1. Easy (1.41 stars, 216 notes)
2. Hard (3.03 stars, 385 notes)
3. Insane (3.74 stars, 551 notes)
4. Normal (1.81 stars, 266 notes)

This is a Chinese classical music;
People in our country think the flowers symbolize the happiness.So i make my patterns look like the flowers.I call them "Flower pattern";
wish you like my map

这是一首中国古典音乐；
我们国家视花朵为幸福与快乐的象征，所以我的梗做起来像花瓣组成的花朵，我亲切地称她们为"花梗"；
希望大家喜欢我的图集

CalignoBot wrote:

Easy

One thing I've noticed is that there are a few points where you have significant jumps throughout the map when you have half notes, but other times it follows the standard pattern you've been following for the rest of the map. It's not consistent.
00:37:305 (7) - Jump
02:10:639 (2) - Not Jump
I would switch this so that it's a jump during Kiai time (and increase the spacing slightly in general) and not a jump outside of kiai time.I agree,i wanna make one slider instead of this jump;I think its too hard for beginners if i increase the spacing.

03:06:353 (1) - I'm not a fan of this note. The map works fine without it and it could issues for newer players because of full screen spinning.alright,I have removed this circle.

Hitsounds are all the same throughout the song. It could help to soften the non-kiai sections.Honest to say,i have no idea about hitsounds.

Normal

02:11:353 (3) - This note doesn't appear in any other pattern in the map. Bit out of place.I have removed this,feel better now.

The same problem with kiai time is here as in the last one. It's exactly the same as the rest of the song. Hitsound suggestion works here, but one other thing you could try is changing the style for kiai time. Having more notes in each pattern would work.hmm...you are right,i gonna set hitsounds during kiai time.I don't want to chang my kiai style,Normal is also one diff for beginners , i have no plan to make it harder.

Hard

You have several pattern styles going on in this map. What you could try is pairing them up so they appear in small groups before moving on to another one. The pattern ideas that you have throughout the map work, but they aren't organized well enough yet.
00:17:305 (3) - This combo and the next one are a good example of this. Those two patterns in a row sound wrong to me in a part of the song where the first directly connects to the second in the song itself.fixed

00:21:115 (7) - Don't be afraid to add spinners after notes like these.added

As an addition to the first suggestion:
00:30:639 (1) - This would be a fantastic set to start having predominantly this type of pattern.
00:45:877 (1) - This is a great time to have mostly the stream sections, which you have done.
01:01:115 (1) - This would start the 1/8 note patterns, etc.I try to start the 1/8 but it sounds not good:(
If you apply this type of thinking to the entire map, I believe it would flow much better.

You did great with kiai time in this difficulty.thank you

Good luck!

Shirayuki wrote:

Nice song, nice timing and nice map.I m very glad you like this song

Here are my suggestions:

[Metadata]
I think:
1st kiai starts at 01:16:353 and ends at 01:31:591
2nd kiai starts at 02:17:305 and ends at 02:32:543
3rd kiai starts at 02:55:401 and ends at 03:09:686
I am very grateful you can point out the kiai time carefully.but this Chinese classical music' theme is "happy".
People in my country call it "huanqin" or "huankuai".I think my kiai has a lively rhythm.So i choose the time as my kiai...

Hard

00:16:353 (2) - New combofixed
00:17:305 (3) - NCfixed
00:23:972 (2) - NCfixed
00:24:686 (3) - NCfixed
00:31:591 (3) - NCfixed
00:32:543 (5) - NCfixed
00:39:210 (3) - NCfixed
00:40:162 (5) - NCfixed
00:43:972 (6) - NCfixed
00:59:686 (9) - NCfixed
01:02:067 (3) - NCfixed
01:03:020 (5) - NCfixed
01:06:829 (5) - NCfixed
01:09:686 (3) - NCfixed
01:10:639 (5) - NCfixed
01:16:115 (8) - Maybe move it to the left, above 6 to complete a tornado jump? (I call it that way ok)tornado jump...LOL...Honest to say your idea pretty good.but i have no enough place to put 8 above 6..
01:17:305 (2) - NCfixed
01:18:258 (3) - NCfixed
01:22:067 (10) - NCfixed
01:25:877 (4) - NCfixed
01:29:686 (10) - NCfixed
01:44:924 (9) - NCfixed
01:59:210 (4) - NCfixed
02:00:162 (7) - NCfixed
02:01:115 (10) - NCfixed
02:03:020 (2) - NCfixed
02:03:972 (3) - NCfixed
02:10:639 (2) - NCfixed
02:11:591 (4) - NCfixed
02:15:401 (7) - NCfixed
02:18:258 (2) - NCfixed
02:19:210 (3) - NCfixed
02:25:877 (2) - NCfixed
02:26:829 (3) - NCfixed
02:48:734 (3) - NCfixed
02:49:686 (5) - NCfixed
02:53:496 (5) - NCfixed
02:56:353 (2) - NCfixed
02:57:067 (3) - NCfixed
03:01:115 (8) - NCfixed

Also you should change the patern at the later half of the song, it feels a bit repetitive for me.Oops..you caught me finally.I have to say i m so lazy to think some new pattern.But i really don't have better idea to make it has difference with the same rhythm.

Normal

00:16:353 (2) - New Combofixed
00:17:305 (3) - NCfixed
00:19:210 (6) - NCfixed
00:20:639 (9) - NCfixed
00:23:972 (2) - NCfixed
00:24:924 (3) - NCfixed
00:26:829 (6) - NCfixed
00:28:258 (9) - NCfixed
00:32:543 (3) - NCfixed
00:33:496 (4) - NCfixed
00:36:353 (4) - NCfixed
00:39:210 (3) - NCfixed
00:40:162 (5) - NCfixed
00:43:972 (5) - NCfixed
00:44:924 (6) - NCfixed
00:59:686 (5) - NCfixed
01:02:067 (2) - NCfixed
01:03:020 (3) - NCfixed
01:06:829 (5) - NCfixed
01:09:686 (2) - NCfixed
01:10:639 (3) - NCfixed
01:17:305 (2) - NCfixed
01:18:258 (3) - NCfixed
01:22:067 (5) - NCfixed
01:24:924 (2) - NCfixed
01:25:877 (3) - NCfixed
01:29:686 (5) - NCfixed
01:42:067 (1) - Change it back to the previous combofixed
01:44:924 (5) - New Combofixed
01:59:210 (3) - NCfixed
02:00:162 (5) - NCfixed
02:01:115 (7) - NCfixed
02:03:020 (2) - NCfixed
02:03:972 (3) - NCfixed
02:06:829 (3) - NCfixed
02:07:782 (5) - NCfixed
02:10:639 (2) - NCfixed
02:11:591 (3) - NCfixed
02:14:448 (3) - NCfixed
02:15:401 (5) - NCfixed
02:18:258 (2) - NCfixed
02:19:210 (3) - NCfixed
02:25:877 (2) - NCfixed
02:26:829 (3) - NCfixed
02:29:686 (3) - NCfixed
02:40:162 (4) - NCfixed
02:43:972 (4) - NCfixed
02:48:734 (3) - NCfixed
02:49:686 (5) - NCfixed
02:53:496 (5) - NCfixed
02:56:353 (2) - NCfixed
02:57:305 (3) - NCfixed
03:01:115 (5) - NCfixed
03:02:543 (1) - Change this back to the previous combofixed

Normal

00:16:353 (2) - New Combofixed
00:17:305 (3) - NCfixed
00:19:210 (5) - NCfixed
00:23:972 (2) - NCfixed
00:24:924 (3) - NCfixed
00:26:829 (5) - NCfixed
00:32:543 (2) - NCfixed
00:34:448 (4) - NCfixed
00:36:353 (6) - NCfixed
00:39:210 (2) - NCfixed
00:40:162 (3) - NCfixed
00:42:067 (5) - NCfixed
00:43:972 (7) - NCfixed
01:02:067 (2) - NCfixed
01:03:020 (3) - NCfixed
01:06:829 (4) - NCfixed
01:09:686 (2) - NCfixed
01:10:639 (3) - NCfixed
01:17:305 (2) - NCfixed
01:18:258 (3) - NCfixed
01:22:067 (5) - NCfixed
01:24:924 (2) - NCfixed
01:25:877 (3) - NCfixed
01:29:686 (5) - NCfixed
01:36:353 (1) - Change it back to the previous combofixed
01:44:924 (5) - New combofixed
01:51:591 (1) - Change it back to the previous combofixed
01:59:210 (2) - New combofixed
02:00:162 (3) - NCfixed
02:01:115 (4) - NCfixed
02:03:020 (2) - NCfixed
02:10:639 (2) - NCfixed
02:11:591 (3) - NCfixed
02:18:258 (2) - NCfixed
02:19:210 (3) - NCfixed
02:23:496 (4) - NCfixed
02:25:877 (2) - NCfixed
02:26:829 (3) - NCfixed
02:28:734 (6) - NCfixed
02:37:305 (1) - Change this back to the previous combofixed
02:48:734 (2) - New combofixed
02:49:687 (3) - NCfixed
02:53:496 (4) - NCfixed
02:56:353 (2) - NCfixed
02:57:306 (3) - NCfixed
03:01:115 (4) - NCfixed

This is a nice song ;w;Thx a lot!!

cmn_891127 wrote:

Hi, pandorawindy

大爱欢沁~~A~

[Hard]
00:21:353 (1) - end at 00:22:543fixed
00:28:972 (1) - samefixed
01:30:639 (3) - how about curve this silder这里我曾有过类似的想法，不过变弯之后总觉得有点别扭，因为大提琴的声音我配的是直滑条，恰好这里是大提琴的最后一声
01:39:210 (1) - 01:42:067 (6) - 虽然是左右翻转了，但是还是有重复的感觉，可以再换一下摆位已修改，搞了个90度旋转...
01:43:020 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - ellipse not a circle改成圆形了，不过为什么我觉得缺少了什么..柔美？还是错觉？
02:08:020 (1) - samefixed
02:40:162 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 依然是重复的问题90度旋转..
02:58:734 (x) - recommend you to add a note here, or reverse the slider before改成折回滑条了.

[Normal]
01:49:686 (3) - out the windowfixed
02:43:972 (1) - 三个不连续重叠，这个好难看清，可以错位一下fixed

[Easy]
01:32:543 (3) - touch the scorebarfixed
01:47:781 (3) - samefixed

yf_bmp wrote:

Hi~
这里是M4M

[Hard]
在这首音乐里 音效是需要加强的 这样才能让这张图凸显出最好的部分
如果还不知道怎么灵活配音效的话可以尝试非kiai部分在2,4拍放whistle, 因为这首里面2,4拍也是有重音的
在kiai部分可以在00:46:591 (5,6) - 这两个地方放whistle 类似的还有 00:47:543 (11,1) - 00:48:496 (5,6) - 等等
全都照做了，加了whistle
另外感觉有些3/4放的不妥 比如:
00:17:305 (1,2) - 这个可以放成一个1/1滑条fixed
00:24:924 (2,3) - ^fixed
00:43:972 (1,2) - 这个不如改成一个1/2滑条 然后后面放两个1/4的note 这样还会更合曲fixed
01:06:829 (1,2) - ^fixed
01:03:972 (3) - 1/2fixed
01:11:591 (3) - ^fixed
02:00:162 (1) - ^ 因为这里的节奏有变确实有变，fixed

有些滑条太弯了感觉,比如 02:49:686 (1,2) - 可以包围的更好略修改了一下

其他的一些
01:06:115 - 感觉漏音added one circle
01:44:924 (1,2,3,4,5) - 可以换个方式 不然梗太重复了没意思换了pattern
02:23:020 (1,2,3,4) - 中间还是有很多节奏的 再听听其实这一点我同意，但是我喜欢从player的角度来分析map，我的该diff里没有break time，但是歌曲却有3分多钟，此段前有两个kiai连一起，打完会比较疲惫。毕竟diff还是hard。综上考虑，我还是利用这段时间休息一下，不做过多的move和hit。
02:55:401 (1) - 滑条尾消音fixed
02:56:353 (1) - ^fixed
03:01:829 - 03:02:305 - 可以加些什么same as the next one
03:03:020 (1,1) - 这两个转盘感觉不如去掉, 音乐本身有很多节奏可以做的
最后的一段章节，我真的很希望只跟主旋律节奏。做地图，其实我很容易就会失手做的很困难..所这次我经常提醒自己只是在做hard..在做hard...not insane..转盘我是跟着大提琴的声音去做的..
感觉很多节奏都没下上 特别是这一段: 02:17:305 - 02:31:353
做的时候可以多听听副轨 不一定非只跟着主调来做的 这样节奏会更充实些我会失手做成insane的，相信我

[Normal]
00:43:972 (1,2) - normal里不出现这种遮挡会友善点fixed
00:54:448 (3,1,2,3) - ^fixed
01:06:829 (1,3) - ^fixed
01:40:162 (3,1,2,3) - ^fixed
01:55:401 (3,1,2,3) - ^fixed
02:23:020 (1,2) - ^ 而且这种感觉也不太好看fixed
02:29:686 (1,3) - 遮挡问题fixed
02:41:115 (3,1,2,3) - ^fixed
02:55:401 (1,1) - 添加折返节奏会常规一些 毕竟是normal...全都改了，很好很重要的建议

[Easy]
00:36:353 (1,2) - 遮挡问题 可以把00:37:782 (2) - 叠在00:38:258 (1) - 头上fixed
00:43:972 (1,2) - 遮挡.. 但是(2)也不建议叠在后面一个上面 干脆不要叠了吧fixed
00:52:543 (3,1,2,3,1,2) - 好难fixed
01:11:591 (3,1) - 你懂的fixed
01:22:067 (1,1) - ^all fixed

大概就是这些了 有什么需要加深理解的地方可以pm我 希望对你有所帮助

chaee wrote:

From: chaee's queue [NM 5/5] Status: closed
Thanks for stopping by

[Easy]

Nice hitsoundingThx

00:21:115 (3) - Instead of a note i think you could put a slider here instead and end at 00:22:067 (3) - unreasonable with the rhythm,if create one slider instead the circle,the slider ll too long.
00:26:829 (1) - Is this a duplicate of 00:24:924 (1) - ? It doesn't look right to meI like copy and past in my Easy diff
00:28:734 (3) - Slider maybe?sry no
01:06:829 (4) - NCfixed


[Normal]

00:33:258 (2) - I think you should add a note here. It feels emptyIts just normal diff,so its normal that i missed some beats from rhythm.
00:40:162 (1,2) - BlanketI have no plan to make too many blankets in my easy or normal diff.Blankets are too hard as beginners.
01:06:829 (1) - Fix so it blankets nicely with 01:05:877 (3) - ^
01:55:401 (3,1,2) - Fix stackit is my pattern.
02:29:686 (1,2) - Blanket 2 with 1^
02:36:829 (2) - Move down a bitfixed thx

[Hard]

00:27:782 (5,6) - Fix blanketno this is my following pattern
00:33:496 (3,4,5) - Move down a bitfixed
00:38:258 (1,2,1,2) - You could blanket thesepattern
00:54:448 (6,1,2) - Fix stack^

That's it. Nicely mappedThx for modding and playing

VeZaaRa wrote:

In general: You use a lot of kiai. Maybe you should remove this kiai section:01:31:591 - 01:42:782I like using kiai where the rhythm samed.

Normal: 02:03:972 (1,2) - Adjust those objects a little to make it look nicer.fixed

Couldn't find any other flaws but I hope this will help you a little. thx man,your suggestion is very helpful.

Shirayuki wrote:

10/10 good idea, idk if you can make an insane difficulty out of this though ;w;

After you're done, I'll mod it again!

Neil Watts wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue~

[Easy]
- 00:15:401 (1,1) - why always these new combos?I don't know either.My friend recommended me to set them.
- 00:24:924 (1,2) - blanket here?no,Easy diff ll be too hard to read for beginners if i make too many blankets.
- 00:26:829 (1,2) - ^^
- 00:49:686 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - change the patternsounds good.But i have no better idea to change them right now.Maybe beginners love more repetitions.
- 01:35:400 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^^
- 01:50:638 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^^
- 02:21:591 (2,3) - blanket?no
- 02:36:352 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - change the pattern^
- 03:06:829 (1,1,2,3) - too hard for an Easy diff. I don't know if you can rank this.you r right,but i am really hardly to find some thing to replace this pattern,If more people suggest it,i ll fix them.thx

[Normal]
- 00:43:972 (1,2) - avoid stackingfixed
- 00:49:686 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - change patternhave no better idea now
- 01:08:258 (3,1) - maybe avoid stacking?fixed
- 01:26:829 (3,3) - stack hereno,it ll be hard to read for beginners
- 01:35:400 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - patternno better idea
- 01:50:639 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^^
- 02:13:496 (1,1) - stack themfixed
- 02:13:972 (2,2) - ^fixed

[Hard]
AR8 for a Hard diff? Your diff looks more like an Insane.yeah,i gotta rename this to insane,and i ll add one hard diff recently.
- 00:51:829 (2,4,7,9) - hard to readfixed
- 01:54:448 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^i guess this is not a problem if i rename this to insane.
- 02:01:829 (4,1) - blanket ?i try to do this,but i don't like.
- 02:40:162 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hard to read^^
- 02:55:401 (1,1) - I know you love sliders, but here, you don't think that's too much? ._.listen to the flute.

That's all what I can find.
Good luck

Shirayuki wrote:

To be honest 3.44 is totally within hard range, I'd say that map is totally fine being a hard difficulty.

But more difficulties are always welcomed, it will add more variety to the song! And yes, I will totally mod this for you, because this song is soooo nice ;w;

cmn_891127 wrote:

[General]
add tag: 琵琶相, 蒋彦, 二胡, 琵琶
笛子不是主要乐器

[New Hard]
02:07:782 (1,1) - why not map here 添加了一些物件
02:40:400 (2) - out the window 额..太大意了
00:27:781 (1) - left and up 1 gridfixed
00:54:448 (4,2) - overlap, let the reverse point of (2) lower解决了

nice mapset~

Shirayuki wrote:

Hello friend

AS promised, here are my suggestions for your new hard difficulty:

Hi friend,I was a little busy in last few days,i left my city last week,but now i am back.this is the reason why i didn't reply you first time.I am really very sorry about this point .Please forgive me,Dear friend.

[My diffs]

• 
  

1. First things first,I have remapped. All the diffs have been reset. I increased my notes' spacing(normal&hard&insane).And my sliders' sv is faster(easy&insane).
2. my diffs' difficulty have been increased.(easy: 1.22 1.41)(normal: 1.70 1.81)(hard: 2.34 3.03)(insane: 3.44 3.74)
3. I spent a lot of energy on my insane and hard.I tried to add more patterns instead of the repetitive stuff.Now i think my insane and hard are more playable and interesting.
4. I reset all diffs' notes' placement.So now better flow and better blanket.
5. finally,I am really looking forward to you can download and play my new diffs again.

[Hard]
You did a great job on the combo lol, I really couldn't find anything to change. Nice one thx

The later half of the map's paterns seems to be reused too many time though, maybe you can change it for more variety? For example
02:28:734 (1,2,3,4) - This patern is used a lot, maybe change it to something like
It looks like a flower ... sort of ... I think ... maybe ...haha..good idea.it is beautiful.

The paterns used in kiai, after the 2nd kiai these paterns become really repetitive fixed..a little..

Also, your paterns generally all flow in one direction, like clockwise / anti clockwise, maybe adding some sudden change of flow? Like added some new variety.

Also I think you should add Whistle hitsounds to the beginning of your combo, it sounds better imo.Qthers have different opinion,hmm...If i have better idea i ll fix it.

[Insane]
Consider changing AR to 9 and HP to 7?I think ar=8 is better. 126bpm is not too fast.

01:03:972 (3) - Why is this one going outward, Ctrl - G !oops!!!...fixed...thx

As always though, nice map flow and your paterns fit with the song really well. I'm sorry I couldn't come up with better suggestionsthank you,friend. >"<

Kazuya-sama wrote:

Heyho. From my modding queue.

Nice song. It's only ideas!thx

I was a little busy in last few days,i left my city last week.This is the reason why i didn't reply you first time.I am really very sorry about this point. Honest to say,you are the best modder i have ever seen.I accepted most of your suggestions.Thank you friend.

[My diffs]

• 
  

1. First things first,I have remapped. All the diffs have been reset. I increased my notes' spacing(normal&hard&insane).And my sliders' sv is faster(easy&insane).
2. my diffs' difficulty have been increased.(easy: 1.22 1.41)(normal: 1.70 1.81)(hard: 2.34 3.03)(insane: 3.44 3.74)
3. I spent a lot of energy on my insane and hard.I tried to add more patterns instead of the repetitive stuff.Now i think my insane and hard are more playable and interesting.
4. I reset all diffs' notes' placement.So now better flow and better blanket.
5. finally,I am really looking forward to you can download and play my new diffs again.

[Insane]

Suggestion: This distance snap is little low (1.0x). 1.2x better!best idea.remapped.

Please, remove spinner, and map these parts:
00:21:353 (1) - fixed
00:28:972 (1) - fixed
02:08:020 (1) - maybe..one spinner is very suit in here...can i keep it?

00:34:448 (1) - Delete slider, and put circles here: 00:34:448 - & 00:34:686 - It's better.great!
00:37:305 (6,7,8) - Liittle jump? example: http://puu.sh/a6SHj/e9642aaf2b.jpgyeah,beautiful.
00:54:448 (5) - Slider shape: http://puu.sh/a6SZ8/21e8284be9.jpg ?fixed!
00:56:353 (6) - Slider shape: http://puu.sh/a6STt/b9dee0df1d.jpg ?fixed!
01:03:496 (2) - Remove slider, put circles here: 01:03:496 - & 01:03:734 - ? It's better!fixed!
01:04:924 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm. Replace here: Timeline example: http://puu.sh/a6Teg/908f717b01.jpg ?good idea!
01:07:782 (5,6,7) - Make little jump?okay!
01:11:115 (2) - Two circle is better!fixed
01:16:353 (1,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Little too "linear" part. :/ Could be better!hmm..I have no better idea to change their shape.But i have decreased my sliders' sv.
01:20:520 - Put circle here ?okay!
01:40:162 (6) - Slider shape ~ http://puu.sh/a6TJg/eac323c3b1.jpgfixed
01:42:067 (6) - ^fixed
01:55:401 (6) - Ugly sliderfixed
01:57:305 (6) - ^fixed
02:41:115 (6) - ^fixed
02:43:019 (6) - ^fixed

[Hard]

This distance snap is little low (1.0x). 1.2x better!ok! remapped.

00:17:782 (2) - Two circle is better!fixed.
00:25:401 (2) - ^fixed.
00:33:020 (2) - ^fixed.
00:34:448 (1) - ^fixed.
00:35:877 (4) - remove circle, and change 00:35:401 (3) - slider end here: 00:35:401 ?ok
00:40:639 (2) - Two circle is better!fixed!
00:43:496 (4) - remove slider, change 00:43:020 (3) - slider end here: 00:43:496, and put cirle here: 00:43:734 - ? timeline example: http://puu.sh/a6Uju/dbfb6a648e.jpgsounds good...fixed.thx
01:03:496 (2) - Two circle is better!fixed
01:04:924 (1) - ^fixed
01:11:115 (2) - ^fixed
01:14:924 (1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Little too "linear" part. :/ Could be better!fixed
02:04:448 (2) - Two circle is better!fixed
02:12:067 (2) - Remove slider, change 02:11:591 (1) - slider end here: 02:12:067 - and put circle here: 02:12:305 - ?good idea!
02:19:687 (2) - Two circle is better!fixed
02:21:591 (2) - ^fixed
02:22:067 (3,4) - 1/1 slider is better! Remove circles, put 1/1 slider here: 02:22:067 - slider end: 02:22:543 - fixed
02:27:305 (2) - Two circle better.fixed
02:50:163 (2) - ^fixed
02:51:591 (1) - Change slider end here: 02:51:948 - fixed

Okay... short suggestion:

[Normal]

Problems:
CTRL + SHIFT + A & Check "Check distance snap", and click "refresh". Three distance fail! Please, fix.
1.2x distance snap is better!remapped!
[Easy]

Problems:
Current SV is too low. 1.00 better!remapped!

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Little "here and there" messy map.hmm...i ll try my best to find them and fix.
Good luck.thank you

sheela901 wrote:

Yo. M4M request from your queue..

Hi,I am so sorry that i didn't reply you first time,last week i left my city.I was a little busy recently.Forgive me,friend.

[My diffs]

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1. First things first,I have remapped. All the diffs have been reset. I increased my notes' spacing(normal&hard&insane).And my sliders' sv is faster(easy&insane).
2. my diffs' difficulty have been increased.(easy: 1.22 1.41)(normal: 1.70 1.81)(hard: 2.34 3.03)(insane: 3.44 3.74)
3. I spent a lot of energy on my insane and hard.I tried to add more patterns instead of the repetitive stuff.Now i think my insane and hard are more playable and interesting.
4. I reset all diffs' notes' placement.So now better flow and better blanket.
5. finally,I am really looking forward to you can download and play my new diffs again.

Easy

1. 00:16:353 (1) - Move this to x:336 y:53, and 00:17:305 (1) to x:177 y:54. 00:15:401 (1,1,1) will make a better triangle pattern. If you changed it, 00:18:734 (2,1) needs to be move, but it cause problem to the distance between 00:19:210 (1,2) . I suggest to make another slider pattern of 00:17:305 (1,1,2) .Wow..you are a holy professional modder...I have remapped.
2. 00:16:353 (1) - Remove the new combo.Others have different opinion.Hmm...Can i keep it just now?
3. 00:24:924 (1) - Make a blanket combo with 00:23:020 (1) , with the approach circle of 00:23:020 (1) :hmm..i don't think the placement is a very necessary factor in my map.
   
   SPOILER

   
   If you're lazy, move the second to x:158 y:315 and the last point to x:242 y:343. This move will affect 00:26:353 (2,1,2,3) . Follow the coordinations in the box below:Thank you,I try to do this , but i don't like too many symmetric patterns appeared in my map.
   
   Coordinations

   1. 00:26:353 (2) - Move this to x:309 y:340.
   2. 00:26:829 (1) - Copy and paste 00:24:924 (1) , and do Ctrl + H and Ctrl+ G, and move it to x:112 y:248. This way, 00:24:924 (1,2,1) will make a symmetric pattern.
   3. 00:28:258 (2) - Move this to x:494 y:166.
   4. 00:28:734 (3) - Move this to x:450 y:98.
4. 00:23:972 (1) - Remove the new combo.
5. 00:30:639 (1,1,1,1,2) - Try to make those sliders less curvy. Maybe straight, less curvy, or little wave.
6. 00:38:258 (1,1,1,1,2) - Same thing goes here. ^
7. 00:31:591 (1) - Remove the new combo.Others have different opinion.
8. 00:39:210 (1) - ^^
9. 00:53:972 (2) - Try not to stack the notes.fixed
10. 00:55:877 (2) - ^fixed
11. 00:54:448 (3,3) - Try to make less curvy.okay,good idea.
12. 01:01:115 (1) - Stick to the same distance snap.fixed
13. 01:01:115 (1,1) - Try to make it less curvy.ok
14. 01:02:067 (1) - Remove the new combo.no
15. 01:03:972 (3) - Flip it vertically so it could have a little flow to 01:04:924 (1) .fixed
16. 01:08:258 (2) - Move this to x:281 y:243. This way, 01:06:829 (1) could shoot to the next note, which is called a flow. Also, you need to move 01:08:734 (1) .fixed
17. 01:09:686 (1) - Try to make a symmetric pattern with 01:08:734 (1) .I created so many symmetric patterns in my hard and insane diffs,in easy diff i only wanna make my flow better,i don't like to spend too much energy to do the symmetric patterns.
18. 01:17:305 (1) - Remove the new combo.no right now.
19. 01:24:924 (1) - ^^
20. 01:39:686 (2,2) - Try to not stack.fixed
21. 01:56:829 (2) - ^fixed
22. 01:59:210 (1,1,1) - Make another pattern. They overlap each other.remapped.
23. 02:06:353 (2) - Try to not stack.fixed
24. 02:32:067 (4) - If the note is placed here, it'll break the flow. Move it to somewhere else, so it could make a flow.fixed
25. 02:40:638 (2,2) - Move them somewhere else due to the stacking.ok
26. 02:54:925 (2) - It breaks the flow, so move it somewhere else.fixed
27. 03:09:686 (3) - Add a finish here.clap is my finish voice
    - They're still some "remove new combo" suggestions that I didn't mark above, so try to find your own.
    - I suggest to increase the slider velocity or the distance snap. The distance is a bit too low. But this is your choice to redo the map or let it be.i have increased my notes' spacing.thx

Normal

1. 00:18:258 (2,3) - Try Ctrl + G for a better flow.remapped.
2. 00:19:210 (1,2) - Try to make them less curvy and try to make another pattern.fixed.
3. 00:26:829 (1,2) - ^^
4. 00:30:639 (1,1,1) - Try to make another slider pattern.remapped
5. 00:34:448 (1) - Move the last point to x:31 y:304 so it could have a better flow.remapped
6. 00:38:258 (1,1) - Try to make another pattern.^
7. 00:40:162 (1,2) - Try to improve the blanket combo.^
8. 00:51:591 (1) - Move this to x:384 y:232 for a better flow. 00:52:067 (2,3) needs to be moved.^
9. 00:57:305 (1,2) - Try to improve the blanket combo.okay.i did
10. 01:03:496 (2) - Move the slider to x:375 y:353 and move the last point to x:296 y:346 for a better pattern.remapped
11. 01:04:924 (1,2) - Make them less curvy.okay
12. 01:08:734 (1,1) - This pattern breaks the flow. Try to make another pattern.remapped
13. 01:54:448 (1,2) - Move them somewhere else so it could make a better flow.ok
14. 01:58:258 (1) - Suddenly, the constant distance has changed. Please stick to the same distance.ok,fixed
15. 01:58:258 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I'm not sure of these pattern could fit in normal difficulties. It's a bit hard.hmm..but i think it s cool.
16. 02:10:639 (1) - Try something else. It got overlapped.fixed
17. 02:18:258 (1) - ^

^
- I didn't mention "remove new combo" suggestions. Try to find them on your own.
- Stills need work on the flows. It feels "broking".
- Try to make some blanket pattern.okay.i try my best.

Hard

1. 00:17:305 (1,2) - Make them less curvy and try to improve the pattern:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   To use the code, open the .osu file by File->Open .osu in Notepad. Search under [Hitobjects] the numbers: 17305, 17782, 18258. Delete the lines containing those numbers and replace the by:
   281,237,17305,6,0,P|315:226|352:190,1,70
   276,155,17782,2,0,P|252:129|206:115,1,70
   208,195,18258,2,0,P|152:243|152:323,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   ----------------------------------------------------------------
   PM me if you can't do it.

2. 00:24:924 (1,2,3) - Try to improve the pattern like the one above:Cool pattern!! I ll use it more in my insane,thx.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:26:830 (1,2,1) - ^remapped
4. 00:32:543 (1,2,3) - ^remapped
5. 00:34:448 (1,2,3) - ^remapped
6. 00:40:162 (1,2,3) - ^remapped
7. 01:10:639 (1,2,3) - Improve the pattern by doing blanket.ok
8. 01:18:734 (2) - Move it a little more to the right. It won't get overlap.fixed
9. 01:20:639 (2) - ^^
10. 01:21:115 (3) - ^^
11. 01:28:258 (2) - ^^
12. 00:56:353 (4) - Try to improve the wave slider.fixed
13. 01:40:162 (4) - ^^
14. 01:42:067 (4) - ^^
15. 01:16:353 to 01:30:401 - The sliders are a bit plain. Try to make beautiful pattern: blankets for example.in piano part ,i prefer straight sliders.
16. 02:05:877 (1,2,3) - Try to improve the pattern.fixed
17. 02:12:543 (3) - Make a blanket pattern with 02:12:067 (2) .I choose the flow.
18. 02:19:210 (1,2,3) - Try to improve the pattern.okay.
19. 02:30:639 (1) - Make a proper blanket pattern. You can just move the last point to x:359 y:145.ok

Insane

1. 00:20:639 (6) - Move this to x:471 y:145.remapped
2. 00:27:782 (5,6) - Improve the blanket and sliders.fixed
3. 01:45:162 (2,4) - Do Ctrl + G. This way, 01:44:924 (1,2,3,4) will go to the same direction as 01:43:020 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) .remapped
4. 01:47:067 (6) - Add a new combo.fixed
5. 01:55:401 (6) - That's a weird slider. Try to make another slider.fixed
6. 01:57:305 (6) - ^^
7. 01:58:258 (1,1) - End them at the red tick. It sounds better.I have removed the sliders' ending voice.i think i did it better.
8. 02:03:972 (1,2) - Improve the slider's curve to a make a better blanket pattern.fixed
9. 02:41:115 (6) - Same here. Try to make another slider.^
10. 02:43:019 (6) - ^^
11. 02:49:210 (2) - Move this to x:244 y:195, but improve 02:48:734 (1) to have a blanket pattern.fixed
12. 02:49:686 (1,2) - Try to improve the blanket.fixed
13. 02:51:591 (1,2) - ^^

That's all. Any questions can asked via PM or in-game. Good Luck on ranking this map.thank you friend , you are a regular and great modder,i hope we can meet again.