1. Dusty's Normal (2.46 stars, 112 notes)
2. Easy (1.29 stars, 73 notes)
3. Hard (4.6 stars, 177 notes)

ouranhshc wrote:

Insane
00:06:366 (6) - line up with 2 Done
00:49:411 (4) - line up with 2 ^
01:08:474 (5) - center between 3 and 4 Already center lol
01:11:344 (3,4,5,6,7) - center between the two previous notes Done I think
01:26:922 (3) - line up with 1 Done
01:38:401 (5) - right one grid ^

yay

Zekira wrote:

I don't know why when I downloaded the .osz, it had a Hard diff.

Offset: 400
BPM: 146.325

Hm, weird numbered BPMs are kinda challenging for the sensitive ear, as I can distinguish some parts that are like, 1ms off at times, but that can be omitted. Use this.

Breeze wrote:

I love Valkyrie Profile :3

ouranhshc wrote:

Hard
00:00:400 (1) - make this centered on the Y-axis Not necessary
00:02:040 (1) - ^ ^
00:06:960 (1) - line up with (3) Done
00:36:484 (1,2,3) - center this on the y-axis No...
00:51:245 (3) - make this symmetrical ?
01:08:467 (3) - line up with (1) Done
01:09:697 (1,3) - make these symmetrical and the same I couldn't be bothered doing this 1 and 3 aren't on the screen long enough to tell they're not perfect
01:21:589 (3) - line up with 1 Done
01:21:999 (4) - line up with 2 Done

Shulin wrote:

Needs an Easy >_>

Dusty wrote:

[Hard]
00:00:400 (1,1) - I play this map and the first thing I see are non-symmetrical sliders. Agh. ~ I've fixed this now.
00:03:680 (1,2,3) - I noticed these aren't symmetrical, too ~ I got a bit lazy with the symmetry it seems, fixed.

I mean, the first few circles are the easiest to remember being off because you're not busy hitting the hitcircles when the first ones pop up. Please, at least fix those ones.

(short repeating sliders always broke my combo ) ~ It breaks mine to... maybe I should change that?

[Insane]
00:49:913 (1,2,3) - Aah, this is ugly. I don't think there's any reason why you can't increase stacking (this is the only group of notes on top of each other that isn't stacked IIRC), but move (1) off otherwise? ~ I've fixed this, stacking leniency has been raised.

EDIT:

Shulin wrote:

Needs an Easy >_>

Is this like a request for a guest Easy? ~ It does need an Easy so I can move it to pending, but I'm to lazy to make one atm

Sushi971 wrote:

[Easy]
Fine.

[Hard]
00:39:764 (1,3) - symetry
00:45:505 (2,3,4,5) - this diamond is slightly uncentered. consider centering (3) and (4)
01:08:467 (3) - align with previous (1)?
01:16:668 (4,5,6,7,1) - go for symetry
01:19:128 (1,3) - ^ ?

[Insane]
00:27:668 (2,4) - for all the diamond, not perfectly symetric. but that can be overlooked
01:20:358 (1,3) - symetry? (and following stacking notes too)
01:22:614 (1,3) - symetry.
01:26:099 (1,3) - ^


That's it.

Kytoxid wrote:

Nazinazinazi...by tradition? Yay XD

[General]

I believe the background image is already used. EDIT: Yes, here: http://osu.ppy.sh/b/34171 Ok i've updated it with a new one.
Check your timing sections, some need to be shifted earlier: e.g. 00:13:521 on Easy/Normal. These inheriting sections keep going stray... I've fixed it again, I guess I could shift the inheriting sections back a tick to.
Kinda worried about the lack of a difficulty in the 2.5 star-4 star range. This song gets old...

[Hard]

00:52:680 (4) - Left 1 grid for symmetry (or do the same to 1) I've done this
01:09:697 (1,2,3) - Not symmetrical; shift the formation to the centre; use the flip and reverse functions to create 3, then move it back. I've done something not sure if it was this XD
01:19:128 (1) - 3 grids left. This looked a bit weird to me, 3 grids right maybe but left looked odd
01:21:589 (3,4) - ^ ^
01:26:919 (1,2,3) - Shift 3 a bit left, or shift 1 a bit left. Done
01:30:200 (7,1) - Shift these a grid left for consistency. Then you need to shift the bottom row half a grid left for symmetry. Done

[Insane]

Didn't really feel like naziing this, notes come quickly enough that it's not really noticeable anyways.

Star~

Leorda wrote:

*Mod*

Teara wrote:

Decent beatmap set, I couldn't find anything wrong, the follow are just plain suggestions and can be ignored :>

Star.

[Hard]

01:08:877 (4) - Finish on the last repeat maybe? ( white tick )

[Insane]

Wow, really hard diff, good job I like it

01:06:007 (1) - Finish on third repeat
01:06:827 (2) - ^
01:07:647 (3) - finish on last repeat
01:08:057 (4) - ^
01:08:467 (5) - finish

01:35:120 (4) - With distance snap off, move one right, one down. then fix rest

Dusty wrote:

May I make a Normal? (if it doesn't get bubbled first)

[Tags]
Lenneth
Asgard Hill
tri-Ace

[General]
The BG says Valkyrie Profile 2 on the bottom left, but this song is from the first one

Although the BG is appropriate for the song,
this one
or maybe this one
are from the right game.

Dusty wrote:

Tell me what you think.

(I'd already mapped it, actually )

EDIT: Unfortunately, it's repetitive.

Lokamp wrote:

Easy
Sounds fine!

Dusty's Normal
01:25:689 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2) - to make this section more original, flip them horizontally!

Hard
It's Ok!

Insane
Wow.

Well, this is a clear demonstration about creating entertaining beatmaps without fill them with hitsounds.
Maybe you can use some normal soft hitsounds along the song, but even like this is REALLY well done!

DJPop wrote:

Hitsounds are too loud imo, lower a bit. Lowered by 1 tick

~Easy~
01:37:170 (1) - add hitfinish Done

~Dusty's Normal~
01:25:689 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2) - try flip horizontal
01:35:530 (1) - add hitfinish

~Hard~
No major issues.

~Insane~
No major issues.


+Star

DJPop wrote:

~Dusty's Normal~
01:25:689 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2) - try flip horizontal

DJPop wrote:

01:35:530 (1) - add hitfinish

Nivalis wrote:

-Easy-
No problems found.

-Dusty's Normal-
[01:24:689] - This spinner seems too quiet in the end... Maybe some hitsounds can spice it up?

-Hard-
[00:51:245] - I feel like there's something wrong with this slider's curve... It's not symmetrical. I think it would be better if it's symmetrical. Fixed the curve, my symmetry should be at perfection now (I hope)

-Insane-
No problems found.

What a great map, hard to find problems here... Starred it.

YGOkid8 wrote:

Dusty's Normal
Maybe move all beats a few grids down so beats won't touch the HP bar.

YGOkid8 wrote:

Also, Dusty's Normal has different timing section/sounds than the rest. @_@

YGOkid8 wrote:

General
I don't like how you made the hitsounds quieter. If it feels too loud, people can adjust in Options -> Audio themselves.

Also, Dusty's Normal has different timing section/sounds than the rest. @_@
Personally, I like the Soft sound effect for all diffs, but this is up to you, of course

Dusty's Normal
Maybe move all beats a few grids down so beats won't touch the HP bar.

Insane
Same thing as Normal.

1. 800x600 bg recommended, 1024x768 is allowed tho, but it'll be appreciated if you resize.
2. Try Offset 405.
3. Remove "," in tags. Wrong example: "lenneth, asgard hill, tri-Ace, Dusty", Right example: "lenneth asgard hill tri-Ace Dusty".

1. Use Slider Tick Rate 1.
2. Put Overall Difficulty 1 tick to the left.

1. Put the HP Drain Rate a bit more to the right.
2. Put the Overall Difficulty a bit more to the right.

Symbolic wrote:

- in General

1. 800x600 bg recommended, 1024x768 is allowed tho, but it'll be appreciated if you resize. It's fine.
2. Try Offset 405. I play better with the current offset.
3. Remove "," in tags. Wrong example: "lenneth, asgard hill, tri-Ace, Dusty", Right example: "lenneth asgard hill tri-Ace Dusty".

Done, changed the tags on Dusty's difficulty to.


- Easy

1. Use Slider Tick Rate 1. Nope
2. Put Overall Difficulty 1 tick to the left. Done

00:26:642 (1) - Finish at endpoint. Done


- Dusty's Normal

Nothing here.


- Hard

1. Put the HP Drain Rate a bit more to the right. +1
2. Put the Overall Difficulty a bit more to the right. + 1

00:20:082 (x) - Soft Timing Section here (Normal Timing Section after the one note).X
00:20:082 (1) - Finish. X
01:22:409 (x) - Soft Timing Section here (Normal Timing Section after the one note). Done but timing section is earlier.
01:22:409 (1) - Finish on startpoint. ^
01:35:530 (x) - Soft Timing Section here (Normal Timing Section after the one note). ^
01:35:530 (1) - Finish. ^


- Insane

00:15:161 (x)- Soft Timing Section here (Normal Timing Section after the one note). Done
00:15:161 (1) - Finish. Done
00:15:981 (x) - Same thing as above ^ Done
01:34:710 (x) - ^ Done
01:35:530 (x) - ^ Done

Symbolic wrote:

The offset is 5 ms off, Gladi said it was 405, and I thought the same, it doesn't matter if YOU play better with 400 offset, your UO can be off or it's you clicking off-beat, but the offset should be 405.

You're welcome~

Lizbeth wrote:

I can see you've placed some inherited timing section on top of notes... can you move it 1/4 back if is possible to avoid this problem? Fixed all of these except on streams because I didn't have anywhere else to go (and I don't like place timing sections on 1/8)

some examples on Insane
00:13:731 -
00:14:346 -
00:14:551 -
00:15:166 -
00:16:396 -
etc
on Hard
01:06:012 -
01:06:832 -
etc.

Insane
Only the problems with inherited timing section. Done
other than that, all good.

Hard
Nice diff. ^^
same problem with the green lines Done

Dusty's Normal
all good n_n

Easy
resnap all notes Oops, all fixed now.
i find spacing a bit too large for an easy True, but I don't think it's that big a problem to respace everything.

Good work guys
star!

mrtn wrote:

[insane]
00:49:918 (1) - remove new combo
00:54:531 (1) - ^
00:55:351 (1) - ^