orioncomet wrote:

~ [over all] ~
* set a Preview Point all your diff~
Preview Point, It's the point at which the song starts playing when it is selected in the beatmap list.
How to set it?, Choose somewhere that you like in the map. Ex,00:38:232 -

SPOILER

[attachment=0:14c5a]preview.jpg[/attachment:14c5a]

Thanks for that

~ [Easy] ~
01:25:736 (7) - spacing
01:34:547 - stop kiai here
Fixed

~ [Normal] ~
can you low Silder Velocity If you want silder are slow.
01:19:023 (2,3) - spacing
01:34:547 - stop kiai here
Fixed

~ [Hard] ~
01:07:275 (1) ~ 02:00:981 (1) - Kiai time too long, maybe don't add kiai here?
02:02:660 (10) - no kiai here~ ?
Also...there's a new rule in Kiai Time. >A<

Do not overuse kiai time (general rule is one toggle per minute of playable length). Do not use kiai time just for fountains unless you are doing this extremely rarely. Kiai time is meant to accent chorus sections. You can toggle it off and on halfway through the chorus if that looks good, but using it constantly every 4-8 beats is just stupid.

that all.. for me.. I can't mod about combo colour and hitsound.. orz
here's my star~ goodluck
Thanks x3

DJPop wrote:

สวัสดี


~Easy~
SliderTickRate: 2

~Normal~
00:25:317 (1,2) - wrong spacing
00:27:415 (4,5) - ^
00:40:421 (5,6) - ^
01:26:995 (5) - new combo
01:27:834 (1) - remove new combo
01:30:771 (6) - new combo

~Hard~
00:59:303 (5,6) - too near
01:47:555 (7) - add hitfinish
02:53:009 (14) - new combo
03:12:520 (1) - add some noticed SB ?


+Star

Thunderstorm wrote:

Драаасьте)
Вообще неплохо.
В нормале и изи ничё не нашёл, но какие-то они дэцл скучноватые, имо
Это потому, что это Easy и Normal :3 Я на них особого акцента не делал

Хард
00:15:247 (1,2) Уменьши на 1/4, сюда 00:16:716 и сюда 00:18:394 по ноттсу?
00:21:960 (1) - попробуй слайдер на 1\4 уменьшить, имхо звучит получше
00:25:946 (2) - тож имхо, либо убрать 1 репит и начало слайдера сюды - 00:26:156, либо там по ноттсу пихнуть, тож вроде звучит поприятнее. Или тупо звук начала слайдера интерхиритом убери, чё-то в этом духе в общем
Fixed

02:15:247 (7,8) - Заспейси как предыдущие. Fixed
02:15:667 (1) - сунь какой-нить варнинг на 2х слайдер. Вообще в принципе пофг, но могут доипацо. Fixed

02:22:799 - начиная отсюда на всей зелёной секции спейсинг разный. Fixed.
Эт, конечно, хард, но мпейс мультиплиер мид-комбо менять лучше не стоит

Вообще по спейсингу карта странная, как-то не поймёшь, есть трабл, али нет его))
Ну а так, в целом, неплохо.
Если хочешь, могу чё-то типа нормала замапать.
ай, забыл. На харде ещё слайдер тик рэйт 2 попробуй.
Лови звезду

Loogiesquared wrote:

Easy

SPOILER

No visible errors.

Normal

SPOILER

00:47:555 (1) : New combo.

Good.

Hard

SPOILER

00:52:170 (1) : Down by 8 ticks.
01:15:562 (x) : Add a beat here.

Good.

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request. Sorry for the delay. No problems with that :]


Star.

All Fixed. Thanks

Zekira wrote:

[Timing]
DO THE FOLLOWING IN ALL DIFFS. D: I just realized that the timings of these things are different... >_> Very inappropriate.
Set the red offset to 15240. Then make sure that the other green points are snapping to the ticks where they're supposed to be. Then resnap all notes.

[Easy]
00:45:456 (4,5,1) - IMO the sudden tight turn at the almost end of the slider looks a bit unattractive... get someone else's opinion on this.
01:20:701 (1) - I understand this jump, but with the current spacing that it is, I think this jump's a bit too large? (lol... I'm usually the anti-Easy person and usually won't prick about stuff like this, but I guess this just stood out.) This is also an opinion though. Fixed

[Normal]
AIMod is a bit dictating what I wanna say here. (Ctrl+Shift+A in case you don't know how to access it yet) I get nothing from this.
01:02:240 (3) - New Combo
Um... just a personal opinion, but I find this Normal a bit lacking in the interesting department. Don't take it too seriously though, my preferences for maps may just be weird.

[Hard]
00:18:604 (1) - sorry dude, too high up. Sorry dude, it's ok.
00:20:072 (2) - I blargh'd 3 consecutive times. Definitely needs to be nearer to the 1. Wat.
00:21:751 (8) - ...okay, now I see. You're a bit overusing the concept of jumps... I mean, sure they're a mapping technique, but hopefully you'll use them when it's actually intuitive, like on a high-intensity part of a song or something. But in this situation, I find it inappropriate.
00:24:897 (8,9,10) - lol spacing. Few grids to the right.
00:46:925 (5) - jump overuse yet again.
00:47:555 (1) - symmetry
00:51:541 (5,6,7,8,1) - stack abuse. Change it.
00:55:946 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't like that crowding in the middle. Maybe fix the shape since it's looking really ugly here. Also, jump abuse.
00:58:044 (1) - remove the new combo from 1, and add to 4.
01:37:065 (11,12,13) - blllllllllll. <- What does this mean? Some alien language?
01:40:002 (9,10,11,12,1,2) - what's this space changing all of a sudden? This is very unintuitive you know.
02:29:093 (5) - this looks somehow acceptable, but make this a new combo if you want to keep it.
The 2x storyboards should come before the slider that has it >_> So that people get it. No reason to put 2x sb at the same time with slider.

...sorry dude, no star from me.
Sorry dude, but you need to give a constructive explaination of your words.But thanks a lot for your time spent on my map

• Resnap All notes on All Difficulties

• 01:05:589 (6) New combo

• 00:38:736 (1) Finish
  00:52:163 (5) ^
  01:17:337 (1) Hit sound: Finish / None / Finish / None

• 00:46:918 (5) Clap?
  01:11:044 (4) New combo
  01:26:149 (6) Finish
  *02:26:149* No kiai?

Natteke desu wrote:

02:39:583 (4,5,6,7,8) - Fix spacing What's wrong with it?

sonnyc wrote:

Hello

[General]

• Resnap All notes on All Difficulties

[Easy]

• 01:05:589 (6) New combo

[Normal]

• 00:38:736 (1) Finish
  00:52:163 (5) ^
  01:17:337 (1) Hit sound: Finish / None / Finish / None

[Hard]

• 00:46:918 (5) Clap?
  01:11:044 (4) New combo
  01:26:149 (6) Finish
  *02:26:149* No kiai?

Star

All fixed. Thanks a lot :3

sesito71 wrote:

Natteke desu wrote:

02:39:583 (4,5,6,7,8) - Fix spacing What's wrong with it?

I mean:

The spacing here 02:39:583 (4,5,6,7,8) and here 02:40:422 (1,2,3,4,5) is different. Use distance snap in the first stream, and it'll be fixed ^^

Thank you

fartownik wrote:

Duplicating title or artist name in the tags is not needed. Delete "one of us" from there.

[Normal]
Overall difficulty +2 ticks.
You really should make the same slider speed on the whole difficulty. The speed changes are
placed in wrong places, they shouldn't even exist.
01:19:016 (2,3) - Spacing.

[Hard]
No idea where the hitsounds gone after 00:44:820 (2). Please add some more.
The map feels empty cause of this.

00:55:519 (9,1) - Ekhm, spacing?
00:58:876 (1,2) - ^
01:32:862 (4,1) - ^
01:40:309 (6,1) - ^
01:40:729 (2) - End on 01:41:044.
02:12:722 (1,2,3,4) - Jump in strange place.
[02:15:659] - "2x fast" - wtf, I don't see any fast sliders. There's only 2x
bpm section, but it ends before notes start appearing after the break. Delete the
whole SB part or add a 2x speed section - forgot to remove those >_< I decided to use normal sliders instead of 2x
02:24:470 (7) - Add 2 repeats to this slider.
[02:25:519] - Add a note
[02:25:624] - ^
[03:06:428] - Start kiai section here.
[03:11:988] - The same problem with "2x fast" SB.

+star

1. Offset = 15,248 (Yours feels a little early)

Doomsday93 wrote:

Nice map. Just a few rough bits here and there. Fix these and I'll come back and Protobubble

Starred

Natteke desu wrote:

Thanks a lot, Dooms :3

James2250 wrote:

not popping pubble because everything I said is subjective
*star*

Leorda wrote:

Great Map!
STAR

Gladi wrote:

I see it has already been modded by serval MATs.
I trust them so I believe this map is good enough for a Proto Bubble~

Star!

osuplayer111 wrote:

After some little IRC Modding...

Ranked~

Kuronama wrote:

In Taiko mode, the roll that starts at 1:20:250 is impossible. I tapped as fast as humanly possible, and it wasn't fast enough. That part should be fixed. You might notice that in Taiko mode, no one has been able to get more than 227x in hard mode.

I only play this game in Taiko mode, so it takes away from the fun of it if a pattern is physically impossible. Some parts are damn tricky, but tricky is fine, as long as it's possible. Please consider fixing this.

Natteke desu wrote:

Kuronama wrote:

In Taiko mode, the roll that starts at 1:20:250 is impossible. I tapped as fast as humanly possible, and it wasn't fast enough. That part should be fixed. You might notice that in Taiko mode, no one has been able to get more than 227x in hard mode.

I only play this game in Taiko mode, so it takes away from the fun of it if a pattern is physically impossible. Some parts are damn tricky, but tricky is fine, as long as it's possible. Please consider fixing this.

I've made the map for osu mode, not taiko.

Zekira wrote:

EDIT: I tried it out; honestly, I've played faster stuff than that. To prove my point, have the screenshots of my full combo: