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Nana Mizuki - Phantom Minds

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aesopl19193
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aesopl19193
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年3月23日 at 19:50:14

Artist: Nana Mizuki
Title: Phantom Minds
Source: Mahoshojo Lyrical Nanoha The Movie
BPM: 150
Filesize: 8911kb
Play Time: 01:07
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.44 stars, 70 notes)
  2. Hard (4.61 stars, 217 notes)
  3. Insane (4.97 stars, 440 notes)
  4. Normal (4.17 stars, 104 notes)
Download: Nana Mizuki - Phantom Minds
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Forth Uploaded Map~
It is the theme song of Mahoshojo Lyrical Nanoha The Movie 1st

Special Thanks!
al2e10 : Adding Hitsound in hard and insane


Download: Nana Mizuki - Phantom Minds (aesopl19193) [OverMap!!].osu
Last edited by aesopl19193 , edited 28 times in total.
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
Hard
SPOILER

00:43:184 (3) : Clap hitsound.
00:43:784 (x) : Add a beat here.
00:44:784 (4) : Delete this beat.
00:53:381 (1) : New combo.
00:55:780 (x) : Add a beat here.

Insane
SPOILER

[*] Trim the .mp3.

00:24:791 (1) : Put the clap hitsound at the end of this slider.
00:30:589 (x) : Add a beat here.
00:30:689 (x) : Add a beat here.
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
You asked me for a timing check, but I don't see any grave errors about this aspect [except some out-of-time beats to remove on Insane like on 00:38:086 (2) ]
In my opinion, you should mostly care about overall hitsounds's volume: try to use less louder soft hitsounds before kiai time!
Make the modes longer and apply some spacing modifies to improve it very well! A star, for now.
Sushi
osu! Alumni
2,989 posts
Joined October 2008
Sushi
If you don't plan to plan the entire song, cut the mp3.

BPM : 150
Offset : 781

[Easy]
00:13:581 (1,2) - Regarding the spacing of rest of the map, maybe increase make the spaing of these two the same?

[Hard]
Fine

[Insane]
fine too!
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193

Sushi971 wrote:

If you don't plan to plan the entire song, cut the mp3.

BPM : 150
Offset : 781

[Easy]
00:13:581 (1,2) - Regarding the spacing of rest of the map, maybe increase make the spaing of these two the same?

[Hard]
Fine

[Insane]
fine too!
All fixed~~
but for the size of mp3, I don't know how to cut it...
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
gdeath
it will be better if you change the title to Phantom Minds
star for Nana
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193

gdeath wrote:

it will be better if you change the title to Phantom Minds
star for Nana
changed ~=]
YGOkid8
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Joined February 2009
YGOkid8
Easy
01:04:781 (1) - I reckon a bit short for Easy. Maybe extend to 1:07:581?

Good song. Only thing I have a problem with really is... can you extend the beatmap? I think it's waaay to short for a song that long. At least map up to 02:08:781, please...?
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193

YGOkid8 wrote:

Easy
01:04:781 (1) - I reckon a bit short for Easy. Maybe extend to 1:07:581?
-no
Good song. Only thing I have a problem with really is... can you extend the beatmap? I think it's waaay to short for a song that long. At least map up to 02:08:781, please...?
I extended [insane] to 02:08:781, could you try it now? =]
YGOkid8
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YGOkid8

aesopl19193 wrote:

I extended [insane] to 02:08:781, could you try it now? =]
okay, will edit post once tested.

EDIT: Looking good :). HOWEVER... >:)

Hard
Think you can extend this to the same place as Insane as well?

Insane
Most of the streams in the first chorus (where the first Kiai Time is) seem out of place. To me they feel like they've been put there for the heck of it. Of course, that's just my opinion, but if you get me, try to reduce some of the streams :)

Also, I reckon Insane ends better without the last spinner. Maybe remove?
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193

YGOkid8 wrote:

aesopl19193 wrote:

I extended [insane] to 02:08:781, could you try it now? =]
okay, will edit post once tested.

EDIT: Looking good :). HOWEVER... >:)

Hard
Think you can extend this to the same place as Insane as well?

Insane
Most of the streams in the first chorus (where the first Kiai Time is) seem out of place. To me they feel like they've been put there for the heck of it. Of course, that's just my opinion, but if you get me, try to reduce some of the streams :)

Also, I reckon Insane ends better without the last spinner. Maybe remove?
I give up to cut the song now =[ ...
whenever I end the song , I just feel not good...
I am trying to map full version now..(Insane is full version now)
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for the second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. nanoha or Nanoha?
2. Delete the "nanoha" tags.
3. Idk why but it feels like the reff is cut somehow? [?]
4. Well, the mp3 you are using is a lot more than you mapped. Consider cutting it?

[Easy]
00:26:381 (1) - Add finish at the beginning.
00:29:581 (1) - ^
00:42:381 (1) - Too close to the spinner. Too hard for easy diff. [?]
00:55:181 (1) - ^ [?]
01:06:781 - Break will be nice here.

[Hard]
00:26:181 (1) - Ugly jump.
00:32:781 (1) - Add finish.
00:48:781 (1) - Ugly jump. To solve this problem, move the (4) to the next to the end of the spinner. Make them symmetry.
01:04:481 (1) - Move forward to 01:04:581. Reduce one 1/4 tick.

[Insane]
Overmapped diff.
00:17:581 (5) - Remove whistle from the end of the spinner.
00:17:981 (6) - Add whistle.
00:23:981 (7) - Move one tiny grid left.
00:26:381 (2) - Add finish at the beginning.
00:42:781 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Overmapped.
00:44:381 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
00:45:981 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
00:55:181 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^
00:56:781 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^
00:58:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^
01:04:481 (1) - Move forward to 01:04:581. Reduce one 1/4 tick.
01:11:581 - Add break here.
02:07:481 (1) - Unrankable spinner. Auto must get bonus 2000 for a spinner.
02:08:881 (1) - Move forward to 02:08:981. Reduce one 1/4 tick.
Star.
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
frost-b-spec
[General]
source:Mahou shoujo Lyrical Nanoha

[Normal]
check spacing
00:26:181(1) - delete circle
01:04:481(1) - start.01:04:781

[Insane]
02:07:481(1) - lol spinner(plz autoplay over 2000bouns)
02:33:381(14) - delete slider
02:33:581(1) - start.02:33:381 end.02:35:781
02:46:381(1,1) - why 2spinner?

star :)
climbb65588
435 posts
Joined August 2008
climbb65588
OK Just a small mod XD ( wathet blue colour is a suggestion. )

[Easy]

Good.

[Normal]

Good. :)

[Hard]

01:04:781 (1) 把 note 移開一點?

[Insane]

00:10:581 (1) 可以加一個重覆?

00:11:681 可在此加一個 note

Star ~~~
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
mod in msn ~ XD
&
HELP ADD SOUND ~

And good map STAR !!
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193
Thanks for your hitsound modding!!
Move to pending A_A
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
[General]

  • • Offset: 780 (resnap all notes)
    • Delete the .osb file, then "Full submission"
    • Source: Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha (i guess :? )
[Easy]

  • • 00:14:381 (2,1) - Spacing
[Hard]

  • • 01:04:381 (9,1) - Spacing
    • 01:27:781 (2,3) - ^
    • 01:29:381 (2,3) - ^
    • 01:30:981 (2,3) - ^
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
蓝色仅为建议浅蓝为个人观点的
Easy

00:39:181(1) - finish hitsound
00:48:781(1) - finish hitsound
01:01:581(1) - finish hitsound
01:07:181(x) - note+finsh hitsound

Normal
00:48:781(1) - finish hitsound

Hard
00:39:081(1) - finish hitsound
00:43:381(2) - 个人认为放在开始的这个whistle不太好,remove
00:55:581(1) - 同上
00:57:781(5) - whistle
00:58:781(1) - remove whistle
01:15:981(1) - 开始加入finish,并且降低他的音量
01:17:581(1) - 开始加入finish,并且降低他的音量
01:20:781(1) - 开始加入finish
01:44:781(3) - 加入whistle
01:45:181(4) - remove whistle
01:51:181(5) - 个人认为这个whistle不太好
01:52:781(7) - 加入whistle
01:57:581(3) - 同上
01:57:981(4) - remove whistle

抱歉,
时间不多了,没法仔细的看,而且最后一个难度只能粗略的看一下
这个难度的 59秒881到1分1秒多 和 2分00:781 还有03:10:381
的突然加速那个部分，需要改善一下吧

先这么多，star
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
[General]
- Delete "Mahoshojo Lyrical Nanoha The Movie" from tag and add in Source?
- Fix your tag and source on [Normal] [Hard] [Insane]
- 1024x768.jpg seem useless? Delete it and full submit again.. orz

[Hard]
01:28:380 (3) - spacing?
01:29:980 (3) - ^
01:31:580 (3) - ^

[Insane]
00:59:980 (1,2) - Silder are too fast, This part need warning like "x2" or something like that, IMO
02:00:780 (1,2) - ^
02:07:580 (3) - new combo? [Like 01:06:380 (1,2) - ]
02:33:380 (1) - end this spinner at 02:35:780 (I hear with Nana's voice)
02:47:980 (1) - end this spinner at 02:52:580 ^
03:10:380 (1,2) - Silder are too fast, This part need warning like "x2" or something like that
03:17:180 (3) - new combo?

other are fine to me, and it's a nice map and song, then star of cos :oops:
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
Timing听起来没问题

[General]
  1. osb文件没有用,请删掉再full submit
  2. tag能想到的话尽量加几个
  3. Easy和Normal的soft音量感觉大了,80%比较合适
[Easy]
  1. HP Drain Rate太低了,至少升2格
  2. 00:26:380 (1) - 加finish
  3. 00:29:580 (10 - ^
  4. 00:42:180 (x) - 在这设一个timing section,和00:42:380一样的设置,不过没KIAI设置.以防玩的时候点早了声音不一样
[Normal]
  1. HP Drain Rate升1-2格
  2. 00:23:180 (1) - 不要finish
  3. 00:26:380 (1) - 加finish
  4. 00:29:580 (2) - ^
  5. 00:42:380 (x) - KIAI这开始
[Hard]
  1. 01:27:780 (2) - 没完全和1结尾重合
  2. 01:29:380 (2) - ^
  3. 01:55:980 (S) - 加finish
  4. 02:11:980 (S) - spinner这结束比较好,音量小点
[Insane]
  1. 00:30:380 (3,1) - 这里3的2反弹本来就很难把握了,1还jump的话很难打准,建议3少反弹一次,即使弄出jump也比较好掌握
  2. 00:59:980 (x) - 2xBPM需要SB提示
  3. 01:10:780 (S) - spinner这结束或者01:11:180结束,01:11:180结束的话加上finish
  4. 02:00:780 (x) - 需要SB提示
  5. 02:53:180 (x) - KIAI者开始,在这里加一个和02:53:080一样设置的timing section,然后取消02:53:080的KIAI设置
  6. 03:10:380 (x) - SB提示
nice map
star + kds star
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
aesopl19193
All fixed ~ Thanks!
Breeze
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Breeze
nice
Pubbled
yaya
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yaya
irc moded.

Edit:bubbled.
abalee
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abalee
Ranked.
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