NoHitter wrote:

[Insane]
- In general, your combos which go back on themselves e.g. 00:12:700 (2,3,4,5,6) and 00:32:878 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) look odd because you're not making them into perfect triangles. For 00:12:700 (2,3,4,5,6) - a better look would be http://puu.sh/aCMYZ/798dce1b8d.jpg. I would suggest adjusting these combos a bit to avoid overlaps and make them look nicer. redone majority of them. i feel that some don't have to be perfect, so i left out a few.
- 00:01:450 (4,9) - 4 overlaps 7 here which looks ugly. AR is not fast enough to prevent the overlap. fixed!
- 00:02:521 (1,2) - Blanket these two properly. fixed!
- 00:03:771 (2,4) - Blanket these two properly as well. fixed!
- 00:05:200 (7) - Comment about the flow here. Place it more upwards, so the flow from the previous slider will fit it. http://puu.sh/aCMFl/d378e9bb52.jpg fixed!
- 00:07:878 (7,2) - Again, the overlap fixed!
- 00:12:164 (1,2,3) - The flow here is odd yet again. The slider points to the upper right, but your next combo goes from the bottom right to the upper left. fixed!
- 00:19:307 (1) - Make the notes perfectly go on the slidertrack. http://puu.sh/aCMNP/100a8b104b.jpg fixed!
- 00:34:664 (9) - I expected this to have a similar shape with (8). fixed!
- 00:37:253 (3) - There really is no music basis for this note here. Remove. fixed!
- 00:37:521 (1,2,3,4,5) - The flow of this combo is odd. Try positioning the objects so that they lead into each other. fixed!
- 00:51:450 (1,2,3,4,1) - Either make this into a titled square and overlap the two (1)s or make it into a pentagon. The current one looks so ugly :/ fixed!
- 01:23:593 (1,2,3,4,5) - The lack of notes here is offputting a bit. fixed, i think.

[Hard]
- I've noticed that this diff has a lot of changes I've mentioned that can be applied for other parts of the diff (including flow). Please take the initiative to change them as well.
- 00:01:093 () - There's a heavy beat here. Place a note here instead of making it inside the slider. fixed!
- 00:02:075 () - Don't hear any heavy music here to warrant a note. fixed!
- 00:07:164 (3,4) - Generally speaking a good flowing slider to slider combo would usually involve either a similar shape but rotated or flipped. This plays oddly. http://puu.sh/aCNtS/dd18bcfcee.jpg Fix the others all well in this combo. gonna keep for now.
- 00:14:307 (3,4) - Same comment as earlier. Although this plays much better since (3) leads into (4). [Also make (4) lead into (1) of the next combo] ^
- 00:17:878 (2,3,4,5) - The overlaps look ugly IMO. fixed!
- 00:19:307 (1,3,4) - You used a curved slider then switched to straight-edged ones... They look aesthetically unappealing. keeping, i think its cool
- 00:35:021 (2,3,4,5) - Slider are touching each other partly. Please move them further a bit. fixed!
- 01:14:128 (6,7) - Make the first one repeat once only and then extend the repeats of the second. fixed!

[Normal]
- 00:01:985 (3) - The red tick at the middle makes this slider look odd. fixed!
- 00:11:100 (4) - Unsnapped. fixed!
- 00:16:807 (6) - Rotate selection center by -20 to make this fit better. fixed!
- 00:26:807 (3,1) - Incorrect spacing. fixed!
- 00:55:021 (1) - This may confuse players. A short slider with more than 1 repeat. fixed!
- 00:56:271 (3,4) - Same comment regarding flow as other diffs. fixed!

[Overall]
- I'm sorry, but IMO this map isn't ready for ranking yet sorry!

kamisamaaa wrote:

add some suggestion on insane diff >.<
no KD for this post.
[insane]
00:02:075 (8) - overmapped and sound strange. i wanna keep!
00:03:057 (2) - change this to a note and slider. because you miss a strong drum on 00:03:235 fixed!
00:04:664 (6,7) - I have a good idea here. 00:04:664- here add a note and begin a 1/1 slider from 00:04:843- . and use 0.5x slider speed to this slider. a slow slider really fit the music here. good idea, looks fun!
00:13:414 (1,2,3) - strange rhythm. the music here is every two should be a group.thats means 00:13:414- here should be a note this is fix
and make same pattern with 00:12:521 (2,3,4,5,6) - . and begin these slider on white tick. keep jump
00:24:843 (5) - add finish. because of the music done
01:28:593 (2) - also suggest you change to a slow slider end at 01:28:860- okay, change sldier
01:26:271 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - the jump hear look casual and just up and down a little boring. fix

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, there's a mod in progress. Feel free to apply the suggestions for the diffs I've already checked. I will edit this post and finish the mod soon.

[box=an unfinished modpost]Yo, as requested.

[General]

1. Make sure that Widescreen Support is disabled in all diffs. This thing is used only for storyboads and you don't have one. fixed
2. Clyine's Extra has no video enabled, make sure that this will get fixed. fixed
3. Do you really need to place names of the mappers on the BG? It's not necessary at all and it makes your map ~1mb heavier. You could also use diff-specific storyboard elements and just ONE background image for this reason, which would be more reasonable. reduced, GD, should be fine now.

[Normal]

1. You can try to focus a bit more on improving you flow since it's the main issue I see with this diff. It is not bad even as it is, but it can be improved.
2. 00:16:807 (6,1) - minor - you can try to make a blanket-slider here to improve the appearance of this pattern and to make it look neater. fixed
3. 00:19:128 - please, place a circle here. There's a clearly audible sound in music which should be mapped in order to make the rhythm more logical and natural. fixed
4. 00:27:521 (1) - according to your pattern this new combo is extra. It is out of your pattern, feels irregular and is not really necessary here. Remove it, please. fixed
   Note: 00:38:950 (1) - same thing happens here. fixed
5. 01:28:950 (6) - the head of the slider is inaudible, which is unrankable. Make at least head of the slider audible (20%+ volume). fixed throughout
   
   Not bad, since so many modders have already checked it. It can be better, but for a first map it looks cool!

[Hard]

1. Setting AR to 7,5 might match better with your slider velocity and will also make the spread more balanced. fixed
2. 00:01:271 (2,3,4) - minor - please, check the spacing, it feels broken and does not play good, because there is no any reason to put a lower-DS pattern here. fixed
3. 00:26:807 - 00:27:521 - 00:28:235 - the vocals at these beats are completely ignored which makes the sliders feel off and 00:26:450 (1,2,3,4) - the whole pattern feels rather onfusing and maybe even a bit unpleasant while playing. fixed
4. 00:29:307 (1,2) - the second reverse on such sliders is really hard to notice and feels confusing. I highly suggest you to remove it and replace them with something else to make the diff more playable. Te song is relaxing, so, there should not be any tricky/confusing patterns, imo. fixed
5. 00:32:878 (5,6) - the repeats on the blue ticks sound overmapped and feel forced to play. Mind replacing these sliders with two circles? This would improve the playability and fit better with the rhythm. fixed
6. 00:41:360 (2,4) - these two are overmapped. They don't really make sense with the vocals and music and they seem out of your patterns. Also, note, that there are 3 harder diffs and having overmapped pattern in hard seems really weird. fixed
7. 00:45:200 (7,8,9,10,11) - the jumpy pattern seems to be off music, please, pay more attention to it and see if it is playable or not. I had no problems with reading it, but I didn't understand the logic here, so I'm leaving it up to you. i think it goes along, but it might just be my imagination, keeping for now.
8. 00:49:485 (2,3) - select them and press Ctrl+G. It will swap them on the timeline, it will prevent the overlap (00:48:950 (10,2)) and improve your flow slightly. fixed, and mirrored
9. 00:51:450 (7) - quite the same as 00:29:307 (1,2). If you listen closer, you can hear that the vocals kick in at 00:51:628 - not at 00:51:450. Which means that there should be a circle at 00:51:450. apparently her makes a sound at 00:51:450, so i feel that the 4 beats in a slider is warranted.
10. 01:00:735 (1) - I would not ignore the beat here. It feels empty and bugs me quite a bit + it ruins your consistent pattern a bit. fixed
11. 01:11:985 (4,5) - that would be a good idea to replace them with 1/2 slider in order to emphasize the beats on the white ticks. fixed
12. 01:14:396 (7) - it is realy hard to tell that the slider will have more repeats than the previous one. Place a new combo there, so players will be able to read it easier. fixed
    
    Flow and some rhythm mistakes are the things you should focus on. I think that you can actually make the diff much better.

[Insane]

1. The DS you've picked feels way too agressive. For a relaxing song with such a high Dlider Velocity I'd recommend to use a lower one. Please, consider re-arranging the notes with a lower DS(x1,0, maybe?). Please keep in mind that there're two extra diffs, so your Insane should not be a super-hard one. i tone down the beginning, but i'd like to keep the difficulty.
2. 00:05:200 - you can reduce volume on the tail of a slider to match better with the music. The music kinda fades here, so, reducing volume of the slider should be a nice idea. fixed.
3. 00:22:164 (8) - haven't you missed a new combo here? It feels like you did because the chain is much longer than the others and your combo-pattern seems to be broken here. yeap, fixed.
   
   There're a lot of patterns that bug me, but most of the issues I see are due to high Distance Spacing, so, reducing it might help you to improve the diff a greately.

You have a lot of things to improve, keep going!

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Best of luck!

skinnyjimmy wrote:

Hello, here's the mod from my queue! Don't expect to much because im still a noob modder, but I'll try my best

[Insane]

00:58:772 (3) - Have this blanket 4 a little better fix

Well that's the end of the mod!
Sorry it's so short, but i dont really see anything wrong with the map
Hopefully this will help you a bit

GL Getting this ranked! the jumps are really fun

xxdeathx wrote:

rechecking no KD

easy is missing dont need, NHIX mapset.

map could still be a lot neater. i'll be talking about your hard diff but it can very well apply to the others.
some of your sliders of the same length are more curved than others and when they're next to each other it would look better for corresponding sliders to be congruent. also use copy/paste more often and rotate/flip the sliders so that they're the exact same shape. it'll be much neater that way.
also, using too many slider points or having red slider points can be great if they work out fine but really ugly and ruin the consistency of the map if they don't. that's the case with a lot of your sliders like 00:10:021 (3,4) - in your hard so i'd just stick with the simple 2 or 3 slider point sliders. this section 00:12:164 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - was really nice compared to the rest of your map because it followed the neatness things i just specified. but please try to stay away from 00:16:450 (4,5) until you're more familiar with these. even i've never used a slider with a single red point because i don't know where they're good for.
stuff like 00:07:521 (4,6) - 00:08:414 (7,8) - in your hard should be parallel (use copy/paste)
00:30:021 (3,4,5,6) - this part doesn't use time-distance spacing (distance snap) so it's extremely hard to play and misleading.
i was talking about consistency. you want to reuse patterns in corresponding parts of the music and keep your mapping style consistent throughout, so when you get creative like 00:40:735 (1,2,3) - it conflicts with the style you have in the rest of the map.
01:05:200 (5,6,7,8,9) - these jumps are way too hard and the flow isn't good either
01:19:843 (1,2,3,4,5) - way too hard too

your normal is a little better than your hard in these regards but the same things still apply. patterns like 00:38:950 (3,4) - don't fit in as much as http://puu.sh/aGARt/f455ac2adf.png

let's have a look at your insane: i didn't mod it earlier but i'll point out things now
00:01:985 (7,8,9,2,3) - again, needs to be neater. you might as well fully stack them or place one of them at a different location to avoid this messy overlap
00:26:093 (1,2) - the consistency i mentioned before. you should see an opportunity to make this symmetrical
00:42:878 (4) - i understand what you're trying to do here but a 1/4 slider pointing the other way isn't good when there's a stream of circles following it
01:04:664 (6,1,2) - it's better and quite possible if you don't overlap them at all
01:26:271 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - way harder than the rest of your map. without these circles, this diff would be 4.47 stars compared to 4.78 earlier. having 13 2.xx distance 1/2 circles in a row is way too hard for a 4.5 star map. the end can be harder but if it boosts the star difficulty by over 0.3, that's too much.

well it's clear you've put a lot of effort into this and want this ranked, but it is your first and only map. you still need some more experience to make it up to ranking quality standards, which i don't feel it has met yet. i did give you some overall and specific issues, but nohitter (an ex-BAT) has a better understanding than i do and now that your map's up to 50 SP, you could try poking a BAT to give you more advice. star priority generally doesn't mean anything as far as i've seen, but having this much usually puts map relatively high on the pending list and shows your dedication so mention that to the BAT and it's likely you'll find one to go over this map with you.

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hi, From my queue!

Your map is 'handsome' :3

[> General <]

1. - Do you even need the mapper's name on the background? I don't know if this is against the criteria, but this is just my opinion. o_o i like it

[> Normal <]

1. 00:12:164 (1) - Ctrl + G for a better diamond flow? And watch the spacing. going for a triangle rather, the slider is a separate pattern.
2. 00:16:093 (3) - Add clap done
3. 00:19:307 (6,7,8,1) - A bit boring when staying on one place of grid, Try making a Tornado formation here. And add NC on slider (6), new track. changed
4. 00:22:878 (5,3) - Don't know if this overlap tail is intentional, I perfer a stack here, watch the spacing. Also, add clap on slider tail. keep
5. 00:28:235 (6,7) - A little ugly blanket, unsharp slider? keep
6. 00:33:593 (3,4,1) - Make a Triangle form here? keep
7. 00:38:950 (3,4) - You broke the flow here, make a blanket or a parallel here, it doesn't play well imo. keep
8. 00:42:878 (1,2) - Since there is a downbeat here, swap NC fixed
9. 00:51:450 (1,2,3) - Overlap, remake as blanket. Also, remove clap on circle (2), I only hear vocal track, not the song track here. overlap is fine
10. 01:00:021 (1) - Make a blanket here? it might look better when you're make symmetry with the next notes on 01:00:735 (2,3) - keep
11. 01:22:521 (1) - Add clap fixed
12. 01:23:593 (4,8) - Same reason as 00:22:878 (5,3) - idk the combo you're linking to is weird
13. 01:25:378 (8,2) - You should've made a symmetry here... keep, not a fan of symmetry
14. - Some nazi issues, but nice diff!

[> Hard <]

1. 00:03:593 (1,2,3,4) - Good pattern, but it's not complete, Can't you curve the last slider for a full one? keep, it goes with the vocals
2. 00:04:664 (4,5) - This doesn't consider a jump, it's just a weird spacing when you've used 1.4x/1.5x spacing all the way here. Could you fix that? fixed!
3. 00:13:057 (2) - Curve this to blanket the next slider or try to flow with the previous slider. changed
4. 00:25:021 (1,1) - Likely an Overlap, try stacking the slider tail. too far apart to be an issue
5. 00:29:307 (1,2) - Make a parallel or symmetry here. keep~
6. 00:32:164 (1,2) - ^
7. 00:35:021 (1,2) - ^
8. 00:45:200 (7) - Add NC fixed
9. 00:48:950 (9,3) - Same as 00:25:021 (1,1) - keep, too far to actually be an issue
10. 00:51:807 (7) - Same reason as normal diff, remove clap. fixed
11. 01:01:450 (3) - Remove clap fixed
12. 01:02:343 (5) - Add NC fixed
13. 01:05:200 (5,6,7,8) - Looks bad, remake it perfectly. fixed
14. 01:17:700 (1,1) - Remove NCs, still on the same track, omg.. i wanna keep the effect of this
15. - Add claps > 00:08:950 (8) - / 00:30:021 (2) - / 00:31:093 / 00:31:807 (4) - / 00:32:521 (1) - / 00:33:235 (2) - / 00:35:378 (1) - / 00:36:093 (2) - / 00:36:807 (4) - / 00:37:521 (1) - / 00:38:235 (2) - / 00:38:950 (3) - / 00:39:664 (4) - / 01:23:235 (7) - / That's all~ fixed some! thanks!
16. - Well, pretty much a great diff, GJ!

Insanes are fine, I can feel this map should be ready for a BAT-mod, Try getting one!
And.. Good Luck!

INSANE
7 needs NC because SV change that is not natural. may help with the hp drain during silent section too
why SV change to slwoer section like 1 beat early?
NCS during the vocals jumps - best one NC every 4 circles
the triangular pattern with sliders really weird cuz they dont flow into each other at all
before kiai teh "DAKARA" should be the emphasized thing. there is an extra circle before that may want to be unNC'd or moved or something
during kiai there's a reverse slider that ends on downbeat sounds crap
NCs after kiai wat inconsistent with 1 bar pattern
ending weird NCs too

there's also a gross slider somewhere

HARD

NCS are gross all over the place
1/2 stack in very first section out of place much
a bunch of passive sliders n stuff. on vocals and downebats (downbeats more importnat but yeah)
some weird triangle thing NC would make spacing more readable
rhythms before kiai way too extreme cuz of the triples under slidesr
t eh dakara thing again
rhythms in kiai are really odd
after the spinner what is that rhythm
right before end silenter part, there's a triple vocal thing, then another triple vocal thing after 1 beat, but he has triple patterns separated by 1/2 beat and it is really stupid

testplay 2:
around 1/4 into it there's a weird wave slider that is kidn fo gross
the 2 reverse slidesrs somewhere in kiai that are parallel i read reallywrong every time

flip dat last slider so mouse drops into the curve

NORMAL

le wave and blanket stuff of it
the circle jump tthen stack thing hard read.
some square stuff is that a jump or something?
distance snap is not here or my keyboard is broken
doubles eww
dat slider
SV change in normal umm no
he's like skipping thedownbeat for the slow SV part and i dont get it
triple? just make it a 1/2 slider

rhythm is confusing af
stacks are confusing af

pishifat wrote:

shitmodfromm4m4m4n4nm434 uighi

i forgot to enable your custom combo colors so everything is green/blue in screenshots. oops

general

1. Ranking Criteria wrote:

   The lowest difficulty must be below 2.0 stars.

   ...so get an easy fuark

insane

1. in general, you've got a lot of passive sliders throughout the map. i won't point them all out, but they're rather uncomfortable to play, so you should be able to find them yourself.
2. 00:04:843 (7) - needs a NC because of the unexpected SV change. would help with hp drain during silent section as well
3. 00:07:878 (7,1) - shoudl swap NCs for the sake of your 1 measure combo pattern. makes it so the emphasis on the guitar thing on 7 is more clear
4. 00:13:414 (7,1) - pretty sure this was meant to stack, and if not, the game is making it stack, so move it more to the left
5. 00:24:843 (5,1) - sounds like the slider should be in 5's current posit...
6. 00:26:093 (1) - this SV change is definitely too early. it should be moved to the large white tick, since that's when the instrumental stuff actually gets softer or wahtever. right now you've got a reeeeaally passive slider that plays very unnaturally have this thingy going on for 2 diffs, trying to keep
7. 00:30:021 (5) - shoudl NC for the sake of readability. you did so at 00:32:878 (1) - as well
8. 00:33:593 (5) - ^
9. 00:40:735 (1,2,3) - i usually like these kinds of patterns, but these seem to not flow into each other at all. it's hard to say this, but hanzer does the same idea a whole lot better in miss you at 02:36:811 (1) - changed it up a little
10. 00:47:878 (6) - breaks your 1 NC every large white ticking comboing pattern. should have an NC
11. 00:51:450 (1,2) - you may want to even swap the NCs on these so the "dakara" vocals thing, which is obviously the focus there, is emphasized
12. 01:13:950 (1,9) - these should follow the same circular motion as the stream with their slider bodies. right now they're kind of... not
13. 01:21:985 (5) - breaks your about 1 NC every large white tick pattern. should have a NC
14. 01:26:450 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i know i'm mentioning NCs a lot, but i can't understand this very well. the circles are mapping the backbeat stuff, so it would make sense to NC according to that, which would mean 4 circles then NC instead of the 6 you have here for some reason. would look like this on the timeline with NCs following what you've mapped i have no idea what i was doing,

hard

1. passivesliderseverywhere
2. the NC pattern you're using is... uh... not a pattern. you're switching between one every downbeat to one every other downbeat so much that i can't interpret very well. it really should be consistent throughout the difficulty. redoing
3. 00:01:807 (3,4,1) - i honestly managed to misread this. it plays a lot better if you have the same spacing between each of them, meaning have all of it be jumps or all of it stacked. otherwise bleh
4. 00:24:485 (6) - passivesliderstuffs return.
5. 00:26:093 (1) - 00:37:521 (1) - same thing as insane keepo
6. 00:40:735 (1,2,3) - shouldn't these be spaced equally? they're the same slider and meant to be symmetrical (sort of), so yeah
7. 00:42:878 (1) - quite the jump for this difficulty. should really just have this between 00:42:164 (3) - and 00:43:057 (2) - instead of a stack, since that would fix things
8. 00:45:735 (4) - really wouldn't have this kind of a jump thing from 2x distance to 1x distance in a hard difficulty, but if you're really reluctant to change it, it needs an NC to show how it's differently spaced than the jumps at 00:45:200 (1,2,3) - , yet the same rhythm.
9. 00:49:843 (4,5,6) - rather difficult for a hard diff. i would really consider cutting back on this by ignoring the triples like you did for 00:49:485 (2,3) -
10. 00:51:450 (7) - may make more sense to do something like...
11. 01:13:593 (3,4,5) - don't really see the need for at triple here when it sounds the same as the rest of the 1/2 stuff
12. 01:17:700 (1,1,1) - managed to misread this during two testplays since the passiveness of 01:17:700 (1) - is so extreme and the random NCs wat removed NCs but i wanna keep the pattern.
13. 01:24:128 (2,3,4,5) - these played pretty weirdly...

normal

1. passive sliders are an issue here as well, especially in the section before the kiai. in normal they're often unavoidable, but there's a lot of avoidable ones here nonetheless
2. 00:00:736 (1,3) - visually speaking, these are... not appealing. blankets and stuff
3. 00:01:807 (2,3) - & 00:03:593 (1,2) - it's rather confusing having...
4. 00:18:593 (3,4,5) - what is this spacing? it is not spacing. that is what it is. wtf i have no idea
5. 00:20:735 (1,2) - watwatwat. distance snap kind of important which you already know
6. 00:26:093 - "you're gonna hate me but" having SV changes as variable as this in a normal is unheard of. if you can find me a normal diff that does this, i'll say otherwise, but i've never seen one. redid everything
7. 00:29:307 (1,2) - #spacing
8. 00:37:521 (1) - super strong beat in hte middle of the slider wat
9. 00:44:307 (2,3,4) - triples like this (i know it's not on 1/4, but still) are rather "hard" and should just have the first two circles replaced with a 1/2 slider
10. 01:11:807 (2,3) - stack like this would be very easily misinterpreted as 01:04:307 (2,3) - 's rhythm, so you should just space out 2,3 with distance snap magic

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Xinely wrote:

M4M from my Queue



pretty much fixed EVERYTHING, thanks for really good mod! remapped a lot of parts as well!

• 
  General

1. i don't find source which written tv size on title, i found http://vgmdb.net/album/47130 and just use "rashisa" so remove tv size from title and move it to tags instead below
2. if you don't fix above, at least write "らしさ ( TV Size) " to has consistency with Romanised title lol
3. remove pjecoo from tags, since you removed his/her easy diff
4. uh oh your normal diff higher than 2 stars. you should add Easy diff then here or make less 2 stars of Normal diff

• 
  Normal

1. 00:00:736 (1,3) - those claps here imo not really emphasize the music. the music just a cymbal so finishes are enough, i mean just remove the claps lol
2. 00:00:736 (1,3) - i'm sure there is still a way to make better blanket here, i can't give example since i'm bad at blanketing orz
3. 00:03:593 (1) - usually stack makes newbie become confuse so unstack it with move to 180,32
4. 00:04:843 - skipping cymbal here is bad since the cymbal is really loud :< , change the rhythm like http://puu.sh/aLRd8/a290c9cfdd.jpg instead
5. 00:06:450 (1) - i hear a cymbal sound at slider's head so add finish to emphasize it
6. 00:08:950 (5) - well just my taste but i kinda dislike how flow works here. i prefer to use circular flow instead by moving the circle to 436,176
7. 00:10:021 (2) - nazi, inconsistency spacing (1,07x) so please placed the slider with 1,0x spacing
8. 00:16:271 (4,5) - how about replace these circles with one slider instead since 00:16:450 - still has sound, imo slider fits the best here
9. 00:17:878 (1) - inconsistency spacing (1,26x) make sure use 1,0x o_o
10. 00:21:450 (2) - inconsistency spacing (1,09x) here
11. 00:24:843 (3) - the string sound is really loud here. use finish to emphasize it?
12. 00:26:093 (1) - inconsistency spacing again, altho for blanket, you should use consistent spacing
13. 00:26:450 (2) - finish here. cymbal
14. 00:26:093 (1,2) - swap the NC. yeah nazi but the music has changed on the stanza
15. 00:27:164 - the time has so loud drum sound here. add clap here and remove clap on 00:27:521 - . yeah making inconsistency but the music forces it
16. 00:28:593 - same as above, remove clap on 00:28:950 - and add to 00:28:593 -
17. 00:32:878 - and 00:34:307 - are you sure to skip map this time? have loud drum sounds here. i would say to map these times
18. 00:37:878 - finish here, as usual cymbal appearing
19. 00:37:878 (1) - hmm imo the slider can be neater here, hmm try blanketing instead http://puu.sh/aMdJX/77959708b8.jpg ?
20. 00:44:307 (2) - both head and tail have inconsistency spacing. use 1,0x instead please
21. 00:47:878 (4,5) - how about make a blanket pattern here? ofc the design will be neater and the flow will be better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1910682
22. 00:51:450 (1) - give a little rest after spin at least 2/1 gap, so here i would suggest to remove 00:51:450 (1,2) - these circles
23. 01:03:235 (6) - please avoid to stack pattern on Normal, it hard to read :< https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1910693
24. 01:04:307 (2) - avoid the stack too
25. 01:13:235 (5) - ctrl+G to has better flow here, i mean more natural flow? lol
26. 01:17:164 (1) - remove this note. please give 2/1 gap of rhythm for little rest after spin
27. 01:19:664 (1) - avoid stack too. also has inconsistency spacing (1,06x) here
28. 01:20:735 - finish because cymbal lol
29. 01:21:093 (3) - oh 320,180 for better blanket with previous :<
30. 01:21:807 (4) - if you agree with above, 220,120 and fix next inconsistency spacing lol
31. 01:23:593 (4) - finish on head too since i heard cymbal
32. 01:26:450 (1,3) - please avoid the stack
33. 01:28:593 (5) - so nazi, 344|284 for better blanket

• 
  Hard

1. would be better to have same HP and OD here for consistency. how about HP OD 5,5?
2. 00:00:736 (1) - the flow from this slider to next slider is bad. just an easy solution, flip this slider with ctrl+J, should be as 00:00:736 (1) -
3. 00:03:593 (1,2,3,4) - nazi, better blanket please :< https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1910727
4. 00:07:164 (3) - i guess this slider is too closer with next slider. move to 156,264 instead to make neater placement
5. 00:08:771 (8) - please forget the normal spacing and move to 224,256. too closer again with previous and next objects
6. 00:10:021 (3) - try to make the shape of this slider same with previous and next sliders so it would be look neater here? http://puu.sh/aMfij/19c51672b8.jpg
7. 00:13:057 (2) - nazi, this slider would be better to play if has same spacing from previous to next. move to 288,268 instead o3o
8. 00:16:450 (4,5,6) - oh you can make better blanket again here. i mean like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1910948
9. 00:18:235 (3) - the idea is good but too close pattern here, kinda messy. you can make it neater with move to 384,148
10. 00:18:950 (5) - here too. 272,276 :>
11. 00:24:843 (1) - finish on head please. that cymbal :<
12. 00:26:450 - here too. finish because cymbal
13. 00:43:593 - finish too :<
14. 00:46:450 - the string sound on this map is really loud imo. i guess map this time please. just use circle from 00:46:271 - and 1/2 slider on 00:46:450 - would be fine
15. 00:47:521 (4,5) - too close with previous too. 1 grid down :> , if you fix this one 00:48:235 (6,7) - 1 grid down too
16. 00:49:307 (1) - finish again, cymbal
17. 00:56:271 (4) - finish on head too, cymbal
18. 00:56:271 (4) - also the flow is kinda bad here. try rotate -30 degree of clockwise and arrange like http://puu.sh/aMkhp/1c65726775.jpg
19. 00:57:700 (6) - wrong rhythm here since 00:57:878 - has a cymbal. do this http://puu.sh/aMkmW/3ea8fd3c60.jpg instead
20. 00:58:771 (3) - too close again. please make neater this design, try move to 468,148 and 00:59:128 (4) - 288,88
21. 01:06:807 (2,3) - too close each other too. please increase the spacing slightly
22. 01:09:843 (1) - too close, move to 104,272
23. 01:14:396 (1) - aw too curvy, hard to read. try http://puu.sh/aMkA2/a5ff363d31.jpg would be fine
24. Not bad but some patterns still can improved a lot here, i don't mention all hitsounds here so please fixed hitsound that you've fixed from Normal

• 
  Insane

1. OD-1 so OD 7 instead. OD 8 too high here nope, keep!
2. 00:03:771 (2) - oh overlapped with 00:04:128 (4) - :< , please avoid it. move the circle 00:03:771 (2) - 232,212 instead
3. 00:09:128 (5) - stack feels too easy to play in this insane actually, i prefer to unstack by moving the circle to 228,344
4. 00:12:164 (1) - i kinda disagree with no jump at the stanza(cymbal too) so i would suggest to use https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1911087 for jump and better flow to
5. actually this diff is fine but still has some improvement that i guess i already say too much in Hard diff. so just try analyze more to make the diff become neater? i'm tired actually *fainted*

[/notice]

sorry to give quick checking on 2 of last diffs. i'm totally tired orz
oh make sure you fix the diffs name http://puu.sh/aMkHe/40962b7035.png

Good Luck then

Xanandra wrote:

fixed most~

[Insane]

Minor hitsounds suggestions:

00:50:200 - Add clap
00:50:378 (9) - Take out clap
00:50:735 - Add clap

[Hard]

00:35:378 - Missing clap?
00:36:093 - Missing clap?
01:04:664 (4) - Slider should start at 01:04:843 - just like you did with 01:07:700 (5) -
01:13:235 - Missing clap?
01:13:950 - Missing clap?

[Normal]

00:19:307 (1) - The fact that youre using this slider this way, kinda shows that you tried to follow the vocals, but I think you did it wrong, since the vocals actually lands at 00:19:575 - and 00:19:843 - (basically extend slider by 1/4 tick, if you do so, dont forget to adjust hitsounds) remap
00:51:807 (2) - Id delete this beat, its a filler beat, and it can easily make players confused, so just delete it to avoid that. Actually, if you could end spinner at 00:51:450 - as well, would be perfect
01:27:521 - Missing clap?
01:27:878 - Take out clap?
01:28:593 - Take out clap too?

[Easy]

00:40:735 (1,2,3,4) - Add finish on all the slider starts? Seems like you half done these hitsounds since you put the finishes on your other diffs, except this one. Anyways, for next time theres an app that can help you with that: t/131540
00:49:307 (1) - Same comment about the spinner from normal diff. In the end should look like this: http://puu.sh/aNr93/9006dcb8a9.jpg

Midge wrote:

here for the m4m

[Easy]

00:10:735 (3) - idk about this slider, it's very 2007-esque. a regular curve would be more recent (and cooler) but this is really just up to you. i think its fine, altho looking pretty old :I
00:17:521 (4) - this blanket can be improved (move to x:236 y:57) use approach circles when making blankets nazi
00:52:164 (1) - have this slider be at the same angle as 00:53:593 (1) eg: http://puu.sh/aQmzd/a88ceb97f6.jpg
01:23:235 (4,2) - wonky overlap :S move 1 over to the right, than adjust to mantain ds http://puu.sh/aQmI2/91cd19e9d7.jpg

[Normal]

00:23:593 (1) - this has to be moved down, as it overlaps the hp bar
00:24:843 (3) - don't do this, just use one anchor point http://puu.sh/aQn0V/9a020557a6.jpg keeping since there's nothing wrong with current slider
00:53:950 (4,5,6) - ds inconsistency here

[Hard]

00:16:628 (5) - i suggest ncing this
00:17:164 (7) - ^
01:05:378 (6,7,8) - space evenly to make a nicer triangle http://puu.sh/aQnna/be2d2ef089.jpg
01:14:128 (5,1) - confusing, just use 1 repeating slider, or two with the same amount of repeats

there's a large amount of ds inconstency. it's ok in hards in small doses, but there is a lot in this diff that leaves it looking kinda sloppy and hard to read.

[Insane]

(superficially) fine imo :S finally all the work i put into this diff shows LOL

Solid map, keep working on it.

Learning25 wrote:

[Insane]

1. ASDLKFJALKSD THIS MAP IS SO MUCH FUN!!!!! It's going to be hard to find bad things
2. 00:42:878 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Right now the steam looks like this nah!~
3. 01:14:218 (2) - should move up ~12 grids (y=80) so that it flows with the curve better.
4. 01:27:878 (1,2,3,4) - Here I think you should keep the same jump pattern you were using in the last two gonna keep~
5. I think that's it, really nice difficulty, really fun to play.

[Hard]

1. Great map as well.
2. HP feels a lot nicer at 5.5 a lot of NC, maybe change if more complains
3. I think this 00:11:985 (6) should be moved closer to 00:12:164 (1) , and have the 6 start the combo, because the vocal line is leading into that slider.
4. Really like the end slider at 01:28:950 (2). ds is fine, plus i'm following backbeat
5. Hitsounds sound great. Really nice use of the claps.
6. Your jumps are really fun to play, and easy to follow, great job!

[Normal]

1. 00:01:807 (2) - I'd put this away from the slider, like what you have at 00:04:664 (2,3).
2. 01:11:807 (2,3) - ^
3. 00:43:057 - I think 50% is too loud for the claps :S constant in diffs

[Easy]

1. 01:15:200 (1) - This spinner ends too quick for an easy map. it is fine

I feel like I hardly helped at all, but this is a really good mapset. You're a great mapper, hope to see it ranked~ thank you! thanks for the compliemtns

Inyuschan wrote:

Hi, from my queue o3o

General:

1. Disable Widescreen Support in Easy, you don't have SB.

Easy:

1. 00:52:164 (1) - Add finish o3o
2. 00:53:593 (1) - Remove NC.
3. 00:55:021 (2) - Then add NC~

Normal:

1. 00:23:593 (1) - Fix this: http://puu.sh/aW191/220110fb76.jpg Is touching scorebar ;_; so sad, i already change before. some people scorebar too big
2. 00:37:878 (1) - Better something like this? http://puu.sh/aW1dh/4e53552b35.jpg i like it str8
3. 01:19:664 (1, 2) - Add NC in (2) instead of (1).

Hard:

1. 00:17:164 (1) - Remove NC. i was afraid the spacing would be a problem, idk changing for now
2. 01:20:735 (7, 1) - Add NC in (7) instead of (1).

Insane:

1. 00:01:985 (7, 1) - NC in (7).
2. 00:42:164 (3) - NC. drain is not that bad

That's all, good luck.

Kazuya wrote:

Hi. It's only ideas!

Insane: 2.0 SV? Exra: 1.80 SV? Okay...

[Insane]

00:10:378 (5) - Delete slider, and add circle here: 00:10:378 - . Move 00:10:735 (1) - slider here: 00:10:557 - , and change slider end here: 00:10:914 - Timeline: http://puu.sh/aW3nj/f2809319b6.jpg Sounds better. interesting idea, however percussion at 00:10:557 - is ignored, which i don't want.
00:11:807 (4,5) - CTRL + G not feeling it
00:12:164 (1) - CTRL + G nah~ prefer current pattern
----------
00:16:628 (1) - Remove circle.
00:16:271 (6) - Add once repeat.
00:16:807 (7) - Add NC
Timeline: http://puu.sh/aW3sy/78f14b5b23.jpg sorry but the beat at 00:16:628 (1) is really important.
-----------
00:31:093 (2) - Two circle is better! vocals
00:38:235 (2,3) - Move here: 00:38:414 - and put circle here: 00:38:235 - Timeline: http://puu.sh/aW3zP/8fc0b9a32b.jpg sliderend on 00:38:593 - which is bad, powerful drum
01:01:628 (4) - Move circle here: x: 392 y: 296 keeping pattern
01:10:378 (5) - Remove slider, put circle here: 01:10:378 -,and move 01:10:735 (1) - slider here: 01:10:557 - . Put circle here: 01:11:271 - Timeline: http://puu.sh/aW3Hs/164a1dc343.jpg Sounds better! (Vocal) really good, thanks!
01:15:200 (1) - Please, map these parts! Spinner is not good in this area! keeping unless its a really big issue

[Hard]
AR: 7!

00:08:236 (2) - Two circle is better! nope
00:13:057 (2) - Remove slider, and put circle here: 00:13:235 - not fitting
00:17:521 (3) - Two circle is better! why though
01:15:021 (1) - Please, map these parts! Spinner is not good in this area! same as insane
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01:18:057 (2) - Remove circle, and move 01:17:700 (1) - slider here: 01:17:878 - Sounds better! vocals on blue tick, no change
01:18:235 (2,3) - Replace them.Timeline: http://puu.sh/aW417/17a1f42e2e.jpg nah
----
01:25:378 (1) - Please, map these parts! Spinner is not good in this area! nothing to map to

[Normal]

00:22:164 (3) - add clap the slider end.
00:24:664 (2) - ^
01:13:235 (5) - Add clap, the slider head.
01:13:771 (6) - Add clap. SLider end.
01:24:307 (5) - ^
01:25:378 (7,1) - Hmm? 1.45 Distance? Unranked! Please, use 1.0x distance!

[Easy]

Good.


Good Luck. (And sorry, my english is horrible)

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Hello, from my queue, no kd please.

Here is a screenshot of my score, first play.

SPOILER

• 
  
  This looks fine for ranking anyway.
  I don't especially find it interesting, they are things which could be improved. i'll just leave few suggestions here.

1. 00:10:735 (1,2) - They are not the same slider, it could be better if you use the same slider for this kind of pattern, where the "rotate by"' tool is used. don't know how i skipped this..
2. 00:13:414 (7,1) - it could be better if you unstack these objects, for different reasons. a stack here looks out of place since you didnt stack here for patterns earlier and later. And Unstacking here will allow you to emphasize this strong note here 00:13:593 (1) -
3. 00:52:164 (1,2) - starting a kiai part with two 1/2 reversed slider is weird, because they are easy to handle and, they are not really difficult. You should try something else, which has more density and more suitable like circles instead as you did for you patterns before.
4. 01:12:343 - this tick is really audible, and when playing, i feel this is empty here, this tick should be played or followed.
   
   
   Rhythm could be improved in the calm part
5. For example, this tick 00:39:485 - which could be played because you hear a strong note.
   You could make an interresting rhythm here, and 1/2 sounds like spam.

I hope it was helpful. thanks!

rui wrote:

M4M

[Normal]

1. 01:09:307 (2) - add clap end of slider

[Hard]

1. 00:04:664 (4,5) - How about this? http://puu.sh/b00Jc.jpg nah, i want keep calm
2. 00:45:380 (3) - Unsnapped circle
3. 00:07:164 (3,4,5,6,7) - I feel miscellaneous. It is a proposal of placement no thanks
   

   156,264,7164,2,0,P|168:304|220:340,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   316,240,7521,2,0,P|284:244|248:256,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   348,160,7878,2,0,P|380:156|416:144,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   272,140,8235,2,0,P|253:113|224:88,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   292,216,8593,2,0,P|278:245|270:282,2,70,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

4. 00:13:057 (2) - (nazi) use 00:13:414 (3)'s AR as shown http://puu.sh/b01TJ.jpg keep straight
5. 00:13:950 (1,2,3,4) - I feel miscellaneous too. How about this? http://puu.sh/b01ZU.jpg don't like neat!
6. 01:21:271 (1) - remove NC
7. 01:20:735 (1,1) - 01:20:735 (1) move (316,284) 01:21:450 (2) - move (248,68) nah!
8. 01:24:307 (3) - end of the slider is next white line keep~

[Insane]

1. 00:01:450 (4) - (nazi) move (152,220) following 00:01:807 (6,1) -
2. 00:11:807 (4,5) - 00:11:807 (4) move (248,348) 00:11:985 (5) move (168,236) http://puu.sh/aZX9v.jpg actually i changed the whole thing, i don't like line pattern~
3. 00:26:450 (1,2,3) - keep distance is better imo. so move (380,68). How about this ? http://puu.sh/aZXxw.jpg
4. 00:34:307 (4) - remove NC ?
5. 00:34:664 (5) - (nazi) bending slider is better remapped
6. 00:43:503 (10) - keep distance 0.7
7. 00:50:735 (1) - remove NC
8. 00:50:914 (2) - add NC

Good luck

TT Mouse wrote:

Hi ！
from paper modding team

[nomarl＆easy]

good diff tyty


[hard]

00:56:807 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hard for this diff reduce the ds please no thanks, even hard must have a 'hard part'


[Insane]

00:03:593 (1,2,3,4) - ↓ good for flow good flow but i don't think it fit vocal well~
00:06:628 (2,4) - ctrl+g is better , sorry, same as ^

00:13:057 (1) - NC ? no need, drain is also ok

00:15:378 (2,3) - ctrl+g ^ hmm, current one better.

00:26:271 (8) - 208 314 better ds

00:32:878 (1,2) - ctrl+g ^ applied this, change a little

00:57:343 (3,4) - ↓ good for flow
00:58:772 (3,4) - ^

\ rank please / ty!!