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Motoi Sakuraba - The First Unison

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Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
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Shulin

YGOkid8 wrote:

General
I don't like how you made the hitsounds quieter. If it feels too loud, people can adjust in Options -> Audio themselves.

Also, Dusty's Normal has different timing section/sounds than the rest. @_@
Personally, I like the Soft sound effect for all diffs, but this is up to you, of course

Dusty's Normal
Maybe move all beats a few grids down so beats won't touch the HP bar.

Insane
Same thing as Normal.
OK... I've changed things again, increased the hitsound volume by 1 tick again and it's staying that way now. Easy has now been mapped in soft. Hard and Insane will stay with the normal and soft blend, the reason being I find it hard to hit streams that are in soft. Dusty's volume will stay how it is because it's a guest difficulty I believe things don't have to be 100% consistent.

*End of long reasoning* ~ Thanks for modding :D
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
Updated, 70% volume.

Download: Motoi Sakuraba - The First Unison (Shulin) [Dusty's Normal].osu
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
Couldn't find any problems with this map :)
*star*
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Shulin
Thanks for the star :)
Symbolic
519 posts
Joined June 2008
Symbolic
- in General

  1. 800x600 bg recommended, 1024x768 is allowed tho, but it'll be appreciated if you resize.
  2. Try Offset 405.
  3. Remove "," in tags. Wrong example: "lenneth, asgard hill, tri-Ace, Dusty", Right example: "lenneth asgard hill tri-Ace Dusty".

- Easy

  1. Use Slider Tick Rate 1.
  2. Put Overall Difficulty 1 tick to the left.
00:26:642 (1) - Finish at endpoint.


- Dusty's Normal

Nothing here.


- Hard

  1. Put the HP Drain Rate a bit more to the right.
  2. Put the Overall Difficulty a bit more to the right.
00:20:082 (x) - Soft Timing Section here (Normal Timing Section after the one note).
00:20:082 (1) - Finish.
01:22:409 (x) - Soft Timing Section here (Normal Timing Section after the one note).
01:22:409 (1) - Finish on startpoint.
01:35:530 (x) - Soft Timing Section here (Normal Timing Section after the one note).
01:35:530 (1) - Finish.


- Insane

00:15:161 (x)- Soft Timing Section here (Normal Timing Section after the one note).
00:15:161 (1) - Finish.
00:15:981 (x) - Same thing as above ^
01:34:710 (x) - ^
01:35:530 (x) - ^
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Shulin

Symbolic wrote:

- in General

  1. 800x600 bg recommended, 1024x768 is allowed tho, but it'll be appreciated if you resize. It's fine.
  2. Try Offset 405. I play better with the current offset.
  3. Remove "," in tags. Wrong example: "lenneth, asgard hill, tri-Ace, Dusty", Right example: "lenneth asgard hill tri-Ace Dusty".
Done, changed the tags on Dusty's difficulty to.


- Easy

  1. Use Slider Tick Rate 1. Nope
  2. Put Overall Difficulty 1 tick to the left. Done
00:26:642 (1) - Finish at endpoint. Done


- Dusty's Normal

Nothing here.


- Hard

  1. Put the HP Drain Rate a bit more to the right. +1
  2. Put the Overall Difficulty a bit more to the right. + 1
00:20:082 (x) - Soft Timing Section here (Normal Timing Section after the one note).X
00:20:082 (1) - Finish. X
01:22:409 (x) - Soft Timing Section here (Normal Timing Section after the one note). Done but timing section is earlier.
01:22:409 (1) - Finish on startpoint. ^
01:35:530 (x) - Soft Timing Section here (Normal Timing Section after the one note). ^
01:35:530 (1) - Finish. ^


- Insane

00:15:161 (x)- Soft Timing Section here (Normal Timing Section after the one note). Done
00:15:161 (1) - Finish. Done
00:15:981 (x) - Same thing as above ^ Done
01:34:710 (x) - ^ Done
01:35:530 (x) - ^ Done
Thanks for modding!
Symbolic
519 posts
Joined June 2008
Symbolic
The offset is 5 ms off, Gladi said it was 405, and I thought the same, it doesn't matter if YOU play better with 400 offset, your UO can be off or it's you clicking off-beat, but the offset should be 405.

You're welcome~
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Shulin

Symbolic wrote:

The offset is 5 ms off, Gladi said it was 405, and I thought the same, it doesn't matter if YOU play better with 400 offset, your UO can be off or it's you clicking off-beat, but the offset should be 405.

You're welcome~
Well since your so certain it's 405 I've changed it, though no one else complained about the previous offset so I presume everyone is clicking off beat.

Thanks again.
Lizbeth
osu! Alumni
1,731 posts
Joined August 2008
Lizbeth
I can see you've placed some inherited timing section on top of notes... can you move it 1/4 back if is possible to avoid this problem?

some examples on Insane
00:13:731 -
00:14:346 -
00:14:551 -
00:15:166 -
00:16:396 -
etc
on Hard
01:06:012 -
01:06:832 -
etc.

Insane
Only the problems with inherited timing section.
other than that, all good.

Hard
Nice diff. ^^
same problem with the green lines

Dusty's Normal
all good n_n

Easy
resnap all notes
i find spacing a bit too large for an easy

Good work guys
star!
Shulin
1,189 posts
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Topic Starter
Shulin

Lizbeth wrote:

I can see you've placed some inherited timing section on top of notes... can you move it 1/4 back if is possible to avoid this problem? Fixed all of these except on streams because I didn't have anywhere else to go (and I don't like place timing sections on 1/8)

some examples on Insane
00:13:731 -
00:14:346 -
00:14:551 -
00:15:166 -
00:16:396 -
etc
on Hard
01:06:012 -
01:06:832 -
etc.

Insane
Only the problems with inherited timing section. Done
other than that, all good.

Hard
Nice diff. ^^
same problem with the green lines Done

Dusty's Normal
all good n_n

Easy
resnap all notes Oops, all fixed now.
i find spacing a bit too large for an easy True, but I don't think it's that big a problem to respace everything.

Good work guys
star!
Thanks Lizbeth! :D
Lizbeth
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2008
Lizbeth
Much better ^^

P-Bubble
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
nothing wrong imo, *star
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Shulin
Thanks for the p-bubble Lizbeth and thanks for starring EEeee :D
mrtn
osu! Alumni
1,065 posts
Joined March 2008
mrtn
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Shulin

mrtn wrote:

[insane]
00:49:918 (1) - remove new combo
00:54:531 (1) - ^
00:55:351 (1) - ^
All fixed, thanks :D
Niva
Global Moderator
3,187 posts
Joined November 2009
Niva
Can't wait to see this ranked :)
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Shulin

Nivalis wrote:

Can't wait to see this ranked :)
Oh, thanks :D

Well, I'll try and get it ranked :P
DeathxShinigami
1,176 posts
Joined November 2008
DeathxShinigami
Urrrgghhh, Forgot to mod this awhile back ehehehe, didn't find anything btw.


Starred.
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Shulin

DeathxShinigami wrote:

Urrrgghhh, Forgot to mod this awhile back ehehehe, didn't find anything btw.


Starred.
Thanks for looking at it, I appreciate it :D
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
Well, I made this star2.png for Odin Sphere's Theme, but since Valkyrie Profile also has lots of feathers, it might look nice in this map too, you can use it if you want.

(kind of forgot I had this, sorry, or I'd've posted this earlier)

Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Shulin
Thanks, I've included it :)

I also changed the blue color to a lighter blue, tell me if you don't like it and I'll change it back :P
AngelHoney
2,155 posts
Joined May 2009
AngelHoney
Insane

fix timing points

13,520
39,757
26,639

00:12:603 - add a note ?
00:31:773 (2) - move to 00:31:671 ?

Hard

fix timing points

26,642
92,660
94,300
95,120

Normal

nice~

Easy

fix timing point

93,890


Star~ :) :)
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Shulin
Those timing sections are fine, if it's at the end of the a slider you can't possibly hit late (at least I don't think :| )

I did change the position of one note on the timeline though, thanks for mod and star :D
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
[Easy]
00:06:965 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider
00:10:246 (1) - Make a slider like this (do you like it?)

00:16:806 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider
00:29:928 (1) - ^
00:44:689 (1) - Remove whistle hitsound, and add a finish hitsound
00:52:890 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider
01:22:414 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider
01:35:535 (1) - Add a finish hitsound

[Dusty's Normal]
00:03:685 (3) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider
00:06:965 (1) - ^
00:13:526 (1) - Please move this object anywhere, overlapped with previous slider is too bad and add a finish hitsound
00:14:346 (4) - Add a finish hitsound
00:15:166 (7) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider
00:15:986 (8) - ^
00:20:087 (1) - ^
00:26:647 (1) - Overlapped by object is bad, please move this object anywhere, and add a finish hitsound
00:27:468 (4) - Add a finish hitsound
00:28:288 (7) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider
00:29:108 (8) - ^
00:33:208 (1) - ^
00:39:769 (1) - Add a finish hitsound
00:46:330 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider
00:52:890 (1) - Add a finish hitsound
01:06:012 (1) - ^
01:12:573 (1) - ^
01:25:694 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:05:325 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the end of slider
00:06:965 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider
00:15:986 (5) - ^
00:16:806 (1) - ^
00:20:087 (1) - Add a finish hitsound
00:29:928 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider
00:56:171 (1) - Slider must be like this (do you like it?)

00:56:991 (2) - Slider must be like this (do you like it?)

01:12:573 (3) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider

[Insane]
00:06:965 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider
00:16:806 (5) - Add a finish hitsound
00:20:087 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider
00:29:518 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the end of slider
00:33:208 (7) - Add a finish hitsound
00:45:920 (3) - Add a finish hitsound at the end of slider
00:57:811 (1) - Extend to white tick
01:09:292 (3) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider
01:12:163 (7) - Add a finish hitsound at the end of slider
01:22:414 (3) - Add a finish hitsound
01:24:054 (1) - ^

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:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Shulin
Added some hitsounds mainly on Easy, the normal finishes sound bad imo. Also extended that spinner, but kept my slider shapes :P

Thanks for modding!
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
Added some finishes, flipped stuff around to minimize overlap.

Download: Motoi Sakuraba - The First Unison (Shulin) [Dusty's Normal].osu
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Shulin
Updated :)
Zerostarry
osu! Alumni
1,563 posts
Here since the beginning
Zerostarry
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Shulin

Zerostarry wrote:

01:12:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Looks untidy imo

Theres several other instances of those...overlapping them like that isn't neat ^^
Um... what difficulty? :P

I guess it could only apply to Dusty's Normal or Insane? -- Made some changes to Insane ^^

Thanks for modding.
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
probably my diff also

Zerostarry wrote:

01:12:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Looks untidy imo

Theres several other instances of those...overlapping them like that isn't neat ^^
shulin, i'll get something a little neater in a couple days (can't use editor well right now)
Shulin
1,189 posts
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Shulin

Dusty wrote:

shulin, i'll get something a little neater in a couple days (can't use editor well right now)
Okay, there's no rush lol :D
mrtn
osu! Alumni
1,065 posts
Joined March 2008
mrtn
[hard]
00:02:045 (1) - remove this new combo

[insane]
increase drain rate by 1 tick
Shulin
1,189 posts
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Topic Starter
Shulin

mrtn wrote:

[hard]
00:02:045 (1) - remove this new combo

[insane]
increase drain rate by 1 tick
All fixed, thanks.
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
Eh. So I didn't actually end up changing very much.

Download: Motoi Sakuraba - The First Unison (Shulin) [Dusty's Normal].osu
Shulin
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Topic Starter
Shulin

Dusty wrote:

Eh. So I didn't actually end up changing very much.
Lol. Updated.

And I also deleted the .osb because that was bound to come up eventually :P
alvisto
881 posts
Joined April 2009
alvisto
Valkyrie Profile <3

Motoi Sakuraba <3 <3 <3
Shulin
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Shulin
Thanks for the star :D
0_o
2,155 posts
Joined December 2008
0_o
Insane
00:29:518 (1) - Move new combo ahead to 2?

Dusty & Easy
OD feels a bit high compared to the difficulty, I would lower it a notch or two.

Super solid mapset, have a protobubble (I won't bother waiting for the changes because it's fine now anyway :P)
Shulin
1,189 posts
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Topic Starter
Shulin

0_o wrote:

Insane
00:29:518 (1) - Move new combo ahead to 2? Yeah that's better so done, moved another earlier in the map for consistency

Dusty & Easy
OD feels a bit high compared to the difficulty, I would lower it a notch or two.

Super solid mapset, have a protobubble (I won't bother waiting for the changes because it's fine now anyway :P) Well this was proto bubbled once but it was a loooong time ago, I think its kinda void now :|
Thanks for modding ^^
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
In blue suggestions, In red maybe important

[General]
-cut unnecesary transparency in star2.png

[Easy]
-Acc 100%

[Dusty's Normal]
-Acc 100%

[Hard]
-Acc 98% :3

[Insane]
-Acc 92%
-00:16:704 remove circle
-00:39:461 remove circle
-01:24:566 remove circle
-01:24:977 remove circle
-01:25:387 remove circle


STAR
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Shulin

Astom wrote:

In blue suggestions, In red maybe important

[General]
-cut unnecesary transparency in star2.png It's fine imo.

[Easy]
-Acc 100%

[Dusty's Normal]
-Acc 100%

[Hard]
-Acc 98% :3

[Insane]
-Acc 92%
-00:16:704 remove circle Whoa, not mid stack. But made a slight adjustment.
-00:39:461 remove circle ^ mid stream
-01:24:566 remove circle ^
-01:24:977 remove circle ^
-01:25:387 remove circle ^


STAR
Thanks :D
Mukku
1,434 posts
Joined February 2009
Mukku
I was supposed to mod this, but I can't find anything to comment on. Star
whymeman
osu! Alumni
3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman
Not sure why, but [Insane] is kinda buggy. It doesn't end like it's supposed to. Make sure to look into that.
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Shulin

whymeman wrote:

Not sure why, but [Insane] is kinda buggy. It doesn't end like it's supposed to. Make sure to look into that.
Worked fine for me, might have been the download, did I full submission.

I've removed Insane anyway because I don't like it anymore.

Thanks for checking :D
whymeman
osu! Alumni
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Joined November 2008
whymeman
Alright then, bubbled.
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Shulin
Thank you :D
Larto
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Joined June 2008
Larto
Badabum Boom.
Shulin
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Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Shulin
Thanks Larto ^_^
Niva
Global Moderator
3,187 posts
Joined November 2009
Niva
Yessss it's ranked :)
Congratulations Shulin!
DeathxShinigami
1,176 posts
Joined November 2008
DeathxShinigami
Been awhile I've played a recently ranked Shulin map eh? Doubt you'll break a record on longest period between ranked maps though d:
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty

Larto wrote:

Badabum Boom.
Congrats, Shulin!
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