Misato - Epicurus' Rainbow Can No Longer Be Seen · forum

MeLLoN

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MeLLoN 2010-01-06T08:11:35+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年2月7日 at 18:14:20

Artist: Misato
Title: Epicurus' Rainbow Can No Longer Be Seen
Source: CHAOS
Tags: Touhou SYNC.ART'S cyborg
BPM: 155
Filesize: 3423kb
Play Time: 02:59
Difficulties Available:

Epicurus (4.98 stars, 472 notes)
Lunatic (4.99 stars, 474 notes)
Normal (4 stars, 238 notes)

Download: Misato - Epicurus' Rainbow Can No Longer Be Seen
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Epicurus - cyborg

My 1st Beat map.
Please advice me.

Last edited by MeLLoN 2010-02-07T09:14:33+00:00, edited 51 times in total.

Aenna

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Aenna 2010-01-06T08:46:06+00:00

[Lunatic]

00:02:576 (1) - Remove new combo
00:03:931 (1) - ^
00:04:705 (3) - New combo
00:05:867 (1) - Remove new combo
00:06:641 (1) - ^
00:07:608 (1) - ^
00:07:802 (2) - New combo
00:08:963 (1) - Remove new combo
00:43:028 (1) - ^
00:45:931 (1) - ^
00:54:060 (1) - ^
00:54:254 (2) - New combo
00:57:931 (1) - Remove new combo
01:04:899 (1) - ^
02:47:673 (1) - ^

ganbare new mapper!!

MeLLoN

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MeLLoN 2010-01-06T09:08:25+00:00

Thank you for advice it mended.

Aenna

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Aenna 2010-01-06T10:41:45+00:00

wa-

Download: Misty - Epicurus no Niji ha Mou mienai (MeLLoN) [Epicurus].osu

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-01-06T12:03:57+00:00

初譜面なのにレベル高っｗｗｗｗ

普通に面白かったです！

Insane

00:06:64 (2) - を1 Tiny Grid 離してくださいな、１マス近いみたいです＾＾
00:36:25 (5)~(6) の距離が 1 Grid 近いですね
02:50:77 (5) 左に１TinyGrid ~

初心者MODですｗ
あんま見つけてあげられなくごめんなさい

MeLLoN

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MeLLoN 2010-01-06T14:18:16+00:00

修正箇所の指摘ありがとうございます！直しました
まだわからないところもたくさんあるので
徐々に見直していきたいとおもいます

taNa

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taNa 2010-01-06T15:07:54+00:00

nice map!!

MeLLoN

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MeLLoN 2010-01-06T15:26:02+00:00

offset参考にさせていただきました

貴重なご意見ありがとうございます

Furawa

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Furawa 2010-01-06T16:06:58+00:00

wa

miccoliasms

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miccoliasms 2010-01-06T17:03:10+00:00

全て提案です

[Lunatic]
全体的にHitsoundsの音量やつけ方をもう少し工夫や統一感を持たせた方がいい気がします
00:05:108 (5) - 好みの問題ですがここはスライダーじゃない方がいい気がします
00:11:689 (5) - ここまでのこの形の往復スライダーが全て1往復なので
　　　　　　　　　　　少しわかり辛いかもしれません
　　　　　　　　　　　ex) 1往復にして00:12:270にnoteを追加
00:34:721 (9) - 少し近すぎる気がします
00:47:108 (1,2,3,4,5) - (5)がギリギリ画面外なので
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　全体的にもう少し上に上げたほうがいいかもしれません
00:53:495 (6) - 00:05:108と同じようにこのスライダーはあまり好きではありません
01:17:495 (1,2,3,4,5) - 間隔が均等ではありません
01:59:302 (2,4) - こういう場面での1往復半はやりづらい気がします
02:35:689 (1,2,3,4,5) - ここだけストリームの間隔が狭いのは何か理由が…?
02:36:463 (1,2,3) - 間隔が均等ではありません

[Epicurus]
00:47:883 (12) - add Finish
00:48:076 (1) - 音をフェードアウトさせた方が好みです
00:53:495 (10) - remove Whistle , add Finish
00:59:689 (13,1) - ^
00:59:689 (13,1) - ^
01:50:205 (1) - 音をフェードアウトさせたほうが好みです
01:55:431 (10) - remove Whistle , add Finish
02:01:625 (3,1) - ^
02:05:399 (x) - add note
02:05:495 (x) - add note and Finish
02:36:076 (10) - remove Whistle , add Finish
02:41:689 (6) - ここのスライダーはあまり好きではありません
02:48:076 (12) - 終点にFinish
02:55:044 (1) - ここからの音量が少し大きい気がします

細かいところは見逃してるかも

本当細かいところしか見るところがありませんでした
Nice mapです

Aenna

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Aenna 2010-01-06T17:56:09+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Misty - Epicurus no Niji ha Mou mienai (MeLLoN) [Epicurus].osu

MeLLoN

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MeLLoN 2010-01-07T03:37:16+00:00

指摘ありがとうございます、直しました

音の統一感とかがわからないのでもうすこし試行錯誤してみます

細かい部分まで見ていただきありがとうございました

Aenna

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Aenna 2010-01-07T08:23:55+00:00

更新！
これでしばらく指摘されない限り変更ないと思う！

Download: Misty - Epicurus no Niji ha Mou mienai (MeLLoN) [Epicurus].osu

Aenna

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Aenna 2010-01-10T13:11:30+00:00

と、思ったけど更新！

Download: Misty - Epicurus no Niji ha Mou mienai (MeLLoN) [Epicurus].osu

Leorda

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Leorda 2010-01-15T06:55:10+00:00

KONNICHIWA!!

Sorry for delay because my internet is suck at night

[General]
You have to remap to the end of the song OR cut the mp3

[Normal]
01:48:463 (8) - Move backward to red tick
01:48:657 (1) - Move forward to 2ND white tick and cut short to 01:52:334
02:48:463 (x) - Add note with clap hitsound?

[Lunatic]
00:04:141 (11) - A litte bit offscreen
00:27:947 (5) - ^
01:49:044 (1) - ^
02:34:141 (3) - ^
02:54:076 (4) - ^

[Epicurus]
00:56:786 (12) - A bit offscreen

Now that's a good start!
GOOD MAP!
SU-TA-!

MeLLoN

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MeLLoN 2010-01-15T07:31:42+00:00

Thank you mod&star

Aenna

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Aenna 2010-01-15T07:41:27+00:00

KONNICHIWA!! Leorda

Fixed.

Download: Misty - Epicurus no Niji ha Mou mienai (MeLLoN) [Epicurus].osu

Yes_old

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Yes_old 2010-01-18T17:56:09+00:00

epicurus
00:13:237 (9) - add a repeat
01:23:495 (1) - finish sounds a little too loud. lower volume a bit?
01:23:883 (2) - ^
01:24:270 (4) - ^
01:24:657 (5) - ^
01:24:850 (6) - ^
02:44:979 (11) - finish?
02:57:560 (1) - end at 02:58:915 - ?
02:59:302 - add note

lunatic
00:12:657 (2) - remove clap
00:41:302 (1,2) - line these up exactly with the end of slider
01:25:915 (x) - note here
01:49:915 to 01:51:947 - spinner maybe
02:19:431 - make a timing section here and lower the volume for this whole part
02:26:012 (4) - consider making these 1/2 sliders since this part of the song is slower
02:27:173 (4) - ^
02:28:334 (4) - ^
02:29:495 (4) - ^
02:48:463 (9) - finish at beginning
02:53:205 (4) - doesnt play well
02:53:883 (3,4,5) - i dont like this placement. maybe make (4) go in another direction

normal is fine

overall a good map and fun song so you get a star for sure! change the combo colors so that they're the same throughout all difficulties maybe. another thing to note.. [lunatic] is actually more difficult than [epicurus] so maybe tweak around with the overall difficulty / drain rate to make [lunatic] stars more and [epicurus] less.

Kytoxid

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Kytoxid 2010-01-18T22:01:33+00:00

[General]

Needs an easier difficulty.
Remove the .osb and resubmit.
White or yellow notes + kiai time = my eyes are dying.
Change background colour to black or a nicer blue?

Check the capitalization, I dunno how Japanese is capitalized, but Mienai should probably be capitalized. Possibly "ha" too?

[Normal]

Nice. I like it.

[Lunatic]

Didn't really think the 0.5x BPM sliders fit the music very well, especially the ones during kiai.

00:11:689 (5) - Concealed repeat.
02:31:141 - Unused timing section.
02:50:399 (1,2,3,4,5) - This zig-zag might be a little extreme.

[Epicurus]

Higher star rating but lower max score than Lunatic; a little weird.

Similar to Lunatic, the 1/2 BPM sliders kinda felt out of place for such a fast-paced song. (although the part just after the last break was neat)

The bursts of normal hitsounds were cool.

02:03:754 (10,1,2) - Didn't really like this spacing; distance snap 1 normally?

Very nice maps, star~

Aenna

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Aenna 2010-01-18T22:22:15+00:00

Almost done.

Download: Misty - Epicurus no Niji ha Mou mienai (MeLLoN) [Epicurus].osu

kino77

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kino77 2010-01-19T09:23:42+00:00

Nice map~

Disable countdown

[Normal]
Fine~

[Lunatic]
01:05:495 (12,13) - Spacing?
01:43:431 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^

[Epicurus]
Fine~

Star~

MeLLoN

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MeLLoN 2010-01-19T11:17:30+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

MeLLoN

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MeLLoN 2010-01-19T11:18:32+00:00

Thank you mod&star Kytoxid

MeLLoN

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MeLLoN 2010-01-19T11:19:21+00:00

Thank you mod&star kino77

Shinxyn

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Shinxyn 2010-01-23T06:46:23+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

MeLLoN

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MeLLoN 2010-01-23T16:11:53+00:00

Thank you mod & stat Shinxyn

Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2010-01-26T20:25:49+00:00

I agree with Shinxyn. It doesn't make sense to use a background of Marisa when it's clearly a remix song of Ch- I mean Hong Meiling.
Also it's recommended to use an english title instead of a romanized title. So again, what Shinxyn said, "Epicurus' rainbow can no longer be seen"

Gens

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Gens 2010-01-26T22:52:10+00:00

[Hard]

00:41:094 (1) - I kind of agree with Kytoxid here, the slowdown doesn't fit IMO.

[Lunatic]

02:49:514 - Use Kiai time in this section.

Also, please check the Kiai intervals here; they're not snapped correctly. To explain better, look at the green line here:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2905

^ that's not the same as this:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2906

Get it? You can use the "Use current time" feature to fix this quickly (or you can select all timing sections in the timing panel and increase by a certain offset).

Aside from that, great map. I'd pubble it but Mafia is already here so meh, I guess it doesn't matter (obviously after you fix the title and stuff).

MeLLoN

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MeLLoN 2010-01-27T08:51:52+00:00

Fixed. Thank you for mod.

Armin

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Armin 2010-01-27T19:53:47+00:00

[Normal]

No problems.

[Epicurus]

Nothing.

[Lunatic]

Perfect.

Starred çoç

MeLLoN

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MeLLoN 2010-01-28T07:02:25+00:00

Thank you mod&star Armin

Andrea

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Andrea 2010-01-31T19:53:16+00:00

[Normal]

There are some patterns a bit too hard for a normal difficulty. Like: 01:59:094 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8), 02:02:191 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8), Etc. Remove some notes, please.

[Epicurus]

Use the same kiai time of [Normal], please. There a lot of kiai fountains with the kiai you have used on this difficulty.

[Lunatic]

00:10:901 (1,2) - Hard to read. Change this!
01:11:094 (8) - New combo.

Aenna

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Aenna 2010-01-31T22:23:50+00:00

done.

Download: Misato - Epicurus' rainbow can no longer be seen (MeLLoN) [Epicurus].osu

MeLLoN

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MeLLoN 2010-02-01T07:50:05+00:00

All fixed.

Andrea

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Andrea 2010-02-01T09:47:13+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2010-02-01T14:01:31+00:00

Maybe the title can be capitalized better

Epicurus' Rainbow Can No Longer Be Seen

Andrea

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Andrea 2010-02-01T15:36:45+00:00

Bubble repair.

abalee

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abalee 2010-02-07T08:24:34+00:00

Sorry for popped. :/

Lunatic:
01:10:320 (4,5) - : change stack leniency to "Rarely Stack" so that the spacing could shown correctly while playing. Suggest to make this changes on others difficulties too.

MeLLoN

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MeLLoN 2010-02-07T09:42:49+00:00

Fixed

abalee

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abalee 2010-02-08T07:12:25+00:00

not really followed my thought but it also worth a bubble