them.

[Hard]

00:54:459 (3,4) - ctrl+g (better flow) Fine with the flow as is
02:52:907 (7) - 2 notes instead of a slider to put more emphasis on the "punch" or whatever the fuck he's saying Fixed
03:02:907 (1) - eeehh you could totally map this section I want all the diffs to be different, I can't place a short spinner (too short) so I opted for a long one.

[Insane]

01:10:493 (7) - wonky curve Looks fine to me...
01:28:511 (1) - you could totally have this increase in hs volume Fixed.

Good map dude, good luck. Thanks! ^_^

Moo-Chan wrote:

My mod for mod~

[Insane]

1. 00:50:666 (3,4,5,6,7) - I wouldn't do this cause it doesn't really fit the music (You do this a lot so I won't point out every time, but I'd say to change them all, and I mean the fact that the last note is more spaced than the rest) It does, last note is more intense than previous notes. That's why I do it selectively.
2. 00:56:355 (9) - NC Fixed!
3. 00:59:459 (10) - Maybe move this closer to the stream and blanket the stream around it? That would screw over the spacing.
4. missed a beat at 01:07:217 - I selectively map hi-hats. I chose not to here.
5. 01:07:304 (3,4) - This jump doesn't really fit the music cause it's too big I drag things around accidentally in the editor. Fixed.
6. 01:08:511 (1) - I'd make this spinner go to the white tick maybe Thanks, that was an error from early in the mapping
7. 01:18:424 (3) - Stack under the slider end No, want them manually stacked here.
8. 01:33:942 (3) - Stack under the slider end No, want them manually stacked here.
9. 01:35:149 (2) - Move this to be under the 9 Fine as is. Overlap isn't too bothersome.
10. 01:38:942 (2) - Stack under the slider end No, want them manually stacked here.
11. 01:41:873 (1,3) - You could blanket these better Fixed!
12. 01:42:562 (4) - Stack under the slider end No, want them manually stacked here.
13. 02:01:873 (7,1) - The overlap for these isn't very good looking Overlap is fine as is.
14. 02:06:700 (2) - Stack under the slider end No, want them manually stacked here.
15. 03:04:459 (1) - I'd suggest mapping the parts this spinner covers and then making the spinner be from 03:05:321 - to maybe 03:08:080 - here? Spinners have a build-up feel to them. I'm not going to add an arbitrary spinner at the end when I could have one when the music is building up.

Good luck with your map Thanks for your mod!

1. Be a little forgiving: HP and OD = 3
2. 00:52:217 (3) - Keeping this in the same combo after that pause may confuse players. Better put a NC.
3. 00:57:390 (1) - Not many new players are able to follow two reverses. Better remove one.
4. 01:31:528 (4) - New Combo here.
5. 02:15:321 (1) - I think this spinner's too short. Do something about it.
6. 02:58:080 (1) - I don't think the way you shaped this is nice... Maybe you can do it like this?
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:52:217 (4) - Confusing note: Insert a NC.
2. 00:56:700 (4) - ^^
3. 01:00:666 (2) - Stack the note properly or move it.
4. 02:09:459 (5) - Don't use this kind of slider in Normal. The ankwardness will destroy the players.
5. 02:18:769 (4) - New Combo, please.
6. 02:20:838 (8) - ^^

1. The jumps you have before first Kiai are a little hard to read... better change them.
2. 02:13:252 (4,5) - Slider streams in Hard please no... *dies*
3. 02:14:114 (2,3) - ^^
4. 02:20:838 (6,7,8) - ^^

1. slider tick rate 2 sounds best for this song with all the instruments in the background. specially in the easy and normal diffs.
2. You should try to find an mp3 with higher bitrate. currently you are using 128 kbps and ideally you would want 192. I tried to look for one for you, but the ones I found had conflicting song length with your map. (your map is 3:15, the mp3 I found was 4:05.

1. the start of the spinner at 01:07:045 (1) - seems kind of strange to me. the rhythm sounds similar to other parts of the song, yet a spinner suddenly pops up for this part. I can see what you were trying to do here, and starting the spinner at 01:08:597 - would make much more sense, but you cant do this in an easy diff. you also have a strong beat at 01:08:424 - too, in which the player doesnt have any interaction. what I would suggest is this.
   SPOILER

   
2. 02:43:942 (1) - I suggest you end this spinner at 02:44:976 - the way it is right now, it gives very little recovery time before the next note. this should be avoided in normal and easy.
   Nothing else I can see. I am not great with easy diffs.
   

1. Might be a little late for this, but maybe you should consider lower slider velocity here to 1.0 or 1.1 and using 1.0 distance snap instead of your current 1.2 sv and .8 DS.
2. try to use some more 1/1 rhythms in this diff. and well, normals in general.
3. Don't be afraid to throw in some 1/2s in normal, specially with this kind of BPM and when there's a decent gap in between it and the next note. for example here 00:51:183 - you could do this :
   SPOILER

   
4. now here is a big one, you really shouldn't do stuff like this 00:59:804 (1,2) - the rhythm of this song is erratic enough on its own, the the spacing here only adds to the confusion. you shouldn't stack notes under slider tails in Normals in my opinion. do something like this instead.
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:28:769 (1,2) - ^
6. 01:29:631 (3,4) - ^
7. 02:18:769 (4,5) - ^
8. 02:42:045 (6,7) - ^
9. 01:45:493 (4) - this circle is not needed and just makes this part overly difficult. I suggest you remove it.
10. 02:09:459 (5) - another big no here. simplify this rhythm is just a regular 1/2 slider.
11. 02:17:390 (1) - combo here is pretty huge, I suggest you NC somewhere in the middle of this, my suggesting would be here 02:21:873 (1) - there are more like this in all the diffs, you should be able to spot them
12. 02:15:321 (1) - same thing I said in easy about spinner recovery time, but i really don't know what you could do here ;\
    This diff needs alot of work. hopefully my suggestions will point you in the right direction.
    

1. Difficulty jump between normal and hard is pretty severe. I have no idea how you would ahndle this though, but I strongly feel you either need to make the hard just a bit easier, or you will need a difficulty in between these 2.
2. 00:57:735 (4) - make this into a 1/2 instead of 2 circles, it is more enjoyable to play this kind of rhythm.
3. 01:18:424 (2) - ^
4. 00:59:631 (1) -
5. I am actually not sure about having 1/6s in a hard, but wait for more opinions on this , just something to keep in mind.
6. 01:18:424 (2) - drag the second anchor to x:200 y:0 for cleaner blanket without leaving the grid.
7. 02:11:873 (2,1) - blanket can be improved. ctrl+g the 2 ,and use its approach circle to adjust it.
8. 03:02:217 (8,9,10,11,12) - not sure about having this stream here. I suppose you could keep this, but maybe decrease the spacing between the notes, or even stack them..

LixRei wrote:

Came from mod queue.

[Easy]

1. Be a little forgiving: HP and OD = 3 Fixed.
2. 00:52:217 (3) - Keeping this in the same combo after that pause may confuse players. Better put a NC. Fixed
3. 00:57:390 (1) - Not many new players are able to follow two reverses. Better remove one. Feel like this is fine, as the slider is long enough
4. 01:31:528 (4) - New Combo here. Fixed.
5. 02:15:321 (1) - I think this spinner's too short. Do something about it.Fixed,
6. 02:58:080 (1) - I don't think the way you shaped this is nice... Maybe you can do it like this? This slider is rad
   SPOILER

   

[Normal]

1. 00:52:217 (4) - Confusing note: Insert a NC. Fixed.
2. 00:56:700 (4) - ^^ Fixed.
3. 01:00:666 (2) - Stack the note properly or move it. This is fine as is. The overlap iusn't too bad.
4. 02:09:459 (5) - Don't use this kind of slider in Normal. The ankwardness will destroy the players. Fixed.
5. 02:18:769 (4) - New Combo, please. Fixed.
6. 02:20:838 (8) - ^^ Fixed.

[Hard]

1. The jumps you have before first Kiai are a little hard to read... better change them. I feel like this is fine.
2. 02:13:252 (4,5) - Slider streams in Hard please no... *dies* Might change it.
3. 02:14:114 (2,3) - ^^ Might change it.
4. 02:20:838 (6,7,8) - ^^ Might change it.

That's it...
Will wait for reply.

The Girls wrote:

#modreq from nana

Totally digging the song ^^

[Easy]
01:33:942 (6) - Rotate the asdf blanketing part of the slider counterclockwise until the tick of the slider matches the angle. Fixed.


[Normal]
01:09:459 (1) - It layers the circles beforehand. Can you Either stack the sliders onto the previous circles or can you move it out of the way of the circles? This stack isn't too disturbing.
01:23:942 (1) - I think you should continue with the direction of the previous slider. I like the way it is. It's readable.

01:27:045 - The spinner doesn't feel quite right. Try mapping it this way.... I guess you end the spinner on a suspension note which doesn't get resolved...and you need to do that or the mapping will work against the flow of the actual song. Fixed.

01:34:976 (3) - I think this works better for symmetry. color=#00FF00]Fixed.[/color]

02:19:459 - New combo. color=#00FF00]Fixed.[/color]
02:21:873 - New combo. color=#00FF00]Fixed.[/color]
02:22:217 (10) - Can you remap that shape? Its a little >< That shape is cool
02:38:769 (1) - I don't think the slider you have now fits the overall feel of your song. Try? Just personal pref Fine as is. If it ain't broke, don't fix it!

02:42:907 (8) - Why not stack this?

[Hard]
This is probably more of a personal preference, but your flow seems a little cluttered and almost a little random.
01:07:390 (3, 4, 5, 6, 7) - Try this? Fixed.

01:10:493 (5) - I feel like in order to combat the feeling of almost arbitrary placements, consider stacking certain passages. Like this one. Fixed both.


01:13:597 (6, 7) - Makes more sense to have the slider point perpendicular to the adjacent circles. It helps with your flow, since they it windmills the previous slider. Also 7 should be stacked. LIke this. It's fine as is.

01:15:321 (5) - Move to the right. No inherent reason why it should appear behind a lingering slider. Fixed.

01:29:286 (3, 4, 5) - Try Ctrl G on 4, and Ctrl G on 5. Flows better. And space out more. It's fine as is.

01:39:114 (2) - Ctrl G for better flow. It's fine as is.

[Insane]
- Your Sampleset is Normal. Your hitsound samplesets should be consistent. Made it consistent
- I don't have any experience with insane maps.

Setz206 wrote:

Alright, let's give this a shot.

[General]

1. slider tick rate 2 sounds best for this song with all the instruments in the background. specially in the easy and normal diffs. Sounds amazing.
2. You should try to find an mp3 with higher bitrate. currently you are using 128 kbps and ideally you would want 192. I tried to look for one for you, but the ones I found had conflicting song length with your map. (your map is 3:15, the mp3 I found was 4:05. It's a custom cut that I (how lovely) cut the end from. I'll reencode one later.

[Easy]

1. the start of the spinner at 01:07:045 (1) - seems kind of strange to me. the rhythm sounds similar to other parts of the song, yet a spinner suddenly pops up for this part. I can see what you were trying to do here, and starting the spinner at 01:08:597 - would make much more sense, but you cant do this in an easy diff. you also have a strong beat at 01:08:424 - too, in which the player doesnt have any interaction. what I would suggest is this. I fixed this.,
   SPOILER

   
2. 02:43:942 (1) - I suggest you end this spinner at 02:44:976 - the way it is right now, it gives very little recovery time before the next note. this should be avoided in normal and easy.
   Nothing else I can see. I am not great with easy diffs.
   

[Normal]

1. Might be a little late for this, but maybe you should consider lower slider velocity here to 1.0 or 1.1 and using 1.0 distance snap instead of your current 1.2 sv and .8 DS. I actually really like the
2. try to use some more 1/1 rhythms in this diff. and well, normals in general.
3. Don't be afraid to throw in some 1/2s in normal, specially with this kind of BPM and when there's a decent gap in between it and the next note. for example here 00:51:183 - you could do this : Fixed.
   SPOILER

   
4. now here is a big one, you really shouldn't do stuff like this 00:59:804 (1,2) - the rhythm of this song is erratic enough on its own, the the spacing here only adds to the confusion. you shouldn't stack notes under slider tails in Normals in my opinion. do something like this instead. Fixed.
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:28:769 (1,2) - ^ Fixed.
6. 01:29:631 (3,4) - ^ Fixed.
7. 02:18:769 (4,5) - ^ Fixed.
8. 02:42:045 (6,7) - ^ Fixed.
9. 01:45:493 (4) - this circle is not needed and just makes this part overly difficult. I suggest you remove it. Fixed.
10. 02:09:459 (5) - another big no here. simplify this rhythm is just a regular 1/2 slider. Fixed.
11. 02:17:390 (1) - combo here is pretty huge, I suggest you NC somewhere in the middle of this, my suggesting would be here 02:21:873 (1) - there are more like this in all the diffs, you should be able to spot them Fixed.
12. 02:15:321 (1) - same thing I said in easy about spinner recovery time, but i really don't know what you could do here ;\ Fixed.
    This diff needs alot of work. hopefully my suggestions will point you in the right direction.
    

[Hard]

1. Difficulty jump between normal and hard is pretty severe. I have no idea how you would ahndle this though, but I strongly feel you either need to make the hard just a bit easier, or you will need a difficulty in between these 2.
2. 00:57:735 (4) - make this into a 1/2 instead of 2 circles, it is more enjoyable to play this kind of rhythm. Fixed.
3. 01:18:424 (2) - ^ Fixed.
4. 00:59:631 (1) - Fixed.
5. I am actually not sure about having 1/6s in a hard, but wait for more opinions on this , just something to keep in mind.
6. 01:18:424 (2) - drag the second anchor to x:200 y:0 for cleaner blanket without leaving the grid.
7. 02:11:873 (2,1) - blanket can be improved. ctrl+g the 2 ,and use its approach circle to adjust it. Fixed.
8. 03:02:217 (8,9,10,11,12) - not sure about having this stream here. I suppose you could keep this, but maybe decrease the spacing between the notes, or even stack them.. Told in IRC. I might.

that's all i have. I dont feel like I could mod the insane for a song like this. anyway, hope this is helpful in some way ,and good luck with the set!

Otaku-kun123 wrote:

[Insane]

00:52:390 - Add triple it fits the melody.
00:53:769 - Same ^ it fits the melody.
00:54:717 - Add one cirlce iit fits the melody.
00:54:804 - Add a slider that end at 00:54:890 - and reverse it one time it fits the melody.
00:57:217 - add triple it fits the melody.
00:59:631 - Same ^ it fits the melody.
01:02:045 - Same ^ it fits the melody.
01:04:459 - Same ^ it fits the melody.
01:05:493 - Add slider that en at 01:05:580 - and reverse it one time it fits the melody.
01:06:873 - Add triple, it fits the melody.
02:42:304 (10) - Press Q
02:42:735 (1) - Same ^

[End Comment]

Nice map though.