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Kajiura Yuki - When Two Powers Collide

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Lizbeth
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Donneschdeg 25 Februar 2010 at 10:36:48

Artist: Kajiura Yuki
Title: When Two Powers Collide
Source: Tsubasa Chronicle
Tags: Future Soundscape Lissette
BPM: 95
Filesize: 9799kb
Play Time: 03:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,36 stars, 350 notes)
  2. Insane (4,56 stars, 428 notes)
  3. Lissette's Normal (2,69 stars, 238 notes)
Download: Kajiura Yuki - When Two Powers Collide
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Hi! This is the last map i'll upload of Tsubasa Chronicle Project n_n
Hope you all enjoy it, and leave your commets.

If you wanna check all maps of the Tsubasa Chronicle OST Project Click Here
Last edited by Lizbeth , edited 16 times in total.
Lissette
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Lissette
n______n
Leorda
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Leorda
HI SEXY!

[Lissette's Normal]
01:06:385 (1) - Add a finish hitsound (start of slider)
01:08:595 (1) - Add a finish hitsound (end of slider)
01:09:385 (2,3,4) - Move 2 grid up
01:11:122 (1) - Add a finish hitsound (end of slider)
01:13:648 (1) - ^
01:14:437 (2,3,4) - Move 3 grid down
03:30:700 (1) - Add a finish hitsound
03:37:648 (1) - Add a finish hitsound (end of slider)
03:40:174 (1) - ^
03:42:700 (1) - ^
03:45:227 (1) - ^
03:47:753 (1) - ^
03:49:648 (1) - Add a finish hitsound
03:52:806 (1) - Add a finish hitsound (end of slider)

[Hard]
03:01:332 (1) - Make like a symmetric (example 00:51:227 (4) that is symmetric)
03:03:858 (1) - ^
03:06:385 (5) - ^
03:07:648 (7) - ^
03:30:700 (1) - Add a finish hitsound
03:37:964 (3) - ^
03:40:174 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the end of slider
03:40:174 (1) - Add a finish hitsound
03:43:490 (4) - Move 1 grid down
03:45:543 (2) - Add a finish hitsound
03:48:069 (3) - ^
03:50:595 (2) - ^
03:53:122 (3) - ^

[Insane]
03:30:700 (1) - Add a finish hitsound
03:37:964 (3) - ^
03:40:174 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the end of slider
03:43:016 (3) - Add a finish hitsound
03:43:016 (3) - ^
03:45:543 (2) - ^
03:48:069 (3) - ^
03:50:595 (2) - ^
03:53:122 (3) - ^

Not bad
STAR
Lizbeth
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Really like the idea of the finish (added)
thanks for modding
dkey
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dkey
Good job~! =w=
Lokamp
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Lokamp
Checking the modes, I don't see any errors about timing and hitsound-placing...
Both Lissette and your modes show a wise usage of lower and higher-volumed timing section to create a good sound while playing!
Just a pair of tips about your modes:

1) On Hard and Insane, after the spinner on 01:56:911 there are 4 break times quite ugly to listen...
I mean, in my opinion to listen 4 times repeatly the pass/fail sounds can be quite annoying for players!
I suggest to try to fill some of them, or to set custom pass-fail sounds, or to set a big break time as set on Lissette's mode...

2) On Insane mode, move the beat on 02:59:753 (2) 2 squares right

This clever work merits another star, with no doubt.
Lizbeth
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thansk for your modding Lokamp

I turn those breaks from insane and hard into a big one, like in normal. Is better this way, thanks for the suggestion n_n
Kytoxid
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[General]

.osb references two nonexistant images.
Change background colour to black?

Do some eye-candy or something for 01:59:753? The break is quite long, and the music is quite boring. Even scrolling credits and title/artist would work.

00:10:806 (1) - I really don't like this low-volume section. The lack of feedback to the player is quite dangerous. Silence the slider ends if you have to, but don't silence the entire thing.
02:39:858 (1) - ^

[Lissette's Normal]

00:38:911 - Break?

Yeah, not much to say other than the low volume.

[Hard]

00:44:595 (7) - Down a grid.
00:45:858 (6) - Up a grid. (what a surprise)
00:46:964 (3,1) - Unexpected jump.
01:49:332 (1,2,3) - Replace with 01:48:069 (3,4,5), rotated 180 degrees. (press Ctrl-Period twice)
03:45:227 (1,2) - Up a grid to line up with the next 1,2,3?

[Insane]

Man, I suck at jumps. XD

01:48:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Align these triangles a bit better.

Star~
Sushi
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Sushi
In all diffs, i disapprove the completely silent parts.

[Lissette]
02:19:648 (1) - agh, loooooong spinner

[Hard]
00:10:806 (1,2,3,4,5) - try making this nicer : space between sliders is not the same , and make them perfectly parallel. do the same thing for the following 3 patterns.
00:25:016 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - symetry
01:11:911 (1,3) - ^
01:14:437 (1,3) - ^
01:15:858 (1) - not rankable spinner
01:48:069 (3,4,5) - center (3) please. or move (4) or (5) to make it centered
02:19:648 (1) - agh, loooooong spinner
02:29:753 (1) - why new combo?
02:29:753 (1) - align
02:59:753 (2,3) - symetry
03:35:911 (1,3) - ^
03:38:437 (1,3) - ^
03:40:964 (2,4) - ^
03:43:490 (4,6) - ^ + alignment
03:46:016 (1,2,3) - maybe center this
03:48:543 (1,2,3) - ^
03:52:016 (3) - symetry
03:54:069 (2,3) - ^

[Hard]
00:02:123 (2,4) - align these
00:09:701 (2,4) - symetry
00:20:280 (1,3) - ^
00:25:016 (1,2,3,4,1) - symetry?
01:00:385 (2,3,4,5) - symetry. damn, i love this word, i know.
01:06:858 (1,2,3) - ^ + alignment
01:09:385 (1,2,3) - ^
01:15:858 (1) - unrankable spinner.
02:19:648 (1) - again, this loooooooong spinner
02:30:227 (1,2) - the word I like. symetry
02:34:174 (5) - move 1 grid right, for the pattern to be the same
02:38:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - hmm. not neat.
03:40:964 (2,3,4) - symetry
03:43:490 (1,2,3) - ^


I know, i'm a little too much nazi on symetry and alignment stuff.
w/e , nice map
Sonnyc
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Sonnyc
Hello~

Normal
  • 02:55:987 (2) Make a line with 1,3
[Hard]
  • 01:01:332 (5) Finish
    01:22:490 (1) 1 Grid right
    02:41:753 (5) Distance Snap 0.0, align with end of 4
    03:43:490 (4) 1 Grid down
[Insane]
  • 01:39:227 (1) 1 Grid up
    02:38:595 (1) 2 Grid up
    JUMPS @.@
star
Lizbeth
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Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

.osb references two nonexistant images. yeah, is an SB failed attempt, don't now how to remove it, but gonna get some help with it
Thanks for modding n_n

Sushi971 wrote:

In all diffs, i disapprove the completely silent parts.Yeah, removed
[Lissette]
02:19:648 (1) - agh, loooooong spinner replace by 2 spinners, music dont give to much options



I know, i'm a little too much nazi on symetry and alignment stuff.
w/e , nice map
lol im going to call you Death the Kid from now on XD
thanks for your time

sonnyc wrote:

Hello~

Normal
  • 02:55:987 (2) Make a line with 1,3
[Hard]
  • 01:01:332 (5) Finish
    01:22:490 (1) 1 Grid right
    02:41:753 (5) Distance Snap 0.0, align with end of 4
    03:43:490 (4) 1 Grid down
[Insane]
  • 01:39:227 (1) 1 Grid up
    02:38:595 (1) 2 Grid up
    JUMPS @.@
star
Thanks, all fixed =)
Xgor
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Xgor
[All diffs]
00:10:648 - I dislike the slowdown here... (And the other part too)
Having the Normal sample set with the highest volume sounds awful in this map in my opinion... I suggest you make those parts a bit quieter (Like 00:21:069)

[Normal]

I strongly recommend to make the stack leniency higher so parts like 03:05:122 (1,2,3,4,5) dosen't look as ugly.


[Hard]
00:50:911 (3,4) - Allot of people complained when i had a circle at the slider endpoint and well......


[Insane]
:)

*star*
Lizbeth
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Thanks Xgor for the suggestions. n_n
Shulin
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Shulin
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Lizbeth
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All fixed Shullin, thanks for modding, and for extra kudostar n.n
ill consider about the silent slid though
Armin
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Armin
[Lissette's Normal]

Overall: Very good! I didn't find errors or problems, just some imperfections.

00:45:384 (2) Stack this perfectly with the previous slider
00:46:806 (1) Whistle?
00:51:227 (1) Add also a finish at the starts, it sound better in my opinion
01:17:753 (2,4) Whistles
01:27:858 (4,6) Whistles
01:39:227 (1,2,1,2) Flip these hitobjects horizontally and then remake them symmetrically
03:08:595 (1) Remove the whistle in the middle of the slider
03:10:174 (1) Finish at the start
03:41:911 (3) Make it symmetrical with the previous (1)

Overall Rating: 9/10

[Hard]

Overall: Good job on this difficulty, just a point of concern for the hitsounds, which are a little repetitive.

02:41:753 (6) Stack this perfectly with the previous slider's end
02:44:280 (5) As above
02:46:806 (5) As above
03:55:806 (x) Add a spinner here? (end = 04:01:016)

Overall Rating 8,5/10

[Insane]

Overall: I think you should increase of one tick the overall. It' crazy, I know xD.
No problems found.

03:55:806 (x) Add a spinner here? (end = 04:01:016)

Overall Rating: 9/10

Star+kudosu star because the map is perfect and nicely made.
GladiOol
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GladiOol
Offset 695

I really enjoyed this map.
Star plus extra Kudosu Star~
Lizbeth
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offset fixed.
added most of Armin suggestions.

Thanks for checking Armin and Gladi..
also thx for the kudostars *.*
Shulin
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Proto Bubbled :D
Lizbeth
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Thanks Shulin!
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Lizbeth
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Hi ykcarrot! n.n

ykcarrot wrote:

Hi~ Lizbeth ^^


[General]
03:55:958 (1) - extend its end to 04:00:852 is more fit in my opinion. u r totally right o.o

[Insane]
01:07:326 (2) - 1 grid down fixed
01:33:852 (1) - remove new combo ? n.nU is true
01:34:168 (2) - ^ then new combo fixed


Niiiice map! :D
thanks for modding!!!
Shulin
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Okay.... why hasn't this been bubbled or ranked yet?

Here's another kudos star :D
Lizbeth
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>////< thanks Shulin <3
Andrea
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[Lissette's Normal]

01:21:221 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:53:273 (2) - A bit nazi: Place perfectly under (1).
01:55:800 (2) - ^
02:59:747 (1) - Note after spinner? Too evil for the most easier difficulty.
03:55:010 (1) - Extend by 1/4. Better.

[Hard]

02:39:537 (1,2) - Too close.
03:55:958 (1) - Extend by 1/4.

[Insane]

02:20:273 (1,1) - Why these 2 spinners are different than [Hard] ?
03:55:958 (1) - Extend by 1/4.
Lizbeth
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All fixed!
Thanks for modding Andrea =)
Andrea
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[Hard]

02:39:537 (1,2) - Still too close. I have a good idea. Add new combo on (2) and remove new combo on (1), So this will be fixed.
Lizbeth
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oops, my mistake _-_

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Hard]

02:39:537 (1,2) - Still too close. I have a good idea. Add new combo on (2) and remove new combo on (1), So this will be fixed.
Good idea.. but I better staked with prev slider

thanks again ^^
Andrea
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Nice, very nice.

Bubbled~
Lizbeth
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Thank you ^_^
Lunah_old
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Hey lizzy<3 fantastic map

starr

PS: I would put circle size +1 for lissette's normal (:
Lizbeth
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Thanks Loweh <3 ^^
cool you like it =)

im gonna let circle size like that, since is bubbled~ i dont wanna pop ;_;

ty<3
RemmyX25
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Lissette's Normal:
You have a lot of short, unnecessary breaks in there that can be removed, like at 00:36:852 and the one after it. You can leave the break in if the gap is, say, more than 4 seconds. but a 1 second break isnt really needed. (You do this in hard and insane as well)

Also i like the circle size where it is :D

Is the slider slowdown starting at 02:39:852 (1) really necessary?


Other than those i dont see any problems with the map
Lizbeth
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ok I removed the shorts breaks

RemmyX25 wrote:

Is the slider slowdown starting at 02:39:852 (1) really necessary?
This is for the sound change.

thanks for modding Remmy =)
RemmyX25
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Rebubbled then
Lizbeth
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Thank you~
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Normal and Hard look good. Insane is awesome.

Ranked!
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:) liz
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Nice! Liz ^.^
Lizbeth
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Thank you all ^^
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