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Touyama Nao, Hanazawa Kana, Komatsu Mikako, Asumi Kana - Sou

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Eni
1,437 posts
Joined May 2013
Eni
as requested ( although this mapset isn't Length>150 :( )

[General]
  1. I would personally follow the vocal instead of the beat at 01:17:782 - because the vocal is present at 00:51:428 - and 01:02:036 -, but sadly this doesn't seem to fit the song... Instead, I suggest that you please try a 3/2 slider (or any other pattern) to capture the vocal on 01:17:285 - before the downbeat, like you did with Insane. Also do it on 00:03:030 -.
  2. IMO the current background has no feeling towards the song itself. I understand that it is from the anime, but there is no correlation between the background and the song lyrics / feel / etc. Consider changing it to something more "personalized" for the song.
[Easy]
  1. 00:18:279 (2,3,1) - This will play nicer if you slightly move circle 3 and slider 1 a bit more to the left. Aim for getting slider 2 to flow into the next slider 1.
  2. 00:21:925 (3,2,3) - Plays better with a Ctrl+G. You may also want to consider slightly moving 00:22:257 (1) - down a bit more or Ctrl+<.
  3. 00:38:832 (1) - Something minor, but x:256 would put this on the exact center.
  4. 01:04:356 (3) - Change the custom hitsound here to be the same as your previous pattern on 00:53:749 (4) -.
  5. 01:25:075 (4) - Ctrl+G for kawaii ◕ ‿‿ ◕
[Normal]
  1. 00:42:146 (3,4) - Looks more visually appealing when these sliders are slightly curved towards each other. (Like a double Ctrl+> + Ctrl+G curve)
  2. 00:51:428 - Slider end at the beginning of a kiai is so mainstream; but why skip the emphasized vocal of the song for its chorus? The emphasis of "di" in "diary" is completely missed.
  3. 01:04:025 (4) - Same as Easy. Current hitsound does not follow your previous pattern.
  4. 01:17:948 (1,2,3) - Triangle does not fit here. Slider 3 plays better with flow from slider 1.
[Guy]
  1. There are some proper stacks then there are some improper stacks. Please check your stacks.
  2. I prefer the kiai times set by Momochikun.
Lanturn
osu! Alumni
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Joined March 2012
Lanturn
Alright, here is the final part. I copy/pasted the text you provided guy, so it's based off your last post's update.

Guy:

  1. 00:15:461 (3) - Maybe delete this? It doesn't hit any audible noise in the music.
  2. 00:24:246 (3,4) - Try moving these up a little more. I feel the transition from (2) to (3) doesn't rise up enough to work the (4) in. | http://puu.sh/auMkD.jpg
  3. 00:24:909 (1) - Nazi: Nudge this down to y173 so it stacks under the (2)'s tail properly
  4. 00:27:064 (5) - Maybe try adding in a little curve like this? | http://puu.sh/auLnj.jpg
  5. 00:28:721 (1) - -15° rotate? It feels like it would flow a little better if the curve was rotated in more.
  6. 00:30:213 (1) - Consider ending this 1/2 earlier and adding a circle at the end. | The "A" sound that plays at 00:30:710 - sounds like it should be its own circle. This will also let you retain your clap at 00:30:544 -
  7. 00:49:937 (3) - Drop the volume a little for these drum hits? They're extremely loud, and confused me a little when I tested this map. 35-45% works nicely.
  8. 00:50:765 (2) - This head sounds like it needs some kind of hitsound to back it up because it's dominant. Try a clap on the head and see what you think.
  9. 01:10:323 (2) - Control+G? and restack on x208 y112. A small slider jump like this would actually work decently since you're still in the kiai section, and creates some nice flow.
  10. 01:17:285 (4) - You should consider NCing here, or removing the NC at 00:03:030 (1) - because they're the same in terms of music.
Nice Diff!


Really not much to say. This is a really well polished mapset in whole. Nice work on the hitsounding! Good luck ranking this! o/



PS... no KD lol
Konei
2,959 posts
Joined March 2012
Konei
From our M4M.


[Insane]

  1. 00:03:362 (3) - If you want to follow the Piano, end this Slider on the red tick, currently it's going longer than it should.
  2. 00:04:688 (5,1) - This spacing is weird, looking at the previous 3/4 Slider spacing it's pretty weird to read. Besides it's odd to use them anyways since those are "extended" Sliders. Consider reducing the spacing.
  3. 00:15:213 - How about adding a note here? Seems pretty good to me since you are following the instruments anyways.
  4. 00:16:787 - Adding two notes here and on the next blue tick seems to work pretty well again, since you like to follow the instruments and there are cool things you could do here, you could also use an 1/4 Slider.
  5. 00:19:108 (2) - First, you could add a whistle here to follow the high tone and second I dislike the placing, it's hidden and confusing. Place it blanketed with 1?
  6. 00:21:511 - Add a note here to follow the drums?
  7. 00:24:909 (1) - Improve the blanket? It's really noticeable here.
  8. 00:38:003 (1,2) - Would be cool if you could move those 2 a bit more to the right, seems to blanket better.
  9. 00:44:798 (1) - Add a SV slowdown here? Fits the instrument you are following better.
  10. 00:45:130 (2) - Spacing here is really bad to read, if you don't want to redesign the placement, try to add a new combo to 2.
  11. 00:50:102 (3) - Add a finish to the end aswell to catch the enduring sound? Would be the same for your other difficulties too.
  12. 00:50:600 - Add notes or a 1/4 Slider here again because of the drums?
  13. 01:10:986 (3) - To follow the drums, this Slider should really end 1/4 later, listen to the song more closely here.
  14. 01:14:881 - Add a note here aswell to follow the soft instrument?
  15. Good diffiiculty as always, I really like your maps. However I think there were some things to fit your way of mapping the instruments better, hope you consider them!

[Guy's Hard]

  1. 00:03:528 (2) - Add a whistle here to follow the Piano? Otherwise this note sounds really quiet which makes it hard to get.
  2. 00:10:158 (1) - Add a finish to the start to follow the cymbals.
  3. 00:20:268 (2,3,4) - Try to make the spacing consistent here.
  4. 00:40:489 (5) - Add a clap to the end to follow the drums here.
  5. 00:59:384 (1) - This Slider looks somewhat weird and messy here, try to place it without touching any of the objects below or try to do a blanket with it.
  6. 01:10:323 (2) - Most likely noone will care, but just stack this perfectly because why not.
  7. 01:16:622 (3) - Remove the clap on the start and replace it by a finish, since there's a cymbal and not a drum in the music.

Easier diffs are good to go.

Good luck!
Eni
1,437 posts
Joined May 2013
Eni

Lanturn wrote:

I'm not stalking you Railgun.
◕ ‿‿ ◕
Shurelia
Global Moderator
2,771 posts
Joined December 2013
Shurelia
おっす!やったよ!

[General]
- Add "Anime" / "Anisong" to the tag~

[Easy]
  1. 00:23:251 (2,3) - Blanket could be more improved.

[Normal]
  1. 00:19:605 (1,2,3) - This kinda a bit hard for normal imo.
  2. 00:42:644 (4,5) - Different Distance snap~ it's too close.
  3. 01:22:920 (6,1) - Blanket could be more improved

[Guy's Hard]
  1. 00:17:450 (3,1) - Overlapped imo

[Insane]
  1. 00:10:158 (1,3) - This can have better blanket.
  2. 00:41:981 (4,2) - Stack (4)with (2)'s tail.

That's all from me.
Hope this help and good luck.
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
i like nisekoi too ww

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Momochikun
1,927 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Momochikun

Konei wrote:

From our M4M.


[Insane]

  1. 00:03:362 (3) - If you want to follow the Piano, end this Slider on the red tick, currently it's going longer than it should. I still can hear them
  2. 00:04:688 (5,1) - This spacing is weird, looking at the previous 3/4 Slider spacing it's pretty weird to read. Besides it's odd to use them anyways since those are "extended" Sliders. Consider reducing the spacing. ok
  3. 00:15:213 - How about adding a note here? Seems pretty good to me since you are following the instruments anyways. ok !
  4. 00:16:787 - Adding two notes here and on the next blue tick seems to work pretty well again, since you like to follow the instruments and there are cool things you could do here, you could also use an 1/4 Slider.
  5. 00:19:108 (2) - First, you could add a whistle here to follow the high tone and second I dislike the placing, it's hidden and confusing. Place it blanketed with 1? nope, i prefer this
  6. 00:21:511 - Add a note here to follow the drums? ^
  7. 00:24:909 (1) - Improve the blanket? It's really noticeable here.
  8. 00:38:003 (1,2) - Would be cool if you could move those 2 a bit more to the right, seems to blanket better. fixed these two
  9. 00:44:798 (1) - Add a SV slowdown here? Fits the instrument you are following better. ok
  10. 00:45:130 (2) - Spacing here is really bad to read, if you don't want to redesign the placement, try to add a new combo to 2. since i already did slowdown.. so i suppose it's fine :x
  11. 00:50:102 (3) - Add a finish to the end aswell to catch the enduring sound? Would be the same for your other difficulties too. added to all diffs
  12. 00:50:600 - Add notes or a 1/4 Slider here again because of the drums? i want to keep 1/2 pressure to vocal here
  13. 01:10:986 (3) - To follow the drums, this Slider should really end 1/4 later, listen to the song more closely here. it's supposed to follow the vocal, well keeping for now ><
  14. 01:14:881 - Add a note here aswell to follow the soft instrument? nope
  15. Good diffiiculty as always, I really like your maps. However I think there were some things to fit your way of mapping the instruments better, hope you consider them!

Easier diffs are good to go.

Good luck!

Shurelia wrote:

おっす!やったよ!

[General]
- Add "Anime" / "Anisong" to the tag~ No need, it will be on the genre

[Easy]
  1. 00:23:251 (2,3) - Blanket could be more improved. done

[Normal]
  1. 00:19:605 (1,2,3) - This kinda a bit hard for normal imo. it's fine ~
  2. 00:42:644 (4,5) - Different Distance snap~ it's too close. ups.. fixed ><
  3. 01:22:920 (6,1) - Blanket could be more improved it's already enough


[Insane]
  1. 00:10:158 (1,3) - This can have better blanket. ok
  2. 00:41:981 (4,2) - Stack (4)with (2)'s tail.it was did on purpose

That's all from me.
Hope this help and good luck.

Project Railgun wrote:

as requested ( although this mapset isn't Length>150 :( )

[General]
  1. I would personally follow the vocal instead of the beat at 01:17:782 - because the vocal is present at 00:51:428 - and 01:02:036 -, but sadly this doesn't seem to fit the song... Instead, I suggest that you please try a 3/2 slider (or any other pattern) to capture the vocal on 01:17:285 - before the downbeat, like you did with Insane. Also do it on 00:03:030 -. It will make things harder :<
  2. IMO the current background has no feeling towards the song itself. I understand that it is from the anime, but there is no correlation between the background and the song lyrics / feel / etc. Consider changing it to something more "personalized" for the song. Well it's fit the video..
[Easy]
  1. 00:18:279 (2,3,1) - This will play nicer if you slightly move circle 3 and slider 1 a bit more to the left. Aim for getting slider 2 to flow into the next slider 1. ok
  2. 00:21:925 (3,2,3) - Plays better with a Ctrl+G. You may also want to consider slightly moving 00:22:257 (1) - down a bit more or Ctrl+<. hm.. no change
  3. 00:38:832 (1) - Something minor, but x:256 would put this on the exact center. fixed
  4. 01:04:356 (3) - Change the custom hitsound here to be the same as your previous pattern on 00:53:749 (4) -. it's different sound
  5. 01:25:075 (4) - Ctrl+G for kawaii ◕ ‿‿ ◕k
[Normal]
  1. 00:42:146 (3,4) - Looks more visually appealing when these sliders are slightly curved towards each other. (Like a double Ctrl+> + Ctrl+G curve) i prefer this one
  2. 00:51:428 - Slider end at the beginning of a kiai is so mainstream; but why skip the emphasized vocal of the song for its chorus? The emphasis of "di" in "diary" is completely missed.
  3. 01:04:025 (4) - Same as Easy. Current hitsound does not follow your previous pattern. same reply
  4. 01:17:948 (1,2,3) - Triangle does not fit here. Slider 3 plays better with flow from slider 1. i like it personally lol
Thanks for the mod :3
Waiting for guy ~ Updated
@Gu : Thanks for the star ノ(・ω・)ノ
Last edited by Momochikun , edited 1 time in total.
Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
2,049 posts
Joined March 2009
Guy

Konei wrote:

[Guy's Hard]

  1. 00:03:528 (2) - Add a whistle here to follow the Piano? Otherwise this note sounds really quiet which makes it hard to get. - no change
  2. 00:10:158 (1) - Add a finish to the start to follow the cymbals.
  3. 00:20:268 (2,3,4) - Try to make the spacing consistent here.
  4. 00:40:489 (5) - Add a clap to the end to follow the drums here.
  5. 00:59:384 (1) - This Slider looks somewhat weird and messy here, try to place it without touching any of the objects below or try to do a blanket with it. - sorry keep it ><
  6. 01:10:323 (2) - Most likely noone will care, but just stack this perfectly because why not.
  7. 01:16:622 (3) - Remove the clap on the start and replace it by a finish, since there's a cymbal and not a drum in the music.
no comment = fixed your suggestion.
Thank you for modding :)

Lanturn wrote:

Guy:

  1. 00:15:461 (3) - Maybe delete this? It doesn't hit any audible noise in the music.
  2. 00:24:246 (3,4) - Try moving these up a little more. I feel the transition from (2) to (3) doesn't rise up enough to work the (4) in. | http://puu.sh/auMkD.jpg
  3. 00:24:909 (1) - Nazi: Nudge this down to y173 so it stacks under the (2)'s tail properly
  4. 00:27:064 (5) - Maybe try adding in a little curve like this? | http://puu.sh/auLnj.jpg
  5. 00:28:721 (1) - -15° rotate? It feels like it would flow a little better if the curve was rotated in more.
  6. 00:30:213 (1) - Consider ending this 1/2 earlier and adding a circle at the end. | The "A" sound that plays at 00:30:710 - sounds like it should be its own circle. This will also let you retain your clap at 00:30:544 -
  7. 00:49:937 (3) - Drop the volume a little for these drum hits? They're extremely loud, and confused me a little when I tested this map. 35-45% works nicely.
  8. 00:50:765 (2) - This head sounds like it needs some kind of hitsound to back it up because it's dominant. Try a clap on the head and see what you think.
  9. 01:10:323 (2) - Control+G? and restack on x208 y112. A small slider jump like this would actually work decently since you're still in the kiai section, and creates some nice flow.
  10. 01:17:285 (4) - You should consider NCing here, or removing the NC at 00:03:030 (1) - because they're the same in terms of music.
Nice Diff! - thanks o/
All fixed! really helpful your mod.
Thank you for modding :)

Shurelia wrote:

[Guy's Hard]
  1. 00:17:450 (3,1) - Overlapped imo - yeah but i want to keep my way ><
Thank you for modding :)

SPOILER
osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 50765
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.9

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Title:Souzou Diary
TitleUnicode:想像ダイアリー
Artist:Touyama Nao, Hanazawa Kana, Komatsu Mikako, Asumi Kana
ArtistUnicode:東山奈央, 花澤香菜, 小松未可子, 阿澄佳奈
Creator:Momochikun
Version:Guy's Hard
Source:ニセコイ
Tags:tv size nisekoi guy shaft fake love ending chitoge kirisaki  kosaki onodera seishirou tsugumi marika tachibana
BeatmapID:465483
BeatmapSetID:194345

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184,308,23417,6,0,P|120:256|60:264,1,140,0|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
16,188,23914,2,0,P|56:180|104:168,1,70,0|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
156,116,24246,2,0,P|200:104|236:96,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,60,24743,1,0,2:0:0:0:
84,173,24909,6,0,B|72:201|72:201|92:249|84:321,1,140
160,360,25406,1,0,2:0:0:0:
248,336,25572,2,0,P|356:316|392:320,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
408,108,26235,5,4,2:0:0:0:
356,208,26401,1,8,2:0:0:0:
308,108,26566,1,8,2:0:0:0:
256,208,26732,1,8,2:0:0:0:
431,73,27064,2,0,P|459:125|459:213,1,140,4|4,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
396,268,27561,6,0,P|348:280|320:288,1,70,4|0,0:2|2:0,0:0:0:0:
240,304,27892,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,304,28058,2,0,P|184:284|104:276,1,140
28,228,28555,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,140,28721,6,0,P|141:146|167:95,1,140
56,140,29218,2,0,P|64:192|72:232,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,232,29550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,176,29716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,232,29881,2,0,P|152:292|156:328,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,352,30213,6,0,P|320:364|352:320,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,260,30710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,184,30876,2,0,P|332:128|332:96,1,70
408,64,31207,2,0,P|420:120|420:152,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,184,31539,6,0,L|196:168,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,268,32202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,336,32367,1,4,0:0:0:0:
128,232,32533,2,0,P|120:160|120:156,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,80,32865,6,0,P|228:48|308:56,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,220,33528,2,0,L|364:212,1,70
280,200,33859,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,252,34025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,160,34191,6,0,P|196:88|160:8,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,188,34854,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,276,35019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,260,35185,2,0,P|220:248|256:244,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,248,35517,6,0,P|392:264|480:272,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,132,36180,2,0,P|300:136|272:144,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,176,36511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,140,36677,6,0,P|96:188|88:280,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
164,324,37174,2,0,P|212:304|244:280,1,70,8|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,212,37506,1,4,0:0:0:0:
444,336,37837,2,0,L|432:252,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,180,38169,6,0,P|360:208|256:120,1,210.000008010865,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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48,92,39495,5,0,0:0:0:0:
104,152,39660,1,8,0:0:0:0:
52,220,39826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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376,156,41318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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336,232,42644,2,0,P|320:272|312:304,2,52.5000020027161,0|8|4,0:0|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
236,324,43141,2,0,P|200:328|168:324,1,52.5000020027161,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,308,43472,6,0,L|100:160,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,104,43970,2,0,L|184:243,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,292,44467,2,0,P|328:316|344:316,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,308,44798,5,2,0:0:0:0:
416,308,45130,2,0,L|412:212,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,148,45461,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,180,45627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,120,45793,2,0,L|188:108,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,172,46124,6,0,P|136:232|136:256,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,292,46456,2,0,P|52:232|52:208,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,172,46787,2,0,L|204:184,2,70,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,128,47285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,84,47450,6,0,P|208:80|256:32,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,108,47948,2,0,P|332:156|344:180,1,70
256,204,48279,2,0,P|288:244|312:264,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,260,48611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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152,152,49439,2,0,P|172:220|204:284,1,140,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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288,316,50434,6,0,L|304:220,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,220,50765,2,0,P|368:172|348:140,1,70,8|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
268,144,51097,2,0,P|240:172|216:212,1,70,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,264,51428,6,0,P|92:280|40:228,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,148,51925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,104,52091,2,0,L|196:108,1,70
232,184,52423,2,0,P|292:180|316:176,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,132,52754,5,0,0:0:0:0:
380,224,52920,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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380,132,53251,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,224,53417,2,0,L|380:316,1,70
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160,300,54080,6,0,P|112:328|28:336,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,244,54577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,152,54743,2,0,L|60:72,1,70
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164,196,56235,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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224,323,57727,1,8,0:0:0:0:
319,319,57892,6,0,P|267:231|225:224,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,260,58390,1,8,0:0:0:0:
115,178,58555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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308,52,59053,2,0,P|264:52|208:56,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,56,59384,6,0,P|108:108|116:180,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,232,59881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
198,136,60047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,180,60213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,232,60379,1,8,0:0:0:0:
198,136,60544,6,0,P|238:148|270:152,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,136,60876,2,0,P|400:104|488:96,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,188,61373,2,0,L|480:268,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,348,61704,2,0,L|432:344,3,35,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,336,62036,6,0,P|336:304|248:308,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,348,62533,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,288,62699,2,0,L|128:128,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,48,63362,6,0,L|288:56,1,70
216,136,63693,2,0,L|292:144,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,148,64025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,232,64191,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,288,64356,2,0,P|292:284|264:280,1,70,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,268,64688,6,0,P|184:200|216:136,2,140,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,320,65517,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,244,65682,2,0,L|-24:256,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,156,66014,6,0,L|84:124,3,35,4|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,136,66345,2,0,L|140:104,3,35,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,120,66677,2,0,L|196:88,3,35,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,100,67008,2,0,L|264:32,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,84,67340,6,0,P|436:96|452:168,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,240,67837,2,0,B|384:248|344:232|344:232|308:216|272:220,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,236,68334,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,288,68500,6,0,P|98:204|138:155,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,112,68997,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,188,69163,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,236,69329,2,0,P|239:275|312:260,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,16,69992,6,0,L|260:20,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,112,70323,2,0,L|277:108,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,64,70655,2,0,P|116:104|124:148,1,70
176,200,70986,2,0,P|200:256|192:344,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,344,71649,6,0,P|256:324|280:320,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,312,71981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,228,72146,2,0,P|296:184|284:140,2,70,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,240,72644,5,4,0:0:0:0:
408,240,72809,2,0,L|432:212,2,35,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,312,73141,1,4,0:0:0:0:
180,144,73472,1,4,0:0:0:0:
408,80,73804,2,0,P|388:132|408:232,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,276,74301,6,0,P|424:304|396:304,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,268,74633,2,0,P|280:240|244:232,1,70
172,244,74964,2,0,L|180:160,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,84,75296,6,0,P|264:104|328:96,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,283,75959,2,0,P|380:263|316:271,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,340,76622,2,0,L|88:176,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,29,77285,6,0,L|259:125,1,70,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,232,77782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,308,77948,6,0,P|280:316|312:316,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,236,78279,2,0,P|288:228|256:228,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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412,40,80268,1,12,0:0:0:0:
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356,324,81097,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,324,81262,2,0,P|316:344|280:352,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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296,284,83583,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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336,16,84246,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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360,140,85075,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Rare
sry for delay.
from modding my queue

[Easy]
looks fine except wasted inherited point.

[Normal]
same as Easy.

[Guy's Hard]
add video pls
00:36:511 (3) - pref add clap

[Insane]
00:32:367 (2,4) - pref drum-hitnormal
00:35:682 - i want note because currently flow is bad
00:44:798 - 00:44:881 - you should go along slider velocity multiplier. this will confuse the player factors.
01:06:677 (1,2) - pref Ctrl+C,V http://puu.sh/bh1NB.jpg
01:09:660 (6) - add clap to head because i could hear snare of drum.

Sinch wrote:

[Easy]
good
its a little difficult for newbie

[Normal]
00:05:517 (4) - end this at 00:05:848 -
00:57:229 (2) - like above one
01:07:837 (2) - ＾

00:39:495 (3,4) - same rhythm as 00:42:146 (3,4,5) is better

[Guy'sHard]
00:29:218 (2,3,4,5) - 言葉に出来ない違和感

わからん

[Insane]
00:03:030 (1,2,3) - just rearrange to placement
00:07:174 (4) - the return here is awkward for me
00:11:152 (2) - too many stacks
00:11:649 (1) - strange slider
00:44:798 (1,2) - hard to see for first play
Konei
2,959 posts
Joined March 2012
Konei
Reply to the mod above, please.

Had a recheck on the map IRC, changed small things on Insane and made tags consistent.

Let me know when you're done.
Momochikun
1,927 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Momochikun

Rare wrote:

sry for delay.
from modding my queue

[Easy]
looks fine except wasted inherited point. it's fine o.o

[Normal]
same as Easy.

[Guy's Hard]
add video pls
00:36:511 (3) - pref add clap done both

[Insane]
00:32:367 (2,4) - pref drum-hitnormal my hitsound is consistent through all diffs ><
00:35:682 - i want note because currently flow is bad CTRL G-ed
00:44:798 - 00:44:881 - you should go along slider velocity multiplier. this will confuse the player factors. it's for vocal o.o
01:06:677 (1,2) - pref Ctrl+C,V http://puu.sh/bh1NB.jpg i prefer mine lol
01:09:660 (6) - add clap to head because i could hear snare of drum. the additions set on drum so i can't add clap lol

Sinch wrote:

[Easy]
good
its a little difficult for newbie

[Normal]
00:05:517 (4) - end this at 00:05:848 - why ?
00:57:229 (2) - like above one
01:07:837 (2) - ＾

00:39:495 (3,4) - same rhythm as 00:42:146 (3,4,5) is better hmm i want modify the rhythm a bit here

[Guy'sHard]
00:29:218 (2,3,4,5) - 言葉に出来ない違和感

わからん

[Insane]
00:03:030 (1,2,3) - just rearrange to placement k ?
00:07:174 (4) - the return here is awkward for me plays fine imo
00:11:152 (2) - too many stacks lol
00:11:649 (1) - strange slider why it's strange ? i often use it on my map orz
00:44:798 (1,2) - hard to see for first play that's charles' suggestion o.o


Thanks :3
Konei
2,959 posts
Joined March 2012
Konei
Bubbled.
Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
2,049 posts
Joined March 2009
Guy
I changed some point by smallboat's mod~
http://puu.sh/bStqo/3ebd650879.zip
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
IRC with mapper and guest diff mapper to disuss the things,I think have the good quality enough to point this for everyone play.

Qualified ~ !

IRC
2014-09-29 18:12 smallboat: irc?
2014-09-29 18:16 Momochikun: sure
2014-09-29 18:17 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/465482 Touyama Nao, Hanazawa Kana, Komatsu Mikako, Asumi Kana - Souzou Diary [Easy]]
2014-09-29 18:18 Momochikun: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/465482 Touyama Nao, Hanazawa Kana, Komatsu Mikako, Asumi Kana - Souzou Diary [Easy]]
2014-09-29 18:18 smallboat: 01:13:804 (1) - well,I feel this hitsound sounds like is the set ' addition drum- whistle, change it :3?
2014-09-29 18:19 Momochikun: ok !
2014-09-29 18:19 smallboat: but need to reduce a bit
2014-09-29 18:19 smallboat: volume
2014-09-29 18:20 Momochikun: i reduce to 60
2014-09-29 18:20 Momochikun: changed on all diffs w
2014-09-29 18:20 smallboat: sure can :3
2014-09-29 18:20 smallboat: okay
2014-09-29 18:22 smallboat: easy nothing to say
2014-09-29 18:24 Momochikun: glad to hear ~
2014-09-29 18:27 smallboat: :3
2014-09-29 18:28 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/465484 Touyama Nao, Hanazawa Kana, Komatsu Mikako, Asumi Kana - Souzou Diary [Normal]]
2014-09-29 18:28 Momochikun: k
2014-09-29 18:28 smallboat: 00:32:202 (5) - just ask this reverse why add finish 
2014-09-29 18:28 smallboat: o.o
2014-09-29 18:28 Momochikun: it's to emphasize the cymbal, all diffs have finish on that part
2014-09-29 18:29 smallboat: sure
2014-09-29 18:30 smallboat: normal looks fine too :3
2014-09-29 18:32 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/465483 Touyama Nao, Hanazawa Kana, Komatsu Mikako, Asumi Kana - Souzou Diary [Guy's Hard]]
2014-09-29 18:35 smallboat: let me discuss this with him XD
2014-09-29 18:36 Momochikun: guy is online tho.. sure stuff ~
2014-09-29 18:41 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/461549 Touyama Nao, Hanazawa Kana, Komatsu Mikako, Asumi Kana - Souzou Diary [Insane]]
2014-09-29 18:42 Momochikun: k
2014-09-29 18:43 smallboat: 00:24:577 (5) - feel the blanket have a bit bad
2014-09-29 18:43 Momochikun: improved ~
2014-09-29 18:44 smallboat: 00:26:732 (4) - Add a NC make easy read this anti-jump?
2014-09-29 18:45 Momochikun: hmm nope, i want to make them on same combo purposely o.o
2014-09-29 18:45 smallboat: sure 
2014-09-29 18:48 smallboat: 00:43:970 (2) - Feel use ctrl+g ,the flow be better,you think?
2014-09-29 18:49 Momochikun: sure
2014-09-29 18:50 smallboat: okay done,you can update it :D/

2014-09-29 18:33 smallboat: hi guy o/
2014-09-29 18:33 Guy: yo
2014-09-29 18:34 smallboat: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/465483 Touyama Nao, Hanazawa Kana, Komatsu Mikako, Asumi Kana - Souzou Diary [Guy's Hard]]
2014-09-29 18:35 smallboat: 00:13:970 (5,1) - not sure this slider can cover or not?
2014-09-29 18:37 smallboat: worry about they pick this
2014-09-29 18:37 Guy: you mean parfectly stacking? change the blanket pattern?
2014-09-29 18:37 Guy: sorry i can't understand you mean orz
2014-09-29 18:38 smallboat: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2083602
2014-09-29 18:39 Guy: oh i see lol
2014-09-29 18:39 smallboat: make the (1) number can be see clear
2014-09-29 18:39 smallboat: 030
2014-09-29 18:39 Guy: i agree
2014-09-29 18:39 Guy: changed!
2014-09-29 18:39 smallboat: :D /
2014-09-29 18:40 smallboat: 01:04:688 (1) - Forgot add finish? o_o
2014-09-29 18:40 Guy: omg
2014-09-29 18:40 Guy: fixed~
2014-09-29 18:41 smallboat: okay nothing to say :3
2014-09-29 18:41 Guy: :D
2014-09-29 18:42 Guy: thank you for checking!
2014-09-29 18:43 smallboat: no problem
Momochikun
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congratz
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Gratz!! :D
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where is taiko ?
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Gratz!! Mochi :D
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I think the title needs TV Size tag?

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gratz!
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