1. Easy (2,4 stars, 156 notes)
2. Hard (4,72 stars, 307 notes)
3. Insane (4,93 stars, 434 notes)
4. Normal (3,61 stars, 183 notes)

1. Missed one of those offsets, Oh dear. Offset for that first 130BPM section should be 1,999 I think

Doomsday wrote:

Yo o/

1. Missed one of those offsets, Oh dear. Offset for that first 130BPM section should be 1,999 I think

[INSANE]

Dem streamjumps. Tricky stuff, especially that first one.

01:03:663 (1) - Make this slider 1/4 shorter perhaps? Looks a bit too long to me, by 1/4 - Fixed. This also made it a little prettier, yay.
01:52:701 (1,2,3) - I dunno, but this tiny bit doesn't sit right. Maybe move this stack back by 1/4? - I must have overlooked this when I went through it myself earlier. Yeah, I moved the stack back by 1/4, and made the following 4 notes double stacks instead. It works now.
02:24:547 (3,4,5) - Move these 1/4 back? Goes along with the guitar better that way methinks. - Fixed as well.

Yeah, mostly rejigging notes around. Cool stuff.

(Oh sweet jesus. triple post)

jericho2442 wrote:

just a few things what bugged me

Easy
00:50:048 (5) - this should be a new combo to follow your pattern, and remove the one at 00:50:510 (1) -
Alrighty, done.
01:33:433 (1) - new combo feels not needed, i say remove ;p
Alrighty, done.
01:55:817 (2,3,1) - i have to say this patterns timing is rather hard to read for a easy map, its just hard to notice what it follows
I'm not really sure what I could replace it with, tbh. It follows the lyrics about as closely as I could make it without making the map too hard.
02:24:203 (1) - would flow much better to end this slider at 02:24:894
Alrighty, done.

Normal
01:23:971 (1) - i would say remove this combo ;p
Le done.

Hard
00:17:048 (1,2,3,4) - this whole pattern does feel out of time and hard to follow, i just cant "feel" to follow the blue tick pattern, would be best to remake this as a white or red tick pattern
Fixed this as well. Better now ?

Insane
i hate the stream jumps xD
I love them, though ! They fit the music quite well.
00:14:047 (5,1,2,3) - due to all these having the same spacing, but (5,1) being different timing, it makes this really hard to read, i advise to give the (1,2,3) pattern more space to fix this
Fixed this ! Should be better now.
01:11:048 (3,4) - this speed change im really not sure about, because both sliders are small and identical its extremely hard to notice, i would advise to do something different here tbh
I'm not sure what I should do different here without breaking the pattern. I think, considering the difficulty, both the sliderticks and the fact that they're repeat sliders gives plenty reaction time to get it right on the first try.
01:23:047 (2,1,2) - it works and its fine....but i cant say i like these 2 sliders being identical but with a different speed
Again, same thing as before. There's not anything to "fix" here imo.
01:51:894 - maybe add a note here to help make the player flow into the blue tick rhythm
Done !

well you already know i like the maps ;D good job! o/

1. Nice little SB thing there, but with those SB images you got, could you shrink them down to within 640x480 resolution? since some of 'em are a little too big at the moment. Besides, since they're only taking up the one corner of the screen, there isn't much point in having such huge images for it. might as well shrink them down to just what you need and save a bit of filespace and performance

Doomsday wrote:

I'm baaaaack ~

First up, quick timing amendment, because I derped up a bit on the offset. all 3 timing sections should be +20ms later, since it sounds slightly early. sorry 'bout that D:

1. Nice little SB thing there, but with those SB images you got, could you shrink them down to within 640x480 resolution? since some of 'em are a little too big at the moment. Besides, since they're only taking up the one corner of the screen, there isn't much point in having such huge images for it. might as well shrink them down to just what you need and save a bit of filespace and performance

Uh, source on the 640x480 thing ? Last I checked, 800x600 is the max size for SB sprites. As for performance, the SB load in test mode is at 1.44x while the SB is there, and goes up to... 1.75x (something like that) for a splitsecond when those feathers come into play, so it should be perfectly fine. File size... The storyboard, in total, takes up 231KB - there's really not much to save there either by shrinking those 3 sprites by 160 pixels width.


[EASY]

Lookin' goooood. nice to see you tried something with this diff, I like the slider patterns you got here. Imaginative easies are always good to see
<3 I really just tried to make it fun.

[NORMAL]

00:14:971 (1,2) - This bit felt kinda weird. that slider feels like it ends late because of how the music changes during the slider. if you deleted that (1) note, and move the slider back to where the (1) was, it sounds better to me.
Le done !

[HARD]

<3

(It feels quite similar to Insane at times, though, only the tougher bits in that diff being where the difference lies, and the slightly faster speed, but nevermind that, this diff is cool stuff).

[INSANE]

Letterboxing is on for this diff! I mean, it doesn't really matter since it's got no breaks, but might as well turn it off anyway, since none of the other difficulties have got it on.

Those sliderjumps, man

01:51:779 (5,1) - Mind moving these notes closer together, keeping the spacing consistent? With the constant spacing before, these are 1/2 like the rest, but I thought it wasn't because of the bigger spacing.
01:54:663 (12,1) - ^ but not as major since it's a little clearer to see than the last
02:22:355 (1,2,3,4,5) - This one feels a bit off too. Looks like you were mapping to the guitar, but it doesn't quite match and doesn't play well to me. it's the same guitar rhythm as the 02:24:201 (2,3,4,5) bit, so I think that that note rhythm would work better there.
I fixed everything !

'tis a nice map. nice to see some inventive stuff in all of the difficulties c:

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Hello! Here's just some modding as you asked

[Easy]
00:23:299 (1) - This slider is a bit far from the previous one. Try moving it a little bit closer to the previous slider.
01:50:530 (2) - Try to put a "finish" on this part of the slider.
01:52:376 (3) - ^
01:53:760 (2) - Try to remove the "clap" on this part of the slider.
01:54:222 (3) - Try to put a "clap" on this part of the slider.
02:20:530 (2) - Try to put a "finish" on this part of the slider.

[Normal]
00:25:837 - Try adding a hit circle at this point.
01:21:683 (3) - Try to remove the "clap" at this part of the slider.
01:24:683 (4) - Try to make this slider to start at 01:24:799 instead of this point.(but it should still end at 1:25:145) I think it would sound better this way
01:28:607 (2) - Try to remove the "clap" on this part of the slider.

[Hard]
looks good to me

[Insane]
same with this one

Cute Map! Go Go Go! :3

Route 99 wrote:

Wow, cool to see it ungraved and progressing again! It's been dead for so long ._.

Sync wrote:

Since I was asked to mod, I will deliver
(double post because I'm rebellious)

Take note that all of these are suggestions

Insane:
00:07:837 (2) - Since you're following the vocals all the way up until the stream after this, add a note here Okay !
00:08:531 (6) - Maybe it's because I suck, but this jump in the middle of a stream doesn't feel right at all and can be confusing the first time playing. I think something like this suits the stream better: http://puu.sh/8bd6 Nah, I'm keeping my streamjumps. They're one of my favourite parts of the map, so yeah. Same goes for the other two you don't like.
00:26:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^ http://puu.sh/8bdU
01:11:069 (3) - Despite the tick's visibility, I still feel as if this is unpredictable. I suggest you get rid of the SV changes, get rid of the repeat, and scale it so that it lasts a full beat (1:11:530).
01:11:760 (1) - Add a hit circle here, NC (to follow the vocals)
01:11:991 (2) - Add a hit circle Okay, so I tried this out, it didn't feel right to me, so I'm going to keep it the way it is now. As we all know, predictable, skill level, yada yada.
01:25:607 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Okay, so maybe these are supposed to be a recurring thing. :< I still dislike them, so here's another suggestion: http://puu.sh/8bfG
01:37:837 (5) - Do you hear that weird sounding percussion in the background? I think since it stands out, you should add a hit circle here to be more intuitive Okay !
02:22:376 (1,2,3,4) - I hate when people stack notes like this. Move (2,3) from under (1). Perhaps align them horizontally. If you feel it's necessary, you could move (4) from under (1) and place it in the middle of (1,2,3) to make a triangle-like pattern. That is to say you hate my style in general. \:>/ I kid, I made it mirror that next pattern instead.

Hard:
00:05:711 (1,2,3,4) - I don't see anything wrong with this pattern, but it really feels as if following the vocals at this point would feel more natural; especially because those bell-sounds are offbeat. (I wonder if I used the semi-colon correctly) No. :< I prefer this the way it is now.
00:07:837 (1) - Add a hit circle, NC (follow vocals, etc) I may be a little too uncreative, but I don't really see how I can add a note here without breaking the map.
02:23:991 (1) - Move back one tick (1/4) Okay !
I thought I should mention the last bookmark is unsnapped. :< I'll unsnap your bookmark.

Normal:
00:25:145 (3) - Move this back 2 ticks to follow the vocals. I probably wouldn't keep that whistle. How about I just add a note there ?
00:25:376 (4) - Make this into a slider that 0:25:722 to follow the bass There's a difficulty level thing. I wanted to keep sliderends and notes from having odd spaces between them, such as 3/4, for to not end up with sorta-complicated rhythms. TL;DR: No can do.
00:26:991 (2) - Definitely unstack this. The hitburst covers the start point which will confuse people I doubt it. There's a 1/1 space between the sliders, and it's pretty clear that's a slider starting there.
00:46:376 (3) - Unstack this. I think stacking should be used seldom in Normal difficulties. (When used like this, anyways. They seem fine during slower sections) Hmm, no. It feels more natural to stack them.
01:19:145 (1) - Add a hit circle There's a difficulty level thing again. This is right after a spinner, so I'm giving the player a good amount of time to recover.
01:50:991 (1) - I'm not exactly sure what in the world you're trying to follow here with this slider. Maybe that staticy-thing... either way, it doesn't sound right nor does it really fit with the map. Shorten the slider itself by one tick and keep the repeats. Bass, lyrics, and static ? I think it fits just fine the way it is.
01:51:914 (2) - Add a hit circle here Same thing as above.

Easy:
-- Honestly, I found it confusing that you kept switching between the bass and the vocals ;_; Really ? Huh.
00:28:837 (3) - Add a repeat here That would end up being more difficult than I intended, so nah.
01:02:530 (3) - Add a hit circle I'm really not sure what you want a hitcircle here for.

I guess that's it. I hope I helped and good luck. Thank you !

Agnes wrote:

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[General]

Nothing to poke at.

[Easy]

Nothing to poke at.

[Normal]

Nothing to poke at.

[Hard]

Nothing to poke at.

[Insane]

02:22:955 (4) - Not snapped.
02:24:570 (4) - ^
02:24:801 (5) - ^

...And that's about it. ...Good job.

Natteke wrote:

SPOILER

foulcoon wrote:

and the map isn't very good.

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

foulcoon wrote:

and the map isn't very good.

Blue Dragon wrote:

lol guys this map is made by a #modhelp person so let's gonna vote it 1 BECAUSE THEY CREATE THE RULES!!!!

Blue Dragon wrote:

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

lol guys this map is made by a #modhelp person so let's gonna vote it 1 BECAUSE THEY CREATE THE RULES!!!!

Blue Dragon wrote:

lol guys this map is made by a #modhelp person so let's gonna vote it 1 BECAUSE THEY CREATE THE RULES!!!!

Sync wrote:

He means that people are against people who idle in #modhelp so in spite, they vote their maps 1.

Blue Dragon wrote:

lol guys this map is made by a #modhelp person so let's gonna vote it 1 BECAUSE THEY CREATE THE RULES!!!!

Haseo wrote:

IT TOOK YOU 2 YEARS TO FINISH THIS?

*dies in shock*

Sync wrote:

She's remapped it over 9000 times!

Rena-chan wrote:

Sync wrote:

She's remapped it over 9000 times!

Nope. \:D/