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中間都沒啥打擊感offset: 13419
[Futari]
00:45:537 (7,8,9) - spacing.
00:56:125 (5,6) - ^
01:57:890 (1,2,3) - make this is like in this 01:07:772.
02:22:243 (2,3) - jump or spacing?
02:28:772 (1,2,3,4) - spacing.. bit number 2 close to the slider.
02:36:714 (6,7) - sharply.
[Hitori]
01:12:714 (1,2,3,4,5) - little bad spacing. fix it.
01:39:184 (1,2) and 00:13:419 (1,2) compare, yes, spacing.
your map need sounds, add it~
[Futari]
00:45:537 (7,8,9) - spacing.
00:56:125 (5,6) - ^
01:57:890 (1,2,3) - make this is like in this 01:07:772.
02:22:243 (2,3) - jump or spacing?
02:28:772 (1,2,3,4) - spacing.. bit number 2 close to the slider.
02:36:714 (6,7) - sharply.
[Hitori]
01:12:714 (1,2,3,4,5) - little bad spacing. fix it.
01:39:184 (1,2) and 00:13:419 (1,2) compare, yes, spacing.
your map need sounds, add it~
Just some general stuff here.
The English title is (apparently) "Just Two of Solitude", change the song title to reflect this. You should use distance snap, really. Your hitsounds are pretty lacking, use more than just those two if you wish to complement the percussion properly. Another thing is the lack of breaks on the harder difficulty, you do need those as well. The chorus is quite a bit more difficult than the rest of the map, tone it down a bit and possibly add kiai. Finally, add an additional offset at 96,714 to fix the metronome, ignore [DBF]'s offset, he would be wrong.
Good luck!
The English title is (apparently) "Just Two of Solitude", change the song title to reflect this. You should use distance snap, really. Your hitsounds are pretty lacking, use more than just those two if you wish to complement the percussion properly. Another thing is the lack of breaks on the harder difficulty, you do need those as well. The chorus is quite a bit more difficult than the rest of the map, tone it down a bit and possibly add kiai. Finally, add an additional offset at 96,714 to fix the metronome, ignore [DBF]'s offset, he would be wrong.
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Thanks for All of you,I have updata a new version.
Hello~~
Hitori
Hitori
- 00:35:302 (1) Whistle
01:37:419 (1) ^
*02:06:714* Insert Break time
02:48:361 (4) Spacing
- 96,714 : Useless timeline.. to me
00:28:067 (1) Unrankable spinner(Needs more than 2000 bonus point)
03:15:714 (1) ^
00:33:890 (1) 2 Grids down
Topic Starter
Hitori
*02:06:714* Insert Break time
02:48:361 (4) Spacing
done.
*02:06:714* Insert Break time
02:48:361 (4) Spacing
done.
Topic Starter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Nice custom sounds~
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these .
This might be a little hard to be the easiest difficulty. Make an easy?
00:15:184 (3) - Add a new combo here?
01:29:655 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - All these are just in a box, which is a bit boring. You should put these in more interesting patterns, like the rest of the chorus.
02:53:655 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1) - ^
[FUTARI]
00:13:949 (1) - These short spinners feel out of place to me. I would delete them.
00:19:243 (1) - ^
00:21:361 (1) - ^
00:25:243 (1) - ^
00:31:949 (1) - ^
01:35:831 (3) - Delete this beat?
The sudden spacing change at 03:05:302 seems a bit odd, but it didn't throw me off, so I can let that go
Nice map. I wasn't expecting much, but is quite nicely mapped
Starred
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these .
- Offset: 1,426 (A little later than yours)
- [/color]
- Is that green writing in the storyboard supposed to be the background? if so, you need to click it and add a "move" keyframe, at 03:24:800, by moving to 03:24:800 on the timeline, tick the "move" box on the left side, under "Transformation", then click the little + button under the timeline at the top of the screen.
This might be a little hard to be the easiest difficulty. Make an easy?
00:15:184 (3) - Add a new combo here?
01:29:655 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - All these are just in a box, which is a bit boring. You should put these in more interesting patterns, like the rest of the chorus.
02:53:655 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1) - ^
[FUTARI]
00:13:949 (1) - These short spinners feel out of place to me. I would delete them.
00:19:243 (1) - ^
00:21:361 (1) - ^
00:25:243 (1) - ^
00:31:949 (1) - ^
01:35:831 (3) - Delete this beat?
The sudden spacing change at 03:05:302 seems a bit odd, but it didn't throw me off, so I can let that go
Nice map. I wasn't expecting much, but is quite nicely mapped
Starred
似乎你要重新插入背景，开始玩的时候背景不见了。
删掉Futari的第二条绿线，看起来没用。
第一次做得不错。
删掉Futari的第二条绿线，看起来没用。
第一次做得不错。
Topic Starter
谢谢提醒...貌似我传图的时候不小心把BG删了abalee wrote:
似乎你要重新插入背景，开始玩的时候背景不见了。
删掉Futari的第二条绿线，看起来没用。
第一次做得不错。
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
有办法就在高潮部分加重鼓点的音量~那就给人不错的打击感了~因为这首歌的鼓点很有味道~我觉得那里能加入多点slider，就好了~（纯沙包观点）
Should use more variety in hitsounds. Every single note uses the same sound, except for the beginning and the ending, and I can't even hear it anyway.
You should use some custom circle colors too.
Hitori
The sliders in this difficulty felt too fast. The reason is because you spaced everything at 0.5x distance snap. Distance snapping is based on slider speed, so if you use something really low like 0.5x, it will make all your sliders seem fast. I suggest decreasing slider speed if you want to keep the same spacing.
01:10:596 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is really boring, it's just going in the same circle over and over. Try to do something more creative.
02:34:596 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - same with this
Futari
Consider adding a break somewhere. 3 minutes without any breaks is pretty long.
01:35:125 (2,3) - this felt weird, I think you should move the 3 to 01:36:008 and then add a repeat to the slider. If you do that, you might also want to move the 3 to the left so that it's still under the slider ending point.
01:48:008 - add circle here?
You should use some custom circle colors too.
Hitori
The sliders in this difficulty felt too fast. The reason is because you spaced everything at 0.5x distance snap. Distance snapping is based on slider speed, so if you use something really low like 0.5x, it will make all your sliders seem fast. I suggest decreasing slider speed if you want to keep the same spacing.
01:10:596 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is really boring, it's just going in the same circle over and over. Try to do something more creative.
02:34:596 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - same with this
Futari
Consider adding a break somewhere. 3 minutes without any breaks is pretty long.
01:35:125 (2,3) - this felt weird, I think you should move the 3 to 01:36:008 and then add a repeat to the slider. If you do that, you might also want to move the 3 to the left so that it's still under the slider ending point.
01:48:008 - add circle here?
Topic Starter
01:48:008 - add circle hereLybydose wrote:
Should use more variety in hitsounds. Every single note uses the same sound, except for the beginning and the ending, and I can't even hear it anyway.
You should use some custom circle colors too.
Hitori
The sliders in this difficulty felt too fast. The reason is because you spaced everything at 0.5x distance snap. Distance snapping is based on slider speed, so if you use something really low like 0.5x, it will make all your sliders seem fast. I suggest decreasing slider speed if you want to keep the same spacing.
01:10:596 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is really boring, it's just going in the same circle over and over. Try to do something more creative.
02:34:596 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - same with this
Futari
Consider adding a break somewhere. 3 minutes without any breaks is pretty long.
01:35:125 (2,3) - this felt weird, I think you should move the 3 to 01:36:008 and then add a repeat to the slider. If you do that, you might also want to move the 3 to the left so that it's still under the slider ending point.
01:48:008 - add circle here?
done.
01:35:125 (2,3) - this felt weird, I think you should move the 3 to 01:36:008 and then add a repeat to the slider. If you do that, you might also want to move the 3 to the left so that it's still under the slider ending point.
music is like that.
01:36:008 is seliend so I can't put anything.
and normal I don't want it too hard so I don't make so much slider.
还好。
1. 如果沒有用到StoryBoard功能,就把檔案夾裡的 Hatsune Miku - Hitoribocchi de Futari kiri (soulfear).osb 刪除
2. BG的最大限制是1024*768,把BG圖縮小吧...
修好之後 Full submit
Star.
2. BG的最大限制是1024*768,把BG圖縮小吧...
修好之後 Full submit
Star.
Topic Starter
done.kioukiou wrote:
1. 如果沒有用到StoryBoard功能,就把檔案夾裡的 Hatsune Miku - Hitoribocchi de Futari kiri (soulfear).osb 刪除
2. BG的最大限制是1024*768,把BG圖縮小吧...
修好之後 Full submit
Star.
[Hitori]
00:35:30(1) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?
[Futari]
00:36:89(4,5) - [Suggestion] How about stack on (3)'s end perfectly? (Using x0.0 spacing without grid-snap) Sorry for wrong thing :3...
01:39:53(1,2,3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
Good song XD
And BAT's star :3
Umm...
It seems good for pubbled :3
Update and call me again :3
Here's my star.
edit1. Deleted wrong suggestion
00:35:30(1) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?
[Futari]
01:39:53(1,2,3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
Good song XD
And BAT's star :3
Umm...
It seems good for pubbled :3
Update and call me again :3
Here's my star.
edit1. Deleted wrong suggestion
Then,
Proto-bubbled :3
Good luck XD
Proto-bubbled :3
Good luck XD
Well, I was supposed to mod this, but I see arken pubbled it...
Okay, what I have to say is ( Sorry if you think I will be too unpolite) :
Okay, what I have to say is ( Sorry if you think I will be too unpolite) :
SPOILER
How is this pubbled? ._.
The hitsounds are terrible, they doesn't match the song. ( that's because you are using the same hitsounds over and over )
You didn't add any custom colours...
Also, there is only a few sliders, looks like James' mapping ( I don't have anything against James, but still... )
Seriously, we don't need many maps ranked, we need maps with QUALITY ranked.
Also, I'm not blaming soulfear on this, but how could many modders not complain about this? Oh really.
"Should use more variety in hitsounds. Every single note uses the same sound, except for the beginning and the ending, and I can't even hear it anyway.
You should use some custom circle colors too."
See, I told you.
"and normal I don't want it too hard so I don't make so much slider."
Sliders doesn't make the map hard, they make the map looks appealing.
@Soulfear: I am not a great mapper, tbh, I suck. But here is what I recommend you to do : Pop that pubble and study a bit more about mapping, add sliders and so on. Make this map rocks, or else, people will only hate your maps. I know people have their own way of mapping, but ( sorry for this ) the map really sucks right now.
The hitsounds are terrible, they doesn't match the song. ( that's because you are using the same hitsounds over and over )
You didn't add any custom colours...
Also, there is only a few sliders, looks like James' mapping ( I don't have anything against James, but still... )
Seriously, we don't need many maps ranked, we need maps with QUALITY ranked.
Also, I'm not blaming soulfear on this, but how could many modders not complain about this? Oh really.
"Should use more variety in hitsounds. Every single note uses the same sound, except for the beginning and the ending, and I can't even hear it anyway.
You should use some custom circle colors too."
See, I told you.
"and normal I don't want it too hard so I don't make so much slider."
Sliders doesn't make the map hard, they make the map looks appealing.
@Soulfear: I am not a great mapper, tbh, I suck. But here is what I recommend you to do : Pop that pubble and study a bit more about mapping, add sliders and so on. Make this map rocks, or else, people will only hate your maps. I know people have their own way of mapping, but ( sorry for this ) the map really sucks right now.
Topic Starter
well,how do you want to use hitsound?The song is a lonely song,you want to make it rock?
No, but using the same hitsounds over and over is REALLY bad.
It's up to you, though.
Edit:
Checking it, to answer at least something you should do, and I come up with a single answer : Add one more custom hitsound.
Also, the main issue here is about the few sliders.
It's up to you, though.
Edit:
Checking it, to answer at least something you should do, and I come up with a single answer : Add one more custom hitsound.
Also, the main issue here is about the few sliders.
Topic Starter
Please listen to the song without hitsound,then answer me.
- General:
- Hitori:
I'm starring because it is ok, but you should really consider adding them.
- You should definitely use at least one more hitsound. The one you used is great for the soft parts, but you should turn up the volume a bit in the choruses. I'm sure there's one more hitsound you can use in this map (especially in choruses): the song has potential for a great use of hitsounds and it seems a waste not to take advantage from that.
I think that even the Normal hitsound can fit quite well, here's an example (1:38:00 - 1:57:00)
- Hitori:
- .Opinions:
No problems, but there seems to be a lack of slider (some soft parts have none at all)
- .Opinions:
01:26:478 (1,2,3,4,5) - very weird
01:31:949 (7,8,9,10,11) - very confusing
01:32:831 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
These are really confusing patterns. Anyway, i'm not forcing you to change them, this is just my impression.
The map is fine overall
I'm starring because it is ok, but you should really consider adding them.
[General]
1410 offset.
Delete Hatsune Miku from TAGs, since it's already the artist.
[Futari]
Put in breaks! There are 0 now.
Decrease drain rate and overall difficulty by 1 or 2!
Starred~
1410 offset.
Delete Hatsune Miku from TAGs, since it's already the artist.
[Futari]
Put in breaks! There are 0 now.
- 01:33:008 (2,3,4) - What? A jump in mid 1/4 stream? Change it!
Decrease drain rate and overall difficulty by 1 or 2!
Starred~
Topic Starter
done.Gladi wrote:
[General]
1410 offset.
Delete Hatsune Miku from TAGs, since it's already the artist.
[Futari]
Put in breaks! There are 0 now.[Hitori]
- 01:33:008 (2,3,4) - What? A jump in mid 1/4 stream? Change it!
Decrease drain rate and overall difficulty by 1 or 2!
Starred~
Topic Starter
你可以说下是哪条么 我觉得没有什么不合的地方额pokedigi wrote:
有条Slider不觉得太长了么 似乎有点不合
You can't have a hitcircleoverlay without a hitcircle in the folder. Add one please.
[Futari]
01:32:831 (1,2,3,4,5) - Can you make this not all jumbled up? It's really hard to read while playing.
02:56:831 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same thing ^
[Futari]
01:32:831 (1,2,3,4,5) - Can you make this not all jumbled up? It's really hard to read while playing.
02:56:831 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same thing ^
Topic Starter
done.Mafiamaster wrote:
You can't have a hitcircleoverlay without a hitcircle in the folder. Add one please.
[Futari]
01:32:831 (1,2,3,4,5) - Can you make this not all jumbled up? It's really hard to read while playing.
02:56:831 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same thing ^
Alright, looks good to me now. Bubbled!
bg image maxi 1024*768
better change SV on normal and +1 circle size . too hard for newbie.
others fine
better change SV on normal and +1 circle size . too hard for newbie.
others fine
Topic Starter
done.osu_CN_yaya wrote:
bg image maxi 1024*768
better change SV on normal and +1 circle size . too hard for newbie.
others fine
k fine for me
rebubble
rebubble
Bold comments are important.
Skin:
Add a spinner-metre.png
Futari:
01:25:419 (6,7,8,9,10) - This pattern is pretty confusing..
01:26:478 (1,2,3) - This is very hard to play.
02:49:419 (6,7,8,9,10) - This pattern is pretty confusing..
02:50:478 (1,2,3) - This is very hard to play.
Good map.
Skin:
Add a spinner-metre.png
Futari:
01:25:419 (6,7,8,9,10) - This pattern is pretty confusing..
01:26:478 (1,2,3) - This is very hard to play.
02:49:419 (6,7,8,9,10) - This pattern is pretty confusing..
02:50:478 (1,2,3) - This is very hard to play.
Good map.
Topic Starter
fixed.Larto wrote:
Bold comments are important.
Skin:
Add a spinner-metre.png
Futari:
01:25:419 (6,7,8,9,10) - This pattern is pretty confusing..
01:26:478 (1,2,3) - This is very hard to play.
02:49:419 (6,7,8,9,10) - This pattern is pretty confusing..
02:50:478 (1,2,3) - This is very hard to play.
Good map.
Good.
Ranked~
Ranked~
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Congratz on your first ranked map
Dang I got left behind
Anyway good job keep up the good work
Dang I got left behind
Anyway good job keep up the good work
Seriously, why isn't this fixed.soulfear wrote:
done.Gladi wrote:
1410 offset.
1420 is off by 10 ms and it plays like shit. God damnit, why do people never change offset when it's posted. WHY? :/
Topic Starter
I call My friend who is #11 have a play for 1410 and 1420 but he tell me it doesn't matter,so I didn't change,and the BAT didn't ask me to change the offset,so I'm sorry,If important,now fix the offset?
Or use the personal offset:)
Or use the personal offset:)
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